Review at 40 chapters in. The story itself seems to be developing well. The translation quality is where this novel suffers greatly. Different names and terms used for cultivation levels, names, places, and random tense changes often ruin the flow. Expect MLT with little to no editing.
why did his age change? he was 10-11 in the first chapter.
what's the sinkhole realm?
"Do you guys know how long the fastest record for a person from the Qi Training Realm to the Sinkhole Realm is?"
80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace, I Am Unrivalled
Eastern · Girls Are Cute
editor your presence is requested!
Di Yin was already not confident of winning against Di Yin alone.
Eternal Sacred King
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
25 chapters in and the novel is good if into the system type stories. Bad thing is when the translator pastes the chapters the choices are cut out and he/her doesn't take the time to review and correct. Very little on the world background so far.
take his storage ring!
The body covered in blood of Ferguson suddenly emerged, then fell listlessly on the ground. He was deader than dead!
Great demon king
Fantasy · Chowdhury
fix the font error please.
A moment later, the voice of the Master of Hellfire Hall sounded slowly, "Sun Stone, Heavenly Constellation Stone, Blood Congealing Pill, Life Spirit Spring Water… Is someone trying to reconstruct a body?"
Eternal Sacred King
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
fix this font error please
"However…"
Eternal Sacred King
Eastern · Snow-filled Bow Saber
Finally a story that has planets without a 24hr day. Refreshing as normally you get a planet 10000x bigger than earth but it still has 24hr days.
how can the women leave his lap, hide in the corner of the room, and then be back on his lap?
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer