Honestly a refreshing read, it's a slow build, but necessary for character development. I'm enjoying what is written so far, looking forward to how the story progresses!
that obstacle course sounds amazing
ever heard the name TheTask?
you have a great story, and I enjoy reading it. haters are gonna hate, but let those positive and uplifting comments keep you going, not the negative dragging you down. only you know the ending to the story, I feel they shouldn't be quick to judge if the book isn't finished. you don't have to like a chapter, but read the whole story before judging the work. I hope you find the positive encouragement that you need to finish this story, and always remember that enjoying writing it is just as important as enjoying reading it.
purple! purple!
this is a great book, just wish it would update faster, because I want to know what happens next....
this is a great chapter. a few people I know could do with reading this book!
I've followed this author from his first book, and I haven't been disappointed with his work yet. For the legion!
wonderful story, wonderful fan-fic, epic ending. I hope you write more like this story in the future, for i will continue to support and read your works.
i hope you get well soon