GusAReader

GusAReader

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2017-11-11 Joined Brazil
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GusAReader
GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ErozothDraeor

The beginning will be really similar, I do want to change it up though, one thing I can say is that I haven't thought of any major change until the Peace talks arc. Tbh I haven't had much time to think about the plot, busy month and all.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ErozothDraeor

This chapter ended like that because I wanted it to be a pure fighting one, this is one of my earliest attempts at writing such scenes and I was looking for some feedback, unfortunately, that didn't happen, neither here nor at the other places I posted, so the chapter just became a bit awkward.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to Sirione

It'd be a spoiler for me to answer that, but as the chapters catches up you'll see the answer to your question.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to TehStorm

I'll do a training arc before the rating game against Riser, there I'll look into developing the Boosted Gear.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ray_rose

I don't know Ippo, but that is what I had in mind for him, an extra is that I know about dragon shot being a long-range attack option, and I'll use it, it just won't be his main fighting style.

GusAReader
GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ErozothDraeor

That happened at the ending of Chapter 6 (Or the 8th chapter, since there are two interludes), sure I didn't make the scene where Rias put the pieces in her, but I thought it was clear that it had happened.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ErozothDraeor

My choice to make it so he doesn't remember everything was an attempt to avoid those fix everything real quick stories, this is as much of a learning experience for me as it is a story for everyone. Perhaps you're right and the AU path would've been better, but I'm at a point where I won't drop the story (to begin another one) and I don't want to make that big of a rectification.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to Absolute_Zer0

Now, I wrote this a while back, but I'm pretty sure Rias never told the MC that, granted he knew that was the case (as much as any casual viewer or reader of the original DxD franchise would know, i.e. the most widespread notion of the event is that she did let him die, but I received comments saying that in the LN she didn't know about all of that), in this story she did let him die, not because she was evil, she did it because she was afraid to go after the fallen and that turn out to be some ambush to her and her peerage, so she let then go with their plan to kill the SG user of the city, but she saw an opportunity, she'd have a recruit with little to no resistance in Issei... We don't see OG Issei's reaction to that because he's replaced as soon as it happens (sort off), the consciousness that takes over doesn't care, for one, it's thanks to Issei dying that he could be there, another point is that he couldn't do anything about it. If he rebelled he'd be a stray and they'd kill him, so he gave them a chance, and he formed bonds with them to the point where he doesn't care that something that he had no control over happened to the body he now owned... I do plan on developing Rias, this would've been an interesting way to do so, but it's not one I'll chose. If this makes you dislike the story to the point where you no longer want to follow it then that's on me, but it is the path I chose and I'll take the consequences it brings. (Sorry for the long reply)

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ChaosOfDeity

Hey! First to answer your review. I know he wanted to do in the original, I know that Issei managed to fix it, but in here I wanted to make Riser different, I might have some plans for him, I might make him more than "The first villain of the story" and him not wanting the marriage helps me develop for that if that is the route I take with him... Now about you asking this here while we're at chapter 5, I'd ask for you to either wait until we're there, or just ask where you read it (QQ or FF.net) I'd probably answer there... That being said, I appreciate you putting it in a spoiler tag here (especially because this showed up to anyone that finds the story's page)... Thank you for your review, and for anyone wondering, yes this story has more chapters on other platforms, I mentioned them in this answer, and on another back on chapter 4, I think.

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GusAReader
3 years ago
Replied to ExiledImmortal

I started it at Questionable Questing and Fanfiction, they are ahead, however, I don't do daily updates. The ones here in Webnovel are only daily because I want them to catch up with what already is at those other places. FYI, at the other websites, I go by the same name as I go here, and the story is also called the same.

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    I am Issei Hyoudou!

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    I was an introverted guy, choosing to focus on my studies and my work, also consuming some books and movies on the side. That all changed after the night that I first laid with a woman... And man! What a night! Anyways, here I am, probably kidnaped by her, in this unknown room. (SI)

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  • Robert Rosier: A Wizard's Tale (Dropped) original

    Robert Rosier: A Wizard's Tale (Dropped)

    Book&Literature HARRYPOTTER

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    Robert "Rob" Rosier is a pureblood wizard, born out of a secret relationship in a backwards society. Follow him in his attempt to fit in and his adventures throughout the wizarding world. This is an Alternate Universe (AU) where Harry Potter doesn't exist, in his place there is one Rose Potter, The-Girl-Who-Lived. There will be other changes, this being the biggest one.

    19 Chs 393 Collections