MeGusta

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15 hours ago
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This is “The Unwoven Threads of Fate” By: Diadru on ff .net last updated: Mar 31, 2019 dead novel with 75 chapters are you planing on continuing it?

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MeGusta
26 days ago
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If there's no chapter after this explaining that this was all Tony's plan to track these guys and this will be the chapter of this novel downfall

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MeGusta
29 days ago
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The novel's persistent focus on racism becomes overbearing and seems superfluous, rendering the reading process quite tedious by the tenth chapter. Should this theme continue, it might not resonate with all readers. Other than that, the narrative is mediocre and lacks distinction, except for the way the racial elements overshadow the pleasure of reading.

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MeGusta
MeGusta
29 days ago
Replied to Jaxon235

Amidst the whirlwind of Gojo's overwhelming presence, one might wonder where the main character has wandered off to.

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MeGusta
1 months ago
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You had him surrender in a way that's as nonsensical as the Batman vs. Superman fight resolution; you might as well have taken the 'his mother's name is Martha' approach.

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MeGusta
1 months ago
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This is still boring eight chapters in; does it get any better?

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