sweetsweetlover

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sweetsweetlover
sweetsweetlover
2 years ago
Posted

I don’t know if English is the authors second language. It probably is and I just skipped through it in her preface. I have a lot of things to say and one of them was that there were alot of grammatical errors and repetitions within this book, mostly using “stone face” as a descriptor of emotion when there are a myriad of words (nonchalant, emotionlessly, carelessly, miffed, calm). Its just very lousy writing and not worth the huge amount of coins you have to spend every chapter. Especially when most well written original books are like 3-4 coins. But it is a feel good read especially if you don’t want the main character to face too many challenges and you literally just want to watch the main leads pining for her. The characters are ok, like the female lead is interesting in her own way, but the way her duality is imposed is a bit confusing. I just wished her attitude is more consistent. The male characters are copy paste, the only difference is that they have different names and backgrounds and approaches. Like they’re all the same but one might just be a bit too flirty in the moment or some of them might be a bit too tsundere. But if you look at it closely, they are all powerful, emotionless, and insane for the female lead and sometimes it just gets boring especially when you see the same formula or reaction from all the men.

sweetsweetlover
sweetsweetlover
2 years ago
Commented

Im gonna pretend it said 10,950 probably more accurate in modern context. A balenciaga blazer will cost 300-5000 sooo hahaha

"How much?" Mara asked with a stone face. "It is 1095 dollars, Miss" the girl grinned. Mara took out the money from her purse, she gave it to the girl with a small smile. "Here, Miss" the girl handed the bags to the woman with a grin. Mara smiled back and left the shop.

Being Loved By Devils

Being Loved By Devils

Fantasy · Hera_Cordelia

sweetsweetlover
sweetsweetlover
2 years ago
Replied to LazyPebble

U can have both. Like ive seen a lot of lanky dudes with beer bellies because thats all they ever consume. Especially if they dont eat much. Mostly the calories in beer cant make u gain weight but it can make u super bloated since its liquid.

"Can you buy something yummy for my Daddy? He's so skinny that even the wind can blow him away."

I Become A Burdensome Child After Transmigrating

I Become A Burdensome Child After Transmigrating

General · Biting Peaches

sweetsweetlover
sweetsweetlover
2 years ago
Posted

I love this book. This is awesome if you hope to have something a bit more lighthearted. I love the development of the characters too. And the ending, we need a spin off or something hahahaha….

sweetsweetlover
sweetsweetlover
2 years ago
Commented

See this is how you ship. U Dont ship them when one is a child and one is an adult. You wait till both of them are adults.

He shook his head. He laid on the bed obediently, watching Meili as she worked.

I'll Tell You Every Day

I'll Tell You Every Day

Urban · Anri

sweetsweetlover
sweetsweetlover
3 years ago
Posted

It's your typical MC in the entertainment industry except our MC had came back to her original body a year after she started to transmigrate into different worlds. During that one year period, it was occupied by another soul that made really bad decisions and destroyed her relationships with her brothers. But our MC is really cute and really likable with her superb cooking skills and kind and fair attitude. I am up to chapter 327 and by then, she had fixed most of her relationships with her family. I just hope that as the story progresses, we could see healthy and friendly interactions with female characters. It's heartwarming and a good read. [img=recommend][img=update]