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Maple
Maple
4 days ago
Replied to rANDOMuser12

Not an horcrux. No scar.

"You carry many interesting patterns," Pythia observed, walking around him. "Meridians from one world, magic from another. Divine energy gathered from faith, yet bound by souls split between the mundane and celestial. Most curious indeed." She raised her wand. "Shall we see how they all connect?"

Young Celestial Wizard [Celestial Grimoire, Harry Potter]

Young Celestial Wizard [Celestial Grimoire, Harry Potter]

Book&Literature · Evoxius

Maple
Maple
4 days ago
Replied to LongSongGolden

No. He said it correctly: "moldu" means "muggle" in French. And we know that the Flamels speak to Harry in French from time to time. Or they slip into their native language without realizing it.

"See that particular fissure there?" Nicolas pointed to a deep crack running through the temple floor. "When a magical person approaches it..." He walked closer, and the crack began spreading wider, transforming into smooth stone steps that led down into darkness. "Rather clever bit of enchantment, that. The moldus see nothing but shadows."

Young Celestial Wizard [Celestial Grimoire, Harry Potter]

Young Celestial Wizard [Celestial Grimoire, Harry Potter]

Book&Literature · Evoxius

Maple
Maple
8 days ago
Commented

Cal Kestis survives Order 66. He runs away and hides to become the hero of a certain game series.

In another timeline, both would fall to Order 66. Not this time.

Star Wars: Let's Give This Another Go

Star Wars: Let's Give This Another Go

Movies · IronSimian

Maple
Maple
12 days ago
Commented

Bought then abandoned ? Captured then trafficked... and then escaped ? There's many possibilities.

How did an Alolan Vulpix end up in Hoenn?

Pokemon: Psychic Master

Pokemon: Psychic Master

Video Games · michaeI

Maple
Maple
17 days ago
Commented

Was this supposed to be an inner dialogue ?

This man is a bit strange, though I can't pinpoint exactly why, but in all my years on the job, this was the first time someone gave me such an odd feeling. It was like... like a dormant volcano.

Pokémon: Chronicles of Freedom

Pokémon: Chronicles of Freedom

Anime & Comics · Golden_DragonKing

Maple
Maple
1 months ago
Commented

Third

Ron leaned in conspiratorially. "There's a good chance it's hidden on the fourth floor."

Hogwarts: Harry Potter’s Return from the Witcher World

Hogwarts: Harry Potter’s Return from the Witcher World

Book&Literature · michaeI

Maple
Maple
1 months ago
Commented

Third, no ?

"Snape!" Ron exclaimed, his face lit with urgency. "He was heading to the forbidden corridor on the fourth floor!"

Hogwarts: Harry Potter’s Return from the Witcher World

Hogwarts: Harry Potter’s Return from the Witcher World

Book&Literature · michaeI

Maple
Maple
1 months ago
Posted

The story is very well written. You are a good writer, I have nothing to say about that. But even if your main character is well constructed, I have nothing but dislike for her and even wish to see her put in her place. Which is paradoxical because in general, I like anti-hero/antagonist stories. But a character who has no moral boundaries is beyond what I can tolerate. Which made my rating a bit tricky. So this is how I went about it : “Character Design” can be divided into two sub-criteria : - Is the character well written ? YES - Is the character appreciable in its design ? NO So it would be 50/50 or 2.5. But do the two criteria have the same weight ? No, I think pure design is more important than appreciation for the purpose of this criterion. So we would start with a 70/30 ratio or 3.5. (Round it at 3) As for "Story Development" : The story itself is good but its direction is horrible (no thanks to the MC). And unlike the previous criterion, it is the appreciation which takes precedence, i.e. 1.5 (round it at 1). And I can't give a full rating to "World Background" because the fanfic hasn't really shown if there really is mastery on this point so -1.

Maple
Maple
1 months ago
Commented

Isn't accessibility to the shadow clone technique supposed to be restricted by the village ? For example, you had to be a jounin (or have special circumstances) to be allowed to learn it.

From his father, he had inherited some scrolls containing various jutsu. Among the advanced techniques were the Shadow Clone Jutsu and the Body Flicker Jutsu.

Naruto: Wood-Wood Fruit

Naruto: Wood-Wood Fruit

Anime & Comics · plotplanner

Maple
Maple
1 months ago
Commented

Exact same thought. It's similar to Shiba Tatsuya's abiity to restor the eidos of people to it's previous state.

There was an ability he had decided to name 'Reset.' It was the combination of the Deception and Physical Fitness from the Error pathway and the record ability from the Door pathway. It allowed for him to, 'record' the current state of his body, thoughts, motivation, dream, or spirituality and later, 'paste' the state onto himself using deception. It had a limit however. It consumed a lot of spirituality, even by his own standards; but it was alright since it was something sort of a last resort ability. if something managed to blow his head off without him being able to react, something that was highly improbable, he could simply reset his body back to peak condition.

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

Others · Yesnth