if I could give a lower rating i would the concept and linking of powers is great fantastic even but the actual story is trash
I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn
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Interesting take on canon by exploring gwen's spiderverse the mc needs to be humbled a bit but otherwise looks good, hopefully the author will continue updating
The writing is too robotic feels like ai generated contains too much extra information the story seems good with different povs but is a bit headache inducing for me at least, I hope the author works on this otherwise seems like a good story
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Yes
Kindly do a timeskip so much filler is getting boring
The grammar and syntax is so wrong that I can't even understand what is happening kindly try to proofread you own work and check if someone else can understand it
the concept is good but the overall story is pathetic everyone seems to know about obscure/forbidden techniques, characters are brainless blushing falling in love in 3 lines, just no more words
Naruto: My Clones Can Evolve
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