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Fantasy · Ero_Hacker
The story is good but it would be better if you have some type of indication when you're switching point of views so the reader is more aware of the change. It gets a little confusing when you're suddenly reading about another character or from another character's point of view unexpectedly.
That is deep on so many levels.
"You shouldn't worry about me," Lieutenant Dyester said before giving voice to a faint laugh. "I'm a defective training dummy. I've tried to be a monster, but my mind opposed my programming."
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Actually Kira had white fur. He was as strong as he was despite having white fur. He was the same as the rest of his clan. that's also why Aella is white also, both of her parents were white.
He recalled the clan that was led by Kira. While everyone had white fur, Kira was the only one to have black fur.
Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING
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Fantasy · Ero_Hacker