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5'10 being unusually tall for a 12 year old is an understatement... even with the abilities of Wolverine. That's just an insane height for that age.

Standing at 5'10", unusually tall for a boy of twelve name days, I was often mistaken for someone older. My long golden hair, which often obscured my face, contributed to this misconception. 

Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template

Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template

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1 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter.

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1 years ago
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+1

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1 years ago
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I like how he is and how you are going about giving him more substance then other main characters I've read on this platform. Just remember, Devas is Human. I recommend not killing his overall humanity like those is most cultivation novels do or really most Chinese novels I've read before I stopped reading lean towards doing. All the greatest characters of any book are the characters you can relate to. No matter the good or bad they've done. Keep him sentimental but Devas as a character will one day dive into the darker part of humanity like the fear he saw in his minds cape or dreamscape. That too will shape him as a character depending on how he will go about either running from or facing his fear.

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1 years ago
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Just remembered he's around 13 to 15 years old despite looking in his 20s. He may have the knowledge beyond his years but he neither has the understanding or wisdom of it.

A world that felt it was ok and natural to kill innocent men, women and children just to further one's goals for power wasn't worth saving. But Ned taking a stand, knowing what he was doing was stupid, but it was still right.

Primordial Kryptonian Across the Omniverse

Primordial Kryptonian Across the Omniverse

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1 years ago
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This is one of the good stories on this site. If you haven't started reading this I would recommend you do so if you like both Naruto and My Hero Academia. Stories like this one is rare on this site. The reason for the 4.2 score is because of the updates and background. They are slightly lacking but the short length of the chapters is the primary reason for the score. If the chapters covered more than simply small parts then reading this would be more enjoyable. Chapter 37 was good in writing quality, but mostly a disappointment regarding the content. The lack of thereof to be more precise. It was more like a teaser rather than a chapter. Hopefully the chapters in the future will either be longer or contain more content then rather teasing about future content. Regardless, this is a mostly good read so far.

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1 years ago
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useless saber!? Even if you barely know how to use it that thing can cut through just about anything! no sword in game of thrones can stand up to a lightsaber it will cut through them like a hot knife through butter

Before anyone discovered how useless my saber was, I had to do quests like mad and unlock more formidable skills.

GAME OF THRONES:A JEDI IN WESTEROS(REWRITE)

GAME OF THRONES:A JEDI IN WESTEROS(REWRITE)

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1 years ago
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I enjoy the story. I find it much more in depth and accurate compared to other fan fictions that crossover RWBY and Dragon Ball. Though, not all of it is fully accurate regarding the power levels between RWBY and Dragon Ball but with how the story made its foundation made up the difference. All in all I find this fan fiction High Quality and a good read.

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    Omniversal Adventure

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    The Start of Monkey D. Luffy's adventure to become the King of the Pirates was supposed to be straightforward. However, his adventure becomes complicated as he suddenly finds himself as a 5-year-old again with memories of his previous life along with a System known as the Omniversal Adventuring System in a familiar yet different world. A world filled with slaughter, mountain-sized walking natural disasters, an organization with a leader with a god-complex that can bring back the dead, and a goddess sealed into a moon that will turn all life into mindless drones to do her bidding all in the name of peace. It just so happens that the only way back is the death or redemption of the goddess sealed in the moon who can create and cross dimensions to flee if she chooses to do so. As if his situation couldn't get any more complicated he has an accidental tag-along from his homeworld that he must try his best to keep alive. Luckily, the Omniversal Adventuring System is very helpful and generous. Note: This is purely Fan-Fiction. I do not own the Naruto Series, the One-Piece Series, or anything else related to any other Series or Franchise that appears in the novel. Should you build a desire to know who owns the Naruto Series, the One-Piece Series, and anything else that I do not own in the story. I recommend searching the internet is an easy way to acquire the information you desire.

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