This paragraph has too much of the ai latency. Especially the first phrase - “they did x like they always did x”
The Council had listened the way they always listened, which was to say each of them had been ignoring most of his report and had been composing their next statement the entire time. They were shrewd, politically arrogant, and allergic to inconvenient truths, and the longer Minato dealt with them the more they reminded him of the Hokage's old advisors.
Anime & Comics · UchihaXD
The man’s call to action worked. This is a good fic for those that like a fairy tail story that is actually fairy tail in both vibe and structure. The writing for now feels somewhat mechanical though that is reducing the more I read. I’ve followed this novel for a short while so I can’t really comment on the update schedule apart from saying that as far as I’ve followed it, it’s been consistent. Minato feels sufficiently minato and the consequences of his presence are logical. That being said, my one major gripe with this is the harem tag. Have grown to dislike the harem element of most stories with only a rare few doing it well. Let’s hope this author gets that correct as well.
It’s from Skyrim - in game it’s supposed to be the language of dragons
Chapter 12: Grok Vaa Drakh
Book&Literature · Joe_Mama_7665
Sounds like dovazul
Chapter 12: Grok Vaa Drakh
Book&Literature · Joe_Mama_7665
Love this piece of work. I was honestly just going to give it a try when I had nothing else to read cause cyberpunk isn't really my thing but I binged the entire thing (upto chapter 42) in one sitting over less than an hour. Story developments were insanely interesting all things said and it makes me enjoy Ace's character a lot more than most other FFs. The only thing I gripe with is the character that the MC transmigrates as, though even that is at best minor and fully upto personal preference to leave the main cast untouched. Eitherways GG, I look forward to the future of this work with great interest XD
Its a good and interesting story so far. I'm at ~ 35 chapters in and have given it a rest so I can stockpile a ton of chapters to read at once. The main character could do with some development but considering the nascency of the story I can't really frame that as a critique as much as an expectation. The side characters are fairly one-note so far, but again considering how early it is into the story that isn't actually a complaint. The plot contrivances are forgivable for now, but I would like some more world building. Regardless, kudos to you author, and We will Watch Your Career with Great Interest XD
something something "the taste of a demoness" (lotm reference for those not in the know)
Loki stopped her actions and looked back up at Yuji, waiting for him to continue, "Let's just say that my… birth wasn't conventional." Something dark glinted behind his eyes but disappeared just as quick before the two caught it. "I can't go into specifics, and I don't want to, but wouldn't it be possible through the use of magic?"
Anime & Comics · Suploly
Why do I think it was gallet doing it for shits and giggles
"As for everyone else, there aren't many who could do it. But one thing is certain—"
Book&Literature · BlurryPinkSnake
too many exclamation points hurt my eyes. A single one works just fine
"Professor Dumbledore!!!!" His thoughts finally caught up, and he found himself yelling and running towards the old man in the crater…
Anime & Comics · moonpie_99
It’s more that ai (all of them from my experience) defaults to a collection of phrases and usages that after a point tend to immediately flag.
The Council had listened the way they always listened, which was to say each of them had been ignoring most of his report and had been composing their next statement the entire time. They were shrewd, politically arrogant, and allergic to inconvenient truths, and the longer Minato dealt with them the more they reminded him of the Hokage's old advisors.
The Silent Fairy
Anime & Comics · UchihaXD