BroMan987

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BroMan987
BroMan987
16 days ago
Posted

Lots of people are being positive about this novel, but it is honestly extremely difficult to read, the mc is extremely arrogant with little to back it up, the author can't go two sentences without using a simile or metaphor. The whole thing feels almost impossible for a human to write. If you have nothing else to read then maybe give this novel a try but don't get your hopes up. I usually try and be give positive critism when I comment or review. This however I cannot think of anything you could change to fix this novel, good luck, I wish you all the best

BroMan987
BroMan987
1 months ago
Replied to The_Dark_Hydrax

if you look up the name of the novel online, you'll be able to find the full complete version, seen it in quite a few places

BroMan987
BroMan987
1 years ago
Posted

First of all, don't really care one way or the other about harems, but ignoring that, this novel suffers from a major problem that most does. The characters all decide the mc needs to change, does stupid ideas (e.g. the teacher claming somehow having people to rely on, makes you week, but its really an excuse for her to seduce the mc or manipulate him, don't really care). So the novel is good, but most of the characters are stupid/selfish, and the mc just goes along with it. If you tolerate or like that, then you'd probably enjoy it because the novel is pretty decent quality if rather unimaginative.

BroMan987
BroMan987
1 years ago
Commented

This comment is going to be me summing up my thoughts when you brought up the fact the next few chapters are going to be triggering. I do not have the patience to wait and read through a bunch of chapters so the mc can learn some sort of lesson that I completely disagree with. You are a very skilled writer but your versions of these characters as well as your character's overall opinions on things, I find it extremely naive and I get the general vibe that you are seeing a lot of characters through a special kind of lens making them seem kinder than they actually are. Good luck but I don't wanna sit through another character arc where someone forces an opinion on the mc. Bye

BroMan987
BroMan987
1 years ago
Replied to NotASpicyGermans

I believe its the Russian censorship committee and he meant to say Roskomnazor, which is the nickname for it

{Well, oddly enough, in this case I am entirely on the side of roskopozor}

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Anime & Comics · A_strange_man

BroMan987
BroMan987
1 years ago
Commented

After a lot of Google searching, roskopozer is a reference to Roskomnazor, which is basically the people in charge of Russian censorship, I hope this helps even if I don't fully get why this is said

{Well, oddly enough, in this case I am entirely on the side of roskopozor}

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Anime & Comics · A_strange_man

  • Reborn with a useless power in a stupid world (aka MHA) original

    Reborn with a useless power in a stupid world (aka MHA)

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION

    Guy literally gets reborn in My Hero Academy (or Academia) with a pretty useless quirk and just tries to be a hero out of spite

    4 Chs 6 Collections

  • Sins and Virtues original

    Sins and Virtues

    Others

    A story with anyone from anything doing whatever I think of. The main character is the son of Voldemort (from Harry Potter) and Katniss Everdeen (from The Hunger Games). I will be ruining anyone I write about, but hopefully, the overall plot will be good. F.Y.I. I may offend you, I don't care. I could care, but that would be boring. The novel will be taking place in the real world and a VR type world.

    3 Chs 5 Collections

  • Random Anime Fanfiction original

    Random Anime Fanfiction

    Others

    Naruto fanfic for now A story I am writing out of boredom. There will not really be a consistency in the chapter releases. If I have spelling mistakes, feel free to point them out (also I am British so my English might be differently spelt than the American counterparts) Also I apologise that i'm a terrible at using Microsoft Paint.

    15 Chs 71 Collections