Neville.... did no one proofread?
"Ah, Solim, good to see you, Ah! this Navelle..." A small pale face with pale blonde hair appeared at the door of the box.
Book&Literature · Dragonel23
is this a translation?
His little sister, who was smart, kind, lovely, and understanding, had the best relationship with Solim among Mrs. Selwyn's children. Look at his eldest brother and second brother, one is a violent maniac who does not agree with each other, and the other is an autism who can't make a fart with three slaps.
Book&Literature · Dragonel23
love the name choice.
Solim said with mixed feelings as he looked at the little wizard hurrying outside the train, "Hogwarts is more comfortable than that deadly school."
Book&Literature · Dragonel23
i thought he was 3 years old currently....
It had been a few months since Ron first started working on his `Wand/Ring' and he had managed to draw some other runes on the ring. Besides the Magic Gathering Rune, Ron had added the Magic Storage Rune which would act as a backup source of energy, a Spirit Focusing Rune which would allow him to fortify his mind and increase his mental powers and lastly a Pentacle Rune which combined the previous three Rune's effects and used the magical and spiritual energies to nourish the person wearing the Ring. `Whew! Finally, I can't believe it's taken me so long to just draw up just four Runes, I didn't even have to focus on preparing any magical ingredients!' if any living being capable of proper thought were to hear those thoughts, they would either want to kill themselves, kill Ron or both! A child less than three years of age had managed to not only cast basic spells but had used those spells to turn scrap metal into a Ring that could act as a Wand!! It was a feat that even Sixth Year Hogwarts Students would have difficulty replicating and this `child' was admonishing himself for `taking too long'!
Fantasy · Chaos_Empyrean
I wish Rowan wasn't made to be so weak. What was the point of all of the death surges if she isn't as powerful as her twin? Not to mention Rowan have regularly exercised. Severus doesn't. She shouldn't be out match like this. I can't help be feel disappointed. All throughout the story everyone was saying that she is crackling with power but even with the things she went through she's still lesser than her brother whose journey has been smooth sailing. I understand that wanting an overpowered main character. But is that not why they have each have their own strengths and weaknesses? Rowan should be powerful enough to beat her brother without resorting to using her fists.
Rowan presses her lips into a thin line as she unhappily admits the truth. "Severus is far more powerful than me and his reaction time is absolutely superb."
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
that our main character should have to lure people into the dark side 😤
Beauty is a terrifying weapon.
Fantasy · Blazuku
I need them to stop praying on my man's downfall 😤😤😤
the villain should have SSS charm.
'And mine.'
Fantasy · Blazuku
🤣🤣🤣 he is wilding!
[Eldest Senior Brother, don't treat yourself as an outsider. I'll tell you the reason why I agreed to give free pills below grade-6. It's all because of you. After you break through to the Nascent Soul stage, you can refine grade-6 pills. We still need you to refine those pills. I can't feel at ease if anyone else is doing this task.]
General · Girl God
damn, least let her have a couple more chapters before deciding to kill her off.
Jonathan Richards had been talking to her... yet his lips never moved.
DC/HP: Hyperstorm!
Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio