Sadly skimming chapters at this point. I will stick with ATG for *** scenes XD Anyway, good while it lasted.
ch 104 Delivering Herself to the Devil's Hand
Fantasy · HotIce
The logic regarding power being fueled by bloodliners seems fine but cause and effect seems to be not so solid The original ability dying out cause of lack of source is understandable but suppose a fire ability burns a tree, the fire that is fueled by a user disappearing is fine but what about the fire being fueled by burning of wood itself. I am thinking in terms of the ability being a catalyst in this case at least. Anyway good story, keep up the great work!
ch 228 Eating Within The Chaos!
Sci-fi · MidGard
I won't judge the story yet but I guess where you live and experienced makes a difference. I find it really hard to fathom why anyone would do such a thing to a kid. Anyway, I am gonna keep reading. Hopefully, the story flows more smoothly, as in the action taken by characters are explained a little more as to wrap my head around it. Since, the brief background we had in this story wasn't enough for such actions taken by family members to make sense. :P
ch 0 4 The Beginning of the End
Eastern · Shinigami8671
I really hope author improves in character interaction part, it was little cringe to read lol
ch 26 Why did you protect me?
Sci-fi · sakakoi
ya, boost player or experience and level up etc. At least, that's the closest thing I can think of.
The idea was to add puzzles in the game which after being solved would give players boast or something similar.
Sci-fi · sakakoi
such conflicting sentences right after one another.
The game was not totally taken down instead its developer's name was changed so that it would not have any link to Fu Yan in the future.
Sci-fi · sakakoi
Depends but Gunz: the duel is an epic example.
While developing a game, the most hated part was to find bugs and this was the main reason why most rookie developers failed to enter the market because these bugs would ruin the game experience for the player and even some big companies would face this issue.
Sci-fi · sakakoi
what?!
The game was ready but the game engine was still being finalized.
Sci-fi · sakakoi
Ya, those are not creating routes. The routes already exist, just different way to access it. And as some people said, there are games doing that already.
But with the new game engine players would be able to create their own walking routes (by actions like smashing a wall or climbing etc.).
Sci-fi · sakakoi
So, the comment about her not minding him being lecherous just flew over the MCs head.
"Well, let's start the interview then."
Sci-fi · sakakoi
it was the virus that mc made, not your fault.
"Well with this I can now start a company. It will be my first product and it will be fixed in people's minds and whenever anyone talks about 3D in the future, they will always remember my company in their mind."
Sci-fi · sakakoi
It's always best to explain to readers what happens in the middle so that way the story flows nicely. Usually, when the readers have to make assumption that is not good. A simple sentence or paragraph of what took place is good. Like how the AI helped or in what aspect etc. Just my one cent.
After spending a while at it Fu Yan had high hopes for it so he ran the program and noticed that the game looked very realistic.
Sci-fi · sakakoi
Better off playing the game but this is a great fanfic :)
ch 160 The Newly Obtained Council Hall
Lord of the Oasis
Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao