Avatinius

Avatinius

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Avatinius
Avatinius
1 years ago
Commented

I don't usually comment. but it's very boring when you focus on a side char for this long.

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Avatinius
Avatinius
2 years ago
Commented

don't get me wrong... if it's only those listed on the quest list, it should only take 15minutes..

It took me a total of two hours to finish this training.

World Travel System: High School Dxd ,Naruto etc.

World Travel System: High School Dxd ,Naruto etc.

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Avatinius
Avatinius
3 years ago
Commented

eh, no idea for romantic thingy. I did like the op healer girl

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Avatinius
Avatinius
3 years ago
Posted

I gave it 5/5 for the numbers sake, but if I truthfully gave it a score, perhaps 4.5/5. this novel / fanfic is an enjoyable read, I do like the main character, the plot is good and what I enjoy a lot is that the author doesn't mind straying away from the manga/novel plots, which I truly enjoy reading about. Tbh, if I wanted to read something that only follows the plot of a novel / manga, then I would have read that manga / novel, not a fanfiction. all in all, kudos to you, Author.

Avatinius
Avatinius
3 years ago
Commented

I usually don't comment or review, but this time, I'll do it. honestly speaking, I am enjoying this novel, a lot. kudos to you, author. I do hope that you will continue writing, as it isn't easy to find good novels / fanfics as of late.

Avatinius
Avatinius
3 years ago
Posted

I've finally finished reading the raws, I'm not gonna comment on the writing quality either on this website nor on the raws, as raws are usually bad writing quality. I honestly enjoyed the overall feeling of the novel, there are some stuff I'm slightly bitter about but nothing too big or much. Rosen (mc) / Crocodile as a character worked really well into the story, and the story had him as a main focus and didn't set focus on Straw Hats (which I liked that the focus was only on Crocodile). As One Piece isn't finished yet, the author had to make his own twist, which worked pretty well, and the author changed some parts into the story too. all in all, a really enjoyable read.

Avatinius
Avatinius
3 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter

Avatinius
Avatinius
3 years ago
Commented

as another guy said, I'm reading without commenting due to loving this novel too much

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