Meh, wasted time just for a free ticket. Story is gonna be padded out soon to slow down the progress because the MC is too OP and milk more chapters lmao.
good Lord this novel became filler galore after chapter 200+ kept rambling on unnecessary characters with no future character development do not read, waste of time
good job, ChatGPT
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Fey Evolution Merchant
Eastern · Amber Button
Too fast paced, the story has passed the 2nd day of cataclysm yet they already have a term for "divine runemasters", as if it simply popped out of their minds and they accepted it as is. tier system seems useless if at the beginning the MC could immediately fight 3 tiers above his level
average bait, bad quality beyond the trial read, would not recommend.translation is obviously based on MTL then edited to look like a real translation. do not waste your money in the chapters.
past chapter 450, one would notice that this novel wasn't even translated by the team who posted this translation, just MTL translation from an aggregate site in china. quality is going downhill...
The ending ruined a good book. characters are one dimensional, all best friends of MC either die or disappear from the story, having no more show time. no resolution for the promises or wishes of the MC to restore those who have died, or even the plot of the demon race. the ending switches up terms as well, making it confusing if he reached supreme realm and then the realm above that, which was the Sage realm. do you want to read it? yes, just imagine before reading the final chapter that the MC was caught by a supreme instead and was killed and refined. much better than this ending.
the current novel finished its first arc, the lower realm. the 2nd arc is a carbon copy of another novel, the most generous master ever, down to the interaction and experiences of the MC, as well as his setting, so far. would I continue to read it? no. I'll wait for until the second realm he has ascended to faces calamity, maybe there is some different interactions there. quite disappointing to read two novels in one work, with the other one being a direct copy.
it has potential to grow
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original Time Twister
4.67
A man living in the future classically isekai'd and was reincarnated in a fantasy world where modern science and magic co-exist, where the world is not limited within one planet. How will he survive armed with his powers and system gifted by a benevolent (?) God? Are there others like him? Can he go and visit his old world? What lies beyond the stars? Beyond...the universe? Note: The first 6 years will be fast. The story really begins once he reached 7 years old. The novel is written to explain his experiences, feelings, and thoughts, how through time, he starts to change his outlook and beliefs, influenced by the beings/people around him, and how they are also influenced by him, changing their fates.81 Chs 543 Collections
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World's Apocalypse Magician
Paolo Guillarme: A businessman. A Magician. He is a renowned businessman who was one of the thousands who fell unconscious after the event that happened one fateful day. He later wakes up with a system that allows him to soar to new heights at the rapidly-changing world and face the challenges it poses to mankind. Will he ever discover the truth concerning the event that affected the whole world? Why were there animals mutating into stronger and smarter beasts? Find out his story.29 Chs 103 Collections
Raws: 顶级悟性：从基础拳法开始 Top level understanding: starting from basic boxing
Top-Class Insight: Start with Basic Fist Techniques
Eastern · Shadow on the Moon