jachapingguo - Profile

jachapingguo

male LV 5

howdy ho

2017-04-21 Joined Global

Badges 4

Moments 10

jachapingguo
jachapingguo
Commented

I'm truly (looking) forward. You missed "looking".

"I'm truly forward to seeing that dark elf crying with her hands covering her face at the scene of Léon's death," Ciri whispered to Joshua after exiting Madam Schroder's mansion.

Bringing Culture to a Different World

Bringing Culture to a Different World

Fantasy · Sister's Bride

jachapingguo
jachapingguo
Commented

lady assistance? i'd say it should be female assistant

jachapingguo
Commented

don't you mean sneezed?

jachapingguo
Commented

isn't dowry something that a female offers the male's family upon marrying? That doesn't feel right when related to Messai.

For the sake of obtaining that card, Messai had nearly exhausted all of the dowry she had saved up since her youth. Yet, even now, she still hasn't been able to open that card from a pack.

Bringing Culture to a Different World

Bringing Culture to a Different World

Fantasy · Sister's Bride

jachapingguo
Commented

I feel like "question" is unnecessary here. the sentence should end with "that".

jachapingguo
Commented

"when he said Joshua". do you mean "saw" perhaps?

jachapingguo
jachapingguo
Commented

It's 2 hours, not 10

Report user