Author here doing the shame review. I made this novel to enter a writing prompt contest. I hesitate when it comes to female leads, this was an opportunity and the idea somehow was very clear. I would really appreciate any comments. The story will advance rather quickly, must of it will develop inside the game world, however, I still think is important to talk about the real world.
The Emperor is death.
The Empire broken.
The seven children of the emperor have a long and perilous task, if they wish to revive the empire.
There are many who do not wish to see the Empire rise again, and would do anything in their power to ensure it, and by any means necessary.
I'm also publishing this story at Royal Road
In the year 841 after the great expansion, there is no greater thrill than MAC (Mass Acceleration Crafts) racing.
Ayr Lite, is one of the best MAC pilots in the galaxy. He is hard working, well mannered and a person of integrity thus he was nicknamed "The Gentleman" on his debut year, however the MAC championship has, for 6 years, always remained out of his reach, making many turn his title into "The Defeated Gentleman".
At the end of each MAC Pro Circuit Season 70, the Gauss Relay team announced they would end their relationship with "The Gentleman" for the next season.
The press is going wild with the news, it was true that the Gentleman had not been able to achieve the championship, but it was no doubt he was one of the best pilots. What would the Ayr Lite do, Where would he go?.
A young pilot from the ascension league, faces an impasse. What is needed to become better, to reach the Pro Circuit, an opportunity presents, and perhaps and answer.
A retired pilot, is called by friend. A promise made in the past, a chance to return to the Pro Circuit.
A inexperienced and young assistant to help share responsibilities way over the salary.
The preparation phase for season 71 of the MAC Pro Circuit is about to begin, the complete list of teams for the season is revealed. The last team for the season, is a brand new team, in its roster however there is a very know name. Perhaps the only way to have the team you want, is to make it yourself. Will it be enough?.
As her eyes closed for the last time, she finds herself waking up in a very different place. Were once she carried a sword, now she finds a phone.
A young woman, from a world of skills and magic, ends up in very different world. Her entire life, has been represented in fiction, it is a genre, fantasy.
She adapts and becomes part of this world, but finds attracted to gaming, as it resembles her old life. She however has yet to find a game that completes that feeling, of someone who used to be an adventurer.
She tries a new immersive game, Dungeon Central. Does an adventurer have an edge when it comes to designing a dungeon?. Does she have what it takes to conquer other dungeons, and become the best dungeon master?.
The city of Midy, the North Star of the continent of Aebiron. It was built around a dungeon, but something happened that let to its ruin.
The first dungeon ever to have gone out of control, but some other had followed. It took the live of most of the city, and with the work of its mightiest denizens and some incredible magic, they managed to stopped partially what was happening inside the dungeon.
What was left of Midy, has work hard to take back what was once a great city, they retreated to a smaller town, now known as Neverglen, and from there they hold the things that from time to time still come out of the dungeon and plague the northern lands.
The Vault of Twilight, that is what is left of the city of Midy, those few who are left work hard to recover what was theirs, but they are not alone, adventures come, for there is much to gain, in the wretched ruins of Midy, and much more waiting within the Vault.
A lone caravan traveling north, within it, a new batch of adventures, seeking fortune, glory, and perhaps something else, what will they find at the vault?.
The 11th Einsten-Rosen Bridge (AKA Rifts or Wormholes) explored on the expasion days, led to a place near the borders of the galaxy. The problem was that it was also connected to 9 more Bridges wich led to the unknown. Thus the 11th Einsten-Rosen Bridge was nicknamed the Dark Rift, and left outside the original expansion plans.
Many years later as Humanity had already established itself among the stars; war also began, in a scale before seen. Many Rifts were lost, planets already colonized were left unconnected to the Galaxy. New routes needed to be explored, this brought a exploding economy to the galaxy.
The Dark Rift was one of the 3 most important Einsten -Rosen Bridge Nexus, however it had been filled with outlaws, brigands and pirates.
That is, until the creation of the Dark Rift Convention, a company wich transformed the most backwater route in space, to one of the most lucrative. Wich in turn brought the attention of the galaxy to this forgotten place.
Evans Raleigh, the man behind the Convention. Many questions appear whenever his name is called, Who is He? Where does he comes from?, What does he want?. However the one that matters is, Will he be able to make the Convention hold, as everyone focuses on the rift?, or would he and his convention, vanish as quick as they appeared?
On a lonely hill, a man forgotten by time, remains trapped inside a spell. The world changed as he stood still. A remnant from a country now broken. A warrior with an unrelenting resolve. He will forge anew, the things he lost.
I will try to publish from 3 to 5 chapters per week. But will do more if I have enough time.
In the Northwestern Front of the Kingdom of Vrand lies the Elven Kingdom of Mitier and the Rur Territory in the Karakorum Forest. A peace treaty has been signed with the Elves as a result of the Orc Threath from the Cold North. The 11th Borderguard has been tasked with guarding from the Rur, however the new Commander does not intend to wait for and attack, and has managed to rout the Anrur Clan.
The idea of these novel its to explore a little different the idea of Dungeon Making, and exploration.
Dungeon Central
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