I understand, but you told us the Mc start to get recognition for his efforts from the people.... I found that hard to believe if he only just started to repair. Of course it is only my opinion, if it makes sense to you and logic behind it is firm, so ok. I still feel you should consider it, I only mentioned it because the time is few days (because of his deadline with the mission) and not few months
Thanks for the chapter 👍🏼 it was a little bit rushed for me... even in modern time it takes time to repair roads and build fortified defense buildings, in westros even if he have engineers supervise everything few days is just to quick
Thanks for the chapter 👍🏼 I would definitely like to see tens of thousands Dothraky get shredded by machine guns and artillery mount on the wall ... you don't even need many, one Vulcan, 6000 bullets a minute, in few minutes there will be only corpses
I read the raw.... the state caught him, so I am not sure about no body taking notice.... actually the moment I read it, I actually dropped the story but yeah you're right, there are tons of loopholes and many more stupid decisions he makes along the way
put food and other supplies in it
He had already opened a new dimensional space in this world, everything Jon had collected from the Night's Watch and the men he had faced – clothes, bronze, iron, bows, and arrows – was stored in a separate space created by alteration magic. It was the first thing he did as soon as he arrived in this world, as it was one of the most useful things he could have. And to avoid raising suspicions, he carried only his weapon at his waist. Lucis was the only one who knew the truth, having witnessed Jon putting most of the weapons in the space. She provided a convincing explanation to Karsi, the tribe leader, when she inquired about the crow's weapons.
Game of Thrones: The Dragonborn.
Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
Thanks for the chapter 👍🏼 I am little bit confused about the timeline and did the real Jon came back or no, when did he leave Winterfell
I am bit disappointed about the last few chapters.... Going to court is much simpler then all of this, no money for lawyer... sure just published it anonymously, hell just drop from school at once... definitely not worth the time with his system he can even take the test independently if his sister insist on it. If the Mc is always thinking the laziest way going to school for sure isn't the solution he would think about
Just find Armin Zola computer and hack the shit out of him.... much better and quicker than Wanda reading minds
He didn't ask how many people he needs?
"We accept your offer, Jaqarro Maegyris," Maximus finally said, meeting the merchant's eyes. "But I hope you understand, our protection doesn't come cheap."
Building an Empire in Game of Thrones (REWORKED VERSION)
Fantasy · Dr_Dred
Thanks for the chapter 👍🏼 I know that maybe it's annoying you my crit but I just really a fan of GoT. Just the dialogue with Braavos... in the lore Pentos and Braavos fought a few wars that the end of them Pentos lost and was forced to sign an agreement of no military forces other then some city guards and no slave, even if conquer the city, I wish to see the envoy asking about the agreement or try to reach a new one, also Volantis is just the opposite.... a lot of slave and much more far way the Braavos, it should take them longer to reach Pentos. Any way, I love your novel, keep going! it is really hard for authors to keep the balance and the pace stable with modern military system in medieval times. hope you don't drop it 🤞🏼🙏🏼
In Game of thrones with Sci fi Military system
TV · SUKH007