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Yes but difference is that Ragnar will be is better and will order Rollo. If Rollo becomes king and gives it Ragnar later it will be seen in power dinamics
[Congratulations on killing the biggest, most beloved loyal dog "Sven"! Passive skills dropped: Useful thinker, Powerful Doglicking, Master of Praise, Steward Bag of Essentials]
Essence of a Viking [Custom CYOA]
TV · daoistgingerale
That is very uncomfortable every time go back to it to read about power up. U need first explain it in chapter and later add it to aux so ppl can reread to refresh their memories after some time. Because going to aux every time mc gets power up or just power is imbecilic and waste of time.
[Tier 1: Invisibility -> Tier 2: Invisibility (0/100)]
A Mutant Collector Quest
Movies · Avi2112
So chnage that. 1st pov is much better and much more immersive then trashy 2nd
Regardless, you were able to see glimpses and make inferences based on it. You'll keep trying in the future, but for now, you know the direction you need to take.
A Mutant Collector Quest
Movies · Avi2112
U can easily change that. 2nd is worst trash ever created only lunatics like readind 2nd pov. If u wanted for reader to immerse themselves u needed to use 1pov not trash 2.
You open your eyes hearing a strange sound and feeling something moist enveloping your dick.
A Mutant Collector Quest
Movies · Avi2112
Agreed stupid plot and unnecessary drama
Danzo wanted to threaten Aoto but he was smart enough not to do it. He was already grateful that Aoto had decided not to kill him here as he thought for the first time in his life that he would die. But he was undoubtedly going to exact vengeance. Since his business was the only thing he held precious, he would use politics to destroy it.
The Shopkeeper of Konoha
Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
I hear only excuses. If he killed him no one would know. No body no evidence. Supervisor has no evidence just his words against mc. Mc can say that they had a spat with supervisor because of books and more that would gain horizons suspicions of supervisor not mc. That is just stupid idea and prolonged chapter quota with unneeded drama.
"Ask Orochimaru, if you are so desperate for the answer. Honestly speaking, I would love to kill you here. You are a cancer to Konoha. However, doing so would put me at odds with the Hokage, which is not a luxury I can't currently afford." Aoto answered, dumping all of his fabrications onto one of Konoha's greatest offenders. Danzo realized right away how this individual knew so much about him.
The Shopkeeper of Konoha
Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
Yep don’t forget tsunade had hemophobia so when teaching Shizune she for sure didn’t teach practical knowledge only theoretical, everything else she had to do herself. Teaching sakura she could show everything herself so that makes it faster and easier.
It was very easy to say that Sakura was trash ( well she was trash) but one mustn't forget that Sakura was a better apprentice than Shizune herself who had been staying with Tsunade for a longer period of time. Sakura inherited everything from Tsunade and even the Slug's sage arts.
The Shopkeeper of Konoha
Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
Sounds boring. Ur idea about titanic sounded much better. Hp with one li no reincarnation and not op are too much it became not interesting
I've finally made a patreon, I am also currently writing another HP fic, no harem, no reincarnation, no OP.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Not really it protects ur mind and some other stuff but doesn’t make u emotionless doll it’s ur wrong interpretation
Occlumency was something that He didn't like personally, but he had to train her in the mind arts. He had made her promise to turn off her shields during family time.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Chinese restaurant in Germany don’t remember the name but it was delicious big portions , great service and cheap for that we had.
What's the best food/Dish you ever had? at which restaurant? Location?
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
That sounds more interesting. Hp with one li u can find many but titanic that is new
2. Titanic fanfic, smashing Winslet, saving our little bro jack. More of wish fulfilment. Normal paced.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Nope mediocre actress could be better
Agustus appeared back in the Room of Requirement with the Resurrection Stone in his hand, and a cloak and a wand near his feet. They were the other two Deathly Hallows. He had become the true Master of Death.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Cound use someone much better. We are talking about death herself and u used someone mediocre
What Agustus saw left him speechless. He saw one of the most beautiful women he had ever seen. Death was dressed in a black dress that hugged her curves. She had long brown hair, fair skin, and bright blue eyes. She looked like Hayley Atwell, the famous actress.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Maybe because Augustus sounds like a proper name and agustus like sth is missing and not sounding like name
I had to edit more than 20 fking chapters, still i may have missed somewhere. Sorry for that
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Tommy doesnt have any peverell blood. 2nd brothers fiancé died so he used the stone to death. Fiancé should have been a gaunt so after he died they took his stone nothing more.
The Aurors guarding the gates saw the luxurious carriage and Agustus stepping out. They knew he was Heir Peverell, the descendant of the legendary Antioch Peverell, who once owned the Elder Wand. They had received special instructions from the Minister of Magic herself not to offend the young heir. The Aurors was placed there by Ministry to welcome Agustus.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Also they never showed classes of older or younger years so we don’t know how they are grouped. Maybe every year it changes or sth else
Agustus accepted the schedule from the prefect and began reviewing his classes; Slytherin classes were together with Hufflepuff.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Maybe only for harry
Agustus accepted the schedule from the prefect and began reviewing his classes; Slytherin classes were together with Hufflepuff.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
Maybe last lord gave his account manager orders to gain more money and investing comes with it
He had houses in England, France, Germany, and Italy. He also owned a large portion of the stock market, several businesses, and a private island. He had access to ancient and powerful artifacts, books, and secrets. He was the sole heir of four of the most influential and respected families in the wizarding world. He had more power and wealth than he could ever imagine. He was Agustus Peverell, and he was destined for greatness.
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
But the thing is that potters have blood of youngest brother but gaunts don’t , as 2nd brothers fiancé died so no children.
Dear Mr. Agustus Peverell,
Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
Book&Literature · Agwinz
U call this beautiful ? If so sorry but better don’t post such photos as any interest in female will cease to exist
The woman in front of him was not unattractive; in fact, like most women in this world, she looked better than he remembered.
Essence of a Viking [Custom CYOA]
TV · daoistgingerale