felt like writing and this came about...Also this is very rough but i am looking for 1-3 other authors or writers who are interested so i can have multiple points of views with different or similar writing styles to reflect this. 

Please have patience with me and i hope you all are understanding. 

Thank you in advance.

This novel is not yet complete if you had suggestions or correction please send a review. I hope you support my first novel, i'm not yet that good but doesn't matter i want you to enjoy and make your imagination work.

by Dark Avenger

DO READ THIS FIRST.
As the chapter title hinted.
This is a chapter made to give the readers, an early heads up and review which is meant for reference to continue reading.

All this to avoid toxicity as much as possible.

These are some points that should be crucial to help you decide either to continue or not.
1. The content
Anything can get inside of the novel, even if disturbing ones. So, if you found hint(s) about them and felt you wouldn't be able to handle it, you are free (recommended) to back down. Challengers are welcome, tread on fully knowing this fact.
This one will definitely contain scene for the cultured ladies and gentlemen and scene that might stir your emotion or something.

2. Readers influence
I will make plot choices post for readers to affect the story to certain extent.
Self made petition to ask the same also possible but, remember! I never promise I would take it into account, and I am not obliged to follow that suggestion down to very details.

3. Correction
Typos and grammar arrangement or maybe idea used could be wrong, so any correction suggestions are welcome.
BUT, once again I might comply or ignore the suggestions.

4. Merit system
I will keep track of things and may release more chapters per month.
Planned release 5 per week (taking break on the weekends. So, use the sign in reward if you using apps to read as a tracker if impatient.)
I promise i will release at least 20 chapters per month (5 chapters x 4 weeks). This is meaning even if I got busy, I will try to dish out the remaining chapters of the 20 I promised within that month.
Of course, I can just give out more chapters but that's my readers reward.

5. Target
I started this one for a contest, and mainly for extra income. 
New users, expect to at least spend some fast passes to read.
In case any unfortunate event happened, I will do my best to take the best solution I can at that time.

Here's my sneak peek review.
Story : Revolving around evolution and starting with revenge. There will be hints here and there, so let your imagination go wild. Any genre can get in and leave as I wish. So enjoy.
Language : I will use english (some might say broken english or bad grammar) along with a part of languages I known. 
A little spoiler, I will use japan's chan, kun, sama, dono and etc. (For those who might know nothing, those are words which can't be fully translated to language which own nothing of the similar system. Like sama for example, X-sama could be "lord X" but not all would be that. One who loved to watch any Japan related surely understand.)
Grammatically, this point a bit hard to say. I will take it as you understand, I understand then all is well. Go to point 3 for it. It definitely included on point 4 as my gratitude to the kind soul.

in star rate system, the story get my 5 of 5 stars, presentation 5 as well and grammar would be 4 out of 5, as I often lost of the best word even I actually known that word.
Overall, I would rate this Novel of mine 4 out of 5 for many reasons.

WARNING
This novel contains 18+ and evolving.

Readers please do take care.
The works definitely will contain disturbing elements which might include gory, crazy ideology(maybe) or anything.

Challengers are welcome.
Read fully knowing that.




Story Sypnosis:
I am Daken.
No.
I was Daken, a soldier on his prime, but was framed for unknown reason. Was it my love for the kingdom's princess, Shiva Eternia Ethervalen?

A soldier with the power rivaling a general tossed away just like that. Fortunately, a voice warned me the attempts of ambushes and an assassination.

The voice told me to go into the Accursed forest, Gal A forest.The most dangerous place of all dangerous places ever known. Even getting close 50 meters from the forest was said to bring bad luck. 

Rumors said that will invite catastrophe. 
Some said it will erase the closest villages. 
Some, until the sightseer die.
Some, the whole kingdom.
Many rumors flying around, shrouding the forest with more mystery and fear.

BUT. There is one fact, well known to everyone who knew about this infamous forest.
The fact is not about it is or was cursed or anything.
The fact is no trespasser ever come back as survivor.
All dead, seen or not seen. 

That fact made it, a treasure forest. Like insects allured by sweet smell, humans allured by the resources and mysteries accumulated by the forest. From unranked directly to A after many adventurers below S rank failed to return. Then directly to SS rank until an S ranker's magic placate which indicating his life became ashes without warning. Greed fired up which then went to play the pride of the strong resulting in the hurt pride felt wrath toward the forest. 

It was said 7 vice guild masters along with the army of a kingdom tried to explore the forest all vanished just like that after all, except a messenger team consisting 5 S rankers adventurers, entered the forest.

From 5 seemed to be wasteful messengers, only 1 survived. A sole survivor who wasn't the strongest of the 5 nor was the weakest. It was said he was the only to focus on escaping with not even the slightest care of the tragedy happening behind him. He was determined to return home to do his last job as a mere messenger to report the tragedy.

It was said that kingdom was the strongest of in the history as well as the richest.

That had been the story shared from generation to generation, not clear wether it was a legend, a myth or a fairytale. 

But, one thing for sure.
That forest is the place i lost something important as a man.

The Protagonist. Who are they? They are the main character of a story. The protagonist is at the center of the story, makes the key decisions, and experiences the consequences of those decisions. 

Eroge. 

What is an eroge? Well, find out for yourself.

In most Eroge, the protagonist's parents are usually absent. Why would they never show up?

That is because if they are (absent), they can't have the protagonist's sister or childhood friend wake him up in the morning, or to make it easy for a girl to sneak into his room. Simply just anything to suit the writer's convenience.

Though in some cases, the parents would accept it as the norm. Just like you see in anime or manga.

Reasons are presented such as the parents are working overseas or he is living in a dorm, away from his parents. 

There are even some instances where the parents themselves don't exist in the first place.

That's a bit extreme if you think about it. Surely questions such as, "How was he born if his parents don't exist?" would be brought up.

Well, the scriptwriter will think of a way that doesn't really make sense to get away with it.

Anyways, the protagonist is a man that is living in an environment that has a lot of unique circumstances.

There's also a special ability exclusive to Eroge protagonists called the [Eroge Protagonist Correction].

Now don't ask me why it's called that. Someone had to come up with a term for it right? 

Anyways, for example, the protagonist who cross-dresses and goes to an all-girl school. Why doesn't anyone notice that? It is so obvious to the extent it makes you think that he would be found out ages ago if there wasn't some kind of special power helping him out.

You might even pull out your hair and become bald while screaming "How the hell did they not find out?!" from all these events that somehow don't expose him.

There are a lot of times where the protagonist is supposed to be exposed, like when the protagonist came running with a big stride in physical education class but his wig still doesn't come off.

Why does it easily come off so suddenly with just so much as a little brush from the heroine? Well, it couldn't be helped since he was fighting with the heroine huh.

Although we deviated a little from the main subject, the thought that a man attends an all-girl school while cross-dressing is already an abnormal setting, a normal person wouldn't be able to wrap their head around that.

However, this is just an ordinary event in the Eroge World, even if you are not an expert in Eroge you can still immerse in the story without discomfort. Those who would feel such a sense of wrongness would be only just those novice that just got introduced to an Eroge.

On another point, the fact that the protagonist is so popular with the girl might be one of the powers of his [Eroge Protagonist Correction].

For example, the protagonist is always surrounded by a beautiful sight.

A beautiful little sister or sister-in-law who would call him Onii-chan. A beautiful childhood friend who even though you didn't ask, would come to wake you up early in the morning every day then proceed to flip your futon without permission only to witness your morning wood and send you flying with a slap. 

A talented, well-dressed student council president with strict looks who suddenly turns meek in an ero-scene. Or even a teacher who should already have graduated from university but no matter how you look, she still looks like an elementary school kid. For one reason or another, they all lust after a boy with little to no redeeming feature aside from the fact that he is a little kind. 

Be that as it may, the only abnormal one here was not only the protagonist, even the heroines are abnormal.

In reality, you wouldn't find a woman who has such a surprising high fighting power who just happened to be a ninja falling for you or a housewife who already has a child in high school but still looks younger than even her own daughter, a heroine that looks like an elementary schooler no matter which angle you look at her from.

However, no matter how young they looked, before the game starts there would be a disclaimer stating that "All of the individuals in this game are of the age of 18 or above" that made all the gentlemen (Eroge players) able to zealously perform their self-stimulation with a peace of mind.

To put it in a word, An Eroge's world is a special world that commonsense can not be applied to.

If you have entered such a world and you are the protagonist then there wouldn't be a problem. (Except for some games)

The protagonist is the center of the world and because of that, you will definitely become popular.

***********

"This is weird, This is definitely weird...."

The me that is reflecting in the mirror right now, he is me but also not me. No, the reflection moved as I move but the body I see is not mine, saying it that way would be more accurate.

The face in front of me… "Who is this? This unseemingly handsome face?"

"Was there a character like this?" I wondered as I stared at the reflection in the mirror.

What? Did I become an eroge character?

What? I'm just a regular mob character?

Why does my face look different?

This is all wrong!!!

Join Hatsume Haruhiro in the world of Magical x Experience (Magicero), Japan's number 1 eroge title, where he discovers all the wrong things about the world!













Inspired by Magical Explorer

When I open my eyes the first thing that i see is a beautiful blue sky. I check where I am and remember what happen. The voice, my wish and where I am. So I am in my own world, correction my RING world. In my side is a beautifully crafted piece of wood and when I touch it, I feel so powerful, so powerful that I think that I can Incendio the whole world. 

I look at the wood again and realised that it is the Fates wand. So beautiful, almost look like made of glass. Its look like a white oak. I woke in daze and look in my surroundings, all I can see is endless piece of land. No pollution just a fresh air and in my back is the mansion that Ive request. And beautiful is not the word to describe it but is perfect. Almost look like 21 century mansion.

I enter my mansion and look in the inside I can see a common mansion in the year two thousand, advance and luxurious. 

After touring the mansion I try to get out in my world but I can't. So i try to call my Assistant Friday to ask.

(Isaiah) FRIDAY are you here?

[FRIDAY] yes I am here. Always. {(^_−)−☆ get that. The favourite word of lily and snape. ALWAYS}

(Isaiah) Why can't i get out?

[FRIDAY] You can only get out when you can control your magic and learn the basic knowledge in this world. The study room is like a Room of Requirements in hogwarts in will provide you books about the basic to advance magic and the currently wizarding law. You need to learn all the loopholes that you can know and use it to your advantage. 

(Isaiah) So basically i cant get out until i can control my magic and learn the laws

[FRIDAY] Technically speaking Yes.

(Isaiah) Okay.. So what can you tell me about this world.

[FRIDAY] Currently its year 1986, five years after the fall of voldemort. You ate currently 6 years old and 2 months older that harry potter. 

(Isaiah) So i have five years to practice.. FRIDAY what do you think should I do?

[FRIDAY] Your first priority is learning. In your study room there is a stone that is look like a Resurrection stone but it is not the original. Its just a replica but can also call the dead and interact with them. You can use it to call the four founders and convince them to teach you not just magic but also all you need to learn. 

(Isaiah) Why can't just summon merlin if I want to learn about magic? Merlin is the most powerful wizard ever lived?

[FRIDAY] You can't summon a living being. Yes merlin is alive and just always watching so you cant basically call him. 

(Isaiah) If his alive why did he not help the wizard when the rising of both Grindelwald and Voldemort?

[FRIDAY] Merlin is not a god he is just a human its his choice if he want to help. And merlin is a seer basically he can see their downfall too. Its destiny.

(Isaiah) So its destiny.... just wait i will control that destiny and show to them who is Isaiah Fatum the Master of Fate.

What will you do if you can see the fate of others, will you change it? or just let them suffer because they can’t control their own fate because of others..

Lets find out.....


Authors Note.....

Pardon my grammar.. English is my not first language. Please be patient and enjoy.

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