Just little things that sometimes help me with writing and my thoughts of different forms of writing.

This is my first book here in Webnovel. This book is a Story Poem, it's all about how you interpret the meaning, depends on what your perspective is when you read the book so, I guess it kinda accommodates every reader. It's the magic of reading really, your own imagination is your limit. I'm game for tips about writing and improving. I hope you all like my book, it isn't much as of yet and I'm kind of a beginner, so yeah, hope you guys appreciate it and I wrote this book well, because I wanted to try it and I love writing as much as I love reading.

~Rose Black



Zhang Zian was Pi's only friend. The other elves in the pet shop could talk but Pi couldn't, and Pi was the only elfin that could type, so Pi found it difficult to communicate with others. Zhang Zian had always been worried about Pi. When he couldn't keep it company, who could relieve its loneliness?

In China, it was forbidden to have primates as pets, so Pi couldn't appear before humans. Zhang Zian couldn't explain to others that Pi wasn't an animal, it was an elfin, ruling out the possibility of Pi making friends in real life. 

Zhang Zian felt that the Internet was a good space to make friends. As the saying goes, on the Internet, nobody knows who you are.

Pi carefully thought about his suggestion, nodded, and typed: I'll try it.

So, Zhang Zian helped it join the group established by the readers. The application was approved almost instantly. The readers in the group were so exhilarated seeing that Pi had joined the group.

"Are you the author?"

"Are you really the author?"

"Are you actually the author of Pet King?"

Everyone asked questions one after another.

Zhang Zian looked at Pi with encouragement. Having just learned the skill, Pi captured the screen of the platform for authors on the Qidian website and sent the image to the group. Then Pi typed: Hello, everyone. I'm the author of Pet King. Thank you for your support!

The readers were even more excited, expressing their love of the book and their curiosity about the author.

Pi was bemused, not knowing what questions to answer first or how to answer them. Fortunately, the group's manager helped Pi in a timely manner. 

[Killed by A Sword]: Everyone, don't harass the author. You'll delay Popo's writing. 

Zhang Zian was surprised. They've given Pi a nickname?!

"Eeek."

Pi smiled. It seemed to like the nickname.

Pi found that the readers were very friendly. Whether they were discussing the plot of Pi's book or talking about their life experiences, they were very polite, which was completely different from what Pi had imagined. Every once in a while, Pi would slip in one or two sentences to express its own opinions. Each comment from Pi was praised by the readers, who would subsequently ask Pi a series of questions or urge Pi to release more chapters, making Pi feel overwhelmed again. 

As Zhang Zian watched the interaction between Pi and the readers, he knew it was a great idea to ask Pi to join the Book Group.

While chatting with the readers, Pi refreshed the website from time to time. Previously, the number of readers who had put Pet King in their libraries was 9,853. Now, the number was increasing.

9,887.

9,923.

9,945.

9,972.

Finally, the number became 9,999.

Zhang Zian held his breath, and Pi minimized the chat room window. Their eyes stared at the number, waiting for the moment when it became ten thousand.

However, reality was different from their expectations. When Pi refreshed the website once again, the number decreased to 9,998.

"Eeek."

Pi lowered its head. Every time it saw the number decline, it'd be so frustrated and thought that the readers gave up reading the book because of its poor writing. 

"Pi, raise your head."

Zhang Zian patted its shoulder, comforting it. "Pi, you have to remember that your novel isn't the Renminbi and it will never be liked by everyone. You should know that only two out of ten customers actually decide to buy my pets. Money means nothing to me." 

Pi raised its head and pointed at its chest. The gesture meant: You should be ashamed of what you just said.

However, Zhang Zian's joke had helped Pi regain its confidence and courage. Pi quickly forgot the one reader who had just left and refreshed the webpage again.

10,000

"Eeek!" Pi danced with joy. 

"Finally, 10,000! High-five!" Zhang Zian raised his right palm.

Pi lifted its small pink hand and gently hit Zhang Zian's palm. Zhang Zian wanted to celebrate, but his cell phone suddenly rang.

He took out his cell phone, thinking that it was a message from an acquaintance or merchant. He was surprised to find that Pet Hunter had opened with new three tips. 

[Game Tips]: Congratulations! Your Molecule Monkey has collected enough Strength of Faith to upgrade!

[Game Tips]: Your Molecule Monkey is currently an Elite level elfin. After upgrading, it will become an Elite/Premier elfin. 

[Game Tips]: Are you upgrading now? If you choose "No," you can upgrade it later.

[Yes/No, remind me later]

Zhang Zian was stunned. It was his first time encountering the upgrade of an elfin. 

His palm was still touching Pi's, so Zhang Zian could feel its temperature that was slightly higher than that of humans. He looked at Pi, who was staring at the computer screen with joy and refreshing the page with the other to see the number increase.  

Zhang Zian glanced at the computer screen. The Add to Library number had become 10,031.

Although he didn't pay attention to the time, he believed that the game's upgrade option popped up when the number had reached 10,000.

Was that a coincidence?

"Pi, I'm going to the bathroom. Stay here by yourself for a while. By the way, don't just chat with the readers, start writing," he said, taking his hand back.

Pi nodded and excitedly launched the Word document. However, the novelty of joining the group hadn't yet passed, and Pi still occasionally looked at the chatroom.

Zhang Zian entered the bathroom, closed the door, and said in a low voice, "Navigation Elfin, are you there?"

[Navigation Elfin]: At your service.

A flashing light appeared on the screen of Zhang Zian's cell phone. 

"Navigation Elfin, is this 'upgrade' the kind I imagined?" he asked, thinking that the Navigation Elfin would be able to understand what he meant without explanation. 

[Navigation Elfin]: Yes, the upgraded Molecule Monkey won't disappear, unless it's downgraded due to losing its Strength of Faith.

"Are there any side effects?" he asked with concern.

[Navigation Elfin]: There are no side effects.

There was no reason that the Navigation Elfin would lie, Zhang Zian believed it. "Thank you, I have no other questions."

[Navigation Elfin]: Enjoy playing your game!

The light disappeared.

Zhang Zian took a deep breath, and clicked "Yes."

[Game Tips]: Your Molecule Monkey is upgrading. Please wait!


1. Download a suspicious game
2. Catch a few magical pets as partners
3. Go through interesting daily routines and lead the pet shop to a whole new level

Hello everyone, I will be using this 'Chapter' to update you guys on a few things. This update section will be where I inform you about major changes coming to The Assassin's Blessing. My editor may also appear and give tips about my own mistakes and botched writing that's getting adjusted. 
The Assassin's Blessing has about 100 plus Chapters that are unreleased on Webnovel and I've been using Webnovel's Inkstone website to edit and adjust The Assassin's Blessing's plot, writing style, and sequencing. With that out of the way, I hope you all enjoy this interaction between you(the reader) my editor(Who will be going by Mista D), and I The author.

1. Changes to the introductory period and sequences.
 1a) The first few Chapters will be redone with a different style of writing.
 1b) The first time I read through the first draft of The Assassin's Blessing, I saw a lot of good and bad. Thomas, the author has been working a lot on this since I've seen seven months ago. A lot has changed in terms of his own personal skill as a writer. So before he releases anything more I asked him if he wanted to redo the story with his current skill and oh my god, you can hardly tell it's the same author. -Mista D
 1c) While this is just being used to test the reception of the Assassin's Blessing, I still don't want to release a bad story with bland writing on Webnovel. So I said yes to Mista D's proposal to redo the book. And I just want to say I love his reaction. Haha
2. Major changes to story characters and plot.
 2a) The story takes way to long to get going to the point that's we're at right now, For Webnovel at least. So I'm trying to increase the amount of progress made in the story.
 2b) There are a few parts where the story feels stagnate and uninteresting to read. So I coached Thomas on several techniques to improve the story and condense it a little. The first draft is 489 pages long... This isn't unheard of by any means, but it is hard to find publishers that will actually print and market such a long book from a first-time author. -Mista D
 2c) Yeah, the first draft was a doozy of a draft that's for sure. It is also the draft that I was releasing on Webnovel. Mista D and I are very invested in The Assassin's Blessing. To the extent that he is more than just an editor. He's a co-author and mentor to me. 
3. Consistency and story elements.
 3a) How far is Gregoria from Greendale? Roughly speaking, two hundred miles, there are times where even I wonder. I wrote the first draft without a map to pinpoint these things down on. So consistency took a hard hit from it.
 3b) As an editor, we look for a lot inside a book. But I personally look at four main things. Plot, Character, Setting, and Conflict. All of these things have to stay consistent in order to make sense. The later chapters of the book are so full of these little 'wait that doesn't seem right' moments that it's hard to tell if the later chapters are even the same story as the introduction. The magic system is the biggest part of this which is very common when dealing with things outside of reality and physics. -Mista D
 3c) I deserved that... When the first draft was made, I was going purely off of memory for who, what, when, where, and why's. I'm glad that Mista D asked me to rewrite it and thus, I will be re-releasing The Assassin's Blessing on Webnovel before continuing on with a bad story, starting from page one.
Final notes; I hope you can stay with The Assassin's Blessing and this amazing story, we both hope to have everything set back up by the end of July. Then we will release the updated version as it is written. Thank you all, I just don't want to give you a bad story. Updates to the currently released chapters will be small, mainly consisting of small changes to writing and small plot changes. By small plot changes, I mean small.
Thank you all, -Thomas W -Mista D

The world of The Assassin's Blessing takes place in a fantastical world where a king's rule with absolute power and the will of the people is thought to be irrelevant. Jackson, a young boy, born into the mighty family of Scottkey, is well on his way to becoming a knight in the country of Asmeria after the great civil war. His father, Connor, is the wealthiest merchant in the trading hub of Greendale and whose father fought against the 'tyrant king' in the great civil war. He now can finally care for his two children as they were being trained in the capital by his brother.  Jackson must learn to live with his family and learn how to make new friends before the King destroys everything.

All rights reserved, April 25, 2020, The Assassin's Blessing, Free-Publishing MO, USA. Copyright Notice, Privacy is a felony crime in the US. Any copyrighted material found will lead to prosecution by the US and other countries. This material is for viewing only, any unauthorized copying or distribution of said material will lead to a lawsuit on behalf of the copyright owner. This material is authorized for publication on this site by the author ONLY: Trademark, The Assassin's Blessing 2020.

I am very new to writing books, and I hope everybody can cut me some slack for any future mistakes. Also, for the chapter schedule, I will try to spend my week writing the chapters and post them on the weekend. (2+ chapter's per weekend)

For the contents of the book, I have decided that the starting point will be in the Harry Potter series. I will do in-depth research about a multitude of things, including psychology so I can try to make the characters more 3D and rounded ( This may take some time as I have much more to research on, including the Harry Potter series to refresh my memory). 

Although this sounds grand, my goal is not to make them as complicated as actual people as much as it is to make them more solid, so to speak, and help us enjoy the story and relate to them much better than if they were 2D characters. 

If you have any questions or find any plot holes or similar things, please comment HERE.

I will try my best to answer what I can without giving away too much about the future direction for this book.

And embarrassingly enough, I have no experience of being in a relationship, so if how the relationships progress may seem unlikely, please remember that I am basing the way the relationships form on my imagination, and other people's experiences ( My friends' experiences and people on the web.) 

If you have any tips on this area, please feel free to comment HERE.

Sincerely, Author.

Our MC was reincarnated in the Harry Potter world when he died when the parachute had a malfunction mid-air and he fell to his death. 

But with this turn of events, he reincarnated as a orphan in the world of Harry Potter and was adopted by a elderly pair of Wizards with a system and a OP starting package.

Need Points to Buy items from the system shop? Gain Affection Points!

Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of Herimone! 

Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of Ginny!

(Points increase with Affection or positive emotions. And for the people who worry that I will objectify the Harem members, don't worry. I will try my utmost to make sure they are not just things to gain, so to speak.)

Follow our MC to different Universes, Such as 

DC, Marvel, Greek Mythology, and more!

(Not necessarily in that order.)

I am very new to writing books, and I hope everybody can cut me some slack for any future mistakes. Also, for the chapter schedule, I will try to spend my week writing the chapters and post them on the weekend. (2+ chapter's per weekend)

     For the contents of the book, I have decided that the starting point will be in the Harry Potter series. I will do in-depth research about a multitude of things, including psychology so I can try to make the characters more 3D and rounded ( This may take some time as I have much more to research on, including the Harry Potter series to refresh my memory).
 
     Although this sounds grand, my goal is not to make them as complicated as actual people as much as it is to make them more solid, so to speak, and help us enjoy the story and relate to them much better than if they were 2D characters.
     
     If you have any questions or find any plot holes or similar things, please comment HERE.

     I will try my best to answer what I can without giving away too much about the future direction for this book.

      And embarrassingly enough, I have no experience of being in a relationship, so if how the relationships progress may seem unlikely, please remember that I am
basing the way the relationships form on my imagination, and other people's experiences ( My friends' experiences and people on the web.)

     Also, How many words should there be per chapter? If you have any tips on this area, please feel free to comment HERE.

     Sincerely, Author.

Our MC was reincarnated in the Harry Potter world when he died when
the parachute had a malfunction mid-air and he fell to his death.

 But with this turn of events, he reincarnated as a orphan in the world of
Harry Potter and was adopted by a elderly pair of Wizards with a system
and a OP starting package.

 Need Points to Buy items from the system shop? Gain Affection Points!

 Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of
Herimone!

 Gained ????? Affection points for getting the complete Affection of
Ginny!

 (Points increase with Affection or positive emotions. And for the people
who worry that I will objectify the Harem members, don't worry. I will try
my utmost to make sure they are not just things to gain, so to speak.)

 Follow our MC to different Universes, Such as
DC, Marvel, Greek Mythology, Star Wars, and more!
(Not necessarily in that order.)

Note: I lost my phone and couldn't log into the account where the original ICTWAS was being previously written so I rewrote it in my old account. Also, please consider saving this novel to your library!

Debbie didn't comment much about Scarlet's errand as she kept the poker face.
"Welcome back."
Scarlet nodded and tried to wipe the smile off her face. The governess noted that despite the calm mask on the blogger's face, Scarlet's eyes were livelier now. The lady was glad that her little assignment had done the trick.
"I was able to look through most of the story," she informed Scarlet and the girl became more serious. "I'm impressed by your creative ideas. Can you tell me where you got the inspiration from?"
Scarlet blushed at the praise and shuffled awkwardly. "I was researching when I came across something called Cats the Musical from Broadway*... I thought that it would be easier to model some people after talking cats to better portray their struggles in a comical manner?"
Debbie looked pleased with Scarlet's response and had a huge smile on her face. "Great! While it isn't ready to be turned into a book, I think we should commemorate your very first masterpiece. Does this story have a title?"
Scarlet didn't seem to think of it in a bad way, so Debbie was secretly relieved. Rejection can be a very harsh thing for writers and she didn't want to stamp out the burning flame in Scarlet. It might not be a huge bonfire yet, but the passion was still there. Fortunately, the girl was a fighter. She accepted it with grace and moved on, seeking further improvement.
"I think we can call it 'A Catty Conversation'. Would you mind pointing out where exactly I've gone wrong?"
Debbie blinked. "All in due time, Scarlet. For a first attempt, it was very good. I just needed something to be the gauge of your current abilities before we move on from there. From what I can see, you have a rather strong grasp of the English language. The grammar and structure are not worrying. You also have an intuitive sense of how to pace your stories with a very natural way of telling it. Your characters spring to life with how you describe your scenes, although some transitions can be shaky. But don't worry, we will work on them."
The blogger nodded as she heard her mentor's feedback. "Actually, I've been thinking of a question for a while now."
"Yes?"
Scarlet hesitated. Should she admit that she wasn't a natural prodigy when it came to writing? Would Debbie no longer be impressed or will she express her disappointment? After a while, Scarlet eventually decided to go with the truth. After all, it was harder to conceal the truth with time. The blogger knew that if she was truthful right from the start, she wouldn't disappoint the editor too much. Sure, Debbie might be disappointed for a while, but maybe she would come to understand how to help Scarlet more?
"Actually, I researched some writing tips for writers online before I attempted to write something. A Catty Conversation isn't my first work. It's probably my third or fourth? I've lost count. Also, It has been revised twice and edited once before I submitted it. I just want to know, how does an author create their personal style? I've tried finding answers for there isn't a definite answer."
Debbie smiled. It's a question that all young writers ask. Sadly, not even she could give them the answer. Instead, the editor gave Scarlet her very first homework.
"It's a very good question, Scarlet. I would be rather worried if you hadn't asked about it or research anything about writing beforehand. This shows that you have a levelled head and aren't egotistical. There's definitely room for improvements for everybody in the writing world. It doesn't matter if you're young or old, have published best-sellers or won the Nobel Peace Prize. Style is something that comes over time with experience, practice and wisdom. It's not learnt or taught, it is discovered and created. Think of a writer's style as their writing personality and DNA. It's unique to every individual."
She then picked up the blank exercise book and smiled. "This is going to be a very good starter. I'd like you to write all the questions you have about writing and write them down in this book and I will answer them next week. Don't forget to decorate the book and give it a name too!"
The blogger was puzzled. "I have to give this book a name too?"
Debbie looked at her as if that Scarlet was asking if the sky was blue today. "Of course! It's only natural, right? You name the things that are precious to you. For writers, what can be more important than books?"
Scarlet didn't know what to say. One should never judge a book by their cover, and at this moment, she thinks that it is especially true for Debbie who packed her things and bid the Wilde's goodbye. On the surface, Debbie sounded sane and looked nothing out of the ordinary. However, after getting to know her tutor a little better, Scarlet decided that all writers have to be a little bit insane at the very least to produce such stories.
Once Debbie left, Scarlet looked at the book in her hand. The press plants were currently still in the processing. Tina was helping her to dry them out by pressing them in between the pages of thick phone books. Alex had also agreed to lend Scarlet some of her art supplies when the plants were ready. Scarlet was excited about how the communication diary would turn out, but for now, she had to come up with a name.
Something that means secret... Scarlet didn't really know the meaning of names, so the best way to do it was by searching it up on the internet. It didn't take her long to find a list of names that had 'secret' in their meaning.
As she scrolled down the names, one of them caught her eye. It was a name with a double meaning and Scarlet thought that it was actually perfect for her first communication diary.
"From this day forth, you shall be known as Judah!" the blogger proudly announced to the blank exercise book.
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At age 10, Scarlet Liu Xiu Wen was tested with a Mensa IQ of 156.

By age 12, she was publishing books with the pen name Permanent Frost. By age 14, she was a successful vocalist-composer in the band called Britannia. By age 16 Scarlet had a successful career as a model and actress going by the stage name of Liu Xiu Wen.

However, there was a secret that the world didn't know. Away from the limelight, Scarlet took on yet another persona online as Pirate S - the eccentric half-genius. Everyone who lurked in the forums knew her name. Known for her unusual takes on life and mostly popularly for her "Human Observation Diary" blog, Scarlet enjoys the nerd life in secret.

Human Observation Diary has always kept to a very standard format but one day, a reader pointed out that the blog has recently been differing from its usual format. Intrigued by the trigger, Scarlet investigates her latest human observation - an online NEET by the name of Jedd77.

From further interactions, Scarlet finds herself helplessly drawn to him. As their friendship develops into something more, Scarlet has to make a choice.

To give up her secrecy and allow Jedd77 to be a part of her life? Or continue the game of cat and mouse even after the face reveal.

Note: Slow progress. Talks of some darker topics in life eg: Depression, PTSD, adoption and acceptance.

Drama seekers, toxic bitches and overly-sensitive folks who cannot chillax not welcomed. Author also has indemnity to typo, grammar mistakes and English bugs throughout the story.

You have been warned. Proceed with caution and enjoy.

***

Special chapter release on other milestones, check out my discord and patreon for more details, thank you for the support!

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Hello every one and welcome to my story. I am here with one announcement and two warnings.

Announcement: I have ZERO artistic talent and as such an looking for anyone to make a cover for this book. If you are interested feel free to go ahead and make one then email it to kelin.yost@gmail.com and then post a comment on the most recent chapter i have posted. (note this is not my main email and as such will not be checked regularly unless i receive word that you have sent me a cover)

First: Writing is NOT a first priority for me and as such there will not be regular updates and you can expect long Hiatuses from me. (possibly multiple months at a time)

Second: My writing is no were near where i would like it to be. As such i would greatly appreciate constructive criticism, tips on how to improve how the story is written, and if you could point out any mistakes (grammatical or semantics) it would help me a lot.

Elves and magic, fancy swords and shiny armor, and the most over used tropes seem to make up every MMO game on the market today. Humanities Homecoming: Retaking Earth is not like all those games. Terrans are on the brink of extinction and Kevin Yore, just like all the other VRMMO players out there, are diving in to do their best to reverse this fate and save their kind. 

Kevin might not be the smartest, strongest, fastest, or even luckiest person. In fact, he might just be an average person. No System. No Fortunate encounter. No memories of a past life. Just an average guy making a mark on the world with the only thing he believes himself to be good at, video games. 

Will you join him in his adventures of the Milky Way Galaxy? Will you curse him when he makes a stupid mistake? Will you cheer for him when he survives that harrowing brush with death? Or as Kevin would say “will you sit on your pampered a** and watch a great experience pass you by?”

Yo, I'm Makina_. This is about the lack of updates. It's not going to get cancelled. I'm working on it. And my schedule is actually better right now. I would love to continue providing you entertainment so expect frequent updates. Don't worry about the quality. It's not gonna downgrade just because I'm "rushing" to get them out. For the people that liked the Slice-of-lifey element of the story, well, I'm sorry but it won't stay for long. Also, it's not Horror. Maybe a little bit of thriller. I just didn't know what to categorize it as. The story's going to take a... dark turn. So please be ready for that change. Thank you for reading my book. I appreciate everyone that took notice. Note: I am not a native speaker. I'm sorry for any grammatical error or typo. Feel free to give me tips so that I can enhance your reading experience. I'm not familiar with writing on Webnovel.

That's all from Makina_. Now, I'm gonna update this "book". Expect release 1-3 hours from now

Written: Friday, October 4 6:52 PM

T̷̨h͞ìs ̨l͝es͞şo̷͏̕ǹ͟'҉s̵̢̢ ҉w̸͘ay ͜͏ţ͟o̸͜o̵ ̶̛b̴̧͠or̕iǹ͝g͞͞!̸ ̧T̕͠͠h̕ȩ̧͢ ̡͜b͟o̴̡y̨̨ ͢t̶̷ho̵ug̷h̀t̢̀̀.͜ ̶̢W̨͝h̛į͟͠le d̷̢o̕ź̛͘i͢͠͠n̴̸͏g̴͢ ͡ò̷͡f̸̡f̨͟͠ ̶̕dur͘i̡n̸g͜͡ cla̶̶̕s҉̸s̨͠͡,͢ ̀͢a ̧v̕o̷͢͡i͘͝͡c̨͢ę ͝ó̸̀n͠҉̡ ̶̸̧hi̛s͞ ̶̢͟ḑr̕͡͏e͟am̨ s͞pe̵̡̛a͏͡k͞s͏ ̸a̶n͢͞͡d͜͞ a͟s҉ks҉͜ ͜ḩ͡ím ̡̀ą̷ ͏͝q̴͞u̸͡e͜s͡t̴i̢͞o͏ǹ̶.͘͠ ͏T̵hè̸̢ ̀͝T͘͠r҉͏́ò̴l̸͢l̛̀͢e̷͢͞y̡͘ ҉P̵̢r̡ob͢҉l͠e̶m̸̴.̶͞ ͟A̵͜ ̕m̵̨o̵͝r̡̛al ͠d̸i̷͡lęm̸̕ma҉.̸͞͞ ̧͢͡"͝҉͘Wí̶l̀͞ĺ҉ y̕̕͢o̴u̕͏ ̀s̡a̴c̵̶͘r̡̛i͟f͢͟ic͡҉̸è̛͞ ͢͜oņe͏͏̴ ̴̢͢p̛͟͏e̵r̸̀͟so̸ń ͘t͏o ̶̡͜sa̶͟͜v͏̧e̷̡͘ f̛̛͡i̸̷̕v̢͜é͟?͢͟͝"̶ ̷T̢h̸̛e͞ ̧̢͝b́ǫy̵͘͏ ̨conf́̕i͟ḑ͟e̶͜n̶͝t̶͢l̨y͘̕͝ anş̶́w̸er̛s̕͘͞,̛ ̵̛s͢҉a͘͜͞y̨͏͘in͘͝g̢ ̀̕t͏͜h̨a̵t͟͡ ̵͢h͡è̶͞'͡͏d́͘͘ ̀͟s̀͠a͏̴ćr͠͡i̧͡f̀͜i̕c̴͟e ̷̛h͟͝í͜m̡͡s̛e̡͜ĺf ̨̕i̵̛ņş͘͢tȩ̴͜a̛͟d̛ ̵i͘͡f̵͢ ͝t͠h͝at̀ ͏̧̨c̛͠o͏u̸͟͞l̵̛͝d ̸̡ş̵͘a̡͘͡v̵̕͜e ̵҉s̨͝į͡x́ p̴̴͠e̕op͝l͞e.̢ ̢͏U̵̴p̛͝o҉̵n͠͏ ̨͘w̕a̛͠k͜i͞n̴͘g u̡҉̵p̷͏,͢ ̶h͝ís͟ ̷̕͝lí̶̧f̨ę̷ ͘͟bȩ̷̸c̷a̴m̡e ͝u͡n̸̕u͞s̴̵̡ų̀͟al̨l͟y͢͝ ̸e̴̡̛ven̸t̶̨f͠ul̵͠.̶ ̢I̧f̡̕ ̨̕he̡ ͏͜e̵͏̢x̕p̛͝e̵r̵ię̛n͜͢c̸e͜͡s̀ ҉̀s͘͢͝o̡͏m̶e̸̛t͞h̛͜i̶҉҉n̴g ͟s̷̡i͢͏m͡͏i͏̛l̴aŕ͜ ͟t̨͢o͞ ̛͡th͜͜é ̛͘͞t̸͜r̛o͜͡l͘l͡͝e̵̷̕ỳ̶̨ ͘pr̛̕͟o̴̶b̷͜le̕҉m̧,̵͠ ͞w̷̸i̷̵̛l̛l̴ h҉ę̛ ̸b̕e͠ a̸̴b͘ļ͡é̸ t̴ó ͘s͟t̡͢a̧n̷҉d ̛b̷̕͝y̷̨ ̸h̶i̢̕s̨͜ s͟͜e̶͝l̸͏̢f̵̢l͞e̵̴ss͡͏̡ ̨wo̡r̷̨d̶͏s̀?̶͟

Author's note: 
Wow, I had such a hard time writing these two chapters. Sorry, this author's skills are still insufficient, I wasn't able to put the scenes in my head on paper. It was so difficult to describe Xuan Mu's and Bing Shi's feelings.
Maybe at the end of the book, I'll edit it all over. Are any freelancer editors available? No? Ok.
Some interesting info:
1. Word count of ARC 1 is about 20k while ARC 2 is about 80k.
2. The word count of these two last chapters is about 40% of the ARC 1!? Crazy right?
3. ARC 1 is a bait. Just a trial arc to get into my writing skills. And a bait to lure in readers. 
4. If you read carefully some piece of information would connect together. For example a few hints in the first and last chapters of ARC 1. (EDIT: Something wrong with Xuan Mu because of white hair, Bing Shi choosing black clothes when she goes out and for the Halloween party.)
5. I started to write this book because I had nothing left to read.
6. I never thought I could write. Like what? And boom Second arc finished... a 100k word novel appeared with so many positive comments. *Throws candies and chocolate at my readers.* Thanks a lot! You keep me going!
7. Xuan Mu is not only a ML (male lead). He is more than that. He is my second MC (main character).-> Go give him a hug, he'll accept it. But forget about hugging Bing Shi. Just to be sure. There is only Xuan Mu for Bing Shi. There is not even a second male lead, Bing Shi has no feelings to spare.
8. Xuan Mu pampers and protects Bing Shi, but the true pillar of their relationship is Bing Shi.
9. After reading this arc, Bing Shi makes much more sense in ARC 1, don't you think? I recommend reading the chapter "1.0 - Beginning" again. She was extremely happy at first, then she started to lose optimism in the middle, becoming more and more impatient at the end of the ARC.
My questions for my dear readers who are currently riding on the journey together with me:
1. Were you surprised by the ending?  (I wanted something different, something with meaning. Sorry no truck, killer, sliding on a banana kind of ending. ML mourning after the MC, because she died in a terrorist attack inside a bank/plane. You name it.) 
2. If Bing Shi and Xuan Mu had a wedding. Should they go big or small? 
3. Do you love the chemistry between our Jelly couple? 
4. Found any plot holes? Any improvement tips? I'm good at taking critiques, come at me! *Putting on an armor*
9. Did ninja onions knock on your door? Or the opposite...ninjas with bird feathers?

"We are well aware that the relationship between us is not healthy. Our love is far from perfect. It's messed up. Just like us." ~ Bing Shi & Xuan Mu

Unfortunately, a tragedy occured, separating this young couple from each other. Bing Shi, who already had a boyfriend before transmigration, saw no point in searching for new love. In order to reunite, she will have to travel through different worlds and successfully finish all the main missions given out by the System Headquarters.



 
 Author's note:
- bxg, mxf (boyxgirl, malexfemale)
- High EQ MC
- MC seems to receive a lot of cheats at the beginning, but there is a reason behind it. 

*WARNING* Mature content only in some chapters. 
*Pictures used in this novel belong to their rightful owners.

Illustrator: WLOP 
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WLOP's patreon: https://www.patreon.com/wlop

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