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TLDR: As with every end of a book, I will be taking a break and will resume posting on 12th November 2018. I know, it's a longer break than usual, but since it is the end of Act One, I think it should be justified... Oh and since this author thoughts is really long, it really is a too long didn't read, lol.

Hi there guys! Linodo here! WE FINALLY MADE IT!!! We finally made it to the end of ACT ONE!!! *Confetti pops!* Haha, that's right, these first four books are actually part of one act. I know, I know, if it took me about five to six months to complete one act, how long would it actually take for me to finish the entire story?! Three years? Five years? Or should I go full Oda and write it for twenty plus years?

Well, joking aside, I didn't plan for my writing to take this long. If you followed me from the start, you would have known that I wrote Book One in just one month during my semester break. Naturally, the chapter length and quality of writing have been steadily improving (at least in my opinion), so there's that, but the real issue that I have is time management. As a final year university student, school is my full-time job. The most important thing that I must focus on is my school, even if it means decreasing the release rate of Spirit Immortal. And let me tell you, it sure was a challenge. University courses were tough enough, now I have even less time to study and do assignments? There were even times where I just wanted to write an apology letter to you guys and drop the entire novel altogether. However, there was no way that I could do that. Why?

Because I love writing.

I don't know why, no matter how stressed I am, when the clock ticks ever closer to 11 pm, I look forward to when my chapter to go live so that I can see how you guys liked it. You guys don't know it, but there were many days where I would refresh my latest chapters just so that I could see your thoughts about the chapter. In fact, I might be refreshing this chapter right now! Hahaha! So don't be shy to leave a comment or a review about the novel. Let me tell you now, the fear of an author isn't a negative comment or a negative review, the true fear is that no one reads your work.

Before I go in depth about the things you guys really want to know, let me tell you a little bit of my background. As many of you already know, I am an avid anime fan and got into reading web novels because I wanted to read light novels (the source material of a significant portion of anime). To tell you the truth, I didn't like reading books growing up. That's why my English is somewhat lacking as compared to most authors. I did, however, love watching shows/movies/cartoons. I watched many Chinese/Hong Kong dramas, American movies when the K-Wave first started I'd even watched Korean dramas. But, my one true love was still anime. I grew up watching Inuyasha, Shaman King, Naruto, One Piece, Katekyo Hitman Reborn… The list goes on… 

The peak of my anime obsession came when I was about 13-15. Those three years, I probably watched like two-three hundred anime titles, and that's when my life really changed. I watched timeless pieces like Code Geass, FMA, Cowboy Bebop, Fate/Zero, Hunter X Hunter… I delved into comedy anime like Baka Test (which I finished reading on Baka-Tsuki), Daily Lives of High School Boys, Seto no Hanayome, Seitokai Yakuindomo, Niichijou… I had even watched Shoujo anime (even though I was not a young girl) like Seitoukaichou wa Maid-sama, Ouran High School Host Club, Kimi ni Todoke and thoroughly enjoyed them.

However, up till that point, watching anime was just an entertainment hobby of mine. Only after I was exposed to Slice of Life anime did my opinion change. I first watched Angel Beats, and when the ending came, I found myself in tears. I was amazed at how a single storyline could affect my emotions that much. Following that, I binged watch several Slice of Life anime. Air, Kanon and so on. One day, at the peak of my obsession, I discovered a little title called Clannad. I soon discovered that it was by the same company that made some of the titles that I'd watched before, so I went into it with some high hopes. And well, season one was touching, but it was well within my expectations, after watching Angel Beats and whatnot. However, Clannad had something that the other titles did not. A second season. Curious, I thought, well why not?

Boy, was I not prepared for that fucking second season… Clannad: After Story destroyed me. If any of you haven't watched it, stop reading this post and go watch it now. I don't care if you drop my story, I'm just content that I had enriched your lives by letting you know how awesome After Story is. For the first time in my life, after watching a series, I felt empty. I felt as if there was an endless void that ripped my heart in half and that feeling lasted for a solid week. Ever heard of feels train? Clannad: After Story is like getting run over by the feels train while the conductor used the feels bat to hit you every single second. So, once I was finished griefing, I thoroughly reflected upon my experience. How could a story, that had no living creatures in any part of its production, tear me into shreds emotionally? Then, I had an epiphany. It was all about the story. You see, all forms of entertainment that I enjoyed, movies, dramas, anime, manga, light novels, video games, they all had one thing in common. They all had a story. It sounds stupid to say, but it was something that my young mind had pieced together. So, a slight flicker of passion started to burn within me. I wanted to write stories that made people feel that way.

As I grew older, I started watching many more mature animes, like Kara no Kyoukai, Death Parade, Death Note that all had a theme of morality behind it. Instead of the emotional train wreck that Clannad had put me through, it made me question the existence of everything, something that very little Hollywood or Chinese/Korean/Japanese drama ever could. Also, let me shout out a little-known anime called "The Legend of the Legendary Heroes." Severely underrated in my opinion and I can't seem to get my friends to start it. Perhaps you guys would after reading through this post. :p

I wanted to be like Maeda Jun (writer of Clannad, Angel Beat and Kanon) and write touching and thought-provoking titles, and what better way than to write a web novel? Naturally, I'm nowhere near the level of Maeda Jun and the folks at Key, but I'm trying my hardest. After all, how could I climb Mount Everest without taking the first step? If I could make you guys feel even a fraction of what I felt after watching Clannad: After Story, then I'm content. 

So yeah, before this turns into an anime recommendation section, let's talk about the pacing of the story, which was a significant issue that had been brought up by multiple users. As a novice writer, I'm still trying to figure out when I should speed up the pace and when there should be more exposition. At the start of this novel, I had a more direct 'tell not show' writing style which is something that I am still trying to fix till this day. Furthermore, I feel that my writing has a systematic structure that had been ingrained into me due to my numerous years of schooling and learning how to write reports, essays and whatnot. That's why I have been reading multiple successful author's works, trying to find the best style that fits me. Trust me, I have been researching. I read many successful works and analysed their styles. I took time off going to social events just so that I could read/write more. After all, I want to improve my writing. I want to deliver the awesome story of Spirit Immortal (I'll get to that later) in the best possible writings to you guys. In conclusion, my writing style still is a work in progress, and I hope that you could bear with me as I continue my experimentation.

Okay, now that the soapy stuff is out of the way, let's discuss the actual story. This is something that I don't often do in Author's Thoughts or any comments in general as I am not a good secret keeper. I'm afraid that I might accidentally divulge everything, in an accidental comment or otherwise. So I'll try to be very careful here.

The theme of Act One is family. Or to be more precise, what is a family? This is something that I had deliberated on for years, even before I decided to become an author. In Chinese culture, there is this saying, "Blood is thicker than water." I'm sure many of you who are frequent readers of eastern fantasy have come across this quote. However, one day I asked the question. Is blood really thicker than water? Why is it that just because someone is related to you, they must be closer than anyone else in the world? That's how the idea of the orphans came about. I wanted to explore the relationships between children, who have no clue about whether their related or not, and see whether they can be as close as real family. Furthermore, I wanted to see if the adults that adopted them, in this case, the First Elder, the Instructor, etc. would treat them as if they were their own children. And I tried to show you guys that they genuinely loved for the orphans, albeit in a flawed way.

Let me give another hypothetical example. A child was adopted as a baby by a foster family. The child was loved for, cared for and even treated as the most important family member by those who had no blood relations to him. However, one day, when the baby is grown to be fifteen years of age, the biological mother demands that the foster family hand over the child back to her custody. Is it truly right? If we're going by the doctrine that "Blood is thicker than water," the child should be reunited with his mother. However, she is no longer part of his 'family.' There had been no ties of love, memories shared or anything that could bind the two together. The foster family, which had treated him as their own son, is now his true 'family.' That's why when Shin found out about the truth of the Awter Clan, he didn't go full on rage mode and vow to kill everyone who had the Frie Clan's blood. It was because even though he is the heir of the Awter Clan, in his mind, he had no ties to it. 

Junius, on the other hand, is the polar opposite. He loved his family and would do anything in his power to reunite the orphans with their rightful 'family,' those that shared the blood of the Awter Clan. Although his purpose is righteous, his methods are flawed, which led to the unhappy circumstances in 'The Unfulfilled Promise.'

And now… We are finally addressing the elephant in the room. I'm sure many of you who read the last chapter are just dying to wait for me to talk about this. The deaths of Ariel, Lily and Linus. 

When I planned out the entire story, this was the turning point of everything. Ariel's death. The promise that had been made in chapter one will forever remain unfulfilled. I had actually run into some issues when I first started to write book four. A problem that no author should have… I didn't want to kill off Ariel. I had grown too attached to her antics, and I wanted Shin and her to remain together and become some sort of power couple. I had even toyed with the idea of re-planning the story from scratch just to keep her alive. However, the more I thought about it, the more it would ruin my beautiful ending. If Ariel lived, the ending wouldn't make any sense. So, I stuck to my guns, and I wrote the initially planned story, as much as I didn't like to. I'm sure that there will be many who will dislike my choice to kill Ariel and might even drop the novel altogether. And that's fine. I can't force you to read my story anyway.

I'm sure you guys can tell that I try my best to avoid the Wuxia/Xianxia cliche storylines that follow the same arc over and over. However, that, in turn, means that my writing style has to flesh out many details so that you guys can follow the story. So bear with me on that. Each Act will follow a theme. For instance, Act One's theme is family and Act Two's theme is… Well, read to find out!

The future of Spirit Immortal is unknown, even to me. I will be starting my internship soon and possibly, a job offer might come. Once I have the job, there would be so much less time for me to write so I don't know if I can continue my daily releases. Especially since I'm not getting paid to write and this is essentially my hobby. However, I promise you this, as long as there are readers, I will continue to write. I just love the story too much to just walk away. I will try to finish the story within two-three years, but as it stands now, I don't know if that's a reasonable estimate. So, who knows what the future would bring?

Alright, I shouldn't talk anymore lest I accidentally leak my entire storyline to you guys. To be honest, I have been dropping many hints about the end of Act One, and I'm sure many of you caught on early. In truth, I had also dropped subtle hints about the final ending in many of the chapters. I wonder if you guys have picked up on some… 

If you like the story, feel free to leave a review or a comment in the latest chapter, especially for my readers on Webnovel. I don't get notifications if you post comments on older chapters so I won't be able to respond. Please don't ask questions hinting for spoilers. As I explained earlier, I'm not good at keeping secrets so I will ignore the question altogether.

Thank you for supporting Spirit Immortal! Do leave a comment or review that tells me how you think about the novel! I hope that you have a lovely week ahead! Till next time! :D

Over a million years ago, the first human contracted with the first Spirit. Ever since then, Spirit use has become commonplace. Humans used Spirits to carry items and start fires. Eventually, even start wars. Thousands upon thousands of years past and one day, one human did the impossible. He transcended his mortality and ascended to the realm above.  

In the present day, the Frie Clan was once a great clan of the Himmel empire. However, a devastating battle ten years ago crippled the clan and their numbers dwindled. To make up for their loss, the upper echelons decided to adopt young orphans and nurture them to become a future pillar of the weakened clan. Shin was one of those orphans. 

Although picked up by the Frie Clan, not all is smooth sailing for Shin and the other orphans...
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Hi, this is me, NixxxiE. I'm the author of this Novel, Serendipity - A Chance Encounter..
I made this thinking that you may have some questions for me about the novel or about me. I will try to answer them. You can post your questions on the comments and I will update this chapter whenever there's a question that I will answer. I guess that would be better than making replies on the comments, yeah? Never done this before, but let's see how this goes.
Also, I have created a discord server for those who are interested to chat with me from time to time. https://discordapp.com/invite/7UnF9EN
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Questions and Answers will be posted after this line. (Questions will be just copy & pasted from your comment.)
1. When will Hannah and Joon be together? 🤔🤔
** Maaaayyyybbbeeee in the future? Maybe.
2. And what's your name dear author? 😊
** You can just call me Nix 😊, that's my nickname.
3. Are you on instagram? 🤔
** I was, but I don't really post on it that often, so no. It's inactive. If you want to connect with me, you can join my server on discord, we've just built it and we need people to make some noise there: https://discordapp.com/invite/7UnF9EN
4. What do you like to do when you're not writing?
** I read a lot. I used to watch KDramas too but now only seldom. I also chat on discord whenever I'm not writing. Actually, you know what, I can't write because I'm on discord. It's a distraction but I still do it. LMAO.
5. How many hours a day do you write?
** That depends because sometimes I write and then pause, write again and then stop. But let's just say... whenever I'm not doing house chores and working my main job, I write. If I'm being productive, I could write for 2-4 hours a day for a few chapters or longer if I can write more. With and without distractions.
6. When did you first realize you wanted to be a writer?
** I don't exactly know... maybe now? LOL. Because I used to compose poems when I was younger but the first story I wrote was 2017. I enjoyed it but I just started writing again in January of this year. I guess when people started reading my novel and I received some good reviews and comments, that's when I felt that I wanted to be a writer.
7. Do you hide any secrets in your book that only a few people will find?
** Hmmm... I write subtle hints but if I don't want to reveal any information yet, I don't overdo it. Sometimes, there are readers who guessed it right even without me pointing it out obviously.
9. How many chapters will it be?
** I'm not sure yet, probably around 200-400 chapters. It's hard to guess especially because, when I write, there will be some ideas that would suddenly come to mind. So it's unpredictable.
10. U recently said that u too are engaged. So is there moments in the story that had happened to u especially the couple moments?
**None actually. I don't think there were couple scenes that really happened in real life that I incorporated in the story. Although there were some wherein, depending on my mood, I would channel it to my character. An example was when Samantha suddenly became sick that Daniel had to bring her to his penthouse, the truth was, I was also sick that time. I was literally having allergic rhinitis and a slight fever. I was feeling so bad that time but I still wanted to write so I could upload a chapter for my readers and I ended up making her sick too. LOL So, in a way, what happens to me in real life affects my writing.


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Nobody's perfect. Not even Samantha Kim who was born from a wealthy family and a CEO of her own company. She had a lot of interests but she was still unhappy... like she was missing something in her life. 

She was known as a strong and independent woman, who liked to keep things to herself and doesn't want to rely on others. She had built a wall around herself, wanting to live a low profile life and away from the limelight. 

She is successful and confident, but what does she really want to do with her life? Who does she want to spend her life with? Why haven’t any of her past relationships worked out?

Meeting Daniel Cho, the Most Eligible Bachelor of M City, will change her in ways she never expected. But how much change will it do to her? Samantha struggled as she tried to understand the feelings she's going to experience with Daniel. Will she stay strong? Or will she crumble?

Enjoy the story of Samantha on her journey of self-discovery, coming to terms with their pasts, and a chance encounter with a man. See their seemly fated encounter and watch as they navigate their relationship.

Join us as we discover how the two of them will answer these questions and more. As she makes mistakes, how she rises to the challenges put in her path, and how he chases after her, dotes on her and loves her unconditionally. 

It’s not always the straightest path for Samantha and Daniel, and she paved her own way but hear the story of how just a little encounter changed her life forever.

Samantha and Daniel will have a happy encounter, but will they also have a happy ending?

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**Characters and Plot are fictional. Any similarities between names and settings are purely coincidental.**

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Hi, well I said I might be doing this but in the end I did. Currently, on vacation in Disney hence why the story idea came to be. It is meant as a comedic short as I've been uninterested in writing my novels. Every novel as their next chapter started but I just have no motivation to finish writing them, but that is digressing from why I'm writing this.

I chose a poor main character as I wanted there to be a reason on why he was stuck in the game. He couldn't be rich as the power going out would be weird. Needed to be in the future so I took a page out of Ready Player One for the futuristic trailer parks, hence the great view. 
The bills were there to give a reason for why the power went out. They also show he had been putting off everything to get the helmet. 
I constantly reiterated that everything was neat because that was the main theme for everything. I showed he did this by choice, he enjoys cleaning it isn't a chore but a joy. 

The electronics showed he had a hobby for games and the missing modern ones were meant to show he sold them for the new one. I constantly tried to show he had just gotten the helmet by needing to set up his info along with the box being out of place. This also showed how he prioritized things. He knew he would have to wait for the games to download so he started that before moving on to clean up.

Every line was meant to show or hint towards something more, and that is something I try to do with all my writings. I feel authors that explain everything through words/narration right after the hints are either word padding or feel the reader can't understand it. You could say I'm doing the same but I feel what I'm doing here is slightly different. I'm going point by point as if I'm in an interview. 

Now a thing that may seem confusing, why didn't I say the guy's name yet? Simple answer, there is no need for his name. Outside of being Cinderella who is doesn't matter. His choices and personality are what mattered not his name. Hence the line "He was trapped, he was Cinderella."

Hope that helps you understand my thought process. I'll be updating when I get back from Disney, with spending with family I don't have time to write. I wrote 90% of this before I left which is why I can post it now, but bye!

As young ladies and girls, we are all told the story of the glass slipper and becoming Cinderella. It becomes a dream of a prince charming and a glass slipper before he whisks them away on a white horse.  

A glitch in a VR game allows someone to live this dream out.  

Now the problem is she doesn’t want to be Cinderella. She enjoys the work of maids and wants to stay as she is. 

How will she escape her fate of being the next Cinderella? Will she even become the next Cinderella? 

Oh, and did I mention the main character was a guy? Yea this going to be awkward fast.

Hey guys I hope you enjoyed the prologue to this story! It's been on my mind for quite a while after reading stories that were similar. I'm mainly thinking of the Vader back in time stories like 'Second chance sith' and this is along the same lines, but with SWTOR characters. 

I'm sure some of you can already guess who his wife was. (I did give a few hints) Unlike the original game this is an AU with something's happening differently. 

I'm an old player of SWTOR and left around when the command crates were added, so I don't know much of the story after eternal throne. One of my biggest hassles with that expansion was the fact you couldn't save/have Vaylin as a companion, I mean everyone else gets a second chance, even Arcann, plus I wondered where her character could go. Which is why I added her to the story.

The Sith warrior in this story is highly op when it comes to fighting make no mistake, think of it as if he were a marauder and a juggernaut put together, as in my mind after all the time in the war he would have mastered both professions, maybe even a little more.

If a person is wondering yes this contains Harem Elements, but it is not a main focus and just a thing in the background. Sorry for people who don't like them, but I think it's inevitable with a male or even female sith to have multiple lovers. But as said before it is not a focus and just a thing in the background that will be easy to pick up. 

Now if you are wondering why there aren't more male companions, it's because the ship can only be so big before I have to upgrade it to a cruiser class or something bigger, I wanted to keep it small. Also during the game play of most stories I just hated the male character progressions. I do like LT Pierce and would have done Quinn, even though I hate his guts, but the ship already has 8 people on it. 

This is a side, side, side project of mine that I work on when I have free time and can't be bothered writing my other novels. Because of that fact the release rate will be very low, like maybe once a month as this one alone took about the same amount of time.  

Each Volume will be a chapter of the story. Each chapter will be at least 10k words long, which i will be splitting up into smaller chapters here. Over on Fanfic.net there will be the full chapters, not broken down.

Mace Rook, Dark lord of the Sith, The Emperor’s Wrath, The outlander, The alliance commander, a Person with too many titles to count. On his way back from a mission to quell a group of insurgents the force rages and he and his current crew are flung 4000 Years into the future.

What happens when a crew of powerful force sensitive Sith are flung into the blockade of Naboo? How will the Jedi react to this new force in the Galaxy? How will the Sith? How will Mace and his crew? Will they let the course of the galaxy continue unhindered or will they make changes that reverberate through the force forever. 

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This is an AU based on the game SWTOR, some things have changed, but if you haven't played the game there will be a few spoilers, with character names and affiliations. But as this is an AU they are different from the game characters in some ways.

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This is a very slow release Novel as i have other stories i will be updating. This novel will be worked on when i can't be stuffed with the others. 

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(Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or any of their intellectual property. I also do not own Bio Ware or their IP)

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I said was going to do this after the last chapter, i wanted to get some of my thought out there.

So first off, i'll being writing the next chapter after this. 

I feel like i've reached my first milestone. the two parter i feel as one chapter, so i finally have 10 chapters out and the plot is progressing at a decent pace.

The last chapter was important to me because of the fight scenes, they wern't very long but they were longer than what i had done up to this point. As i said before, this is my first time writing a story, everything is new to me so some things may be harder or take longer to write. Step by step fight scenes was interesting to do. As the story progresses i feel like i'll get better at it. 

Also this past chapter, i wanted to show off Kido a little bit, i love kido and i hope to integrate it more into the story. 

I wanted to kinda give an idea where Ichigo's upper limit was, for now. 

Now moving on to my future thoughts or things i feel like i should explain.

First off, as a new writer i'm going to make mistakes, i'm going to right myself in to a corner so i needed a crutch. And for me thats Zelretch. He is my plot armor to deploy when i don't know how to write something. I chose Zelretch because i believe he makes it the least "in your face" as possible. He has proper motivation for his character, and he would be able to know much about almost any given subject. 

So Zelretch is my Gandalf, sometimes here's there to be a character and sometimes he's there to call in the eagles. 

Moving on to character development. I don't want the girls to be just eye candy. I want to make them more than just one dimensional girlfriends. The story focuses primarily around Ichigo but when the plot involves his peerage i want it to be meaningful. I tried to make Yoruichi kick ass as much as possible in the last chapter to showcase this. 

His girls are a force to be reckoned with. I'm excited for the big battle i have planned to showcases his entire peerage when its time.

Its also not just going to be the girls, Shirou will be getting character development as well along with the other future male peerage members. And state it plainly, him and saber will be in a relationship.

Now finally onto the future.

Right now my plan for the plot is as follows, 1-2 chapters integrating the new peerage members into the story while in highschool dxd world, then 1-2 chapters for a new peerage member(s) in their respective worlds. And this will continue until he finished his peerage that will culminate in a very large battle in the last world with his final peerage member. All his peerage members will be able to let loose and show the full extent of their abilities.

I won't go spoiling the future members, but ill give some hints. It will be two males and two females. Two of them will be from anime and two will be from games. Two of them are common and borderline cliche while the other two are almost never written about and i look forward to adapting their powers for my writing. 

After the peerage is finally gathered, ichigo will start interacting in the Highschool dxd plot in a meaningful way, hes going to attend school with Rias and Sona. But beyond that i won't say. 

He will also be world jumping occasionally. Sometimes with his full peerage, sometimes with a few members, and sometimes even by himself. But he focus will almost always be on him so he will be present. 

I will use Zelretch as my crutch to decide what the time difference will be when needed. I'll try my damned best to not make it annoying to read. 

The major world hopping won't occur until his feel peerage is gathered. He will also be gaining SOME powers along the way along with his peerage.

Some worlds i have planned thus far, one of the first i wanted to do was One piece. Its a rather big world with a lot of written about it already to explore. Its easy to integrate into and has fun characters to interact with. I also wanted the group to learn some forms of Haki. 

Harry potter, i detest a lot of the characters in this world, i though it would be fun to have ichigo and a few peerage members muck this up a bit. initially i wanted them to go during the Tri-wizard tournament and maybe stay for a few books. I also wanted to give rukia a character development arc in this world.  My current idea was for him, rukia, Shirou, saber, and one of the mystery females to go to this world as their powers would make the most sense. 

I planned a little excursion to a zombie filled world for the guys. A guys night out if you will. My current thought would be resident evil. 

I wanted to do a superhero world, maybe DC, Marvel, or Boku no hero academia. I won't be doing One punch man in the foreseeable future, that power levels there are just absurd and i didn't want to nurf the world too much to be able to include ichigo. 

This currently as far out as i have planned. This should last several months if not longer so i will definitely think of more plot related points from now. 

Some random tibits before i end this. 

I like using the original Japanese wording for attacks. I think it makes it feel more epic. Instead of Yoruichi calling out "White lightning" i feel like "byakurai" is much cooler.

This brings up the whole language in general for my story. they are japanese and i only rarely use the proper Japanese. Like when Orihime calls Ichigo "Kurosaki-kun" i'm using it as more of a term of endearment or a pet name.  

And the point that devils speak and write every language, the whole language thing itself is a moot point. So thats my cop-out. :)

Thats it for now, i thank everyone for their continued support. Its been pretty cool to see so many people reading something i wrote. 

And now i being the next chapter.

Ichigo died after defeating Yhwach and he is given a chance to reincarnate with some cheats in a new world.

Su Yan changed back to the Lovely Writing System and searched for some sort of button that would take him back to the window where he could input his text. He really wanted to know if the System would rate this one better.
There was no possibility to exchange his texts, though. Instead, he found himself back at the front page after a moment. The System had automatically redirected him there. But it seemed like that was the right choice anyway. The Lovely Writing System had actually issued a new task already:
[Learn From Mistakes] was the high-sounding title and the description actually instructed him to do what he had already finished: [An author is only as good as his effort in editing. Use the suggestions given by the System to edit your text and receive a judgment of the new version with further hints on how to advance on your path to becoming a successful author!]
Su Yan clicked on the task and once again a window popped up. He pasted the prepared text inside and waited. The same rows of characters appeared but this time the process seemed to take even longer.
Su Yan leaned back and sighed. Well, nobody became a good author overnight. Waiting a few minutes to get the feedback wouldn't hurt him. He spun around on his chair and waited.
The seconds trickled by until finally, after three minutes, the familiar message [Organizing results.] appeared on the screen.
Su Yan sat up straight and waited for the results but surprisingly, the System showed another message:
[Comparing results.]
Su Yan blinked. Well, that probably made sense … Fine, he'll wait for another —
Before Su Yan could finish thinking that waiting another minute or so would be alright, the next messages turned up:
[Evaluating progress.]
[Determining problem areas.]
[Designing further tasks for training.]
[Compiling task list.]
[Issuing task.]
The last string disappeared and the System finally showed him the rating:
[Setting: 4/5
Characters: 1/5
Style: 3/5
Effectiveness of editing: 0/5
Overall rating: 2/5
Evaluation: The host has grasped the basics of writing but still lacks in his ability to apply them in a convincing way. The host is unable to edit his stories in a satisfactory way.
Suggestions for improvement:
1) Describe the thoughts and emotions of the character 'Lei Jiang' in more detail. Pay special attention to his description of Yi Zan and their relationship.
2) Compare the appearance of Ai Hua to her brother Yi Zan. Pay special attention to unique and memorable traits that could be linked to their differing personalities to hint at future conflict.
3) Hint at the problems resulting from Ai Hua and Yi Zan falling in love with the same person.]
"What?!" Su Yan rubbed his eyes, shook his head and took another look. Indeed! There was really written 'falling in love with the same person'.
"Who fell in love with the same person?! Fuck you! Those two will become husband and wife! This is an official pairing in the novel you had me read! They're canon! Do you understand what canon means?!" He really wanted to slap that thing! Unfortunately, slapping the System would require him to slap his baby, too. He couldn't do that.
Su Yan could only glare at the screen. Now, he really couldn't convince himself anymore that this was a normal system.
"First you want me to pair up men, then you want me to change my scene so that the brother of the female lead has a more prominent role and now you want me to hint at future developments because the brother and sister both fall in love with the same man. What do you think you're doing? You're supposed to teach me how to become a successful author, not how to write some gay story!"
The poor Su Yan had still not figured out what kind of Writing System he had gotten himself. Well, that was the problem with not reading the tutorial. Had he not just clicked all those explanations away, then he would have known that Official Shen Lu had granted him a Writing System for bl novels. Now, he had had to figure it out on his own. Though, there wasn't much to misunderstand anymore.
The System didn't care about Su Yan's protest and brought him back to the front page. There was already another task shown there or rather the first task of many, as it seemed.
[Archetypes; Questline: Character basics]
[Every story comprises of a multitude of characters. The more distinct your characters are, the better will your followers' reading experience be. Thus, it is incremental for a successful author to know how to craft interesting and diverse characters. This quest will acquaint you with the basic character types, the so-called archetypes.]
Su Yan who had already moved to close the Lovely Writing System halted mid-motion. He gritted his teeth. Perfect, just perfect! Why was this System's advice so good when its preferences were so shitty?!
Actually, he had heard of those archetypes before, after all, he had been writing for many years. But he had never had to craft a character himself.
That was one of the things that were easier with fanfics: He could just take the characters already existing and didn't have to make up any new ones. But if he really wanted to become an author who wrote his own stories that were entirely based on his own imagination, then he had to learn about these things.
Su Yan sighed. "Very well. You got me. I'll give you a chance because your normal advice is actually good! But don't think I'll trust you! I'll just ignore all the gay stuff. Hmph."
Su Yan actually thought he would be able to. He had no idea that a certain fujoshi who was happily doing a little dance in her office right now had already adjusted the settings of his system. If he just ignored his quests or didn't finish them on time, then he'd get the shock of his life.

Su Yan always wanted to be an author. Being moved by his determination (Well, in fact, she was just an avid reader of his fan-fictions and wanted him to write full time …) official Shen Lu grants the aspiring author a system: The Lovely Writing System!
Finding a strange app on his beloved notebook, Su Yan is sure he has fallen prey to a hacker. But why is this strange app issuing tasks related to his favorite hobby? Wait … What? He is supposed to write BL?! And what is this shitty task about experiencing story immersion?! No! He’d rather not become an author if that means he also has to become a shou!

Follow Su Yan on his path to becoming the world’s greatest BL author … and to reluctantly becoming a beloved shou thanks to a shitty Lovely Writing System!

Release schedule: The story is finished.

I was writing a chapter, and it was half done, but I opened a browser to research something and ended up reading comments. (You know how that happens. Like you reading about advanced robots, but you ended up looking for Apocalypse novels.)

Many people want me to continue the business arc, and I can't say I am not tempted.

So I decided to take a poll. I write comments and after day whichever has more like, I will write in that direction.

I am ready for challenges too if anyone wants to suggest something in the novel, let me know and I will try to write that as well.

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Only wizards and witches who are fearless and enjoy spoiled stories as well as like to gossip may read ahead.

Some hints about how the story will follow, to make a better choice.



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American Arc:
Harry will get revenge for Petunia and Sara. 
This arc will be a little slow and more detailed for magic and changes the world compares to the original.
Meanwhile preparing for his plan, he will go to America as part of his bigger plan.

Hogwarts arc:
It will be faster than the previous one and less detailed. But of course it will cover the story, so missing details will be used as a conversation. For example, on the train Harry and Ron will talk about those things, that way, no important point will be missed, but less detailed.
There are also a few added stories, but that will come along in both arcs.


This way the story will develop. I try to write without giving away big spoilers.

I am inclined toward the American arc because that way my early preparation won't be wasted, but currently, I am writing a chapter for the Hogwarts arc.(i know it's really laughable)

Like whichever arc you want me to write. I hope our silent Wizards/Witches come forward this one to give your opinion. 

Poll open for only 24 hours.

Once again if anyone wants to add something related to the story, a comment about it. I am open to challenging myself as I begin writing this novel to improve and later I can write my original novel.

I decided to make a poll after reading Fellow wizards comments.
crouchingTiger, swaran, Jetstorm, stressed_stalker, Mbolz, AlwaysReading

He was reborn as Harry Potter, but at the wrong time. That wasn't the only problem. As time passed, he found that it wasn't the same world as Harry Potter which he knew from the novel.

One of the biggest differences was polygamy in the Wizarding world, but well it is great since he has a harem system. It's like "Favorite food and doctor recommended it when ill." 

Join the journey of Harry, a young wizard who embark on the road of friendship, passion, and love, to become the Harem Lord!

Biggest Harem ever!

First Arc: The Boy Who Lived
Second Arc: Ilvermorny(american wizarding school)



Please give a review after reading this novel.



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Disclaimer: Neither cover nor original story belongs to me. If anyone of them has a problem, I will take it down or delete it entirely.

It's Author here. This isn't the disclaimers I was talking before, rather just a note.

I just made this story for fun really, never took it seriously. As I said before in the first disclaimers, I treat my other ff books seriously rather than this one. As it's idea, reincarnation to the past is rather a common one. And not like I got inspired by reading other people's work but I did want some things to happen myself thus creating this book. I haven't publish yet the others book that I'm treating seriously, as I don't want to be the author that go on hiatus. But don't care about that, it isn't related here at Webnovel. 

This book isn't specifically for giving you your satisfaction and granting your wish for something to happen. Not like really I received any comments about that but rather, you should not expect so.

I admit I'm not a good writer, lmao, and it troubles me how I'm too rush at this. Like I'm starting to left out some details and all. So the last chapter, Loyalty, I will rewrite it and post it again with more better details and all.

There's misunderstandings, I'm sure some of you sometimes don't get the chapter since it's too confusing, Idk but there are just mysteries left to be solved later on, so I hope you try your best to be a detective. So I will left out just some hints about the future. I'm trying my best to do good at 3rd PoV, since I think I'm very terrible at it. Practically, I'm just a very bad author, Hufflepuffs, don't comfort me lol.

I just felt rather confuse as I actually didn't know how things should turn out even after I wrote this book. I just got some starting ideas and stupidly started writing and publishing already, much to my dismay. That's why there are chapters that are published which contains some information that needed to eb changed, but I already published it, so no use. Since I've gone that way, I will try to fit the Canon of HP in
this ff. Yes, I will follow the Canon, and this focus on his Hogwarts Life, not others who focused on after education life. And the pressure you know, since I don't really want the viewers that wants to see more get disappointed or something, I try my best to continue it into a good way. I might just post one chapter a day or something.. 

And also, if I do finish this book, I will rewrite it all into better book with my free time. 

That's all. Don't expect too much as I said. Even Elliot has said it. Expecting too much comes often a disappointment if it fails..

BTW, you will not understand this future readers as I have deleted the previous Loyalty chapter now..

The Wizarding World was blissful as the young wizard hero, Harry Potter, has once again saved the world from the dark wizard, Voldemort.

Unknown to them, there were a lot more people who help to defeat the dark lord. But it just revolves the young man, Harry there, Harry here, Harry everywhere, as always.

Peculiar to his schoolmates, Ron, Hermione, and other more, one stand out from the rest. Unfortunately, not because of his heroic nor anything good in particular, but because of his bad deeds. A man named Elliot. 

But truth, he was framed.

After the sorrowful life he had, he had the chance to change himself.

Himself from the past.

Creating an empire that will stand high among the rest.

(DROPPED)

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