Just little things that sometimes help me with writing and my thoughts of different forms of writing.

(English is not my mother tongue, also be less severe on the grid etc ... please)
In a remote countryside, one can notice a huge chalet but strangely no noise could be heard nor any light could be seen.
A few meters from the chalet, you could see a teenager sleeping in front of a tree, lounging in the sun.
The teenager seems to be 16 years Old , one could say that he was beautiful with his short silver hair and his azure eyes like a calm sea which could be unleashed at any time. and her snow-white skin was now sickly pale. His name was Tao Ming.
Opening his eyes, the youngster began to whisper to himself
Tao Ming: "father, mother, I hope you are proud of me even if I selfishly love most of my life using your heritage for extreme sports and other pleasures, I totally changed In the year where the doctor said I had 1.5 years to live, I gave 80% of the money to humanitarian donations, maybe I saved a thousand lives or maybe nothing "
A small smile appeared on his lips believing that he had closed his eyes for the last time. in any case, that is what he must think of.
After an indefinite period, he wakes up in a place he does not know, it is as if he were surrounded by a sticky but hot liquid making him want to stay. while he was on deck to fall back asleep in this environment, when he heard a sour noise in his mind.
Ding
[Welcome guest to the world of Dao]
Resounds a cold voice, obviously not human, rather mechanical.
When I hear this Ming starts to think and ask me: <damn I went crazy? to whom does this voice belong? What is this Dao world?>
as he thinks at high speed, he hears the cold mechanical voice again
[you are in the Dao world. a world 4 times larger than the earth. 60% of the planet is earth. the world of dao consists of 5 continents, the south, the north, the east, the west, the middle continent which is the largest continent and of which most of the great powers of the world live, there are 10 great sects, 7 empires which govern each 10 great kingdoms and hundreds of means and small kingdoms, and 13 old clans the branch of the galactic federation and the galactic academy on this planet , which govern the world, you would be born in a branch of the clan Tian of the 13 old clan in the northern continent. do you have any other questions]
Ming (currently): "yes"
[Please]
Ming "who created you"
[The host does not have enough potency for the knowledge for that it is necessary to increase your level of cultivation]
Ming: "so it's a world of cultivation, so how vatu help me, vatu give me missions or when i kill animals or human or other you will give me experience"
[Yes, there will be missions, but no there is no experience or other if you kill a living being you can sucked part of his remaining cultivation and his remaining life thanks to your hidden lineage and also the only cause that you unlocked from this sealed hidden lineage]
Ming: "the weather here" does it differ from the earth? "
[No]
Ming: "how then?"
[because of the size of their sun, the speed of rotation of this planet, the number of planets in this solar system etc ... and other factors that you did not have to know]
Ming: "also why do i have a hidden hidden line?"
[With the exception of the human line, all other lines must be sealed for all human beings up to the age of 8 to see what is the rank of the line and to see the talent of the child]
Ming: "so no one can start cultivation before the age of 8?"
[No, as I said, the human line is already awakening and thanks to the concentration of spiritual energy the children develop faster than on earth, and can start cultivation at 2 years after having considering the attributes of "the child"]
Ming: "so what must be done before being born?"
[Nothing but sleep and let the system increase your talent by making your lineage purer and your attributes more powerful]
Ming: "and also before the last question. What do people in this world look like"
[people are essentially a bit taller than humans on earth but not too tall due to the high gravity here, but it's not uncommon to see adult humans over 2 meters tall who are mostly people who have done hard physical work, ... and level jumped a little higher than on earth despite the fact that there are still ugly people]
Ming: "well, the last and most important question is that there is a kit for beginners"
[Yes but you will have to wait up to 2 years to unlock it]
Ming: "tsk"
After his time has passed between sleeping and sometimes listening to the conversation of what appears to be the future parent.
He also has bizarrely all-inclusive conversions despite the fact that he remembers never having learned a language like this but apparently he has 4 skills given by the system itself which are:
-- Eyes Of God--
// Can see the culture of each person that does not exceed 3 major kingdoms //
// Allows you to learn any type of technique nothing by looking at it //
// Gives a 360 ° peripheral vision, an excellent view, allows you to see 100m around the user (lv1--1%) (Can still go up levels) //
-- Fighting instinct--
// Allows the user to reflex much larger than the norm, with a greater explosiveness of the cultivation of me of 2 small kingdom (lv1--1%) //
// Increase of: + 10% Attack, + 10% Energy, + 10% Agility. (lv1--1%) //
- -Survival instinct --
// activates if the host loses more than 70% of health than the initial form allows, gives: + 50% Attack, + 50% Defense, + 50% Agility (lv1--1%) //
--Regeneration--
// Regenerates endurense 30% faster, regenerates spiritual energy 20% faster (lv1--1%) //
// No pain returned during activation
During: 5 min
Recharge: 10 min (lv1--1%) //
// 40% effective in physical training and meditation thanks to the regeneration of muscular and intellectual fatigue which makes it possible to think 50% faster and to keep a calm state of mind in difficult situations (lv1 - 1%) //
It's really a cheat even if for the moment I can't do anything level up
(thanks for reading this is my first story so please give me writing tips to improve)

Tao ming is a 16 year old young man who died prematurely because of an incurable disease of which he is a victim and the only comfort or joy granted in his life is extreme sport, martial art etc ... what gave him a calm, resolute and courageous character. follow the story as tao ming reincarnates in a world of culture. where the strong reigns and the weak obiet and see how it will evolve with his close relations ... and how he will become someone of exceptional

(ps: this is my first story so give me advice to improve my writing)

(I'm gonna talk a bit about my personal journey so if you guys are not interested, then just skip to the tips.) 
Like many normal teenagers, I had gone through an awkward phase. Sad thing is, I went through it in grade 9, so most of the people in my high school still remember my awkward phase. (I'm in grade 12 now.) But after looking at pictures from that dark time, I realised that my face didn't change at all. It was my style, my mannerisms, and my hair. I also found a deeper meaning in those changes. So here's what I found that made the difference between awkward phase me and glown up me:

1. A fail proof hairstyle is plain, natural hair. 😻 Also try all lengths of hair by cutting it to shoulder length first (or longer if you are scared) and then growing it out. See which stage you like best. (I don't think this would work with afro hair. I've never had friends who have afro hair.) I love a YouTube video for tips on this. Please comment to let me know if you guys are interested in it

2. Try to get contact lenses. 👀 I know some people suit glasses. I personally don't. But getting contacts really helps if you have oily skin and glasses just keep slipping down your nose. Or if you are like me, with 800 degrees myopia, then ditching heavy glasses feels so good. Getting contact lenses also allow me to go crazy without worrying about it flying off my face. 

3. Don't use makeup for the sake of using makeup. Use it according to your needs, your face, and your style. Also, keep in mind your overall outfit. Sometimes, a loud outfit with a loud makeup can take over your body and hide you. You want people to see you, not your makeup. Of course, there are exceptions such as creative makeup. 

4. Be mindful while shopping. 💸Just because something looks good, doesn't mean it will look good on you. Also avoid fast fashion to save up for more quality items. Always check for the quality of fabrics, the color scheme of your closet, and what you usually wear. If you don't wear skirts, don't buy a skirt. I also love a YouTube video for tips on this. Please comment to let me know you guys are interested. 

5. Work out.💦 You don't have to aim for losing weight or gaining curves. Working out enhances your metabolism, the lines on your arms and legs (makes you look extra sexy), and improves your complexion. You will radiate from the inside out. Working out doesn't have to be tiring or tedious too. You can try dancing, cycling, stretching (splits are cool!), etc. 

6. Commit to a hobby.🔥 Mine would be piano, which I started playing when I was three. During my awkward phase, I wasn't practicing at all and I was embarrassed to tell people I had been learning it since I was three and I actually have certificates for it. REALLY COMMIT TO A SKILL PLEASE! Also, don't underestimate the amount of money your special skill can bring you!! I received 500RMB once for winning an award in a writing competition, plus 100RMB for being a volunteer at the award ceremony. XD

7. Please listen to your mother when she says you look bad.💯 She's probably right. I can't express how many style mistakes I made because of not listening to her. 

8. Be more reserved. 😶Talk only when you have something meaningful to say. My awkward phase consists a lot of me blurting out dumb, hypocritical, ignorant, and sometimes offensive things. I think this is why I didn't have friends. Also, if you are not sure if your opinion on something is right (as in, in consideration of all perspectives and not on an ignorant basis), ask questions. It's always fun to get to know what others think. But if you don't have the ability to recognise your ignorance, then I can't help you. Only time and maturity can help you at this point. 🙄

9. Take care of your skin.💦 Depending on where you live, you might not need a skincare routine. Taking care of your skin does not necessarily means buying products and putting them on your face. Taking care of your skin can be applying body lotion, washing your face with a simple face wash as soon as you get home (gets rid of pollutants), clipping your bangs up for sports (avoids forehead pimples), not touching your face, etc. 

10. Do your eyebrows.💯 If you are born with perfect eyebrows, don't touch them. But I had a uni brow. For beginners, personally I feel like it's better to use a small brow shaver instead of a tweezer. It does not hurt as much and if you fail, your hair grows out faster. If you can afford, get your brows done for the first time at a salon, then follow the shape at home when it grows out. 

These are the tips I have. Hope you guys liked them. Please give constructive feedback if there's anything I can improve. Thank you for reading, lovelies!! 💋

Hello everyone, I will be using this 'Chapter' to update you guys on a few things. This update section will be where I inform you about major changes coming to The Assassin's Blessing. My editor may also appear and give tips about my own mistakes and botched writing that's getting adjusted. 
The Assassin's Blessing has about 100 plus Chapters that are unreleased on Webnovel and I've been using Webnovel's Inkstone website to edit and adjust The Assassin's Blessing's plot, writing style, and sequencing. With that out of the way, I hope you all enjoy this interaction between you(the reader) my editor(Who will be going by Mista D), and I The author.

1. Changes to the introductory period and sequences.
 1a) The first few Chapters will be redone with a different style of writing.
 1b) The first time I read through the first draft of The Assassin's Blessing, I saw a lot of good and bad. Thomas, the author has been working a lot on this since I've seen seven months ago. A lot has changed in terms of his own personal skill as a writer. So before he releases anything more I asked him if he wanted to redo the story with his current skill and oh my god, you can hardly tell it's the same author. -Mista D
 1c) While this is just being used to test the reception of the Assassin's Blessing, I still don't want to release a bad story with bland writing on Webnovel. So I said yes to Mista D's proposal to redo the book. And I just want to say I love his reaction. Haha
2. Major changes to story characters and plot.
 2a) The story takes way to long to get going to the point that's we're at right now, For Webnovel at least. So I'm trying to increase the amount of progress made in the story.
 2b) There are a few parts where the story feels stagnate and uninteresting to read. So I coached Thomas on several techniques to improve the story and condense it a little. The first draft is 489 pages long... This isn't unheard of by any means, but it is hard to find publishers that will actually print and market such a long book from a first-time author. -Mista D
 2c) Yeah, the first draft was a doozy of a draft that's for sure. It is also the draft that I was releasing on Webnovel. Mista D and I are very invested in The Assassin's Blessing. To the extent that he is more than just an editor. He's a co-author and mentor to me. 
3. Consistency and story elements.
 3a) How far is Gregoria from Greendale? Roughly speaking, two hundred miles, there are times where even I wonder. I wrote the first draft without a map to pinpoint these things down on. So consistency took a hard hit from it.
 3b) As an editor, we look for a lot inside a book. But I personally look at four main things. Plot, Character, Setting, and Conflict. All of these things have to stay consistent in order to make sense. The later chapters of the book are so full of these little 'wait that doesn't seem right' moments that it's hard to tell if the later chapters are even the same story as the introduction. The magic system is the biggest part of this which is very common when dealing with things outside of reality and physics. -Mista D
 3c) I deserved that... When the first draft was made, I was going purely off of memory for who, what, when, where, and why's. I'm glad that Mista D asked me to rewrite it and thus, I will be re-releasing The Assassin's Blessing on Webnovel before continuing on with a bad story, starting from page one.
Final notes; I hope you can stay with The Assassin's Blessing and this amazing story, we both hope to have everything set back up by the end of July. Then we will release the updated version as it is written. Thank you all, I just don't want to give you a bad story. Updates to the currently released chapters will be small, mainly consisting of small changes to writing and small plot changes. By small plot changes, I mean small.
Thank you all, -Thomas W -Mista D

The world of The Assassin's Blessing takes place in a fantastical world where a king's rule with absolute power and the will of the people is thought to be irrelevant. Jackson, a young boy, born into the mighty family of Scottkey, is well on his way to becoming a knight in the country of Asmeria after the great civil war. His father, Connor, is the wealthiest merchant in the trading hub of Greendale and whose father fought against the 'tyrant king' in the great civil war. He now can finally care for his two children as they were being trained in the capital by his brother.

CAUTION; IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED BY THE FOLLOWING, PLEASE PROCEED AT YOUR OWN RISK! SLAVERY, RAPE, MURDER, HUMAN TRAFFICKING, RACISM, AND THE LEAST OF WHICH, PROFANITY.

*Updates Weekly After 10th Chapter*

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Welcome back, young daoists! Today we will be touching upon a topic near and dear to every starving daoist's heart. Advertising.

Of course, "shamelessly advertising"? No! You are just providing a source of entertainment for anyone who is interested...

Maybe a young daoist like you has never heard of the term "advertising"? It's a quite simple and easy task, but getting people to actually read your story is something else. Here's a few tips on how to provide a source of entertainment for anyone interested.

1. Comments

Let's say you're on a story like "Transcending The Nine Heavens" and see a few comments enjoying the story. You should comment something like this:

"I like Transcending The Nine Heavens too! The update per week is soo slow though. I'm working on a similar story called "Insert Cool Xianxia Name" with a chapter per (you choose) and it currently has (please don't advertise with 5 chapters). See you later, fellow daoist. 

With this comment, you have indirectly said 'Come to my story, add to your library and give me power stones.' without actually saying that! Foolproof technique.

2. Social Media/Discord

If you haven't joined Discord, I recommend you do! You should then join the official Webnovel server and Inkstone Writing server. Using a legendary technique crafted by me, you will be able to get more viewers.

Open Discord > Webnovel > Start Interacting

This one requires a lot of skill, as not every starving daoist can actually communicate well. Fear not! This will hone your skills, give you an idea of what authors and readers are like and open new gateways to creating your own server for your novel. 

So basically, don't shamelessly advertise to advertise on Discord! Only do it when the moment is right and casually mention your novel. 
TLDR: Don't be so pushy! A man just wants to read..
3. Is this the real life? Is this just fantasy?

This is only for the most desperate and starving daoists. It is seriously not recommended to torture yourself like this unless absolutely necessary. After all, who would want to let the world know they write on Webnovel? Just one look at it gives a 'weaboo' vibe and will scare most narrow-minded people off. But, if you have willingly chose this path, it is expected you know what judgement stems from it. 

You should casually mention you write something and have a friend check it out. Make sure you're not writing a scene where the MC gets his head chopped off on the first chapter or that will scare some people away. Here's a good way of saying this to your real life friends:

"I've been thinking of getting into writing, and I'm writing on a website called Webnovel. My story is called 'The Dao of Filler' you should check it out! I think you'll like it."

If you were not profusely sweating while saying that sentence, good on you. Let's just hope your friend won't be absolutely shocked when they read the absurd titles of popular novels and quickly close the tab...

That's all for today's advice! If you need any advice on your cultivation, let me know in the comments below! Of course, remember to give me your power stones. 

Remember kids, every word counts...

Young daoist, you must face all in your way to becoming a shameless author and filler expert. Luckily, I am giving advice for freeeeeee! Vote now with your power stones..

After Lin Xu returned to the classroom, he immediately began to attend classes, and it was only when Li Zong rushed in.

　　The three people were very excited. When Ye Ni had not arrived, they rushed to Lin Xu and said: "Lin Xu, where have you just gone? Do you know what has just happened? Haha..."

　　"Hey, we just went to fight with Ye Tian's kid. As a result, Ye Tian's kid actually called a saintist. The saintist may be the senior student of our college, not only has become a junior writer, but also I also learned the Holy Order, and then we will be given by Ye Tian, ​​but at this time..." Yang Nian is also very excited. "Hey, Lin Xu, how do you look curious?" what!"

　　Lin Xubai took a look at the three people and thought: "Can I tell you that I am at the scene?" However, he pretended to be surprised and asked, "Oh, what happened then?"

　　"It's my turn!" Zhao Xiong said. "Later, a mysterious sage teacher appeared, and we added a holy force behind us. Then we three will hang the opposite three, the other side of the sage The teacher was not enough to see it, and it was perfectly shown by the mysterious sage!"

　　Li Zong said: "Yeah, I am afraid that this mysterious Saint Seon is also one of the best geniuses in our college. I have heard of the Yeh's Saint, who is also called Ye Luo. It was because of his discovery that he was very talented in the sacred texts. This was funded by Ye Family to let him study in the college. It is said that in the upper grades, it is also one of the earliest junior writers! But the mysterious sacred text It is obvious that the division can directly crush Ye Luo, which is obviously stronger than Ye Luo!"

　　"Is this a teacher!" said Zhao Xiong. "For example, our teacher Ye, she is an intermediate writer!"

　　"Impossible, if it is a teacher, it will not help us fight, but prevent us from fighting!" Yang Nian immediately shook his head.

　　"In any case, I must study the holy text well in the future, and I will also be a strong Saint Seonographer in the future!" Li Zong said firmly.

　　"We are also!" said Yang Nian and Zhao Xiong.

　　At this moment, Lin Xu is a lonely master. It is estimated that even if he jumps out and says that he is the sage of the sage, the other party will only think that he is bragging, so he simply does not say more.

　　Lin Xu was also the first to use the sacred slogan. The difficulty of the sacred syllabus is naturally the basis of the sacred text. You must know that even from the primary class to the advanced class, it is not bad to master the three thousand sacred texts, so even if it is The students in the advanced class rarely have the primary beginners. The group words are stronger than the literacy.

　　Although many people have learned some simple words when they are learning three thousand sacred texts, most beginners generally go to the primary writers who have studied 3,000 essays, so few people spend Time to learn what words, after all, if there is no Wenquan, even if there are more holy forces, there is no way to store them, and they will slowly disperse.

　　Therefore, the current teaching mode is basically in the order of words, words, sentences, and texts. Therefore, after Lin Xu directly evaluated the primary writer as a sergeant, he immediately wrote a text, which has to be said to be Very surprising.

　　The primary writer can write a text even if the assessment is passed. Although the content is richer and more mature than the primary school composition, the written text is no different from the primary school students, so the population of the entire sage has reached 100 billion. Above, the St. Master does not know how many billions, even if Lin Xu's primary assessment is the first, but the number of subscriptions that can be obtained is only over 50,000. The reason is because everyone's impression of the primary writer is too deep, even if It is a talented person, and only a junior writer, writing a primary school essay, even if everyone feels great, I am afraid most people may not agree.

　　If you change to a great god, or even a writer's "Water Melody", I am afraid that the number of people who subscribe will reach 10,200,000.

　　However, when Lin Xu wrote a novel, he quickly entered the boutique, and before he wrote the web article, he also published many articles in the newspapers. After graduation, he has been working on the program, and the story has a story. The thesis has a literary talent, or a true Chinese professional, so his accomplishment in Chinese is also quite brilliant. If you concentrate on studying Chinese, it is an expert level.

　　This kind of existence, came to the sanctuary, and it would not work if you want to not be a cow.

　　It can be said that Lin Xu is now a high-energy low-altitude. The sanctuary he possesses is probably weaker than the great god. He only needs to raise the Holy Spirit and learn the various uses of the Holy Power. Is a bullish existence.

　　For example, Ye Luo, who can already pass the junior writer in the advanced class, UU read www.uukanshu.com and learned some sacred orders, can be said to be one of the geniuses, but met his own assessment. Those who have been at the beginning of writing, and who are the first to use the sacred slogan, have been hanged by themselves. In addition to the reason that their sacred power is much stronger than the other, the most important thing is the understanding of the sacred text. It is much stronger than the other side.

　　In this battle, Lin Xu discovered that every sacred slogan, even such a minimum sacred slogan, would cost about two hundred sacred powers. If you use a more powerful sage, it would not take long.

　　At this time, Wang Xuewen curiously asked: "Hey? Liu Wei, Teacher Ye has never been late, how come today has not come to class yet?"

　　When I heard this, Lin Xu felt a little strange. According to the truth, Ye Ni should be a very dedicated teacher. It shouldn't be so late.

　　At this time, Ye Ni hurried over and said: "Well, the teacher just got something, so it's late, but we don't have classes in this class!"

　　"Wow, don't go to class!" At this time, Li Zong and other people cried out in surprise. It was a very cool thing for them not to go to class. Lin Xu looked back at them and just said that they should learn well. Wen, to be a strong Saints, is it so happy to hear that you are not in class now?

　　Wang Xuewen and others frowned. They came here to learn the holy text. It is a bad thing for them not to attend classes.

　　At this time, Ye Ni said: "The squad leader organized it and went to the playground together. Be sure to pay attention to discipline, and wait for the king to come to the college!"

　　"What? The king is coming over?" All of them were surprised when they heard this, but they finally understood why Ye Ni would come over late, and why Ye Ni would say that this class did not attend classes.

Bad grammar is to be expected
read with caution
Been translated to english 
read before webnovel get me
10 Chapter per day
Number of chapter in chinese:130
Status:Cancel/Taking a break
you can read it on my website as well 
Discord link https://discord.gg/sG7DVsM

Hello every one and welcome to my story. I am here with one announcement and two warnings.

Announcement: I have ZERO artistic talent and as such an looking for anyone to make a cover for this book. If you are interested feel free to go ahead and make one then email it to kelin.yost@gmail.com and then post a comment on the most recent chapter i have posted. (note this is not my main email and as such will not be checked regularly unless i receive word that you have sent me a cover)

First: Writing is NOT a first priority for me and as such there will not be regular updates and you can expect long Hiatuses from me. (possibly multiple months at a time)

Second: My writing is no were near where i would like it to be. As such i would greatly appreciate constructive criticism, tips on how to improve how the story is written, and if you could point out any mistakes (grammatical or semantics) it would help me a lot.

Elves and magic, fancy swords and shiny armor, and the most over used tropes seem to make up every MMO game on the market today. Humanities Homecoming: Retaking Earth is not like all those games. Terrans are on the brink of extinction and Kevin Yore, just like all the other VRMMO players out there, are diving in to do their best to reverse this fate and save their kind. 

Kevin might not be the smartest, strongest, fastest, or even luckiest person. In fact, he might just be an average person. No System. No Fortunate encounter. No memories of a past life. Just an average guy making a mark on the world with the only thing he believes himself to be good at, video games. 

Will you join him in his adventures of the Milky Way Galaxy? Will you curse him when he makes a stupid mistake? Will you cheer for him when he survives that harrowing brush with death? Or as Kevin would say “will you sit on your pampered a** and watch a great experience pass you by?”

Greetings everyone!

I've been busy editing some stuffs from the previous chaps. Not to worry, I did not change anything, just 'clean' some errors and patch some plotholes. Especially the errors my allegedly alive Keyboard did.

So... for the new readers, I welcome ya'll, for the old readers, Thank you thank you thank you~ I really feel grateful that ya'll keep on supporting me. Shoutout to Cerment_the_frog, hopefallsnow01, Jagermeister, LoudHermit and ChiseHatori and those who kept on reading my story since square one.

And by the way, You should skim the first 20 chaps for additional snippets that I added :3. I wasn't planning to add them at the first place since I'm not yet sure about the system and plots and everything I wanted to integrate into this story.


So to be honest, I didn't expected this sudden recognition, I was just casually writing stories then sharing them to the world through Webnovel. And now, I'm starting to get comments and reviews, which greatly pleases me! Please give me more of those, thank you so much.


So yeah, I had the plan to drop this novel before, during those quarantine stuffs and online class wackamoles, and yet, I'm still here, writing Vol. 2. So thank you ya'll for the support.

Anyways, since Webnovel doesn't have an open forum feature in the app which I greatly wish they are planning to add, I'll be opening this chap for any questions ya'll have in your mind, tips for my story and your ideas - Especially names, I lack the creative brain to think of names.

Oh right! Give me more of those honest reviews! I love those! They're helping me improve the quality of the novel. So feel free to leave some reviews for this novel. Shoutout to Jaxer30 and Nith_Haiah.

All in all, thank you for following the development of Defend the Queen.

How to defeat a horde of monsters?

Create an army!

How to do that?

BECOME A QUEEN!!

Set your colony, raise your army, attack monsters, eat their flesh, then evolve!

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Iziul was the youngest and the only female General of the Army of Earth year 2075 who attained the respectable rank of Five-Star.

Sadly, her high prestige was ended after being sent to her death trap by.

Waking up again, she was brought to another world quite different yet similar to Earth.

Trees were towering here as animals and insects that were seen small at earth became gigantic titans that wrecked havoc.

"Is that mothra?!?! godzilla?!?! wait! Why are they so big but... normal. Normal???

Holy Sh*t. They are not big! 

I'm just small!"

Join Iziul, as she transmigrated into a
Queen Bit and thread the path of evolution while building her army of children to conquer the world!

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Hope you guys enjoy it!

this is kinda of late but whatever. 

so....  I'm a high school student so I have to study for midterms and finals. so it's hard for me to update. also if my grammar sucks I'm sorry. Also for this story/novel I'm using my phone so.. you could tell how that goes and the autocorrect barly work so I'm really sorry. Right bow um debating whether to continue this or not.
SO WHY AM I WRITING THIS?
at first It was for the badge. But then I started to have a lot of ideas of how the novel should be  and plots and so I just continued with the story. Secondly it was because when I'm reading a story or a novel i would always think if the characters should've done this or if the story could end up with a certain idea that I had. Thirdly I was bored and I wanted a story that would go the way I want it to. so yah enjoy and give me tips

P.S.- if u didnt notice my profile then u should know I'm an ARMY and i LOVE 💘 suga so much so yah. that was random but whatever. anyways I also love k drama but I got nothing to watch so any recommendations?

Hello. 

First of all, thank you for choosing my story. It's my very first time writing a story so there may be errors like  Grammatical mistakes and others. But I'll try my best to write it in my best level. Oh. And I'm not a native English speaker so..... my English will not be good. 

The story, as you have read in the synopsis, is a typical story. But my own version of it. It may be similar to some other that you have read. But that's also how I got the ideas. So, I may have taken a few tips from them, but 95% are my own ideas.

Please don't say that I'm a thief who stole others' story.

Hope you like it

Wrongly accused of doing something she didn't even think of doing, Evalyn Grant has been living in hell for two years. One day she stops enduring everything and give on the little hope she has that she will clear her name. 

After abusing Evalyn for two years, he finds out he has been made to believe the wrong. By the time he finds out his unforgivable mistake, it was already too late. She has already disappeared from his life. And unknown to him, with his unborn child.

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