Hi guys! I’m making this novel because there aren’t any interesting novels to read. I’m gonna make this fanfic because I’ll be needing reader reviews to continue and also gonna add parts from different novels. Primarily this novel will have system, time reversal, harem and some mild R-18. Thanks for reading.

The books are originally written in English or being translated in English.

Some argue that various works by authors that do not meet the requirement of fine grammar and spelling are rubbish. Here, each person has his own opinion, and let him stick to it and impose his opinion on others as the ultimate truth, it speaks only of ignorance of life. It is diverse.

Is the work of authors with poor grammar garbage? In my opinion, no. Each author tells his story, passed through his worldview, attitude, understanding of life, his experience and thoughts about the world. It's always interesting for me to read this personally.

I'm a bibliophile, I read a lot of classic works of art, Tomass and Gernih Mana, Feuchtwanger, Mark Twain, Stvenson, Romain Roland, Galsworthy, Tolstoy and all his volumes and there are about 19 of them! I didn't read Dostoevsky, I didn't like him. But Azek Azimov, Ursuda Le Guin, Tolkien, Kipling, Conandoyle, Louis Besenar and others I read with pleasure. Li Bo, the poetry is gorgeous. Novels of feudal and late feudal China, Japan, Korea. Novels and novels by Chinese prose writers of the early 20s and 80-90s of the 20th century.

In general, I read about 10,000 books. Fiction, fantasy, poetry, historical novels, ballads, myths and legends.

After that I became interested in reading historical documentaries - about the history of the Silk Road, Archeology, History, Ethnography, Etymology, the Big Game, the story of the confrontation of imperial intelligence in the vast regions of the Silk Road.

I read about 550 books, from the 16th to the beginning of the 21st century.

I have some kind of base for evaluating short stories and novels.

Sometimes works written flawlessly in terms of grammar, alas ... they are completely devoid of meaning, they are not interesting, they do not have fascinating stories, conclusions, experience, thoughts. But work with poor grammar, on the contrary, have unique information. Of course, not all works, but there are some.

Therefore, when assessing the creativity of another person, the author, being so categorical in evaluations, says only that you have a maximalist who still knows life poorly. This is the right of choice, each person, and to impose a choice on another according to my preferences, I consider this not comme il faut. Well, here everyone has a point of view.

In fact, this is an eternal question - what is more important? Beautiful text form or good content? Bestsellers are those works that combine good text and good content.

I am the author myself. But not a professional writer, but a techie. I don't know much about composition, about the intricacies of writing good text. But I have a very interesting content. Is my story garbage? I do not think so? Do I respect the reader? Sure. But writing is better so far I can't. Nevertheless, I have my own circle - readers who are interested in my work. There are not hundreds or thousands of people, but a couple of dozen will be typed.

I write in the genre - a documentary historical fiction, there are many interesting facts about the Silk Road with which I wanted to share. If I were waiting for the moment when I could write well in terms of English grammar ... I would not be able to share it now ... maybe in a couple of years ... and still I would not be able to write like this they write - people from English-speaking countries. This is a favorite topic of native speakers to reproach those who learn this language in their ignorance of the intricacies of the language they learn, grammar and spelling errors ... As we say, the dog barks, the caravan goes on. That happens.

English is the world language of communication. Moreover, for me it is the third language. I speak English well, but my grammar is lame. I admit it. Yes, I need to teach her, but I don't think I can write in perfect English.

The overall result - write as you can, share your thoughts, in the era of information, the content itself is important and not its form. One way or another, it can help others, they can come to a new thought and write a story about your topic that you would like to read yourself!


As they say in the East - do good and throw it into the water, a person will not know, the fish will know!

Peace and prosperity!

Thoughts of why and why stories are written.

All the same English, he has not improved in 18 days.

I'll figure something out, try to correct the text.

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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

There are some points I want to convey:

1. I'm not a native English speaker, the main reason I write this novel is to cultivate my English writing skills. So if you notice any glaring mistakes feel free to point it out in the paragraph comment. I know for a fact that my grammar is inconsistent.

2. I'm a slow writer and sometimes forgot I have a book to write in the first place (Spam me to write more if this happens, please). Compared to most authors on this platform who can write a chapter a day with 1000+ words, I can only write 500 words per day. So updates won't be even close to a daily schedule, the best-case scenario is a chapter every 3 days (Every chapter will have a minimum of 1500 words).

3. Despite all this, I hope you will enjoy the story I write. I'll try to make each chapter satisfying for you to read and wait since it will have fewer updates. Consistency regarding the update time and chapter-length will be my primary goal. 

Now for the story itself: 
 
I'm not gonna lie, the premise of this story is directly inspired by the web novels and light novels that I read previously. This story primarily focused more on kingdom building stuff (Domestic affairs, Politics, strategic wars, etc). 

But the first few volumes will be all about the growth of our protagonist, with the emphasis on her backstory, training, and how she managed to attain power. 

Do note that this is not a cultivation novel (but magic exist), there will not be any system helping our protagonist either. Our protagonist is not Overpowered and never will be. she is just a single person so no mowing down entire armies by herself, I think you got my point.

Rest assured, she is not weak and can kick ass. But I want her to struggle, to get hurt in every single fight. I love a weak protagonist who becomes strong in their own way.

Will there be any romance? I planned it to happen eventually but it will be later on. for now, MC is the main focus.

Why female MC? I thought it will be interesting.

I really hope you'll enjoy this, thank you!

Why do people seek power? the throne might look omnipotent from afar but she knows the truth. The throne rest upon a house of cards ready to tumble at the slightest nudge. Only fools and madmen will seek to sit upon it, she reasoned. 

Then you might ask "Why does she sit on the throne then?" 

To that question, she would say "Because I had no other choice, I'm cursed to sit on this throne till my dying breath"

It was not much of a surprise as to what happened for his exams: he flunked them all, well, most of them at least. His previous grades were barely average and with his present grades, one could easily see the clear decline in his academic performance.

Xing Peng felt heavy and burdened when he got to know his grades, he knew they were going to be bad but he didn't think they would be THAT bad.
His father never cared about him, let alone his grades. Likewise, Xing Peng never cared for his drunk old man. The only one he cared about was his mother. While his grades before were barely average, now they were abysmal. He didn't want to see the disappointment in his mother's eyes when she knew of his academic performance.

But Xing Peng knew this matter couldn't be avoided. He went home and let his mother know about his grades.
Xing Peng's mother didn't say much, other than telling him to work harder next time and to focus on his studies, but Xing Peng knew that she would still be a bit disappointed in him. After all, Ai Yu was struggling to provide him better education so his later life would go smoothly, and here he was flunking his exams and not being worthy of the efforts she put into him.

Although Xing Peng's mother knew that her son was bullied by his brother at home, she ensured that the latter didn't seek any trouble with Xing Peng under her presence.
But this help was only temporary. Since she had to go and manage the small restaurant, she wasn't always at home. Ai Yu knew that without her presence, Xing Shan would definitely trouble his little brother. She could only hope that Xing Peng studied properly in school. 

She was not aware that Xing Peng's troubles didn't end at home, he was bullied at his school,too.
Xing Peng kept quiet about this matter to avoid any unnecessary worry for his mother.

Since the exams were over and his scores were already announced, for the next few days he was in a gloomy mood. He knew, if he wanted to blame anyone for his failure it would be he himself and his *sshole of a brother, Xing Shan. If he had studied and didn't indulge in those Chinese novels then perhaps, he could have gotten average grades and if Xing Shan had stopped beating and torturing him for no reason, getting grades a bit above average was likely possible for him.

But those were just "ifs", the truth was, that he had miserable grades at the moment.
Feeling down for his own stupidity over abandoning himself to those novels, Xing Peng once again turned to read the very same as he consoled himself: "Exams are already over, so reading a bit more won't really affect me for now and when the next round of exams comes, I would have already stopped reading novels and begun studying hard to get good grades."

The next day when Xing Peng went to school his friend, Li Chong, brought him to a remote corner to show him something.

"What's up? What do you want to show me, brother Chong?" Xing Peng asked curiously.

"Hmm... just wait a bit" Li Chong said as he took out his phone and showed Xing Peng some web novels.

"See, here are the translated versions of the Chinese novels in English, meant for the international audiences. I know you are struggling a bit with the English language and since you also like reading these novels, you should try reading some web novels as it will improve your English as well. It's like killing two birds with one stone" Li Chong explained.

"Really? That's amazing! But sadly, I only have an ordinary phone, nothing like yours, which happens to be the latest smartphone" Xing Peng said.
But he didn't feel too grieved over it. His family's finances were limited, given how his father wasted most of the money by gambling it away or by getting himself drunk, the family was always in a tight situation when it came to their finances.
His mother wasn't able to change this situation either, she had tried but was slapped and lashed at.

"Brother Xing Peng, why make me feel more miserable than before? I figured that, because I introduced you to some Chinese novels, your grades have dropped. Don't try to deny it, I know it. 
But your eyes aren't as gloomy as they used to be before. So now I don't know whether I did a good or a bad thing by introducing you to novels" Li Chong laughed as he put his new phone into Xing Peng's hands.

"Brother Chong... this? Why did you hand me your smartphone?" At this point Xing Peng was confused, but when he saw Li Chong taking out a similar phone from his pocket and grinning, he seemed to have realized something and immediately asked: "Is this for me?"

Xing Peng immediately regretted asking such stupid question. This was one of the latest smartphones in the market, so how could Li Chong give it to him so easily?

But to his surprise, Li Chong nodded and said: "Actually, there was an offer of: "Buy one get one free", so when I bought that phone I got another one for free. Since you are my only friend in school, I decided to gift it to you" Li Chong smoothly lied.

Xing Peng found something was off, but to give his only friend some face, he accepted his gift.
Later that day, Xing Peng's web novel reading adventures began.
His exams had just finished recently and the next round was still a good 2 or 3 months away.
Xing Peng soon noticed that reading these web novels somehow made him feel more at ease with the English language and he was rapidly improving and grasping it.

When he was back at home, his mother was obviously the first one to notice that Xing Peng was using one of those expensive smartphones that had just recently arrived on the market. She felt shocked and asked: "Peng'er, where did you get that phone from?"

Seeing his mother's concerned expression, Xing Peng laughed and said: "Mom, don't worry. My friend, Li Chong, gave it to me as a present today"

Xing Peng's mother had already heard of this "Li Chong" as Xing Peng sometimes mentioned him to her, she also knew he was her son's best friend, so she calmed down a bit, but was still shocked. 
[Peng'er's friend must be from a rich family, no wonder he can afford to gift away smartphones to his friends.] As she thought of this, she couldn't help but sigh.

As a mother, she always wished the best for her children but given the limited finances they had, she couldn't afford it.

Nevertheless, she felt happy. [If Peng'er holds firmly onto this friend of his, perhaps he wouldn't have any troubles in the society,in future.] Ai Yu thought.
Her assumption about Li Chong wasn't that far off the mark; He was indeed from a rich family, but an illegitimate child, so his finances were strictly limited.

Xing Peng got easily hooked up with the web novels; often sleeping late at times. The ones he was mostly interested in were also his favourites: reincarnation-type novels.
One novel he came across was "Divine Ice God". It seemed to have come into publication on the web novel platform only recently. There were already a few chapters released, and out of pure curiosity Xing Peng checked it out and found it quite an impressive piece of work.
Although it was only in the beginning phase, it would surely become a great novel as it developed, Xing Peng thought as he proceeded to read more interesting web novels.

Xing Peng who is a teenager with an absolutely not-a-normal life, one day gets hits by meteorite-kun and his supposedly 'end' becomes a new start in a whole new world!
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Let's journey together with the protagonist and experience this world together.

discord link: https://discord.gg/jYXaZPB

if you haven't read the novels yet, then don't read this, it has some spoilers.

Hi, I'm jouyou the author of this novel, anyways I've been busy, i thought about publishing 1 chapter per 3 days or per week, but when i read criticisms like:
1. this novel is like any wuxia novel, repeating the same things as the other novels, bad grammar.
2. why the mc didn't kill his whole clan, why his father didn't kill the elders.
3. taking so much time to get the mc survive the situation.
4. why would you talk a lot about the mc just get to the point.
5. short chapters we need more per day.
6. why the mc acts like nothing had happen to him, like getting embarrassing over seeing the girl's face.
7. cliff hanging.

when i read all these i lost interest in continuing it, you'll say i don't accept criticisms, if i don't then i wouldn't bother replying on comments explaining all things, what gets me lose interest is some people critic on something i already explained dozens of time, read the answers of the criticisms above:

1. bro/sis i didn't even start talking about the world yet and i didn't focus on power level at the first chapters and yet you made a judgement about the whole novel, sigh.. , English is my 3rd language so its obviously i wont be that good at it, well at least its readable, right?.
2. like a person who cant use magic, his body is weak, just got his chakra doesn't have any ninjutsu nor did he train, how he is supposed to kill them, making him killing them with a 2 tomoe sharingan lol even madara couldn't do it at naruto, as for why didnt his father kill the elders, his position is already questionable, in a world where the power is all matters, 1st elder being a mid mage lord is rivaling the patriarch, so if the patriarch killed the 3 elders (1 mid mage lord + 2 low mage lords) the clan will suffer a huge blow to its power, so the patriarch will be treated as a traitor, plus the patriarch wouldn't do it he is selfish.
3. as i said at point 2, the mc is weak af, plus i had to talk about his past life and his current life, and make him build his personality, some novels says the mc's personality got changed because the society, but its not really that much if you read the story, i want the mc to flip his switch and mature from his experience.
4. without explaining his past experience and marco's experience, the story wouldn't develop, talking about him at the very beginning plus in that kind of situation he got to after his rebirth, it was good, its my opinion.
5. i'm a beginner i haven't write any novels or a short stories this novel was my first novel or story ever, after i dropped the novel , i didn't write anything.
6. as i said the gluttony eats/devour all the bad emotions that will make the mc lose focus, but it doesn't mean that the mc will not like get revenge or will not beat someone did something bad to him, its just he wont keep crying over all things, so yeah he is not depressed anymore because of the gluttony, he got embarrassed not because he looked at her face, but because he kept looking at her face for a long time in front of her father, after her father coughed he got embarrassed of it.
7. I'm a beginner, for me ending the chapter in an interesting situation is good, i love novels who ends chapters like this, which makes you want to read the other chapters, as long as the novel is continuing and its not the last chapter, so why not, if i continue this novel i will try to improve.

anyways guys i think i will continue on this novel, so what do you think, yes or no? depends on you guys, if you still interested on reading it or not, i hope you guys can help me improve, if i did a mistake at the story or i wrote a wrong word i hope you'll help me fixing it. 
Thank you.
JOUYOU.

When Long Ao Zhen met  Meng Yue Ming, this is what Li Shi Ying do.

Today Li Shi Ying wanted to go to a bookstore. All the books she bought month ago had been read when she was in recupation period. 

"I need more!" said Li Shi Ying to Jiu Wei and so the two of them went to a bookstore. Because now Shi Ying was accompanied by Jiu Wei, she didn't disguise as boy. She wore a decent appearance of a mysterious young lady.

She had checked her memories a few times to make sure that the female lead won't be in a bookstore today all in order to avoid her. After making sure that the female lead will be inside grave forest for quite a long time, only then Li Shi Ying sighed in relief.

On the way to the bookstore.

"By the way...isn't now supposed to be the second meeting between ML and FL? Aish....just now when 'brother' go i should follow him! What a pity i can't watch a live action romance..." Li Shi Ying thought in her heart while walking side-by-side with Jiu Wei.

On the other hand, Jiu Wei was thinking about another thing. He was thinking about what to do inside a bookstore. Should he buy medical book or not? 

15 minutes later.

Li Shi Ying and Jiu Wei arrived in front of an old-looking bookstore. The bookstore was very different with the one in Li Shi Ying previous world. The bookstore building was made with wood.

The inside, the floor was also made with wood. There were a lot of bookshelf and organized book displayed inside the store. It was a pity that the store didn't lit a lamp when it was still afternoon.

The only light you get is from sunlight and not all places inside the store get the light making some places looks dim and scary. Of course Li Shi Ying wouldn't feel scared at all with so many divine beast on her body.

Li Shi Ying browse through the bookshelf for a while and handed every book she like to Jiu Wei. From child story to many kind of novels, Li Shi Ying took any book that she found interesting.

The book here wasn't sealed by plastic so she could took a quick read and decide whether to buy the book or not. Well many shameless people only read the book they like and didn't buy it though.

30 minutes later.

Li Shi Ying arrive in front of a different bookshelf. This bookshelf was made with iron, not wood like any other bookshelf. There were a few table of display near the bookshelf too.

The thing that made Li Shi Ying interested was the name plate. On the bookshelf, there was a name plate like this. "Ancient Script".

Li Shi Ying had been very curious about what a script looks like. I mean the original one because the one she had seen before was a translated script not the original script.

Li Shi Ying took a piece of yellowish paper from the display table and with her curiosity, try to read it. She was curious to see a God language with her own eyes.

After reading the first word.

Li Shi Ying: ...

What? What is this? THIS IS GOD LANGUAGE???? Are you f*cking serious?! 

Li Shi Ying had the urge to laughed out loud and roll on the floor when she read the first word written on the paper.

Why? Because....because...GOD DAMN, IT IS WRITTEN IN ENGLISH! 

The so-called God language is actually English! The language that she studied in University and also the major she took.

Isn't this mean i'm a translator? BUAHAHAHHAHAHA!!! 🤣🤣😂😂😂
 i am a translator! 

Li Shi Ying laughed out loud in her heart with this realization. 

Li Shi Ying didn't expect it would be that easy for her to be a translator. She still thought that she couldn't be a translator whatsoever but now....

F*ck off people~ 

English is her major! Her speciality! There's no way she wouldn't be great in translating. 

Well it was indeed true that English is not her first language but she studied english...because she was an english education department student! 

Well it seems like she did have a cheat all this time.

Nah because she knew that she is a translator then she might as well buy all the original script in this store. She heard that translator made a lot of money, no? 

Li Shi Ying then thought in her heart. Would it seems suspicious if she bought all these original scripts? These scripts had been left behind because the number of translator were small. 

If she bought a lot now, the shopkeeper would know that she is a translator and it would create a commotion. She want to be low-key....what should she do...

Hmm...hmm....ah! i knew! i should just do 'that'!

COMPLETED SERIES

I'll find you even if we are worlds apart -Long Ao Zhen 

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Transmigrated into a trash body of general's daughter as female lead? Peh! Too mainstream! Transmigrated to be a villainess? Common! What about transmigrating and ending up as cannon fodder? Have read it before! 

From that many options to transmigrate how could she, Li Shi Ying a very ordinary English department college student, suddenly wake up in the crippled body of the female lead's ex-maidservant?! Heaven, this is too unfair! 

In this world where only the strong are respected, she can't cultivate? No problem! Dozens of high-rank spiritual beasts fight over protecting her! 

Beast Tamers are rare? Hmph! The beast language is her hometown language! 

Can't be an alchemist or array master? Who cares? She could just become a translator! Without a translator, all those rare jobs wouldn't even exist! 

Watch how she rules over the world without having a single bit of cultivation energy in her body! 

But, can someone please tell her how she suddenly became the Dragon Prince's wife? Momma, she wanna cry!!! 

This is a perfect story for those who are bored with the usual cultivation novel. 

Warning: Smut scene in chapters 7-9!! If you don't want to read it, just skip those chapters. 

If you like to read perfect grammar then this book might not be your cup of tea, but I'm still learning. So, it will become better in later chapters. 

Other project:
1. The CEO's Office Boy is a Girl (completed) 
2. 101 Days To Date Mr Target (coming soon) 

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Big thanks to my editors: Overlord_venus, Kuma, DarkAngel84

Proofreader: Lilian

The English novel begins behind bars, in extremis. Its first author, John Bunyan, was a Puritan dissenter whose writing starts with sermons and ends with fiction. His famous allegory, the story of Christian, opens with a sentence of luminous simplicity that has the haunting compulsion of the hook in a great melody. "As I walk'd through the wilderness of this world, I lighted on a certain place, where was a Denn; And I laid me down in that place to sleep: And as I slept I dreamed a Dream."
A "Denn" is a prison, and Bunyan wrote most of the book in Bedford county gaol, having been arrested for his beliefs during the "Great Persecution" of 1660-1690. He shares the experience of prison with Cervantes, who had the idea for Don Quixote while incarcerated in La Mancha. Like so many novels that follow in this list, The Pilgrim's Progress blends fact and fiction. As well as being the record of Bunyan's dream, a well-known fictional device, it is also an archetypal tale – a quest, fraught with danger. Christian's pilgrimage takes him through the Slough of Despond, Vanity Fair and the Delectable Mountains in a succession of adventures that keep the reader turning the page. With his good companions, Faithful and Hopeful, he vanquishes many enemies before arriving at the Celestial City with the line that still reverberates through the English literary tradition: "So he passed over, and all the trumpets sounded for him on the other side."

In Hollywood terms, the novel has a perfect "arc". It also contains a cast of unforgettable characters, from Mr Worldly Wiseman to Lord Hategood, Mr Stand-fast and Mr Valiant-for-Truth.
More profoundly, as an allegory of state repression, it has been described by the historian EP Thompson as one of the "foundation texts of the English working-class movement". Part of its uniquely English quality is a robust and engaging sense of humour that has cemented its appeal to generations of readers.

The Pilgrim's Progress is the ultimate English classic, a book that has been continuously in print, from its first publication to the present day, in an extraordinary number of editions. There's no book in English, apart from the Bible, to equal Bunyan's masterpiece for the range of its readership, or its influence on writers as diverse as William Thackeray, Charlotte Bronte, Mark Twain, CS Lewis, John Steinbeck and even Enid Blyton.

Huckleberry Finn speaks for many readers when, recalling his Mississippi education, he says: "There was some books too... One was 'Pilgrim's Progress', about a man that left his family it didn't say why. I read considerable in it now and then. The statements was interesting, but tough."

The story of a man in search of the truth is the plot of many kinds of fiction, fromPortnoy's Complaint to Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy. Like many of the writers in the list that follows, Bunyan had a wonderful ear for the rhythms of colloquial speech and his allegorical characters come to life in dialogue that never fails to advance the narrative. Story is one thing. The simple clarity and beauty of Bunyan's prose is something else. Braided together, style and content unite to make a timeless English classic.

This is the Author here and I would like to make some facts clear before you begin to read my work .

The Characters of this Novel are loosely based on Ancient Chinese History and on some of my favourite Wuxia Novels like those of the Legendary Master Louis Cha or Jin Yong as he was more popularly known. (  he is also the Godfather of 'Eastern Fantasy' , his counterparts in the west would be JRR Tolkien or CS Lewis ) 

While I am reimagining most of the characters in an entirely unique way I have kept some of the mythos associated with them intact since I feel that failing to do so would in fact be in a way , a heinous crime.

So yes most of the characters here are pretty famous and I do encourage you to read about them if you have the time so that you can enjoy this story to the fullest extent ( by the way their tales are a pretty fun read as well and are in a way the ancestors of the Original Webnovels that you are exposed to here !)

Jing Ke , the MC  here , was in reality somewhat of a Tragic Hero and many legends have been written about his failed assassination attempt on the then King Of Qin who went to become the legendary first Emperor who unified all of China (There have been a couple of movies as well including Hero (2002) , the Jet Li starrer which went into perform quite incredibly at the global stage !) , other characters such as Dongfang Bubai are pretty much household names and are now a part of folklore as much as say , Sun Wukong is .

For the convenience of the readers I have already published two chapters titled 'World Introduction'  and 'Character Introduction ' which make the settings of this world quite clear .

In the World Building I once again abundantly borrow from my seniors whether in the name of the various factions which figure prominently in several of the Wuxia (Martial Arts Stories) classics or in the name of the Regions (these are old names for the various regions of China and were quite popular up to the period of  Ming dynasty , and are standard now in many novels ) , the Hundred Schools of thought for example really existed during the era known as the Warring States period where they interfaced with the daily lives of many of the citizens.

Naturally I have given my own spin to these ancient organisations and have looked at them in a brand new light .

Regarding the Characters I have chosen to mention in the Introduction , these are the characters who figure prominently in the first few arcs of the story and there are naturally many more besides.Again to these celebrities who belong in the annals of history whether of the real or of the literary sections , I have unquestioningly remained faithful while reimagining them in a manner that I feel is quite interesting , which is why I felt the need to 'introduce' or more aptly 'reintroduce' them .

Also all things aside , I am just an University student here working on my English and felt that through the medium of writing not only can I bring alive some of the stories that make me so passionate still but also simultaneously improve my communication skills ; a double bonus !

 
PS  I hope that as readers , you are willing to offer your valuable suggestions so that I can improve on them straight away !

Cheerio !

Venerable_Truesoul

" What is with this partiality of fate treating some as sacred existences and others as worthless scum ?

Even though I am forced to walk beneath the moonlight I shall do it with a mesmerising smile on my face !

I shall be responsible for the Fall of Legendary Empires and the Damnation of the tormented !

In this world where night is eternal ; I shall be a shining pearl , my radiance overshadowing the Sun , the Moon and the Stars !

For I shall enchant the Heavens to dance in my palm !"


Jing Ke is a morose teenager who hasn't got much time left to live .

 After being entrusted by his dead father with an impossible mission which if completed shall offer him a slim possibility to live on he decides to take his destiny into his own hands. 

Racing against fate he sets off in a quest in a World which has long since been damaged beyond repair after being ravished by Egotistic Tyrants and Foul Abominations all in a bid to seek out the pinnacle of Martial Arts in order to devour the greatest tyrant of them all.

Author:Sorry for the poor English and grammar im still learning.And also im not really good at making novels yet but im sure to improved along with this story.Thanks for understanding! Enjoy!!

If some of you give me some help or advice for making my novel writting better i'd loved to be helped.Please contact me at my Gmail:Krilix1313@gmail.com

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Next day...

The crowd of people is gathered outside the inn where zyl and robin slept.They're saying goodbye to the man who rescued them.

"Comeone,i'm gonna visit here for a while this is not our last meeting"Zyl says.

"Youre always welcome here"village head says.

Rowi runs rushly to the crowd's direction.He thinks that zyl and robin already left.

"Hey whats with the rush?"

"Im glad i thought you already left"Rowi responded.

"What is that bag?"Zyl ask.

"Please,allow me to join you i really want to learn how to fight so someday i can be reliable enough to protect my village"Rowi pleaded.

"Hmm,hey robin whatyah think?"

"It's up to you"

"-sigh- Okay let's get going but promise me one thing."

"What is it? I'll do anything i can"

"Simple.Just be loyal to me"

"Yes im glad to be your follower,Thank you so much" 

"(He trust too easily)"

The three left the village and headed to Zyldorico's place.

After about an 6hours of walking they rested and picked fruits for malta.They sat down at the rocks to feel the fresh air and to rest their foots.

"Zyl,what are you planning to do after this?" robin ask.

"Hmmm, I want to travel the world"

"Travel the world??Do you mean exploring??"Rowi ask.

"I want to know the truth about what happend in the capital after the war and to find my siblings."

"Why? What for?"

"Well it's a long story"

"But we have time"

"Yeah yeah, okay i'll tell since you two are my comrades now"

Zyldorico told the story about the Uprising happend, That he is one of the former king's son and about his siblings.

"Whaaaaat!?!?"rowi and robin is shocked.

"So you are former prince??"

"Yeah yeah,But i dont care about title and previlages neither to become a king."

"I feel sorry for you i heard that your parents died in that day"

"It still hurts but it already happened we cannot take time back.Most important is now and the future"

"Is it true that in the midst of war fearsome creatures like Damogas and Chintarus invade the capital that lead to the sucess of rebellions??

"I dont know, Before the war reaches the capital city some of Royal guards took us to different locations,That why we are all separated."

"Damogas and Chintarus is just legends right?"Rowi ask.

"I had a book from my great great grandpa, I read the whole book it says there that creatures like them are real and walked elerthia."Robin responded.

"I'd love to see them im person"rowi commented.

"Man,you'll gonna regret it"Zyl says with a  grin smile.

"I feel sorry for your past,But i heard that the former king was wise and a great Leader of elerthia.I never been in the Capital city before"robin says.

"Me too im living in a remote area and were to far from the capital"Rowi added.

"Come on let's not talk about the past already.Hahaha"Zyl added with smile in the face.

"But promise us tell some of this stories from your past.It's interesting and we want to know more about your siblings"Robin ask.

"Yeah i swear"Zyl answered with a smile in his face."


TO BE CONTINUED.....

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Author:Sorry for the poor English and grammar im still learning.And also im not really good at making novels yet but im sure to improved along with this story.Thanks for understanding! Enjoy!!

Zyldorico the 4th son of the former king began his journey finding his siblings that separated during the Great war by the Rebellions.He inherit one of the Dark Emperor’s power but not aware of the consequences.Upon the journey he will cross with the Powerful foes from the Emperial kingdom together with his siblings they plan to End the Ancient war that yet to be reborn in the present.But when the past began to unfold they will realise whom they dealing with.

Will they able to reclaim the throne and right all the wrong doings of the evils? Will they able to bring the justice to all of the victims?
Or they will be swallowed by the Dark Emperor’s power??

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