A brain storming session were my readers can comment on my ideas with their own suggestions

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Elaina was thoughtful for a moment when she was inside her apartment, and sitting by her desk and ready to rewrite her story into the new book she bought with her new fantasy-like pen.

She looked around at the various papers with drawings, pictures, and story notes about her story that is placed beside and around her on the desk, with a distant gaze on her face, and her mind is full of thoughts and ideas running inside her head before she started to write.

She made sure that everything subjective from her previous written story is the same in the new rewritten one.

*****

Everything starts with a unique yet mysterious beginning.

And this is one world that came to be.

The world of Eden.

And therein that world lies one single massive and large continent, surrounded by a vast ocean known as Seanoace.

In this continent, it is divided into five nations, one in the center and the middle of it is the main capital called the Alanova Capital. It is the nation where only the cities and towns of the world population's civilization are.

Also surrounding the capital is a very dark thick forest known as Nekrad Secdur. It's also called as the 'Cursed Dark Forest'.

On the north is known as Baseat, where it is a region and land of rocky mountains.

On the south is Evelan, a grand land of thick greenery and forests.

On the west are Evitan, a hot region of sands and blazing deserts.

And finally on the last nation at the east, is Erivam. A foggy covered land filled with shrouded mists and darkness.

This Eden world is unlike any other world you would ever encounter.

At least not in reality.

For this world is another world full of fantasy and magic.

For this world, there is only not just humans populating it.

There are also elves, dwarves, beast-people, shapeshifters, dhampirs, vampires, merpeople, and lots more of these magical beings and mythical creatures.

All light and dark types, the magic users and non-magic users, and the sentient and non-sentient beings.

Although these many races live or travel in different places among the five nations of the continent of Eden.

Each of the nations had the various residents that live permanently in them.

For the human race, they live in Alanova Capital.

In Baseat in the north region, there lived the beast-people and the dwarves.

In Evelan at the south, there lived the elves, dryads, and nymphs.

In Erivam at the east, there lived the dhampirs, vampires, and dark creatures.

In Evitan at the west, there lived the wild and native-like humans, and shape-shifters.

In the oceans surrounding the continent, there lived the water beings like merpeople and such creatures like that.

Finally, on the forest known as Nekrad Secdur that surrounds Alanova Capital, there lived the darkest type of creatures, like shadow monsters or demon-like terrifying beings that lurk and hide in the cursed dark forest.

This is the world--the world of Eden.

A fantastical magical and also mysterious and mythical world, unlike any other worlds you might know or encounter.

A world where your heart's desires and dreams come true.

And also a world where your worst nightmares and darkest fears come to life.

But in this grand world, this is the place that you surely want to see.

And this is how it all started.

With the origins and births of the fantastical races, its energy of magic, and the most astounding object and heart of it all that had borne the continent of Eden.

This object is known to be called…the Fiery Blade.

And here is how it all begins.

Enter into the world of Eden--if you wish or dare to.

*****

Between writing and giving herself a break, Elaina edited and rewrites everything and making sure that she didn't miss out on any blank pages to write down notes while writing out all contents in her story.

Just as Elaina stretched her arms up and do some home aerobic exercises for a few minutes of her break, she didn't notice that all of her notes and writings into the new book started glowing like a magic as if to etch permanently into the pages.

By the time she had finished doing whatever relaxing exercises she needed to relieve her fatigue, the glowing instantly stopped and the book seemed to look normal again.

Then Elaina sat down again and continued on writing, oblivious and unknowing over the sudden strange happenings that are occurring near her.

After the time had gone by so fast in a passing blur, including the break time to eat meals or relax her mind shortly and then continue writing, it was already late at night and Elaina was so surprised on seeing the time as she turned to look at it.

She instantly stopped writing, as she decides to be done for the day and then continues on the next one tomorrow to the book of her new story.

She closed the book with the pen inside as a bookmark and then she sighed as if instantly exhausted from what she's doing as she went off to change her clothes into sleeping ones and go to sleep.

As she goes into her bed and snuggles under her comfy blankets, Elaina didn't know that her fantasy imaginative story will become changed in a way that she will not expect.

And she wouldn't know it until it came straight at her like a speeding truck out of nowhere upon trying to cross a street.

Just as Elaina drifted off into a peaceful and heavy-dreamless slumber, the book glowed again, brighter than before and the new pen she used also glowed as well inside it as if the two items' magic are responding to their writer's heart's desires and wishes when she wrote about the story of the world of Eden.

*****

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Get magically transported into another world!
There are Romance, Fantasy and Adventure! 

*****

A Modern Author, Elaina Raine was rejected by her first-time fantasy novel from other editors because of its lacking content and low rating. 

Not giving up on her writing dreams, she worked on improving it when she got caught in a massive fire accident.

As she was struck by the fiery blazing inferno, thinking that she's going to die with unfinished business and regrets in her old life, she wakes up in a new one, reincarnated into another world.

Specifically, the fantasy world of her own novel!

Now she discovers that she's reborn as Arteria Blaze, the heroine of her story!

As she goes through a long journey, battles, and adventures, and finding friends, allies, even Love, she wonders whether she should stay in the world of her fantasies and dreams, or find a way back and return to her reality.

Follow this amazing story of a Modern woman reincarnated into the heroine of her story, who wields the FIERY BLADE

*****

"How did this happen?! How did I suddenly reincarnated into the hero of my fantasy story? This is not possible!" The main character says.

"You're the chosen one. You wield the Fiery Blade. Only you can save our world!" One of her characters said.

"..."

This is the greatest fantasy story you would ever read in your lifetime.
Read the FIERY BLADE.
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This book is a work of fiction.
The characters and events depicted in this spectacle are fictitious.
Any resemblance to actual persons or other book characters, events, places, historical, living or dead is purely coincidental and imaginative only.
All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduce in any form without permission of the author, except who may quote brief passages in a review.
Foreword;
There might be grammatical errors and typos along the way. And I'm hoping for your kind consideration and cooperation.
I wrote this on my journal way back 2016 and published it on Wattpad year 2017.
So at that stage my writing was really really a fetus one.
I am currently in MAJOR editing and revision. 
To sum it up, I drafted all the chapters in this novel to edit and finalize.
And I would like to appreciate your concern in a good way to better of my writing but I also like blocking rude people saying stuffs if that's the case. I am kind to others if they're kind to me too.
Treat people with kindness.
Also some contents are not suitable for ages below 18. Read at your own risk.
Images and other ideas in this book will be link at the last chapter as references. All credentials are belong to the rightful owner.
This is the Book 1 of "Chronicles Of HIRAWEI".
Let midnights be the guidance on your dark path to reach the moon for light.
No more so called names i'm just, the MIDNIGHTÓWLER (mid-nayt-aw-ler).
Date Written: Midsummer 2016
Date Published: 12/26/17
Date Ended: ??

It started in midsummer where magic rarely appears.

A struggle between human and nature by combining man-made structures with Elementals, Charms, Flora and Fauna, all coexisting in a forced, urban manner.

The only way you'll see is the Solitary Tree on a serene grassland alongside an old train railway.

5 Kingdoms, 4 Renoigs and 1 Academy in a world called; HIRAWEI.

It is only a matter of time before the human settlement expands above the surface or invades the water.

What could be waiting for you in there?

Do you ever come back in time? or you'll have to see, to discover.

You destined your destination! welcome to your stop.


The Owl Phases (Chronicles Of HIRAWEI #1)
Genre: Speculative Fiction
Language: Filipino, English
WRITTEN BY MIDNIGHTOWLER, 2017

Hi everyone... I'm Nim,the author. First things first, I would love to thank you'll for stopping by. I am a rookie in this writing world. Sorry if you're getting bored but I thought a little self introduction would be good. 
This is my first and foremost writing gig. So please.. please support me and my work. This is actually the best platform for new cookie like me to show my work. I was encouraged by my friends and teachers to write. They were impressed by my essays which I used to write during my school days. They used to tell me that my plots and themes were creative and imaginative but now all that matters is your viewpoints and opinions. My grammar is weak so please bear with it. I don't know why but as I'm writing this I'm feeling very nervous.... I would happily accept any type of reviews and feedback..
Now moving on to the novel,
This novel is not like the sterotypical one. Unlike other novels there are no one night stand,r*p*,ship wreckage,ex and ofcourse the famous stepmother and step siblings. This is mainly about the growth of the charecters both individually and together. There is a lot of passion and affection involved here. There's a hint of spiciness with lots of faceslapping moments and.... heat ;-) ;-).. Well no story is complete without some bitches and we have a few of them here accompanied by a bunch of mad dogs... 
I'll be using a lot of Chinese references even though I'm not a Chinese because why not you know going with the flow. So, please don't get offended. Many things here are going to be imaginative.
I hope this novel can bring some positivity and joy in your lives and ease your tensions. I'll try to update it as much as possible... but I can't guarantee anything because I'm still a university student.
Aaahh I thought I will eventually leave this stupid thoughts of mine till here but the word limit is too much so I'll introduce you'll to the charecters-:

1. Irene Tan - She's our 23 year old female lead. A breathtakingly beautiful intelligent woman with a high IQ of 190 is the heiress of the Tan Corporation a multimillion dollar company related to fashion. She also owns various high class stores and started her own brand named BLISS... She's a mystery as no one has ever seen her.. Though highly pampered and loved by her family, she's very down-to-earth. She enjoys living a normal life. She can be alluring, bewitching, gentle, playful, foxy, cold and terrifying depends on which situation she's dealing with.

2. Zhao Neil - The devilishly handsome CEO of the Zhao Conglomerate,the richest and the most powerful corporation of the country. A genius in technology. He is 25. Those who mess with him will suffer his demonic wrath. Though he keeps to himself, he's a very sensitive and caring being. Will kill anyone who will touch the people whom he love. And yes.... he might be a beast in you know where... ;-)...

I hope this little insight will keep you'll intrigued. Let's enjoy this novel together.. Thanks again readers...
Love XOXO
Nim.

She is a bewitching beauty who lures everyone in a mysterious way. A kind soul who brings joy everywhere she goes. But BEWARE..... If you dare mess with her, she will show you her cold and foxy side.

He is the most successful and powerful CEO of the country. Though young, he is rough and strong who stays to himself. He is devilishly handsome but has a sensitive and caring heart.

The cute little bun is loved by both of them. He is their strength as well as weakness, a weakness that makes them more stronger.

What will happen next? A strong woman meets a powerful man. A cute kid. Faceslapping scenes. Power Couple. 
Let's embark on a journey together to see what holds in the future for them.


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I'm a new cookie in writing world so please support me. I would happily accept reviews and feedback.Thank You. And this story I've posted in other novel and comic reading writing app too( just one app).. So please don't get mistaken because I'm that same person. The entire story is my own point of view.

Warning - There are some violent scenes(like sex, fights and killing) and a lot of mature dialogues. Content suitable for 17+ readers only.

The cover is not mine. There might be some grammar mistakes so please cope up with me. Please give this novel one chance. I'm sure you'll will like it. Thank You.

Hello people, first off I just want you to know that this is my first time writing something. So if you have any complaints or something wrong with my writing or grammar or anything like that just tell me. 
Note:
If you don't like it or if you think it bad or something, just tell and I will understand. 
To me, the comments or pointing out any mistakes I have made is a good thing to me. 
It will help me make and correct my novel for you guys.

So anyway, the novel I'm making is still a work in progress. With all the rewriting and making of the story and everything. You understand right? Anyway, as for the updateing? eh for now, one chapter a week. 

But soon, the updates will be one chapter a day. But for now, I have to go slow, so I hope your patient enough because the first one I'll be making will take a while.

So, a little rundown, this story usese the Frankenstein story and put it into modern time London. With a some comedy and a bit of reality in there. 

You see, some of the thing like the places and the names are made up. But some of them, like the questions and the answers are real. As for comedy well, who dosen't like to laugh once in a while.

As for fantasy, my mind is that imaginative enough for that. If you're thinking about romance, the thing is I don't really like Romance. But if you wanted it thenjust say it and I'll put some in there. Though it will make me sick to my stomach, I won't deny your requests.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy my novel and have a great time

Thank You


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You probably heard of this before. About a doctor who wanted to help people by defining death and play god.

To save lives by any means necessary. He wanted to create life from nothing and he did, but as you know already it failed. Miserably too. Then that said doctor, disappeared.

And the hunched back, never heard of again either. But the story I'm going to tell you happened in a more modern time, with a bit more excitment. And it all starts with a car on the road and a family in it, and the boy who will change the world as we know it.

This a story of a boy, he was normal kid with a normal life. Until that day when everything he had was gone. 

After losing everything he cared about he was put in an orphanage. A week after that, he put on a table and blacked outed. 

When he woke up he was outside where he narrowly escaped from the garbage incinerator he was in. After a few years of living on the streets he was saved by a man who helped him, gave him a life and a purpose again.

Later that boy made a life of his own it was living peacefully and normally. Until one day he was given an opportunity that he couldn't turn down. 

After completing the task of his that he wanted for so long he finally saw when he has done was wrong.

After leaving, he went back to his normal life as if nothing happened. But just when he thought he when back to his normal life again, the people who hired him wanted to make sure he never talked about what happened.

After surviving against armies of armed soldiers and the government assassins, he tries to figure out who is and, what happened to him when he was at the orphanage when he blacked out. 

And as he dose that, he also hunts down everyone who wants him dead.

After getting all of that done, he decided to split all characters into 'factions' that will persist throughout the story. This way, he could keep track on what group of characters are doing what.

Considering this was a story about 'death', might as well give it the theme about overcoming yourself. When a hero continuously faces insurmountable odds, it becomes the tale about staying strong even when the odds are stacked against you. He loved those kind of characters who never give up. Those with a rigid personality.

But before going into the complex stuff, he first decided to visualise the story within his head.

Since outside in this world is literally 'Dead Lands' everywhere, with even out of space not being safe for travel, he decided to place the main character within the bounds of the 'Aries Colony', making him relatable by first putting forth ordinary traits.

Since this colony had a distinct Japanese vibe, he decided to make it so everyone wore eastern clothing in this place. Now, was to think of what these people would consider to be 'normal'.

Since outside equals death and dead people equals monsters that cause death, there needed to be a way for there to be some sort of 'order' in this society whether it was morally wrong or correct.

He could leave the place as 'ordinary' if he wanted to, but mundane things weren't exciting for him.

So in the end: He chose to write a Medicine Journey out of the colony to 'cure' the world.

Unlike the Hero's Journey which was a template for writing a specific breed of heroic protagonists, he chose to do a Medicine Journey like that of Journey To The West to give him creative freedom.

There were three stages of the Medicine Journey:
1. A problem exists which our ordinary understanding of the world cannot solve.
2. The protagonist must travel elsewhere to find the solution and search for the answers himself
3. He returns back with the solution in hand. (The reason this is called the 'Medicine' Journey.)

The 'ordinary understanding of the world' needed to accept magic and be kinda dark, but not edgy to the point that the readers will be cut by it. There needed to be a balance between light and dark.

Therefore, he decided to add a plot device that would serve as an explanation to why people aren't scared their old parents will turn into Dark Muse upon death as well as why they aren't dead yet.

In the Magic System of his previous story, he had already established a system where the 'life' of a human was split into four parts. This being: Soul, Heart, Mind, and Flesh. In that order from what is considered ethereal and what isn't touchable.

The 'Four Fundamental Internal Forces' was his own take on spiritual concepts which was different from the 'Spirit, Mind, and Body' variant where they depict the Anatomy of the Soul. Rather than constraining his system to normal limits, he decided to split the aspects of a person's existence and acknowledge that the soul wasn't the only part of the person that mattered in the story.

To explain this concept, it is better to talk about what is considered 'Life Energy' in the story first.

It is what it sounds like: The energy and life force all humans need to be 'living'. Without it, the body would fall apart just like a house with nothing holding together the bricks that lay its foundation.

Among all the energies, Life Energy was the most important. It is what exists in a person before the so-called 'Four Fundamental Internal Forces'. The normal people of Earth before the apocalypse happened didn't even need the latter at first.

Using the events of the previous story as his stepping stone, he noted down a few things:

{Qi Centre- Android Realm/ Gifts, Spirit Guise}

As those with 'Gifts' and those who can use Imaginative Spirits are the only people who can manipulate 'Life Energy', it was important to establish this power early on in the story.

As for why he added the word 'Realm', it could be explained later when it had more relevance.

Taking inspiration from both eastern and western concepts, he made it so Life Energy (Qi) would also be incorporated into technology. This way, it could explain why Dark Muses hadn't attacked them yet.

By putting 'Nether Qi' (what Hunters use through forged Nethersteel Weapons) and 'Life Qi' (what is used for technology) on opposing sides, he could explain why there's a dissonance in the tools humanity uses in the future. A very craft idea.

By making Dark Muses those forgotten or downright disturbing Imaginative Spirits as those brought forth using Nether Qi before feeding off and digesting Life Qi, he gave them a motive.

And by adding the apology of how too much Life Qi can kill them but they can devour Life Qi they have personally 'digested', he made it possible to explain why they are scared of 'Qi Technology' but not humans with Qi (Life Energy) within their bodies.

It's like saying that Dark Muses like 'sweets' but can turn ill if it's in too high concentrations.

The reason he added the words 'Android Realm' was because he wanted a world where robots could have Life Energy as well, which blurred the lines between what is 'authentic life' and fake.

It was to the point that he added a tale that was unable to fit in his previous story about an Android built by a great Internal Martial Artist as well as Engineer who died in a tragic tale of love.

The story of the Mag-E Project, AKA the Android named Maggie Smith, the 'Perfect Aphrodite' (A reference to a Greek Goddess), and successful creation of an important character of his previous story, Trisha Smith. It was a long story...

But to put it bluntly, in the martial arts 'family' of his previous main character was a relative called Rex Nocturne who was promptly Isekai'd into another world as a teen, but his departure left the Android his main character's mother made for Rex stay on Earth, sinking deep into existential despair.

She was created as an Android that was perfectly suited for any Male, and acted as such. When the events of his previous story made the Secret Martial Arts Society of Earth in his previous work disband, he was secretly thinking of writing a short story about how she revitalised this secret society using her charms and wit before he left her.

Stuck with the present she was going to gift to her beloved 'owner' before he left her, she accidentally became Queen of the Martial World. Now that he ended that story with a 'connection' forming between that Other World her owner had allowed himself to be summoned to, he could now give her more characterisation or even make her the Final Obstacle, who they had to defeat to end the story.

He remembered a few myths and noted down, the myths regarding Aphrodite's origins came to mind.

It was of the Mesopotamian Goddess, Ishtar:

{Ishtar/Inanna- Goddess of Love, Sex, War, Beauty, Political Power, Desire, Combat, Justice/ Becomes Queen of Heaven after taking in the House of Heavens as part of her domain, also known as the Temple of Eanna. Her father, the Supreme God Anu, who represented the universe itself in Mesopotamian religion, allowed her to become the Mistress of Heaven and patron Goddess to Uruk.}

The names alternated from Queen to Mistress of Heaven depending on translation. He wasn't sure how accurate this was, but what he was writing was essentially fan-fiction anyway. It didn't have to be factually right as long as he got the key points.

{She once sent the Bull of Heaven to fight for her after her proposal to Demigod, Gilgamesh, failed.

There was a shift in worship from Anu to Ishtar as she become the central figure of the religion.

Stole seven artefacts from the God of human culture (Ea) which governed over: Truth, Victory, Law, Kingship, Writing, Weaving, etc. Before giving them to a nation called Uruk (Mesopotamian City).

Ishtar's visit to see her husband (who she loved) ends badly and Erishgikal traps her. Ea saves her.

Enki, also known Ea, a God of fresh water and wisdom, creates Asushunamia (Lady Killer, Gender Binary, Cursed to be an outcast by Ereshgikal, Gift of Healing and Prophesy given by Ishtar.)}

The notes he wrote afterwards were based on the poems and legends she partook in. In her tale that with the Mesopotamian King of Uruk, she was a spiteful instigator that caused Gilgamesh to lose a dear friend. As for her journey into the Mesopotamian Underworld known as Kur, she was only able to escape with Asushunamia's help.

Without him, she would be stuck there forever. He also wasn't sure if she made him her lover or not.

Anyway, Ishtar was probably the original version of Aphrodite before people altered her and split her apart into the things they wanted to worship separately in Rome. Who was then split further since different regions had different cultures.

The Roman Empire even having a habit of mixing together religious figures for the sake of saying that they were the same and absolutely not plagiarised whatsoever. This made it harder to tell right from wrong in a lot of myths from there.

What was a happy coincidence was that she also had a sister, Ereshgikal, who had a high affinity in his story since she ruled over the Underworld and was sometimes confused with Persephone.

Now he had a lot of ways to draw connections~

Then he moved onto what she had been transformed into sometime after when certain things she ruled over became popular. They then formed together into a new Goddess worshipped by a cult who really, really liked these things.

[Astarte- Goddess of Fertility, Sex, War, Venus}

This was the new name she got before she came to Greece and became a member of the Greek Pantheon of dudes who had way too much free time and fickle woman who screwed people over.

And from there she turned into:

{Aphrodite- Goddess of love, beauty, pleasure, passion and procreation/ Created a lot of chaos}

It was funny how everything turned full circle and finally arrived to the monicker of the Android he was thinking of writing about. It was then he had realised a problem occurred as he realised that if he gave her Aphrodite's Spirit Guise, he would also have to give her several more Spirit Guises that would relate to Ishtar and Astarte. This would essentially make her too overpowered as a fighter.

The only option he could come up with was split the characters to fit into their respective orders.

He looked around on the Internet to find anything that could be used to help, and found inspiration:

{Derived Goddesses with the Aphrodite name:
Areia ver. Victorious Conflicts (Politics/War)
Urania ver. Celestial Love (Pure/Spiritual)
Pandemos ver. Carnal Love (Taboo/Bodily)
Venus Genetrix ver. Fertility (Motherhood)}

These were the four Goddesses that had been derived from Aphrodite and even had her name.

Since the Android he named Maggie Smith (A play on the 'Mag-E Project' name and inherited her surname from her Creator) wasn't Human yet had Life Energy (Qi), now he could split up her power.

{Ishtar was the Imaginative Spirit she used in her prime when she was lording over the Martial World.

After experiencing tragic heartbreak, she split her powers into 4 Androids based on Internal Forces.

Their names are Moxie (Soul), Beatrice (Heart), Pure (Mind), and Helen (Flesh). All of them are not self-aware like Maggie Smith but they contain aspects of her personality and are part of her.

After losing her will to live, she 'starts over' by reaching the limits of the Power System she herself created and in the end: Was able to birth a child despite having no partner or embryo inside her.}

The last part was pretty funky but wasn't exactly as bad as it sounded. To explain what was the difference between a normal human having a child and HER having one, it needed to be elaborated that she was a creation of a human being.

Since she wasn't a Human herself and couldn't nurture her own skills and techniques like someone who could grow older with age, her abilities and skills were based off the person who created her.

{Demigod Android- Maggie Smith (Aphrodite)}

The reason he called her a 'Demigod' was because to him, this character had already reached limits beyond what a 'mere' Android could achieve. She was the only existence of his story that started with nothing and also ended up with nothing...

She was a tragic existence who only served the purpose of evoking sympathy, the perfect material for a Final Boss! Her Qi Centre was also out of this world as he even gave it a different name.

(God Matrix- Yin, Death, Moon, Evil (7 Deadly Sins), Sun, Holy (4 Imperial Virtues), Yang, Wood}

The 'God Matrix' was what held her Life Energy which kept her existence stable. As for the Attributes he wrote after it, they were the key powers that Trisha 'installed' into Maggie.

Though the results weren't as strong as giving her control over these Attributes. Instead, they served as cornerstone to help her maintain Maggie's body which was made from a nanotechnology which wove millions of 'mechanical cells' into one body.

He created Maggie to be Trisha's masterpiece that perfectly utilised technology to create a robot which was a remarkable counterfeit of a human being. Thus, why she was called an 'Android' rather than a Cyborg with living humanoid body parts.

The skills passed onto her were as follows. As they were carved into Maggie's body upon creation:

{Soul Skill- Charming Spirit
Heart Skill- Tempting Allure
Mind Skill- Mental Seizing
Physique Skill- Pheromone Sweat}

These four skills were based off Trisha's own techniques as an Internal Martial Artist, but it would be weird if she could use these abilities without drawback even if they were non-combative in nature. That's why he gave her more 'support'.

The Four Fundamental Internal Forces had their own 'sources' that needed to be formed by a Qi Centre. Without it, they wouldn't be able to utilise these energies whatsoever. The same could be said for Life Energy if their Qi Centre was broken.

The 'Ki Meridians' all over the body were used to strengthen the flesh, 'Psion Circuits' in the brain were used to improve calculations, 'Aura Gates' could be used by talented figures to express their emotions, and 'Chakra Roots' expelled spiritual energy that could be moulded into very familiar attacks. These were considered 'Lower Forces'.

Above these Lower Internal Bodily Forces were the great 'Higher Forces' that contained Life Energy (Qi) rather than just being a derivative of it. They were normally catalysts for great techniques that those at the Grandmaster level could utilise.

The Spirit Root, Glyph Gate, Cyber Circuit, and Power Meridians, were what they were called.

Going back to her Attributes, the reason he made Trisha implant the Yin, Evil, Holy, and Yang Attributes into Maggie was because they also held great narrative importance to the Magic System.

Unlike the other Attributes, these four originated from the human body before becoming an Attribute, thus they were able to 'complete' her masterpiece, helping it keep itself stable.

{Spirit Skill- Conceived Soul 
Glyph Skill- Emotional Heart
Cyber Skill- Clear Mind
Power Skill- Nurtured Body}

She incorporated counterfeit Higher Forces made from her own personal technological advances and turned them into 'Skills' that would help give Maggie her own self-awareness.

The ominous 'Conceived Soul' was from her own womb, the 'Emotional Heart' was pieced together using her Aura, the 'Clear Mind' was created from an Artificial Intelligence, and the 'Nurtured Body' was from allowing a fetus created from 'mechanical cells' grow into a body Maggie could use. He made Trisha pour blood and sweat into creating her.

Normally, this would be the end of her limited array of abilities, but through her own ingenuity, she was able to create her own Power System similar for how Humans always did on Earth in his universe.

Since Life Energy itself didn't have to be confined by universal laws, he made it so only the people using this energy had to put restrictions on it in order to 'Rank Up' into more powerful existences.

With Skills based off Lower Forces and Higher Forces, she already had the strength of a Grandmaster Martial Artist. That's why he allowed her to gain two more Ranks based on preference.

He had already established 'Avatars' (Entities that were like ethereal ghosts that stood by the user like a Stand) as something Internal Martial Artists gained in his previous story. Therefore, he added the other Attributes into a Macguffin that the protagonists will need to find in the Medicine Journey in order to fix the Nightmarish World.

{Skill Avatar- Perfected Goddess}

As Maggie had an artificial 'Death Attribute' installed into her before it was broken, allowing them to attain this would allow them to walk a step closer towards saving the world. He hadn't decided why it was relevant but it was enough for now. 

Since he already decided Androids would be inhuman entities based off of Humans, why not add other creatures into the mix? He wasn't even sure if he'd add them to the story but at least he'd widen the world in case he wanted to add them.

{Chakra Root- Phantom Realm/ Domain, Mould
Aura Gate- Homunculi Realm/ Intent, Illusion
Psion Circuits- Echo Realm/ Focus, Numeracy
Ki Meridians- Mutant Realm/ Weightshift, Harden
(Make sure they interact with the world by giving something humans can use first, useful or not.)}

What they were didn't need much explaining, the only thing that was important was that he created new beings who could act as 'aliens' in this Magic-Science-Fiction-esque sequel of his. Then he decided to separate the others as 'Keys' the main characters needed to find before they could get the 'Skill Avatar- Perfected Goddess'.

Maybe even make them the rulers of the new species that were created by him at that moment.

{Phantom Android- Moxie (Urania)
Soul Crystal- Chakra Drain (Yin, Death)
Soul Skill- Telepathy
Soul Skill- Telekinesis
Soul Skill- Astrallisation
Soul Skill- Psychokinesis
Skill Avatar- Ghostly Undead}

(Homunculus Android- Beatrice (Areia)
Heart Proxy- Aura Drain (Moon, Evil)
Heart Skill- Synthesis
Heart Skill- Alchemy
Heart Skill- Curse (Poisoning)
Heart Skill- Ruin (Corruption)
Skill Avatar- Fiendish Magi}

(Echo Android- Pure (Venus Genetrix)
Mind Chip- Psion Drain (Sun, Holy)
Mind Skill- Augmentation
Mind Skill- Mechanisation
Mind Skill- Bless (Healing)
Mind Skill- Purge (Purification)
Skill Avatar- Sentinel Guardians}

{Mutant Android- Helen (Pandemos)
Flesh Mutation- Ki Drain (Yang, Wood)
Body Skill- Reinforcement
Body Skill- Symbiosis
Body Skill- Empowerment
Body Skill- Metamorphosis
Skill Avatar- Elven Hollow}

The first two skills of every one of these Androids beings advanced versions of Lower Force techniques and the latter two were straight up powers from the Attribute that they grow into. 

The Higher Forces for each of them was just an advanced version of whatever 'source' their power originated from just like how Qi Centre became God Matrix in Maggie's hands after installation. All of them possessing the capabilities to drain.

Next, was to move on to how the mythologies already present would take form in her 'daughter'.

The story is the third entry in the trilogy of Battlefield Restart but is being written as the direct sequel instead. The events of Battlefield Restart 2- An Adventure Beyond Greatness, are contained so there isn’t much to be missed by skipping it.

This novel is about an Author being sent into the nightmarish world he writes due to his destiny. The main character of BR 2 appears but isn’t focused on much, as this is about the Omniscient Writer’s story.

Vol. 0 is skippable and isn’t essential to the story as a whole. Only something there for extra info.

This is my very first novel. So, the chapters will be short. *winces* Sorry about that...



I would like to make a few things clear to all my future readers...

First off, my home language isn't English. So there will be some grammar mistakes. I try to fix as many as I can, but they'll still be there. "Oh boy, now they're going kill me...", *clears throat* R-r-right, on to the next point.

I started writing because I love stories and I have a lot of ideas stuck in my mind. When I was younger, playing with my dolls helped me to get the stories out of my mind. But since I gave my dolls away, I got stuck with stories always in my mind. So I thought to myself "what the heck, I'll just write these ideas down" And so my ideas gradually started to form a story.

I also started to take my writing a bit more serious because I would like to improve my writing skills. I ask that if you come across a mistake I made to please point it out. That way, it helps me to learn from my mistakes and write better.

I've recently started to draw my own pictures for my story. All pictures used in the story are my own. I'm not very good at drawing but it's fun and helps me to actually see the world I created with my own eyes.  So I hope you'll like them even with their many flaws! :-)

Also, I'm a grade 11 student and I'm writing in my spare time. Thus my story is progressing very slowly. *sniffle*



I kindly ask you to bear with me.

Please let me know what you think in the comments. (Plus, seeing some comments will help to keep me motivated)

Well, I hope that you'll like my novel!

The Shadow Forest is a beautiful, peaceful place...on the outside. But a danger has been lurking in its shadows for a long time. 

A prophecy: A hero will rise to defeat the evil with a weapon no man can wield. 

Within the Shadow Forest, twelve years ago, a tragedy shaped the future of a young woman. Now, alone, broken and moulded by the hardships of life, she lives in the cursed forest, trying to keep others from nearing the Death Bridge - the place where bodies disappear and screams of horror echo. 

But in her veins, an ancient power stirs.

She meets a curt, handsome, white-haired warrior and a bandit with a frightening physique and a soft heart. Learning of the prophecy, the trio sets off on a danger-filled path to save the kingdom.

They will face mysterious creatures, fight fierce battles and uncover terrifying secrets all while emotional struggles follow them like shadows.  

What will prevail? Light or darkness? Love or sadness?



(Keep in mind that this story is purely fictional...also, some things may be based on different mythologies)

*This book contains some mild violence*


Update schedule: 1 chapter per week

everyone, I am sorry but I have decided to drop this story, for good. I don't see a point in writing it anymore, I don't have the time either, I could spend the time I write this doing more useful things.
This story was meant to spread ideas and all but now I feel like it has turned into wish-fulfillment, I don't like where it is heading.
if anyone feels like it could have been better or achieved something, you can rewrite or continue the story with the image in your mind and post it on your profile I don't care about it. 
I will continue writing my original (A Journey to Eternity) and post chapters once in a while.
As for other reasons that I dropped it:
1. Writing fanfiction has no use for me personally, I originally wanted my ideas to be known and my writing skills to improve with writing this and since it clearly is not anymore then I will stop.
2. the very Few retarded Readers out there. there is a simple way to say this if you don't like a story then stop reading it, nobody cares about your opinion, don't share it. it will make the Author's mood gloomy no matter the person and result in him dropping the story, especially fanfiction because most Author's don't make money out of it and are most likely writing it out of passion and admiration for the original story or a character or etc. you ruin this feeling by flaming them, if you wanna share your opinion speak with logic and reason and help the Author become better by giving your opinion/advice in a respectful manner, I can go into a long discussion about this matter but lets stop it here.
3. the point of every story is to teach us how to be better, Romance at love and understanding the opposite sex, sci-fi at science and possible future of our technology, anime and things like that help open your mind and creativity sometimes they teach useful life lessons too, I can go on and on about this. my fanfic didn't have that feeling to it, any story that teaches nothing useful to its readers is just wasting the reader's time, it may make the reader feel good but in fact, is ruining their life by wasting their time for nothing. Having fun reading is not the most important part of it, the most important part is to learn and evolve. Wish-fulfillment stories have only two uses that I can think of, making the reader feel good about himself and heal some psychological problems, I don't wanna sin like that against people who support my story.
4. The problem with Webnovel's system is the fact that it forces you to have the feeling to write, I don't know how it does this but I reached a point where I couldn't stop writing, this caused alarm bells to ring in my mind and it made me rethink writing Fanfic. this could be only me though because when I don't write in Webnovel it causes me to feel this pressure to post a chapter.
that is pretty much it, I don't want to waste any more of your precious time so this is it.
Don't waste any more spirit stones on this Fanfic, it is dead for good.
If you enjoyed this Story, Check out my A journey to Eternity, I am trying to write a unique Xianxia story, I suggest you read it when it hits 30 chapters because till then I am considering how the plot and ending should turn out, what information and teachings I want it to share with the reader and etc.
THE END.

A teenager complained to god because living on the earth was so restricting and there existed no adventures or anything interesting in the world except entertainment like anime, games, movies, etc. 
"I wish I could go on an adventure like those fantasies and be a godlike character". 
A God took pity on him, Granted him his wish not knowing that in the future it shall cause unimaginable chaos.
(MC will awaken in warring states era (Naruto) as Madara Uchiha's supposedly dead younger brother, Akihiro Uchiha)

It is unfortunate, or maybe most fortunate, but I am putting this story on ice, probably permanently. I had said that the last volume, volume 6, is going to be the last, and while I was almost done with it, with only a few chapters left in fact, I decided that it will just not do. Below, I will detail my reasons for doing so as well as a bit of introspection on what I've done so far.
I think we can all agree that an ending is supposed to be exciting, something to look forward to, but Vol. 6 is not that. Having gone over what I've written, I realized that there was nothing fun or interesting about it and was generally a slog to read through.  It would only have been a waste of everyone's time to read.
However, it's not just the ending. If coming up with a proper ending was the problem, then all I have to do is to rewrite it. The problem was in the story in itself, as most of you reading this probably have already known. This whole thing was poorly planned out, with hardly any planning at all in fact. I just wrote in whatever I felt like, tossing any half-baked ideas I thought up in there without thinking about how it'll fit the story and how I am supposed to bring it to a resolution. I thought that I would just figure it out as I go and turns out, it was a bad move overall, and I soon found myself spending more time thinking of ways to tie up loose ends and justify things I haphazardly tossed in than coming up with something actually interesting. I probably should have given the ideas more time, thought about it more thoroughly before commiting it into the story.
It was all very bad habits, habits that have never really caught my attention till now, when I'm seriously trying to complete a story. I never realized how important it is to have the right discipline when it comes to writing and that's about the only good thing I can say about this experience.
Another flaw I've found is the lack of world-building. The world of Elgardia was just too bland in the end. I thought that I'd fill it up as I go, but I should have put more thought into it before I even started writing. In the end, there simply wasn't much to do or going on in the setting and because of the ideas I just tossed into the story, there wasn't much I can do without breaking the premise I ended up creating. So, in the end, the story falls into the pattern of battles, preparing for battles, and then even more battles with hardly meaningful tidbits filling out the spaces in the middle. While unlike the setting, I had some ideas about where to take the characters, but due to how little there is going on with the world, there wasn't much I can do with them. Maybe I could have changed things up along the way somewhere, and I did try a thing or two, but in the end, they were half-baked, like the many ideas I've tossed into the story. And when it led up to the ending, the one thing I had planned of, it was just atrocious. Without the rest of the story supporting, the ending and the final twist I've planned felt more like a wet slap to the face than something even remotely surprising or entertaining.
There is no fixing this story as it is I'm afraid. Not me. I'm not that good, something that should be very clear by now. The only way I can think of is a complete revamp, change everything from the ground up. The characters I might keep, flesh them out more, change them a little here and there, but everything else needs a complete alteration. It would have to be a brand new story, one completely different from this amalgamation.
And so, this is why I'm putting this story on ice and I don't think I'll be reviving it, not as what it is. To those people looking forward to the ending, if you exist, I'm sorry. I rather this be remembered as a subpar, poorly thought out story than something much, much worse, which it will be should I ever complete it.
As for what I'll be doing. Well, I'm going to take a break from writing. Take my time reviewing what I've done wrong, about things I should and shouldn't have done, and hopefully come up with something far, far better in the near future.
Finally, if you've gotten this far, I thank you for your time and I am sorry for wasting it.

A year ago, having lost the golden retriever that had accompanied him for fifteen years of his life, a retired sixty-odd years old man decided to distract himself by trying his hand at the MMORPG Elysium Online. One year later, he's now known as Aurelius, a Summoner who desires nothing else other than cute and fluffy creatures regardless of their actual strength. Due to his principle and tenacity for fluffy creature, Aurelius eventually obtained the [Holy Feathered Dragon] a high level creature that was considered inferior to it's dark counterpart, the [World Ender Dragon]. However, soon after he had obtained the Holy Dragon, it was discovered that the strongest raid boss of the latest update, the [World Breaker Behemoth] is indeed, weak to those with [Holy] attribute.

And so, together with his guildmates and friends, Aurelius challenged the boss and after a difficult battle, finally defeated it and obtained the top spot of the fastest clear time for the boss. As they celebrate upon their victory, a rift opened up in the middle of the boss field and out of curiosity, Aurelius and the rest went on ahead and tried to interact with it. The result was that they were all suck into the rift and arrived in a parallel world.

Separated from the other, Aurelius found himself in a kingdom of humanoid creature with animal-like features such a ears and tails and that he himself, is the hero they have summoned to fight on their behalf. Determined to find his friends and protect these fluffy animal people, Aurelius now stand against the demon invasion with his various fluffy summoned creatures at his side.

***

Updates: Dead

Helloh Reader-San
This is my first time writing, well, in this site which I'm very new at, pft I don't even have a cover cause my laptop just suddenly broke out and I cant upload the cover currently.
This are the things that I think you readers should know.

1. Mysterious Things
There are things that are left to be not explained, currently. Because it will be just clues to the future things that will happen. So if there are things confusing, well, leave it confusing. But actually, there won't be that much mystery as how this just follows the canon of the story of Harry Potter. 

2. Story
Yes, I will follow the canon of the story. There might be a thing or two that will change, I won't be the author that will change the story entirely for the mc . He may be more talented as he got the plot's armour of course. But I won't be make the MC rebellious and such.

3. Dialouge
There will be dialouges where the speaker is not said. But it will play out like this always.
Person One:
Person Two:
Person One:
Person Two:

See that, I will never do it like this where two dialouges will be consecutively said by the same person as the rest will be confusing.
Never like this:
Person one:
Person one:
Person two:
Person two:

4. Dropping Chance
There will be a chance that I will drop this, and I already want you to know that. I only made this because of the time I have because of Covid19, I'm also writing other books in other sites, which if you add this one up, it's already 5 books I'm working at everyday. But the thing is, I treat the other three books seriously and doesn't publish it until I'm done with the whole story, and that's because I know how everything will play out. Not like this book and the other one book, where as I write, I get ideas while working on it. Might seems stupid but that's how I like it.

5. Copyright 
Of course, I don't own Harry Potter, I'm merely just using the story as m a fullfiller of my imagination and to spend time doing something and actually leveling my skills.

6. Mistakes
Yes, I'm a human, I do make mistakes. Such as grammars, spelling, and basically, my life is a mistake. I'm open for anything, I'm a laid back guy tbh, hate me like me, neither I care for really.

I'm not pursuing you to enjoy the story, give me some stones nor anything like that. I merely made this book for my satisfaction. And would like to share it with you guys for some idk reason.

7. If you find my story bothering, bad, or anything negative, please say it immediately. I mean, if your reason is rational. I'm very open to criticism, and even try to say how can I improve it, I would thankful to try it so. Even though Im writing five books, doesn't mean I'm already good. Bruh, you will puke once you see prolouge. I'm actually new in writing. And just really I write to fulfill what I want to happen in certain story's. 



8. Lastly, Ideas
I do know some readers here wants also their imagination or ideas to be fulfilled. That's a natural thing for readers to feel. Well, if someone do comment an idea that they want to happen. I may consider it or not consider it. That's one of the hard things in making a fan fiction that follows the canon. It's because you have to watch out for the things your MC will do, and it's consequences, you have to be logical, and things the MC should be always rational to continue with the plot. 

So I'm sorry if your idea doesn't get to happen. 
But then, I'm not expecting a lot of viewers. I once made a book on watpadd, when like, years ago, and hell it was already an achievement to get hundred viewers in it. 

Btw, when it comes to updating, idk even know if it will be frequent, even tho it's quarantine time I'm still busy af. 

This is basically it, lmao, btw, watch out for memes. Some references might pop out.

The Wizarding World was blissful as the young wizard hero, Harry Potter, has once again saved the world from the dark wizard, Voldemort.

Unknown to them, there were a lot more people who help to defeat the dark lord. But it just revolves the young man, Harry there, Harry here, Harry everywhere, as always.

Peculiar to his schoolmates, Ron, Hermione, and other more, one stand out from the rest. Unfortunately, not because of his heroic nor anything good in particular, but because of his bad deeds. A man named Elliot. 

But truth, he was framed.

After the sorrowful life he had, he had the chance to change himself.

Himself from the past.

Creating an empire that will stand high among the rest.

(DROPPED)

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