Some might think that i am fool but they do know little about me...... 


This story was just base on my emagination and its my first time writing a story i hope i will not make enemy because of my poor english ☺ 

Please help me help you

a boy who has a lot to do in the fantasy world

I USE TRANSLATOR!!!!!!!
help me edit.
if you want to help me, write in the comments

Dear reader,

I haven't finished this story like I thought I would. I started writing this story in honor of a friend who last her life, because she loved her cousin. Her family found out about their secret love and the pain was to much for her.
I wanted to write a story, about two lovers who were cousins to help people understand it better.
I didn't think it was right for her to be treated the way she was. I thought if it was ok for a boy to love a boy, or a girl to love a girl,  then cousins being lovers shouldn't be so bad.
However, I am not a writer as much as I always wanted to be. I'm dyslexic, I misspell a lot and worse of all know matter how hard I try, I can't write a story I can't make one up like most people can. I write what's true and real, or I bass it off my life. 

I have a cousin named Max, we're close he's my best friend I trust him with my life. 
in order to write this story, I needed help I based it on my time with my cousins last summer, I just changed a few things the cuddles and hugs the romantic feeling, that was all my friend, what she told me what her family hated her for. 
Max wanted to help me with it by pretending to date me, so that I could better understand what my friend went through. We would have conversations through texting much like any teenager would with their boyfriend or girlfriend. 
It got out of hand,
I started to forget that he was my cousin, it was an everyday thing we did.
I don't know what I was thinking, it was wrong and stupid of me.
I guess I just needed a way to escape my problems and he did too,
I thought maybe this was his way of getting back at his ex, or running away from real life like I was. 
It was wrong of me in so many ways.

Today on Monday, March 16.
His sister went through his phone, 
she thought that everything we said was real. 
I told her about the story and what we were doing, but she doesn't want anything to do with me anymore. 
I can't live with that, I lost the respect of all my cousins and who ever else she told.
I'm not sure what I'm going to do now, I'm not sure if I'll keep writing this story or not.
I know what ever happens, I deserve it.


Tell me dear reader,
what would you have done?
Should I keep writing this story?
Should I leave home?
Thank you for reading. goodnight.

HI, EVERYONE WELCOME TO THE JOURNEY OF THIS STORY OF FACE SLAPPING, STRUGGEL,PASSION,CHEMISTRY, LOVE & SNU SNU.


HAHAHAHA.....
HI, EVERYONE ONE INTRODUCTION OF ME,
NAME- SURMITA SAHA SRABUNI YOU ALL CAN CALL ME SRABUNI SO YOU CAN SEE I LOVE TO READ IN MY MOTHER TOUNGE TO MY KNOWLEDGE OF LANGUAGE.


 I AM A REGULAR BASIS READER OF THIS APP FOR AROUND 2 YEAR'S AND I ALSO LIKE TO WRITE POEM, SUMMERY, QUOTETION ETC.
 DURING READING IN THIS APP I SUDDENLY FOUND A PASSION FOR WRITING A STORY SO I WANT TO DO IT

. 
SO IN THIS APP MY VERY FIRST TIME READING A BOOK OR STORY THAT WAS MY READED ONE MY BEST STORY WAS FULL MARKS HIDDEN MARRIAGE - PICK UP A SON, GET A FREE HUSBAND. 


THIS WAS A GREAT EXPERIENCE IN THIS STORY OTHER THAN NING XI, LITTLE TREASURE, LU TINAXIAO THERE ARE FEW CHARACTER THOSE WHO HAVE A GREAT IMPRESION ON ME. 


AND ONE OF THEM IS YUN SHEN OR SATAN YOU CAN SEE IT DIDN'T GET A HAPPY LOVING ENDING I WANT TO DO THAT ALL SO I WANT TO KNOW THAT DID THE AUTHOR WRITE A DIFFERENT BOOK FOR HIM OR NOT.


 IF HE DIDN'T THAN I'LL LOVE TO WRITE A NEW STORY ABOUT HIM IN MY WAY IF ANY OF YOU CAN TELL PLEASE TELL ME THAN I WILL JUST HAVE TO CHANGE IT A LITTLE BIT OF.


 AND IT I WILL CHANGE IT NAME AND FEW CHAPTERS OF MY STORY SO FAR IT WOULD NOT BE A PROBLEM.


 SO PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU KNOW THAT AND ALSO I AM NOT A PROFESSNAL WRITER IF IT HAS ANY KIND OF PROBLEM LIKE SPELLING, GRAMMERTICAL, PARAGRAPH AND UNDERSTANDING YOU CAN TELL ME IT WELL HELP ME TO WRITE A BETTER IDEA HOW TO MAKE THE STORY BETTER THAN IT IS I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW ABOUT IT AS A READER PROSPECT OF VIEW ALSO. 


ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE SO IT CAN HAVE MISTAKE  IF YOU SEE THIS KIND OF THING TELL ME ABOUT THIS IN THE PARAGRAPH COMMENT I WILL TRY MY BEST TO SOLVE IT. 


AND IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS ABOUT THE STORY YOU CAN ASK IF CAN BE ANSWERABLE I'LL ANSWER IT,


 OR SOMETIME I'LL KEEP IT UP TO YOUR IMAGANATION OR SUSPENSE....HEHEHEHE .


SO LET'S THE JOURNEY BEGAN....
IF THIS ME MAKE A MISTAKE THEN LET ME KNOW...

HE IS LU YUN SHEN BUT PEOPLE KNOWS HIM AS "SATAN" . HE IS THE SATAN OF THE WHOLE UNDERWORLD. 

THE UNDERWORLD BOSS OF EUROPE, SOUTH AMERICA, NORTH AMERICA TO OTHER CONTINENTS OF THE WORLD BUT EXPECT ASIA'S CHINA.

HE IS THE EMPEROR OF SEA. IT IS HIS TERF. NO ONE CAN DEFEAT HIM IN HIS TEFR.

HE IS A MASTER MIND AND BOSS OF A UNDERWORLD ORGANISATION AND A CEO OF A INTERNATIONAL CORPORATION WHICH IS BUILDED BY HIMSELF.

EVERYONE OF UNDERWORLD AND BUSINESS WORLD FEARS ABOUT HOW RUTHLESSLY HE HANDLE THINGS.

WELL HERE COMES OUR ARIN QIAO. THE HEROINE OF THE STORY. 

SHE IS A VERY SWEET,CARING AND STRONG WILLED WOMAN WHO CARES ABOUT HER FAMILY MEMBERS AND THE PEOPLE'S AROUND HER. 

SHE IS A LAWYER WHO FIGHTS FOR JUSTICE AND SHE IS A VERY WELL KNOWN LAWYER OF ASIA.

SHE HAD A LOVE OF HER LIFE PREVIOUSLY WHO WAS HER FIRST LOVE .

WHOM SHE HAD KNOWN FROM HER CHILDHOOD AND HER CHILDHOOD SWEET HEART. 

WITH WHOM SHE WANTED TO SPEND HER LIFE WITH BUT THEY GOT BREAK UP. 

SHE DIDN'T EVEN KNOW WHY HE BROKE UP WITH HER.

THAT TIME ONE OF HER KNOWN CLOSE AND FAMILY RELATIVE SISTER TELLS HER THAT- 

"YOU'RE A TRASH!"

WITH THAT KIND OF LOOKS, YOU DARE FIGHT WITH ME? TCH , DREAM ON!"

"YOU ARE NOTHING COMPARED TO ME".

"YOU'LL NEVER AMOUNT TO ANYTHING "

THAT TIME HER COUSIN SAID FOR HER HE BREAK UP WITH HER BECAUSE SHE CAN GIVE HIM MANY PROFITS SHE CAN'T DO.

THAT WHY HE BREAK UP WITH HER BREAK UP WITH HER HE COULD TELL HER SO THAT SHE CAN TRY BUT HE DIDN'T .

SHE WAS HEARTBROKEN AFTER THAT SHE WAS MISERABLE AT THAT POINT. 

AND HER FAMILY MEETS CRITICS AND SHE WANTS TO HELP THEM AND THAT TIME SHE MEETS LU YUN SHEN.

WHO HELPED HER THAT TIME AND WAS THERE WHEN SHE WAS IN NEED OF SOMEONE .

WHO UNDERSTAND HER AND BE THERE TO HELP HER WITH EVERYTHING SHE NEEDED. 

AND THAT TIME HE ASKED HER DID SHE NEED HIS HELP MORE.

ONE WHICH IS SAID THAT SHE WANT TO TAKE REVENGE IF HE CAN HELP HER. 

ON WHICH HE SAID HE CAN BUT FOR THAT SHE HAS TO MARRY HIM AND IT WILL BE A CONTRACT MARRIAGE BETWEEN THEM. 

AND THE RULES WILL BE HIS AND IF HE EVER FINDS THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE THEN HE WILL FREE HER.

 AND EVEN IF HE DOESN'T MEET THEN LOVE OF HIS LIFE HE WILL FREE HER IF SHE MEETS THE MAN OF HER LIFE AND IF SHE DOESN'T THAN THEY WILL GET DIVORCE FIVE YEARS LATER. 

AND IN RETURN OF IT HE WILL GIVE HER HIS HELPING HAND.

AND AFTER DIVORCE SHE WILL GET A LOTS OF MONEY AND LUXURIOUS SHE CAN EVER THINK. 

AND SHE AGREED TO HIS CONDITIONS AND GOT MARRIED TO HIM. 

HERE COMES FU ANGUO WHO IS ARIN QIAO'S EX BOYFRIEND AND FIRST LOVE. 

HE BREAK UP WITH HER BECAUSE OF SOME REASONS BECAUSE HE DIDN'T WANT HER TO BE IMPECT BECAUSE OF HIM. 

HE BELONGS TO A ARISTOCRATIC FAMILY WHICH HAS CONNECTIONS WITH COUNTRY LEADERS, ARMY'S AND UNDERWORLD. 

THEY ARE IN ARMS AND FIREARMS BUSINESS IN BOTH IN OWN HOMESLAND AND OTHER COUNTRIES.

AND THEY HAVE THEIR INTERNATIONAL BUSINESS FU INTERNATIONAL CORPORATION BUSINESS ALSO WHICH IS ONE OF THE WORLD LEADING COMPANY. 

SO AS THE FUTURE HEAD OF THE FAMILY HIS LIFE IS IN DANGER AND HE DIDN'T WANT HER TO BE IN DANGER.

SO HE WANTED TO SORT IT OUT AND KEEP HER OUT OF DANGER AND DIDN'T WANT TO LET HIS ENEMY TO KNOW THAT SHE IS HIS WEAKNESS.

SO HE BROKE UP WITH HER BUT WHO HAD THOUGHT THAT HER COUSIN WOULD TELL HER SUCH A LIE AND MISLEAD HER.

AND SHE WILL MISUNDERSTAND HIM. CAN HE WOULD BE ABLE TO GET HER?

WHAT ARIN QIAO WILL DO WHEN SHE WOULD KNOW THAT SHE MISUNDERSTOOD HER EX OR FIRST LOVE?

WILL SHE FALL IN LOVE WITH LU YUN SHEN?

OR SHE WILL STILL LOVE FU ANGUO?

WHOM WILL SHE CHOOSE LU YUN SHEN WHO WAS WITH HER IN HERE HARDSHIP OR FU ANGUO WITH WHOM SHE HAS SWEET MEMORIES?

TO KNOW THIS YOU HAVE TO READ THE STORY TO THE BEGINNING TO THE END. 

AND THIS STORY IS MY OWN WRITING AND NOT A TRANSLATION. 

SO THE RIGHT OF THE STORY IS MINE.

AND THIS IS MY FIRST STORY WRITING AND ENGLISH IS NOT MY MOTHER LANGUAGE IF THERE IS ANY MISTAKE THEN LET ME KNOW I WILL TRY TO CORRECT THEM.

THE COVER DOESN'T BELONG TO ME I JUST EDIT IT.

SO ENJOY.

everyone, I am sorry but I have decided to drop this story, for good. I don't see a point in writing it anymore, I don't have the time either, I could spend the time I write this doing more useful things.
This story was meant to spread ideas and all but now I feel like it has turned into wish-fulfillment, I don't like where it is heading.
if anyone feels like it could have been better or achieved something, you can rewrite or continue the story with the image in your mind and post it on your profile I don't care about it. 
I will continue writing my original (A Journey to Eternity) and post chapters once in a while.
As for other reasons that I dropped it:
1. Writing fanfiction has no use for me personally, I originally wanted my ideas to be known and my writing skills to improve with writing this and since it clearly is not anymore then I will stop.
2. the very Few retarded Readers out there. there is a simple way to say this if you don't like a story then stop reading it, nobody cares about your opinion, don't share it. it will make the Author's mood gloomy no matter the person and result in him dropping the story, especially fanfiction because most Author's don't make money out of it and are most likely writing it out of passion and admiration for the original story or a character or etc. you ruin this feeling by flaming them, if you wanna share your opinion speak with logic and reason and help the Author become better by giving your opinion/advice in a respectful manner, I can go into a long discussion about this matter but lets stop it here.
3. the point of every story is to teach us how to be better, Romance at love and understanding the opposite sex, sci-fi at science and possible future of our technology, anime and things like that help open your mind and creativity sometimes they teach useful life lessons too, I can go on and on about this. my fanfic didn't have that feeling to it, any story that teaches nothing useful to its readers is just wasting the reader's time, it may make the reader feel good but in fact, is ruining their life by wasting their time for nothing. Having fun reading is not the most important part of it, the most important part is to learn and evolve. Wish-fulfillment stories have only two uses that I can think of, making the reader feel good about himself and heal some psychological problems, I don't wanna sin like that against people who support my story.
4. The problem with Webnovel's system is the fact that it forces you to have the feeling to write, I don't know how it does this but I reached a point where I couldn't stop writing, this caused alarm bells to ring in my mind and it made me rethink writing Fanfic. this could be only me though because when I don't write in Webnovel it causes me to feel this pressure to post a chapter.
that is pretty much it, I don't want to waste any more of your precious time so this is it.
Don't waste any more spirit stones on this Fanfic, it is dead for good.
If you enjoyed this Story, Check out my A journey to Eternity, I am trying to write a unique Xianxia story, I suggest you read it when it hits 30 chapters because till then I am considering how the plot and ending should turn out, what information and teachings I want it to share with the reader and etc.
THE END.

A teenager complained to god because living on the earth was so restricting and there existed no adventures or anything interesting in the world except entertainment like anime, games, movies, etc. 
"I wish I could go on an adventure like those fantasies and be a godlike character". 
A God took pity on him, Granted him his wish not knowing that in the future it shall cause unimaginable chaos.
(MC will awaken in warring states era (Naruto) as Madara Uchiha's supposedly dead younger brother, Akihiro Uchiha)

Hey guys, so I wanted your help again for another issue, so the problem is that I am having a hard time coming up with a good pairing for the MC because of the compatibility he has with all the girls that I want him to be in a relationship with, also before you guys explode with your requests, no, this will NOT be a harem story, at least for some time. This is simply because of the fact that I cannot write a good harem story without completely ruining the story and the one thing I hate the most is a badly written harem story, so for the foreseeable future, there will be no harem.
Anyways, here is the list of pairings I am thinking of right now, I want you guys to give me your response in the comments also the reason why, and please don't give me stupid responses like 'because she is cute' or ' Because she is sexy' or something along those lines, please remember that your comments will help me influence the story in a good way and write better chapters with your constructive opinions. Also, the following list will also contain spoilers for the future story so if any of you guys don't like spoilers that stop reading right now and just wait for the pairing to naturally be shown in the story.
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1. Yasaka
2. Rossweiss
3. Serafall
4. Medea (Caster form)
5. Artoria Pendragon (Lancer form)

A man that had retired from the life of an assassin is thrown into a world that he only remembers from anime,

This is his story as he tried to make sense of what is going on.

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Hello Reader/Viewer Webnovel.




First, about the title of this Auxiliary Chapters, I want to write Novel instead Book, but after repeatedly voicing out, the word 'Book' seem better as the title for this Chapters.




This Book/Novel is originally created by me, but of course not purely everything is original, since I'm using some of other Novel/Book Concept, but the story is pure from my imagination and idea. the Concept like Cultivator, Qi, Zombie, Transmigration, OP MC, Shameless MC and other similar thing to other Novel/Book just merely about the concept, and I will try as much as I can to create Original Story around with it.






How came I'm run into this kind of Story?
I'm usually reading other Novel like Wuxia and other similar genre at first time I got into Online Novel World, and it's spread to other genre. And that lead to where I'm thinking to write about Cultivator and Zombie combination that I'm sure the Concept it's already exist out there, but what if the MC is Overpowered but not Overpowered? Maybe there already one exist, maybe not, but I will make sure the story is really different than other. This is where the Idea lead me to try writing/creating this story.






Why you Create/Write a Novel at Webnovel?
firstly, of course because Money, who didn't like about money? but after observing Webnovel for a long time, I'm not confidence that my story can be good enough to earn a little bit money from it, but still I wanna try first. I'm really have many Idea about story that I want to write/create. So, this will be my first story here on Webnovel and in the future if chance is coming I will try write more with, of course different genre, different story and different concept. [to the truth is, this is the Second novel that I wrote, the first one already here on Inkstone but I got stuck since the novel need more research and knowledge, it's only exist on my physical book first]






What this Auxiliary Chapters?
I'm really confused too, how to use this chapter. But I decided to make auxiliary chapters as Introduction, not just about the Novel itself. so the 'Author Thought' on Chapter will only be used for more explanation about the chapter itself or other notice.






About Author?
Since this is the first novel I wrote, and I'm not Native English speaker so there will be some grammar that wrong, word that not supposed to be there and here and I hope you all can help me with it, to correct me if I made a mistake so that I can improve my writing and grammar. And to still read it with my lack of ability, I'm only can say Thank You!


A little bit information about the background world of this novel/story. the World still have the same size like Earth, but with different topography map. for basic thing everything is the same like we usually encounter in our real life. I'm just try to change a few thing so that it will be slightly different.
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I WANT ENTER WRITING CONTEST WITH THIS NOVEL. SO I WILL RE UPLOAD ALL THE CHAPTER AND MAKE SOME ADJUSTMENT/FIXING TO THE STORY.
THANK YOU, HOPE YOU CAN STILL FOLLOW THIS NOVEL LATER ON.
KINDLY ASKING YOU FOR SUPPORT.

After seven month of intensive care in the hospital, I was discharged from the hospital and I became a recluse.
      I lost hope of ever been seen in the public again, because I knew my face would scare people, but one person never lose hope of me ever walking in the public again, that person was Ayo.
       He spoke to me about special surgery he heard about that could take care of my situation in America. Though I did doubt that any surgery would fix my face, but he pleaded with me to try it and I agreed.
       With my agreement, he wrote a letter to the medical institution that he heard about, in his letter he told the foreign doctors my story; and he attached pictures of my beautiful face before this incident, and that of my ruined face.
      After a month, he rushed to my house one afternoon when he ought to be in the office with a cheering news that the team of doctors in that special hospital had agreed to tackle my case
       This gladdened my soul, but while we were rejoicing he dropped a joy dampening side of the news on my chest.
       He told me that the doctors said, I would have to go through several face remoulding surgeries and it is very expensive in dollar rate; and we would need to pay ahead before they would take up my case
       I asked him how much exactly were they asking for? And he told me that in total it was around five hundred thousand dollars for me alone, and they recommended that I must be accompanied at least by a family member. Adding the travelling expense of that person to mine would still jack up the money needed.
      The money needed created a dilemma that dampened the cheering news, for I did not know how and where I would get such amount of money from, especially as the dollar was standing like a towering monster against our local currency in the foreign exchange market.
       I told Ayo that he should forget it, because there was no way I could raise hundreds of millions of our local currency for a face surgery.
      Though I told Ayo to forget about it, but he been a person who doesn't believe that anything exist that is impossible, he told me that where there is a will a way will be found.
      And he told me that I would need to brace up because we would need to go public with this dilemma, he believed that if my story gets on the media many people would contribute money to help my course.
     However, to still do this we still need money that was staggeringly beyond my reach, because  appearance fee on any media outlet was not a meager sum, and in his plan i would need to appear on as many as possible media platform.
      This means everywhere I turned I was faced with dilemma, but Ayo seemed to be above all the situation that was above me.
      He reminded me that our MD promised to give financial assistance, so he advised that we should start with his help. So he drafted a letter on my behalf and took it to the MD on my behalf.
      However, when he met with the MD, a problem that has been brewing over his dedication to my recovery reduced the help that came my way.
      Her daughter who was Ayo's girlfriend had complained to him that Ayo has been neglecting her, that she rarely see him because he was always with me.
      The MD who was the one who matchmake the two himself due to his fondness and trust in Ayo as a very responsible person, and in his bid to have her only child marry a man he could keep a tab on tabled his daughter's complaints before Ayo as Ayo tabled my plea before him.
      He appeared to be disinterested in my case because my case was frustrating a relationship he helped to put up. So he just gave an amount to save himself from people raising eye brows that he failed his staff in a time of dire needs.
       Though the amount he gave was so small, but Ayo found a use for it. He has planned before to put me on a TV screen, but with this small amount he approached two major newspapers.
        The chief editor of one of these two newspapers was so much touched by my story, that he decided to handle the write up himself. To do this he visited me to hear the stories first hand from my mouth. And he also went after Richie to hear his own side of the story, but Richie refused to grant him an interview. 
        This chief editor put up a very good write up that grabbed the attention of people and stirred up people against Richie, but caused people to come our to help me.

      An account number was written at the end of his write up for people to put whatever they want to give to help my surgery, and just like that money began to come in trickles.
      Of course, the money that came in was really not enough to pay for my trip to America for that surgery, but it was enough to eventually take me to a TV station, and that was when I appeared first on this show.

He was in the deep gutter of jungle justice, in a matter of minutes he'll loose his life for crime he did not commit; and from the blues she stepped out to expose the real criminal and saved him.
Though nothing could match what she has done, but to show gratitude he helped her to secure a job where he worked and this caused a rift between him and his girl friend who was a born with silver in the mouth neighbour of his saviour.
With this girl friend annoying needless tantrums, he dumped her and decided to focus on the saviour, but she refused for a long time until he cleared off her chief reason for saying no through a special arrangement, and they started a sexless relationship which he  really did not like.
After a while in their cat and mouse sexless engagement, the criminal that she exposed to save him showed up with acid plastic and ruined her beauty.
With her beauty ruined he lost interest in her and dumped her for her traitorous friend. This set them up for a long journey of deadly vengeance. This book is a book for the strong hearted who can have food on the table and be glued to printed page that cant be put down to be read later!

Hey y'alls!

Yeah.... 

As you can tell, I haven't been updating. It's been about half a year already....

I'm sorry! A LOT of sh!t happen (and I mean A LOT) in the last half a year and it became a terrible time and my brain stopped working. (Not gonna lie... I also got lazy since I'm doing this in my free time. Don't worry, I'm back!)

I also want to finish the story since it's my first one I have ever posted but it's going to take me a while to refresh myself and start updating again. After all, I kind of made this story out of nowhere and i forgot what the next part is going to be about to it's going to take some time. School, of course, started again so it's going to be tough and my plan is to finish this by the end of the year so please be patient. 

I'll also fix the other chapters since they still have mistakes and I do read the comments so please help me when you see a mistake or get confused!

I'm sure you guys are excited for this arc to end so I'll try to do my best! 

I honestly don't know when I'll post again but I'll make it a big one. But don't get your hopes up since I've disappointed all of you already. 

Your support for me after the few struggles (grammar, spelling, missing details) I had in the beginning really gave me a boost (I mean, I still have them but I'll try to get them fixed soon. All my friends and family don't even know I'm even writing a web novel and I'm too shy to tell them XD). I'm so glad many of you are enjoying my story. Maybe you'll see this story come out as a webtoon, manga, or comic since I'm going to school for that.

Maybe I should get an editor... because not only will it make my story cleaner but it will also force me to write for you guys... But I'm a SERIOUS introvert so anything that involves with communications is hard for me so that's why I'm working on this by myself. (BTW, criticism is allowed. I appreciate your thoughts so I can make this story the best in the world!)

I really appreciate you guys for being this way. As always, there are a few more arcs left before the ending. I know the ending of this story already but adding details to make this story exciting, interesting, and bearable is the one of the issues I have.

I seriously thank those who are patient with me because you guys are the real MVP for actually waiting this long. I would have dropped this and never came back but seeing your comments made me smile. 

I've always hated writing as I have said before but these past few years, I've been getting inspired to create characters and stories that I couldn't help myself but actually write. I'm currently also creating a few story lines for my other novels which is why I've been stopping myself to continue this one.

Don't worry! This story will have an ending so.... 

Stay reading?

ありがとうございました!
(Arigatougozaimashita!)
(Thank You!)

Thanks for reading! 


Love,

Cake

When Lin Yu Yan opened her eyes, she was in an unknown place. Wounded, she used her senses to find a pond nearby and does not recognize her own reflection. Then a burst of memory expanded in her mind and since then, she has vowed to live her life to the fullest.

Alright, so I got good news. Your useless Demon king (Author) is back! Mum's finally getting better and I finally finished my mock exams (Whether I pass or fail is another story though)! So I finally have some free time to write chapters again without feeling stressed.

But I've been thinking of something for the past few day's now. Should I re-write Mlibe? I keep on getting comments or reviews saying the story is copy and paste and I don't blame them 😅. At the beginning of the story, I was too focused on getting a chapter out per day that I didn't care about the quality nor the change anything at all and I was still new to fanfics in general. Plus my motivation for writing this fanfic was when I got bored and started reading Blue Exorcist after watching the anime with my lil bro.

So I kinda didn't think things through 😅 oops. I'm looking back at my chapters and started thinking that everything is really slow (Like events) or rushed (Rin got good control of his flames very quickly). And some stuff that I just don't know why I added like the dogeza or have the mc appear like Rin in the early chapters (Still don't understand why a lot of people didn't like the mc having a brief moment of weakness, but oh well)

So I want to re-write the novel to minimise the readers that I lose and to give the story more justice. Oc's and everything will still be there and the plans I have for them will be there. just want to write it better, like introducing the Oc's better, hence why I'm rewriting it on a different book with the same title. The old chapters will still be here as I don't want to forget how the story was before.

Now I few questions: 
Should I make the story 1st person or 3rd person?
What day should I upload a chapter? (I'm thinking every Sunday)
If you have any OC's that you want me to include? 
Should I get rid of the stage directions?
and any other advice to improve as a writer?



I've finally got a chance to relax so I'm not gonna immediately upload. If I do a re-write I don't want to make you guys wait for months to get to this point again so I'll be doing a mass release somewhere between Christmas to new years.

And finally, thanks for sticking with this useless Demon King (Author).

p.s: I still don't have a pc yet.... Parents are saying they'll get me it for Christmas.... It's been 3 months... help... Writing a chapter on the phone isn't bad but editing is enough to make this Demon king cry.

p.s.s: A lot of you could probably tell that Mlibe isn't gonna be just canon so I'll also be rewriting the synopsis. Might as well make a new novel at this point... Oh actually, what fanfic should I make as a side thing whenever I have authors block for mlibe? Comment down below or message me on discord (Link in the comments)

[The first 7 or so Chapters are for those who haven't watched/read Blue Exorcist. They're skippable if you want however some things may not make sense if you do so, so take this advice with a pinch of salt.]

Synopsis:

Before he knew it, he was already there. There was no meeting with God nor was he killed by Truck-kun. He just randomly arrived into the world with no warning and took over the body of Rin Okumura, the Son of Satan and protagonist of Blue Exorcist. After being hit with unknown memories and almost losing his personality, he decides to fight against the events of the future and make the most of this life compared to his previous. 

Though he ignorantly thought events of Canon will only take place, he'll soon find out that everything is not what it seems. Canon will crumble, new events will happen, New Characters with interesting backgrounds will appear, romance even though he didn't think he could love or receive love, mysteries and mythologies, friendships with those he never knew could be friends, and finally the reason of him taking over Rin Okumura's body.

[So this is the Author, just a little warning, the first 10 or so chapters are bad imo as I made them to distract me from irl stuff. Expect cringiness level: weeb.

Quality of chapters improves around chapter 18 where I start straying away from Canon. Yes, a bad idea if I want viewers but I didn't care at the time nor do I really care but I just don't want people leaving say they dropped the novel because it has a lot of similarities to Canon.

Of course, I will edit the cringey chapters once I deal with school work and finally get a laptop.

Credits go to the original creator original creators of Blue Exorcist. I don't own Blue Exorcist nor do I own the cover, however, I do own my various OC's in the series.

Constructive criticism and ideas are much appreciated as they help me get better.]

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