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"hahahaha... such a unlucky beauty you are!!... I think your faith revolves around me... always your love ends up in my hand" her friend said to her arrogantly.
she was betrayed once again by her love. she was in shock how could her friend can do such a unbelievable thing... she is not her actual bff... but she is from her friend circle and always treat her as a friend... her heart hurts. But still has a hope... he loves her... she knows he has done it for reason... but why like this... doesn't he loves her, then why??? soo many questions. she brought herself in reality tears falling from her eyes, she looked in the direction of her friend and said "ok....I will accept he loves you not me ....if he said so in front of me otherwise you may leave" 
she heard the fimilar footsteps and was sure that he is coming towards them ...her heartbeat was soo fast ...as if her heart was going to explode...she was nervous because of her mistakes and she knows well it effected both of them badly ...
He opened the door and walked toward the table where he left his file ...and after taking the file he was about to leave but noticed fimilar smell , how he can neglects this smell...it always drives him crazy ..He stopped in his track and looked back ...and saw her ....her big bright eyes were now watery and red ...and her baby soft cheeks were red and on right side there was a mark of someones fingers ...his heart inched and was in pain to see her like this.

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Thousandth Beast Mountain

In Thousandth Beast Mountain there lies many Spirit Beasts as well as many Tribes, the sun was shining brightly and the wind flew gently but somehow time stop suddenly when a 150 inch wormhole appear in middle of the mountain and something flew out of it, it was a tiny piece of metal, the wormhole disappear and everything goes back to normal but not far when the wormhole disappear the mysterious metal suddenly expanded and shaped into a robotic body that seem to have a height omg 180 inch.



The robotic body look very refined like a God-tier BlackSmith crafted it and it have a mysterious red energy flowing though it body but there is something more eye catching and that is it aura the aura have the color of red blood and contain a combination of Anicent,Divine,and something that isn't from this world feeling.



The eye of the being shook and slowly opens showing a mechanical eye with the color of red blooded ink.



"What happens?the last thing I remembered is that I died from a explosion in the plane." muttered the being while he look around the unfamiliar sourroundings filled with trees and plants that look weird,extraordinary,bizarre,beautiful,and,mysterious.



Few seconds later he stand up and as he stand up he realized something is amiss.but what was it?then he realized he can't remeber his own name!He close his eyes and put his palm over to his forehead then he reopen them but saw something that terrified and shock him his arm look like it been modified into robotic he check his body and saw his body is the same as his arm he look around and saw a pond he ran there while sometimes slipping and tripping several time And as he reach there he look at his own reflection.Red blood pupil with robotic like face but what shock him the most is that the face of that robotic look just like someone he knew in a movie called Avenger and the Age of Ultron and that person was no other than Ultron himself!



Srry for doing so short but I'm too lazy maybe tommorrow...lel...Hope you like it...Me bad Grammer :333

Reincarnate as Ultron in a Cultivation World the title already told you the Synopsis you boosted apes lol...ok since on of the review say the Synopsis is weir...so here the real one



Wait wut...I died?wait wut now I’m Ultron from the Marvel universe?wait wut!im in a Cultivation World?what more fuck up is there?oh sht a system?wait a second i can buy the infinty stones from the system store for 1billion points each!?wtf...wait I buy Aurelion Sol?wait ok nvm it cost 500billion point and it take 1million years to reach adult hood...fuck that nobody got time for that sht!Oh hohoho what this?a potato of time and space?dafaq is that where that come from?wait it can increase your power by 999x and grant immortality isn’t this fuck  up for a potato!?lol wait I forgot it the potato of ‘time’ and ‘space’ lol...this world and system is fuck up...

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"Alright Dratini wake up! It's training time!" I beamed with determination while shaking Dratini's slithering body.

<Drat? Drat!>The Pokemon badgered and used water gun on my face.

"What was that for! Wake up, you have to train in order to grow stronger! 5:00 in the morning is the best time to train!" I beamed with determination.

<Drat!? Drat!? Dratini!>The Pokemon badgered and used water gun on my face again.

"Great! A timid Pokemon who doesn't listen to his trainer, that's fantastic!" I uttered sarcastically.

"Actually, no one would obey you Kalem." Riolu teased.

"And why is that?" I queried while squinting my eyes.

"Who in the world trains at 5:00 in the morning!?" Riolu uttered with frustration.

"You make a point! Let's go train at 5:01!" I uttered while Riolu faced palm himself and went back to sleep.

"Hmph! That's it, Wake up! Wake up! Wake up!" I shouted at Riolu's ear.

"What was that for!?" Riolu queried with frustration.

"That's for waking me up like that every day! Now get up and let's train!" I stood up and beamed with determination.

"Fine! Come on Dratini, we have no choice but to follow." Riolu uttered softly while pulling Dratini's tail.

<Dratini! Dratini!>The Pokemon cried out loud.

"Not my fault Kalem, you made the baby cry!" Riolu teased.

"Me!? You're the one who pulled Dratini's tail!" I complained.

"Who asked us to train? I was just following your orders!" Riolu smiled and laughed while I facepalmed myself.

"Dratini come on, don't cry. I'll give you four bowls of Pokefood if you train with me!" I smiled and bargained.

<Drat! Drat!>The Pokemon stopped crying and beamed with joy.

"Don't believe what Kalem says, he's not going to give you four bowls. Trust me, I'm a victim of Kalem's false deals!" Riolu debunked.

"What!? Dratini, believe me! I'll give you four bowls of food! I promise."

"Nah, he won't Dratini. Look, if Kalem gave me four bowls every time he woke me up, shouldn't I be extremely chubby?"

"Riolu, whose side are you on?"

"It's 5 in the morning! We can train at six or seven!" Riolu suggested.

<Dratini! Drat!>The Pokemon looked at Riolu with an angry face and used water gun on him.

"Alright, what in the world was that for Dratini?" Riolu complained with frustration.

<Drat! Dratini!>The Pokemon smiled and explained.

"What!? You want to go to training?"

"Haha! Joke's on you Riolu! Dratini wants to train with me! There's nothing you can do about it right Dratini?"

<Dratini!>The Pokemon smiled and nodded his head.

Dratini forced Riolu to come and train with us,  Riolu didn't have any other choice but to follow us! It may be dark, but at least we get to enjoy a nice training under the rising morning flower. 

When it comes to training, the woods are the best place to go! There are a ton of wild Pokemons everywhere. You can also see the new Pokemons you haven't seen before. When I train? I like to be alone, just me and my Pokemons working side by side!

"If we continue doing this, we'll have insomnia!" Riolu warned while walking by my side.

"Insomnia? That's a new one on me!" I smiled at Riolu's grumpy face.

"You should listen to Camellia's lectures you know," Riolu suggested.

"Lectures are bla bla bla boring stuff! I  don't need to learn how many bones you have, I don't need to study Matamorphosis either!"

"It's metamorphosis! Me-ta-more-pho-sis!" Riolu enunciated.

"Fine whatever, lectures are for kids! I'm a grown-up!"

"You're ten!" Riolu uttered with a drowsy voice.

"At least I'm almost twelve!"

"Twelve? What's ten plus one Kalem?"

"Ten plus one is twelve! Don't fool me Riolu, I'm a math wizard!" I boasted while Riolu face palmed himself.

"Ten plus one is eleven! People are going to complain about how terrible you are in math!" Riolu sighed and warned.

"Oh right! Eleven is the answer, I'm correct!"

"You're answer was twelve!"

"No, I said eleven!"

"Never mind, I don't want to argue anymore, it's 5:30 and I'm sleepy!" Riolu uttered with slight frustration. 

Near a waterfall, is where I and my Pokemons will be training! It's time to boost speed, attack, special defense, and special attack! Good thing, Camellia bought me an IV checker! I'm one button away on knowing my Pokemon's stats.
Let's get to it!
[NAME: Gardevoir
Attack: Good
Defense: Good
Speed: Excellent
Special Attack: Good
Special Defense: Good
Rating: Three Stars
"Three stars? Impossible, Gardevoir won a lot of battles!?" I complained.
[Name: Treecko
Attack: Horrible
Defense: Good
Speed: Horrible
Special Attack: Good
Special Defense: Good
"What!? Treecko is one of my strongest Pokemon! Impossible!" I complained at the IV checker.
[Name: Zorua
Attack-Special Defense: Horrible
"Yup! This device is definitely broken!" I uttered with sarcasm.
"And you're broke!" The device uttered and teased me.
"Woah, that's gotta hurt, right Kalem?" Riolu teased.
"Hmph! I am a man, you are a machine! I'm the one who complements and not you!" I badgered.
"Base on your Pokemon's stats... You are a horrible trainer with a chance of 0.98% of winning the Pokemon League!" The device teased.
"Yikes, watcha gonna do Kalem? Don't tell me you're going to lose against a robot?" Riolu teased.
"He was referring to the both of us Riolu!"
"Nope, I was referring to you Kalem!" The device corrected.
"This is the last draw! My Pokemons are strong, you're wrong!"
"If they were strong, how does Riolu only know one attack for two years!?" 
"It's none of your business! Secrets are secrets!" I badgered.
"Come on, just tell the truth! You're a lazy trainer when you were just eight years old!" The device teased.
"That's partially true, I'm not that lazy you know?"
"And you're a lonely trainer with no one to battle with when you were just eight!" The device continued to frustrate me.
"I had my parents to battle with!"
"And yet you didn't battle with them. Why? Cause you're afraid to lose! You're afraid Riolu might dump you after knowing how terrible you are!" The device teased.
"What!? I would never dump Kalem, even if I know he's weak!" Riolu laughed and teased.
"Are you trying to frustrate me!?"
"I'm just telling the truth! Karate chop? Seriously? Only one move! haha!"
"That was before, Mr.Iv! Riolu now knows four moves!"
"Riolu should be Lucario by now, but you're weak!" The device teased.
"Don't make me throw you to the waterfalls! I am a human, we made you! We can take your life back!"
"Sure thing, oh wait! You can't, 'cause you're very weak! A trainer with a Pokemon who knew one move for two years? Terrible! Just give me to your rival Krill, he's more powerful than you!"
"I defeated him, and who's your creator? Your purpose is to scan Pokemons and not trainers!"
"I did scan your Pokemons, they were horrendous!"
"That's it, I'm turning you off!" I badgered and turned off the IV checker for good. Who cares if Riolu knew one move in two years? I'm not weak, and don't call me weak! I may not be very strong but at least I'm improving bit by bit!

"Alright, watch Treecko with keen eyes Dratini!" I instructed while training Treecko.

<Drat! Dratini!>The Pokemon smiled with determination.

"Treecko, use energy ball on that tree!"

"You got it Kalem!" Treecko beamed with determination and unleashed a powerful energy ball that destroyed the tree in half.

"Haha Iv checker! Guess you were wrong!" I teased and laughed.

"That was weak, a normal energy ball could destroy a sturdy boulder in one move!" The device spoke.

"Hey, didn't I turn you off?" I badgered at the device.

"Yes you did, but I turned myself on!" The device explained.

"What the!? No device can do that!" I complained.

"Wanna know who created me?"

"Of course I do! I'm going to file a complaint form!"

"What in the world is a complaint form? That's why people think you're a-"

"Don't finish that statement, who created you... you feeble being?"

"You're feeble, I'm not a being, I'm a machine!"

"Ouch! That device is smarter than you!" Riolu teased.

"Fine then, you're a feeble machine, with a feeble heart!"

"I do not have a heart, like I said... I'm a machine! Don't let me reveal your secrets about you and Riolu!"

"Whatever! Tell me who created you!" I badgered.

"Who else? Look at my back!" 

I turned the device upside down and read who manufactured this annoying and frustrating device! I got shocked, why would "..."  make such a device?

"The Chaos regime made you!? That explains how measly you are!"

"Kalem doesn't brush his teeth before sleeping!" The device shouted loudly.

"Hey! Shut your mouth! I defeated Cyra and Nate for more than 30 times! Team Chaos is a weak organization!"

"When Kalem was eight, he used to pee on the bed!" The device shouted loudly.

"What!? You pee on the bed, I slept in pee for two years!?" Riolu uttered with frustration.

"Sorry he... he! But still, shut your mouth Iv checker!" I badgered out loud.

Meanwhile, at our camp, Camellia was looking worried sick!

"Where's the Iv checker!?" Camellia uttered with worry as she scrambles her bag.

"IV checker? Didn't you give it to Kalem yesterday?" Zhery recalled while stretching her arms.

"Oh no... I gave him the wrong one!" Camellia uttered with worry.

"The wrong one? You bought two IV checkers?" Zhery queried.

"I gave my IV checker to Kalem! I have to wake him up before he turns on that IV checker!" Camellia uttered with worry as she rushed towards my tent.

"Kalem! Kalem, oh no.... he went training with the IV checker!" Camellia uttered with worry as sweat droplets fell off her face.

"What's with that IV checker anyways?" Zhery queried.

"Um nothing, I have to go find Kalem so bye!" Camellia rushed towards the woods to warn me but it was too late!

"Did you know Kalem accidently-"

"Hey! If you dare say that I'm going to break you to pieces!"

"Actually, this is kinda fun! I didn't know you had secrets!" Riolu smiled and laughed.

"Whose side are you on Riolu!?"

"Kalem accidently released waste on his pants when he was at school! Everybody laughed except for Camellia!"

"Wait, you literally did that on your pants? Don't schools have bathrooms?" Riolu laughed and teased.

"Really Riolu!? You're acting just like my classmates! Grr... that's it, tease me all you want, I'm out of here!" I badgered and ran away. I was too embarrassed to hear another word from the device.

"Kalem, wait!" Riolu called me.

"The truth is, Kalem also had low grades in his exams!"

"I know that he even doesn't know what ten plus one is!" Riolu uttered.

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"Your majesty! She has been spotted! She turned on a device that belonged to us!" Elanor reported.

"She probably did it by accident, go send Zylon to the coordinates and bring her to me! She stole something from me!" The fallen king commanded.

"Your bidding shall be down!" Elanor bowed down and left the room.

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"Hey, I think you should stop telling dark and weird secrets about Kalem!" Riolu suggested.

"Do you want to know, why Kalem's parents are still alive?" The device queried.

"Really, yeah sure!" Riolu uttered with eagerness.

"It's because his parents are actually bzzzzz tzzzzz bzzzz! Shut down! System off!" The device turned off all of a sudden.

"Riolu! Where's Kalem!?" Camellia uttered with worry.

"He ran off, Dratini followed him! The device you gave Kalem triggered him!" Riolu explained.

"Of course it did! This is not an IV checker, this is a log device which pretends to be an IV checker!" Camellia explained.

"Wait then why did you give it Kalem?" Riolu queried.

"I accidently gave the wrong one! What did this device tell you?" Camellia queried.

"Let's see, I only knew Karate chop for two years because Kalem was afraid to battle his parents because he fears that if he lost, I'll dump him so he treated me like a pet. Kalem doesn't know much stuff about Pokemon, even if his mother is a trainer and his father is a professor because his parents didn't have the time since they were always busy at work. Even at home they work with their so-called laptop for eight hours since they were building Pokemons of some sort, Kalem also peed at his bed, Kalem pooped at his pants, Kalem is weak, Kalem and me are horrible, Kalem is this, that and those!" Riolu explained.

"Wait, that's a new one on me. Kalem never told me that his parents were that serious about the bioweapons." Camellia uttered.

"The truth is, Kalem would cry at his bedroom every night while hugging me. He wanted to have parents that would focus more on him rather on their work. The truth is, Kalem is a child of curiosity, but his parents wouldn't answer his questions." Riolu explained.

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"Mom, what's a type disadvantage?" 

"Not now Kalem, I'm working, go play with Riolu first!"

"But you and dad always say that! I have multiple unanswered questions since I was four years old, why won't you focus on me first rather on  your saving the world project!?" Young Kalem queried.

"Kalem not now! Play with Riolu, I'll answer your questions when me and dad have time. Can't you see we're busy!?" Lyra uttered with frustration while typing on her laptop.

"Please mom, can I at least borrow your rotom phone to check online?"

"You're too young to use or hold any gadgets, maybe when you're ten I'll buy you a rotom-phone! For now, stay in your room, dad's gonna call you once dinner is ready!"

"Hmph! You and dad are always like that!" Young Kalem complained and went to his room while crying.

"Don't be too harsh on him Lyra, he's just eight years old," Cypress uttered.

"I know, but we need these Pokemons to be operational and we're already lacking DNA structures!"

"You know what, every night? I would hear Kalem cry in his room. I know we're busy at work bu-"

"Look, if the world ends our son will end too! We're doing this to protect him, even if it means sacrificing ourselves in two years time! I feel sorry for treating Kalem wrongly too, but if we didn't know the world was going to end soon we shouldn't be doing this! I want to return to how things were before, like watching movies? Looking at lunar eclipses? But this is an urgent matter!"

"Yeah, you're right Lyra, let's get back to work."

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"Even if his parents treated him like that, Kalem still loves his parents, that's why he's out to look for them now, he may seem like a jolly person on the outside, but deep inside I know how Kalem feels," Riolu added.

"I never knew Kalem had secrets. He seemed so jolly at school, a person who would play with Pokemon! If he's a curious child, then why doesn't he listen to our teachers when he was preschool?" 

"His mind would always fly away during lecture times. I can sense that through my auras. Kalem kept thinking about his parents, you know? He imagines a life where he would go to movies with his parents again. When the teacher scolds him, that's the time Kalem snaps out of his daydreams but falls back into it once the teacher passes him. I have the power to sense emotions through my auras, I know Kalem's burdens, and there are those which are too grave to tell." Riolu explained.

"Woah, Kalem had a harsh life, guess this device made him remember all those problems with his family. I and Kalem are almost the same, my parents were actually- wait... how am I talking to you!?" Camellia suddenly realized that he was understanding Riolu's words.

"Didn't I say I had auras? Even if I have a Poketrans gem, I don't use it... but Kalem thinks I use it. I use my auras to talk to him." Riolu explained.

"So, am I using my aura too?"

"Of course! Everyone has an aura, may it be men or Pokemons, there is no life without auras. Let me guess, your parents were just like Kalem's parents but they were not focusing on bio-weapons they were focusing on $#%@#% (Secret)"

"How did you know that!?"

"Simple, I have my ways!" 

"Riolu, please don't tell Kalem about that, please don't! If Kalem knew about that, he'll never forgive me."

"Of course I won't tell him, you like Kalem right? I don't want you and Kalem to fight... but I'm warning you Camellia, Kalem always finds the truth! He'll know someday, and once he knows..."

"Just don't tell him Riolu! I trust you since you're an honest and trustworthy Pokemon."

"I won't! The cavern will tell Kalem everything. You've gotta prepare Camellia." Riolu warned.

"Riolu! Let's go back to camp!" I walked back as tears fell off my eyes.

"Kalem! Look, I'm sorry I gave you the wrong device, this was actually my IV checker."

"Yeah, an Iv checker you probably stole from team Chaos!"

"Stole!? Cyra and Nate dropped this device in cave moon remember?"

"She's making up fake scenarios." Riolu facepalmed and uttered to herself.

"Yeah, yeah! That device triggered me! He embarrassed me in front of my Pokemons, in front of Riolu and Dratini!"

"Look, I know how you feel because my parents were like that too!"

"I thought your parents were in the Alola region?"

"I... um, yes they were in the Alola region and now they're here!"

"I know you're lying Camellia! I know you're trying to hide something from me, tell me the truth!" I shouted loudly.

"The truth is, my parents never went to the Alola region, I made that up since I didn't want anyone to know how my parents treated me!"

"Her fake scenarios make no sense at all, and of course, Kalem would believe what Camellia said." Riolu facepalmed and sighed.

"Look I'm sorry I shouted at you, I just remembered something bad from the past, I got embarrassed, that's why I ran."

"I did that too, when I was young."

"No you didn't!" Riolu uttered to himself.

"You ran away?"

"No  she didn't!"  Riolu uttered to his mind.

"The reason why I met you in the cave was not because I wanted to play with Pokemons, it's because I ran away."

"That's partially true. Wow, Camellia is really good at lying." Riolu uttered sarcastically to himself.

"Anyways, your device called me weak, horrible, and other stuff, but... I feel better now." 

"And as for you Riolu, we're going to train at four am tomorrow since we were unable to train today!"

"What!? Please no Kalem, I'll train now, I'll cooperate! Promise! Please don't do this! I don't want to wake up early in the morning!" Riolu begged.

"I was just kidding, come on... let's go back to camp! As for Dratini, her cute face made me feel better so she deserves four bowls!" I complimented and smiled at Dratini.

"Heh? You're right, I know you won't give Dratini four bowls!" Riolu smiled and laughed.

We were able to arrive back at camp, safe and sound! Breakfast was ready and it was time to prove Riolu wrong.

"And, here are your four bowls of Pokefood Dratini!" I placed the bowls one by one facing Riolu and Dratini.

"You literally gave Dratini four bowls of Pokefood!? About me, didn't I work hard? Kalem don't go, look at my belly, I'm hungry! Please give me four bowls as well." Riolu begged.

"You didn't train, so not my problem!"

"Dratini didn't train Kalem! That's not fair!"

"But Dratini was the only Pokemon to comfort me, plus! You're on a diet!" I teased and walked back to my seat.

"Dratini, can you share the n the bowl to me? Please?" Riolu begged but all Dratini did was to stick out her tongue and tease Riolu.

So yeah, I lost against a crazy device which turned me crazy. I just wished everything was back to how things used to be. 

As the journey continues...

I am Kalem, I had a common dream, a dream to become a Pokemon master, a dream to travel and adventure out through different regions. But that dream was crushed and destroyed... After hearing the news about the death of my parents, I started to lose interest on becoming a Pokemon Master.

I was adopted by an orphanage, there I met two persons who would soon become my best friend. Them, together with the headmaster helped restored my dream to become a Pokemon Master, and that was when I knew that my Parents were alive.

So me, together with my two friends travelled across the land finding clues and mysteries about my parents. As I travelled to seek for my parents, me and my friends saw something we would never forget...

A prophecy, a prophecy that was about to be full filled, that prophecy had something to do with my parents.

Dean followed Gilet and not long after the 2 of them were already at the pond where Dean was thrown earlier today, with the sun about to set making the surrounding have a beautiful color. As the two of them stood there Gilet turn around and faced Dean.

"Sit down kid." Offering the seat after he sat down himself Gilet started rummaging from his sleeves and took out a transparent crystal, tossing it to Dean he said "Don't panic or act like that kid, that's only an affinity checker crystal no worries you do know what an affinity checker crystal right?"

Dean nodded his head and said "So you want me to insert my heavenly qi here in order to determine the affinity of my elements am I right?" Fiddling with the crystal on his hands Dean place his chin above his palms and added "What does this have to keeping my job?"

"You don't have to worry about that kid, I only want to confirm your elemental affinity in order to know what it is, and it will not harm you or anything so just do it kid." Gilet still held that playful smile on his face when he said those words.

Affinity Crystal, an item use by people in order to determine the bloodlines that they have in their body, although the bloodline of the person will determine what element that person will have some mutation still happens and some people do not even know what their bloodline was so they will go and take an affinity checker crystal in order to confirmed what they have.

This kind of crystal do not have any heavenly qi inside them so they are cheap in the market, but because they were hallowed up inside they are the perfect thing to check the element that the heavenly qi will be attracted to it, hence it became an affinity element checker for the people of the continent.

"Come on just do it, I don't have all day, if you don't do it now I will force you to." Gilet urge him, with a little pinch of threat in between there.

Dean gave him a look of wariness but he still did it, his heavenly qi was not pure so the color of his qi was different than the others. When Gilet saw this seen his originally smug face that he had all this time slowly and gradually fell flat until it became something comical.

The qi of Dean continuously flowed in the affinity checker crystal, his unique heavenly qi started flowing out of his body making Dean already had an elements in his body so he only had to make the two qi's flow into the crystal.

Grasping the crystal by his hands a purple colored qi started emerging in the crystal, upon seeing this purple colored qi Gilet raised his brows and started leaning forward to get a better look of it his expression was like someone that had shocked witless.

His smile that was on his face earlier slowly and gradually became a serious look, then as he leaned forward and his face starting to look ridiculous a flame suddenly ignited inside the crystal and the moment that this happen Gilet abruptly stood up.

 "T-that's the Primal Chaotic Flames that is the primal chaotic flames, the f-flame that incinerates all." His voice was quivering as he started saying some things then as the other qi of Dean was about to flow in the crystal a crack appeared in the crystal before completely shattering to dust.

Gilet was startled by the sound of the affinity checker crystal, he started taking steps towards Dean and placed his hands on his shoulders and said "You're the one kid. Hahaha seems like my luck is still pretty good." His voice was starting to get excited, he didn't even realized that his hands was starting to emit pressure to Dean.

Dean stood there not moving, the pressure on his shoulders was heavy it made him feel like his shoulders had a mountain on top of it "Are you trying to flatten me?" He screamed to Gilet as he tried to move out of there.

Gilet realized his hands was actually applying pressure to Dean so he immediately got his hands off him when he saw Dean having a pained expression on his face and realizing how he just acted Gilet gave a dry cough 'Sorry about that, I was just trying to say that you will be the one that I chose from the rest, go back to your room you got the job."

Dean touched his shoulders, feeling out the pain on his muscles that he just got out of his body earlier Dean remained seated on the ground and said "What do you mean I got the job? Does that mean I get to keep my job as your helper, because if that's the thing then I will quit now."

Rubbing his own shoulders like he was in pain Dean suddenly said something that was contradictory he was wanting earlier, before he got here he was having a headache of how he will try to keep his job and now he was talking how he wanted to quit.

"Do you really think that I wanted to work here? I am only here because Miss Freya told me to go and you paid me in front yesterday, oh yeah here's your money now, I need to prepare for the enrollment next week, I don't want to stay here if I don't have anything to gain here." Dean started blathering all sorts of things while simultaneously throwing Gilet the coin pouch that was given to him yesterday as an early pay.

Hearing what Dean had just said Gilet suddenly stop from celebrating and started processing what he had just heard and when he did he look at Dean and said with a big smile "Of course not I wasn't planning on letting you remain here as a helper you know? Now that I know you have a flame element in you then you will get something huge."

"Just cut to the chase I have to find some items that I need in order to make my cultivation go faster, like I already said I have to prepare for the enrollment staying here wouldn't get me into the academy." Dean stood up and started walking away but was stopped by Gilet.

"Of course you can, it comes with the job I was talking about earlier, and well it's not even a job more like a title." Gilet saw the impatient look of Dean and said "Kid what do you say of becoming an artificer? The flame elements in your bloodline is special so you must have a high affinity to the flame elements, come and become an artificer." 

Dean look at him and said "I know what you're going to say next, and if you say that I will earn money that will all be in the future and at the moment I will not become an artificer without reaching and becoming a caster that controls flames, and to do that I need resources and I don't have that."

"Of course you have just come and accept it, I will give you resources and anything that you would need in your future cultivation and as for the enrollment I have my ways for that to happen without taking the exams. Don't say anything anymore, if you want artifacts I will give it to you alright?" Gilet laid all of his benefits to Dean.

With an interested look Dean said "You haven't even said what I will be doing right?" 

"Become my disciple Dean, and I will hone you to become an artificer." Gilet proclaimed what his Job will be then and there.

Which Dean responded with "Disciple greets Master." And bowed to Gilet

Gilet smiled but that smiled after hearing the next words of Dean "Master please take care of everything that you have said earlier and as for the gift that a master gives too his disciple when they first meet I would be looking forward to it." Dean left for his own room leaving Gilet there alone.

"Did I just promise things to him just like that?" He mumbled

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