Irvan adalah seorang pria yang pergi ke amerika untuk mengadu nasib tetapi tuhan tidak memberkati dia, dia tidak mendapatkan apa yang di impikan semua yang dia lakukan sia sia,

dia tertipu semua modalnya hilang, dia kehilangan semuanya dan menjadi gelandangan,

Lalu suatu hari Irvan mati tertabrak mobil karena menyelamatkan seorang wanita.



NOTE:Jika ada kesalahan penulisan langsung komen saja.

It's the year 20XX...The first A.I.  chip is used on a Virtual Reality Full Drive Gear.

The world has become a world full of gamers. Almost everyone was issued the head gear. The problem is that most people cannot distinguish what is reality or virtual reality.


People often get stuck in virtual reality, that they forget to log off and eat or get exercise. It results in many deaths from malnutrition.



We start our story with a person named Tony Silverman. A mechanic of the world famous Capsule Corporation which was the leading manufacturer of the Virtual Reality Head gear.


"Alexa! Run a diagnostic on the storage unit of model A314. See if the increase memory improves the lagging of the system." - Tony


[BEEP!]

[INITIATING!.....RUNNING DIAGNOSTICS....]

[COMPLETED! RUN SPEED INCREASED BY .02%]



"Hmmm...Maybe i should create a nano memory chip to make the storage infinite so there won't be lagging in the future." - Tony



KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!


"Come in!" Tony answered


"Tony! This just came in! They want to stop the manufacturing of the head gear. There were too many deaths, so the FDA announced the ban of the headgear. The company is being sued big time! So they are letting go of people in our department." - the team manager said. "Do not worry! They are giving us a big severance pay and we can still file for unemployment for up to 2 years. Think of it as a long vacation. Once I get a good job, I will bring you in with me!" he said



"Really! Cool deal! I can focus on inventing a memory chip with nano technolgy. Maybe you can help me patent it in the future." -  I said



He nodded and said." Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you. The company don't need the equipments here so you can take it home. I will personally write the approval. Is the least I can do!"



"Great! Let me rent a U-Haul truck quickly to get all this equipment home!"



I rented a truck and picked up all the equipments from the workshop and went home. I made my 2-car garage a workshop to invent my memory chip.


One year later...

"Alexa! Run a diagnostic in the nano chip and see the memory capacity, also run a dignostic on its durability."


[BEEP!]

[RUNNING!...BEEP!...BEEP!...BEEP!]

[ERROR! CANNOT COMPUTE CAPACITY! RUNNING DURABILITY!.....]



BOOOOM!


The chip was accidentally flung towards him. It was a mistake using explosives to test the durability of the chip. 

The chip was so durable that it went thru the metal barriers of the test walls and straight to his skull.


He died without even knowing what happened.


Everything suddenly went dark. Suddenly, a voice in his head started to talk.


[BEEP!]

[FUSING WITH MEMORY CHIP! INITIATING]

[...BEEP! COMPLETE! RUNNING DIAGNOSTICS]

[...BEEP! COMPLETE!...ERROR...RECALCULATING!...BEEP! DONE! HOST BODY IS STILL FORMING!...AMOUNT TO COMPLETION IS 8 MONTHS...INITIATING DATA COLLECTING...INITIATING DATA COMPRESSION...INTIATING A.I. FUNCTION FOR SYSTEM OPTIMIZATION...COMPLETED!]



He was unsure of what just happened so he yelled out in his thoughts.


"Alexa! What the hell is going on?! And while were at it, why can't I move or see?! Am I in the hospital?!" - I asked panickly



[BEEP]

[HOST BODY EXPIRED! HOST BODY IS NOW IN PROCESS OF REFORMING! SCANNING BODY FOR DATA COMPARISON!...BEEP! HOST BODY IS THE SAME AS THAT OF AN EMBRYO IN THE FIRST TRIMESTER OF PREGNANCY!...SCANNING SURROUNDING FLUIDS AND BACKGROUND!...COMPLETE!...FLUIDS HAS DNA OF HUMAN BUT HAS SOME UNKNOWN RADIATION ENERGIES!...FILTERING HARMFUL RADIATION...BEEP! COMPLETE! GATHERING DATA ON RADIATION! ERROR! UNKNOWN! SYSTEM WILL KEEP ANALYZING LATER!]


"So I died huh! What's the deal with those radiation. Will I mutate? (sigh) I guess there's nothing I can do right now. Whatever complaints i have is useless to me. Why am I so calm and why do i feel comfortable." i pondered for awhile. It seems fascinating at first, but soon boredom start creeping in.


"Alexa! Please put me to sleep until birth!"


[BEEP! INITIATING! GOODNIGHT HOST!]



8 months later...

[BEEP! INITIATING WAKE UP MODE...ANALYZING HOST BODY...CONDITION NORMAL...HOST BODY IS MALE HUMAN...WARNING! UNKNOWN ENERGY RADIATION IS DETECTED IN HOST BODY...ENERGY NOT HARMFUL BUT HELPFUL TO BODY CONDITIONING! INITIATING LABOR FUNCTIONS FOR HOST BIRTH!]


"Wha-?! I'm finally getting out of here! Cool...this is going to be both gross and interesting!" I said


He was pulled out. He saw 2 huge figures but can't make out the faces. It was all blurry. His eyesight hasn't yet developed.

Then the midwives cut the umbilical cord.


"AAAHHH! WAAAAH! WAAAAH!" - he yelled in pain.

[BEEEP!] 
[INITIATING ENDORPHINS TO EASE PAIN RECEPTORS!]

"Ugh! That shit hurts! You fucking bastards!" he yelled but nothing came out his mouth but baby cries. 

Then he felt a sense of comfort when the female mother hugged him. He stopped crying and felt extremely sleepy.

[BEEP! UNKNOWN LANGUAGE! ANALYZING!]
[...2% COMPLETE]

Before I went to sleep I asked Alexa for my status. And a picture as clear as day popped out in my head.

(HOST STATUS)
NAME: ???
AGE: 3 MINUTES
RACE: HUMAN
LEVEL: 0

STR: .01
DEX: .01
AGI: .01
SKILLS: <NONE>

"Hmm, well that's to be expected! I'm a baby after all (YAAAAWWWWN). I'm so sleepy, better shut my eyes. Goodnight Alexa!"

[GOODNIGHT HOST!]

The mc was reborn as Anthony Light, the only son of a retired knight turned hunter. The world he was reborn into was a cultivation world with magic where only the strong survives.

The second morning at the institute starts identically to the previous day. Before long I find myself in my comfy corner of the classroom debating on what to accomplish after class. There are still two months before the start of the original story, so there's no rush to absorb all the books in the institute's library. 

Making 7,000 demon spirit coins will be a bit more difficult. Selling inscriptions still seems like a solid plan, but I've not come across the inscription section in the library yet.

Now that I put some thought into it, physical exercise should be high on my priority list. I'll require sufficient strength, speed, and endurance for combating or escaping any possible enemies. A strong physical body increases the speed of cultivation, plus, it's mandatory to possess a strong body to absorb the powers of law. Not exploding is also a nice bonus to becoming stronger.

There are two ways to improve your physical attributes. The first is a body cultivation technique similar to cultivating soul force. It doesn't require much movement, and also strengthens and improves all your internal organs and bones. A disadvantage is there are very few in Glory City, and it will limit your overall body size and physical power. 

The second way to improve your physical attributes is good old fashion workouts. It will improve your muscle size and overall physical power but does little for your internal organs. A major advantage is I can combine my knowledge from Earth with the concepts they use in Glory City. Another disadvantage is he is physically laborious and will require weights and pills later. 

Making a mental note to check the institute's library for books on body cultivation, I put that thought to the side for now.

Genuinely having no interest in the propaganda sermon about to commence, I grab some on my writing supplies to test a theory. The Library of Heaven's Path can correctly show the flaws to nearly anything I can touch. What about literary works that I create myself? 

With teacher Xia's distinctive voice in the background, I title a page 'My Profound Thoughts' and begin to write down every famous saying, quote, and controversial theories from Earth that I can think of. Inspirational and infamous movie and book lines are added next. Nothing is spared. 

My frenzied scribbles only cease once I've used my last sheet of parchment. I impatiently wait for the ink on the last few handwritten pages to dry before a carefully gather all the sheets into an orderly stack. 

With a pounding heart, I tentatively place my hand on the cover of the recently created word vomit and think 'Flaws!'

Jumping into the Library of Heaven's Path, I find myself standing before an unassuming hardbound book titled 'My Profound Thoughts'. Eagerly grasping the book and thinking about its flaws, my vision is blocked by another sheet of parchment.

['My Profound Thoughts' written by Zhu Di]
[218 Flaws. Flaw #1...]

A sigh escapes me due to my welcome relief. Over two hundred flaws may be a lot, but I must have written down over 400 individual quotes and theories! I'll be able to use the advance technology from Earth for creating a potential pathway for several powers of law! This is huge! 

I reluctantly return to the classroom with the intent to use the Library of Heaven's Path to create a workout plan based on Earth's modern technology, only to be halted in my tracks. I only brought a few sheets of paper today, and those are now all used. Crap.

"So, what kind of profound thoughts do you have," asked Liu Yang. He was trying to look over the top page. 

Moving the pages out of sight, I reply, "Writing down my own thoughts about some of the topics teacher Xia covered."

Staring at me a moment longer, Liu Yang shrugs his shoulders and laid his head back down on the table. "Whatever you say."

I'll have to destroy those pages when I get back to my room. I'm not taking any chances of those pages getting discovered.

The last few hours of class drag by. Even reading 'Heaven's Path of Human Meridians' doesn't help much due to the time dilation of the Library of Heaven's Path. Although my confidence in the study of meridians is greatly boosted after the ninth reading. Soon I'll be able to recite the entire book.

Once teacher Xia releases us for the day, I hurriedly make my way to the dining hall. The faster I get back to the writing supplies, the faster I can test out modern exercise efficiency.

My enthusiasm to get back to my dorm room nearly causes me to run into a dark-haired girl exiting another classroom. I'm able to stop before I physically run into her, but we're well within the others' personal space.

Quickly jumping back before she can react, I cup my fist and slightly bow towards her. "Forgive me. I was not paying attention. You have my deepest apologies."

Without waiting respectfully for her acknowledgment, I straiten my bent back and begin to move around her. It was then that I was able to see her full face. She was beautiful and young. Her midnight black hair framed her sculpted and youthful face. The cold indifference in her fierce eyes didn't take anything away from her beauty.

My movement around her is only slightly paused as I instantly recognize her. Before anything or anyone can disrupt me, I'm swiftly moving down the hallway, forcibly suppressing the urge to throw-up in my mouth!

Without a doubt, I'm convinced that was Xiao Ning'er, and I'm equally convinced that Nie Li is inevitably a pedophile! Yes, I heartily agree that Ning'er is perhaps the most beautiful girl I've ever met, but she's a very young girl! Even if you squint your eyes and tilt your head, she would still look young, and that's coming from someone that was in their early twenties! Nie Li lived for over 100 years! That's not counting at least another 100 odd years spent inside the Temporal Demon Spirit Book! 

The worst part about him is his deliberate manipulation of a young girl. You can't fault someone for a younger person developing a crush on them. I think everyone goes through that phase. Nie Li's actions towards Ye Ziyun were pure manipulation!  

Yup. It's decided. I'm punching that pedophile square in the dick.

I change directions and head up to my dorm room. I've lost my appetite.

Once I'm sitting safely at my dorm desk, I take a moment to purge the last ten minutes from my memory. With a final shiver, I'm ready to create an exercise manual.

Two hours later, I admit defeat. While I was able to create a flawless routine to improve flexibility, I can't create a flawless routine for superior strength or speed. I'm throwing in the towel for tonight. 

Stretching my back after uncomfortable hours of sitting feels amazing. Prudently deciding that today will not be a waste, I promptly begin going through my recently created flexibility routine. I intend to merge it once I create a flawless body manual, so I see no point in naming it.

With nothing to distract me, while I'm awkwardly holding each pose, my mind starts to wonder about Xiao Ning'er's situation. There's no possible way I'm going to allow her to willingly give herself to that ancient pedophile. At the same time, I can't replicate what happened in the story for fear of Ning'er directing her feelings towards me. If she was 17 or 18 years old, I would welcome her attention, but 13 makes me uncomfortable. Reminding myself this is a different culture still doesn't ease my discomfort.

This undoubtedly requires a bit more thought and I'll have to tread lightly when it's time to act. Putting that landmine to the side, for now, I try focusing on improving my flexibility. 

The rest of the first week of school finishes with the same daily routine. I rise promptly with the morning bells and dutifully go through my flexibility routine, followed by cleaning myself up before breakfast. Once I'm in my classroom, I typically split my time between listening to teacher Xia and reading 'Heaven's Path of Human Meridians'. After dozens of extensive readings, it's now possible for me to recite most of the mystical book while correctly pointing out the indicated meridian or pathway. After class is dinner, followed by a dull night in the institute's library absorbing books. Once I return to my dorm, I'll typically go through the flexibility routine again before taking a bath and going to sleep.

An unexpected surprise did occur at dinner on the fourth night. Taking a seat at one of the free tables, I was joined by Wei Nan and Zhang Ming. It was nothing elaborate, but seizing the moment, I introduced myself. 

They were, surprisingly, decent company. Zhang Ming seems to have a wild side and Wei Nan seems the type to roll with the punches. We've been having dinner together ever since that first day. We would have breakfast as well, but they both try to sleep in. Guess they're going through a rebellious teenage stage.

My first week turned very redundant, but I've already absorbed nearly a third of the books in the library. I've started a friendship with Nie Li's future followers, and a side bonus, I can do the splits now. Get to channel my inner Jean-Claude Van Damme.

Today will be a bit different than normal. After six straight days of class, we get a free day. After my morning routine, I make my way off-campus for the first time in a week.

I'm glad to see I'm not alone in my exit. A dozen other students also make their way into the central district. Moving within disorderly crowds is a great way to hide in plain view. As Joseph Heller said: "Just because you're paranoid doesn't mean they aren't after you."

Unfortunately, my little security blanket is slowly dispersed before I arrive at my intended destination. I debated with myself for many hours on intentionally delaying my visit, but I'm really craving a bit of scenery change from the institute's library. 

Not really sure how visiting another library would be much of a change.

Taking in the welcome sight of my destination, I'm a bit disappointed. The grounds are large but the buildings seem to be old and ill cared for. The open courtyard is spacious but appears to be on the verge of being unkempt. 

Determined to see this through, I stoically pass through the entry gates uncontested, making my way to a comely looking woman wearing a grey robe. Before I can introduce myself, she greets me with a professional smile and says cordially, "Welcome to the Alchemy Association. May I be of assistance?"

A 20 year old fan of fanfiction is transmigrated into an orphaned teen in the middle of Glory City. Follow him as he's forced to deal with hidden dangers, evil villains, and the dreaded puberty. 

This is my first novel, so expect some mistakes. I'll try to make corrections when seen. Reworked the first six chapters.

I'm doing this for my own personal pleasure. I have a family and a job that requires me to work most weekends. I hope to produce two chapters a week, provided life allows.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own the stories, Tales of Demons and Gods or Library of Heaven's Path. Any resemblance of any original character is purely coincidence.

I'm back from the two week hiatus. I'm a small writer, so I probably lost a lot of people who were reading before. Thank you if you've stuck around this long, but real life just gets in the way as usual. Let's begin the chapter


Chapter 11: It's Time for a Workout

I'm out of shape, I'm probably underweight, considering, I weigh about 135 with my height being 6'3. I checked on a website online, I remember, I did it once in health class, and back then my weight was healthy, but when did I get this tall. It might've been when my hormones were all out of whack, and I couldn't completely control my emotions. I've learned to use them more, but there are still times when they are extremely overpowering. I wonder if not being at my peak health has something to do with it? I passed Phys Ed, well that was mostly cause the teacher liked me and didn't suspect I was lying.

Who knew it would come back to bite me in the ass. I have never tried to do a pushup in my life, actually any forms of exercise. 

"Jumping Jacks"

That seems to be one of the easiest and most beneficial exercises and helps the cardiovascular system, the system that helps stream blood and transport nutrients. My breathing can improve with that, and I may be able to draw longer, without my arm falling asleep, or my legs feeling jittery. I really don't want to do a jumping jack, I was never taught properly how, and was made fun of in middle school by the other kids for it, well, I also didn't wear deodorant back then, so I don't blame them for picking on me.

If I'm correct, in doing a jumping jack, I have to lift my legs and spread them apart while jumping and make my arms make an arc position without touching. I wanna mainly focus on my upper body, but I don't want to look like the guy that skipped leg day.

What exercise should I perform?

Jumpin Jacks - Improve Cardiovascular system
Push Ups - A complete upper body workout, works on triceps, pectoral muscles, and shoulders.(Different Variations)
 
 Mountain Climbers - It's a real full body workout. It improves everything from the neck down to your feet. (I might get a six pack)

  Standing Bicycle crunches - They seem to be an easy exercise enough, they work out the abs it seems.

 Let's try Jumping Jacks. Alright, so I'll take a deep breath, and spread my legs apart while making my arms arc without touching. I was told you should breathe when jumping up and breathing out when coming down.

 Jumping Jacks - 3 

 Next, Let me go to pushups. I was sure I could do more jumping jacks, but maybe I'm just that badly out of shape. 

 A pushup is to keep the body as straight as possible. In my first few attempts, I kept curving my butt and my knees kept touching the ground. A simple way to stay straight is to keep your knees on the ground in a doggy style like position. Then put your legs back first and make them straight, while lifting up the rest of your body.

 Pushups - 0.5

 I fell down while trying to keep my body, and falling on the wood floor on my room hurts. My Mom walked in on me, while I was doing that, she laughed that, I was actually trying to exercise, and she told the rest of the family. They laughed at me, I can't blame them. I've never even attempted doing exercise before, but damn is it frustrating to keep people laughing at you when you're trying your hardest.

 Mountain climbers are similar to a plank or a pushup - position just standing still but having your butt up higher. It's like a position for starting a race. My abs hurt 2, I did 2,

 Mountain Climbers 2, I only managed 2, and my stomach, or rather my non- existent abs hurt.

 Standing Bicycle crunches weren't as bad as the others just had to lift my knees up to my chest, but because my abs were hurting I did 5, and my legs started falling asleep.


 Jumping Jacks - 3
 
 Pushups - 0.5

 Mountain Climbers - 2

 Standing Bicycle Crunches - 5


 Is this exercise really worth it? I barely managed to do things, a normal healthy teenager could do. If I'm thinking long term, my arms and legs, are either going to be moving a lot or not, depending on what I decide to do the day. It might limit my capabilities, of what I do further down the line. I heard many artists, game developers, musicians, programmers, have all been hospitalized for how hard their working. I need a healthy body, if I want to go past my limit, it doesn't need to be buff, just healthy, so nothing bad happens to me.

Join A young boy who's not confident is his endeavors to become a video game designer. He doesn't feel the pressure and that's what makes it all the more worse. He's surrounded by talent, will he break or continue to be broken and broken over again to get to his goal.

"You really are a doctor?" Rui Han asked slightly confused.
"Mm. Why? I can't open an entertainment company if I am a doctor?"
"I don't mean that. It is just that you look very young to be able to do all these kinds of stuff."
"She is only one year younger than me and you," Tang Shao Chen replied.
Their eyes went wide when they heard that.
"Aren't you guys going to take off your shirts?"
The other four members immediately took off their shirts obediently.
Ten minutes later.
"Inform the chef to prepare nourishing meals for Rui Han, Cui Zhi and Liu Ze Ming from tonight onwards until their health improves. For Cao Jun and Fu Chang Mu, prepare more vegetables, avoid fried food," Mo Xi pressed on the intercom and instructed her assistant about it.
"Yes, boss!"
"Thanks."
Mo Xi then turned to the five members again, "Later on, Wang Hui would bring you all to your apartment. Do you all want to live together or live in separate apartments?"
"We get to choose?"
"Mm. If you choose individual apartments, the overall size would definitely be much smaller than if you guys were to share. However, there would be more privacy. For the shared apartment, there would be five bedrooms in the apartment apart from the usual living room, etc. Basically, it would be like a house with five bedrooms."
The five members contemplated for a moment before they replied firmly, "We want to live together."
"Alright. Director Wang, bring them to the shared apartment later," Mo Xi spoke to Wang Hui through the intercom.
"Understood."
"As mentioned, you guys have to undergo lessons for academics and non-academics, as well as continue with your usual training. If you do well, then you would be able to stop the lessons earlier. If you don't, you will have to juggle everything. I would be here most of the time for these two months. However, from next year onwards I won't be here all the time because I still have school, but I would check on you guys from time to time."
"School?" Cui Zhi asked in confusion.
"I will be in year three of high school starting from next year."
"What?!" Fu Chang Mu and Cao Jun exclaimed.
"You got a problem with that?"
"Nonononono!" They shook their heads immediately.
"You guys would be holding a concert in a month."
"What?!"
"The concert would be held in the Capital Indoor Stadium. You all have to work hard to write new songs that would impress the public and choreograph dances for the songs. I will be watching you all closely this month. Good luck!"
"Would anyone come to our concert?"
"Why not? The tickets are free anyways."
"Free?!"
"Mhm. I am sponsoring it, so of course, it would be free. So, don't disappoint me, alright."
"Mm! We won't!" They answered in unison.
"Go and have your dinner first before you guys go to your apartment. You guys had an eventful day today, rest well tonight and you can start working hard tomorrow."
After they finished their dinner, Wang Hui brought them to Imperial Jade Palace. Whereas Mo Xi asked Su Hong Shan to announce to the public tomorrow that 'Heartbeat' has signed with them and they would be having a concert at the Capital Indoor Stadium in a month.
Imperial Jade Palace.
"This is the apartment that you all will live in from today onwards. These are the cards to the apartment and the front gate. You can add in your fingerprint or password to the door to increase the security. You can pick your own bedroom, they are all equipped with a bathroom and air conditioner and warmer. The only difference is where the window is facing. You can take a look at the rooms and put your things down before I bring you all to familiarise yourselves with Imperial Jade Palace."
Rui Han, Cui Zhi, Liu Ze Ming, Cao Jun, and Fu Chang Mu walked into the apartment and their eyes went red.
"Han, are we dreaming? Did we really escape from the hell?" Liu Ze Ming asked.
"We are not dreaming. It's real," Rui Han replied.
"I can't believe this huge apartment belongs to us…" Cui Zhi said.
"This place looks so amazing compared to where we lived before!" Cao Jun exclaimed
"This is heaven!" Fu Chang Mu added.
The five of them quickly toured the apartment before they settled who would sleep in which room. They quickly unpacked their things and they were finished within five minutes because they didn't have many things.
"Those cards keep it with you all wherever you all go. Let's go," Wang Hui said as she walked out of the apartment.
Wang Hui explained while she brought them around Imperial Jade Palace.
"This block is the study block. This is where your lessons would be conducted and there are also study rooms for you all to use."
"This block is the music block. There are music rooms where you all can practice your singing and practice playing instruments. There are also Recording studios and Dance Studios for you all to use."
"This is the exercise block. There are swimming pools, gyms, and courts for you all to play with other artists and to keep fit. There is also a shooting range at the top level, however, that level can only be accessed if you have permission from boss Xi. The range is meant for the actors to practice shooting for action dramas and movies."
"This block is the lifestyle block. We have medical rooms on the top two levels. You can go there when you are sick. There are also cinemas here so that you all relax and support your fellow artist friends' work. Tickets here are counted in the viewership as well. The rest are restaurants, supermarkets, bars, karaoke, massage parlor, arcade, apparel shops, stationery or book stores, and electronics shops. Currently, there are a few empty levels because we would be placing the sponsors' shops there. Except for the medical fees, the rest of the purchases made in this block are charged. However, the prices charged would be lower than when you purchase them outside because they are collaborating with boss Xi. The cards that I told you all to bring around are needed when you all enter certain areas such as the gate to the various blocks and they could also be used for making purchases. For the bar, there is a limit to how much you can drink unless boss Xi permitted them to let you all drink more, you all can only drink a limited amount."


Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

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1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
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Leo looked at Ethan with a bright smile as he said: " Ok from now on your training starts and you cant be a sleepy head and have to wake up at 6 am to train with me."
"Ok, brother I won't sleep anymore and train hard with you."
Then Leo started teaching Ethan a completely different set of movement stances and techniques which was very suitable for his body type. it was a technique called [ War God's Thunder]. It was a set of techniques that massively improved his strength and slowly opens up his meridians as he improves in the technique.

Erza soon got up and walked to the courtyard with her teddy in her hand as she squinted her eyes and looked at her brothers. One of them looked like he was doing a weird dance but it didn't look much like a dance either. And the other one was doing push-ups, pull-ups handstands, and a variety of muscle-strengthening exercises in a weird way. She thought she was hallucinating and rubbed her eyes and pinched her thighs to check whether she was still dreaming. but the pain was real as she realized it was not a dream and her brothers were doing some weird stuff at the courtyard.

She called out to them " Big bro and Ethan what are you guys doing? Did something happen? why are you acting strange? "

Leo and Ethan stopped what they were doing slowly and scratched their heads as they smiled and looked silly covered in sweat. Leo said, " Little Erza it's just some exercise that I and Ethan were doing so that we can be strong and protect you."
"Yea Erza it was brother Leo who taught me this stuff although they might look weird, I feel like my strength improving by a lot."
"Hmm ok as long as you guys were fine, I thought something happened to you guys."
"Ok Little Erza go have a bath and we both need to wash up as well, then after that, I will prepare your favorite Egg Sandwich for breakfast."

Leo then went to have a bath and had breakfast with his siblings. After that Erza and Ethan started playing Fifa Godlike in their PS 30. Leo also excitedly went back to his room carrying the newly arrived boxes of herbs to his room. The herbs arrived when they were eating breakfast and breaking the lovely atmosphere which turned a little into shock because of seeing the big boxes containing strange plants. They have never seen Leo buy stuff from outside in large quantities and that also many plants. But they were soon convinced that this was a gift from his teacher in school who taught him those exercises.

Although they were both shocked, they soon went back to eating the good breakfast with erza talking about her favorite stuff how she was better at games than Ethan. Soon they got into a little argument and went to compete in games.

After Leo got into his room with the boxes, he slowly opened them up and checked everything to see if there was any mistake made and also if those herbs contained medicinal properties as he thought. To his relief, the herbs did contain medicinal properties and also a greater amount than usual what he had seen in the cultivation world. But there was only a little lingering Spiritual energy in them. 

After preparing the herbs and revising on how they should be used according to his memories, he started preparing the bath liquid in his tub. After mixing the correct set of ingredients and the ratio of mixing and heat, he removed his clothes and slowly entered the tub. The liquid was a little warm which was the right temperature for it, so he started performing a technique to form the mist using the liquid. Which was to heat his stored spiritual energy along his body and form a slow rotating line. This acts as the pathway for the herbal liquid which slowly turns into mist and moves alongside his body. 

The first time was excruciating because normally low-level cultivators who used this had helped from their seniors or elders to heat up and run the spiritual energy along the body. And also this causes some extreme pain for first-time users as the herbal medicine fight through the pores of the body and enter into the meridians. 

Leo clenched his hands and gritted his teeth to endure the pain and forced his will power to continue without fainting. He mocked himself " I was once the Mightest Person on the cultivation world and here I am gritting my teeth due to such pain." The process took about 3 hours until the liquid was fully turned into mist and absorbed by Leo.

If now anyone looked at Leo they would be scared looking at him because he was covered in blackish soot-like material that covered his body. It almost looked like he came out of a swamp covered in black dirt and grime. Leo slowly got up and like cracks forming all over his body, the dirt and grime like impurities mostly fell. Leo went ahead to get bathed as he washed his body of dirt. 

After coming back to his bed Leo went to the hall room and said " I am in a crucial pathway in the technique I'm exercising so I cant cook lunch for you guys. Also if you guys want to improve your gaming skills stop competing against each other and start working together."

Although this sentence of Leo looked normal it was the start of the Invincible Brother and Sister Duo that Shocked the world in the gaming world in the future of Celestial World and its a story for another time.

The two kids looked at each other and grinned and slowly started playing together. Leo also started up the cooking bot to prepare dinner and went over to the courtyard.

The courtyard looks refreshing with a little pond with few fishes in it and an almost withered Cherry Blossom Tree with few leaves. Leo then started cleaning up the courtyard and drawing some lines and circles and some runes and pathways in the big courtyard to create a [Spiritual Energy Gathering Formation]. After finishing his set up he walked over and sat below the tree cross-legged and started his cultivation.

People dream about reincarnation all the time and as those in the dreams, Regulus Leo is a person who is reincarnated not once but nine different times. He doesn't know whether its the last time or just one of his reincarnations. With his memories being intact and the personality of each of the previous lives conflicting with his own. Look forward to how Leo climbs up to the peak of this futuristic world as he battles it out with the known and unknown dangers lurking around him.

Within the entirety of Earth existed only two Arcanists, at least if you took Rainer's word for it. With such a supposed circumstance, it did not take long for him to grow bored with his current state of life.

Perhaps, being someone who could wield magic at his fingertips should make him feel special. Add to that the feeling of being almost alone in this power and special is not enough to describe the situation.

Perhaps, he should have been content with the few abilities he had that no other human could wield. Yet, it was the very fact he had those abilities that became the issue. Rainer had no reason to be unhappy. But that was precisely where his unhappiness stemmed from.

Had he been completely normal, Rainer could have accepted his current life. There was little to complain about. He had a supporting family that paid for him to go to college across the country, his own apartment as a college sophomore, and magical abilities that let him learn in his sleep. He also took up lifting weights early on. So, despite having hobbies that often kept people from thriving in society, he didn't suffer.

He felt his entire life was being wasted and that he could be casting powerful magic, comprehending the true mysteries of the universe, and soaring above his normality.

The man who could be king desires it far more than the man who never had a chance.

He had grown more and more disillusioned with his future. All his magic had accomplished thus far was allow him to be lazy; he would obtain more. He had to. And so came about Rainer's current situation of depending on sleep learning to get through his classes while he focused on his first original spell, wall-walking. Such a task consumed him.

He came up with the idea for wall-walking after a magically charged finger slipped through a piece of paper. Of course, he ignored the fact it didn't pass through the paper but burned through it. That didn't matter to him. He simply sought what he sought. And after months of work, he began his first practice run.

Right in front of him hung a large piece of cardboard that covered up a doorway in his apartment. He would try to pass his hand through the cardboard and then his whole body. The reverse engineering of the spells taught by his grandfather combined with modern knowledge of molecules led him to this point. At the very least he created a spell that did something. Whether it did the right thing or catastrophically failed had yet to be seen.

He paused for a moment before deciding to write something down in case of said catastrophic failure. Yes, he was at a point where he was willing to risk his life learning a new magic.

To all those who may be concerned, yadda yadda yadda, grandpa I screwed up, you know how, blah blah blah, tell my family what you want, blah blah blah.

Sincerely, Rainer

It was a note that lacked any seriousness. Life threatening? That was just drama in an otherwise calm reality. He may at most hurt his hand and be unable to write such a note while it healed.

With but a thought, the spell activated...yet nothing seemed to happen. Though that was only how it seemed. The world turned into a black nothingness, causing Rainer to temporarily lose consciousness. And now, in a different time and a different place, a young man stood alone in a dark cave on the precipice of what would become his new life or his grave.


Rubbing his head in confusion Rainer could only show a stunned look to the scenery around him. He was supposed to have just put his hand through a wall.  And not even a real wall. Just a large piece of cardboard.

It was to be his first achievement in magic, a spell that went beyond the ability to make mundane life less boring. What value did being able to singe a paper cup with a small ball of energy have in a world where a little laser pointer could do more? And while the sleep learning spells were useful for daily life, they only made doing tasks less tedious and gave the day a few extra hours.

Now all that surrounded him was darkness with but a bit of light peeking in. Futilely brushing away his black hair from his eyes didn't accomplish much of an improvement in his vision.

"What the fu…."

But his words were quickly interrupted by the pitter-patter of feet on stone. The cave had been illuminated by way of an ugly green creature holding a torch.

The creature stood at just under 5 feet in height, about a foot shorter than the man he was now looking at. As soon as the torchlight revealed a strange human in what would seem to the creature an odd pair of black pants alongside a black tunic, a guttural snarl roared out.

Clearly, negotiation was not on the table.

Immediately, the creature drew a dagger from its waist and charged Rainer at speed equal to an Olympic athlete. Stunned at the utterly strange sight Rainer acted almost on instinct and released a single spell. Yes, the very same that would only annoy a mouse. However, what came out was not a small ball of white and violet light, but a large bolt.

With the speed of a fast pitch, the arcane bolt slammed into the chest of the Goblin, staggering his entire body. Utterly shocked at the newfound power of his spell Rainer paused for a moment before he cast, again and again, still filled with adrenaline. While stumbling backward, Rainer managed to get off two more bolts. They slammed into the Goblin before it fell lifelessly to the ground, just a few feet away from Rainer. The dropped torch echoed as it hit the ground but still burned at the fallen Goblin's side.

[Experience Gained: 5%]

Such a message appeared on the bottom right of Rainer's vision before fading. The shock of killing another living thing hadn't set in, for all of his current focus was on the message icon that had just appeared.

A hud message, the fuck?

However, as someone who was an Arcanist, Rainer didn't take long to accept his current reality. Or to imagine what exactly this reality was. Somehow his wall-walking spell teleported him here. Somehow, he had gained experience no different than if he was in a game. More importantly, the fallen corpse of a creature that represented a stronger version of the classic goblin was right in front of him.

Slightly gagging at the distorted face and leaking drool of the now-corpse, Rainer instead focused on this whole experience business and immediately started chanting out various words.

"Show Level."

"Show Skills."

"Show Character."

"Show Stats."

"Show Status."

Instead of anything happening Rainer instead was met with a slight echoing and a tinge of embarrassment.

Show me my fucking Status you cunt…please.

He cried out in his head to no one in particular as the seriousness of his current situation sank in. Thoughts that dealt with hallucinating the message in the corner of his view and how he was now trapped in who knows where with who knows what. That unhelpful train of thoughts was halted by a particular message screen.

[Name: Rainer Nvos]
[Age: 19]
[Titles: None]
[Primary Classes: Arcanist lvl 1]
[Sub-Classes: None]
[Exp: 5%]
[Race: Human]
[Skills: Sleep Learning lvl 9/10]
[Skill Points: 0]
[Talents: Excellent Arcane Affinity, Human Growth]
[Stamina: 11/12]
[Stamina Regen: .1% per second]
[Mana: 7/13]
[Mana Regen: .001 per second]

The regen rates left Rainer slightly distressed. Stamina was fine, assuming it didn't decrease too much, as was logical the more one acted without sleep or real rest. No, wait, it was a status screen!

He began trying to figure out how pitiful his mana was, opting to temporarily ignore the issue of any of this even existing. One mana point took 1000 seconds to regenerate, or roughly 16 minutes. One arcane bolt cost 2 mana. One goblin could be killed with 3 arcane bolts. That meant for about every 1 and a half hours he could kill a single goblin. More importantly, he could only kill 2 goblins at full strength. 2 goblins are 10%, and that was only for level 1.

30 hours.

A minimum of 30 hours to reach level 2.

What bastard set the difficulty setting for this world?

[Constitution: 11]
[Affinity: 13]
[Vitality: 10]
[Endurance: 12]
[Strength: 12]
[Dexterity: 12]
[Intelligence: 14]
[Willpower: 10]
[Attribute points: 0]

Understanding that it was a command of thought rather than an out loud declaration Rainer became deeply interested in the information before him. The amount of unknown information was slightly overwhelming but he began inspecting it and much to his delight, information about anything he thought of in his status was revealed before him.

[Excellent Arcane Affinity: 200% general improvement and growth to Arcane Spells and Arcane related skills. 50% improvement and growth to all magic spells and magic-related skills.]

[Human Growth: Lacking any innate abilities or attribute bonuses, humans instead garner an increased growth rate of 10% in all subjects and general leveling.]

[Arcanist lvl 1/25: As a seeker of the Arcane, the true origin of magic, all secrets of the universe await thee. 100% general improvement and growth to Arcane spells and Arcane related skills. 25% improvement and growth to all magic spells and magic-related skills. Allows the initial learning of any skill far easier than normal. +2 Intelligence, +2 Affinity, +.5 Willpower, +.1 All Attributes per Level past Level 1.]

This combined with the affinity, he understood, was what gave his formerly useless spell such an impact. However, an issue was still at hand; even a possible 300% or larger increase wouldn't explain the changes to his [Arcane Bolt], as it was now called.

For now, he decided to shelve the issue and instead thank whoever created this system for not letting his end be at the hands of a mere goblin. This, of course, ignored the fact the Goblin was certainly far too fast and coordinated to be called a mere goblin.

[Human: Denotes one as a member of the human race giving them the Talent: Human Growth and the base attributes of a human of their age and ability.]

[Arcanist Sub-class Bonus: 25% general improvement and growth to Arcane spells and skills]

Sub-class bonus he assumed was the only bonus he got when a class was a sub-class. Though how that happened, and more importantly whether it could be easily changed afterward, was not something he was willing to try at the moment.

Next, it was time to look at what each attribute did. Though he was confused by the actual values. His bench at 275 pounds was roughly two times that of the average male. This didn't mean he was two times as strong in general as a human male, but it certainly didn't seem right only to be at 12 when he didn't just bench press.

Though assuming 10 represents average may be at fault here.

There was also the adaptation of the nervous system that significantly improves strength, so then wouldn't the attribute strength only be referencing muscular strength? Isn't that faulty...In the first place, even the fastest Olympic sprinter didn't even reach twice as fast as an average human so perhaps it was accurate.

There was nothing he could truly glean from the numbers of his stats apart from obvious conclusions until he had a larger sample size. Some of the exact effects of Affinity, Stamina, and Willpower had numerical representations.

[Constitution: Improves the durability and defense of one's body.]

[Affinity: Improves one's casting and learning ability while increasing total mana.]

[Vitality: Improves the healing ability and disease resistances of one's body.]

[Endurance: Increases stamina and reduces its consumption.]

[Strength: Improves the power of one's body.]

[Dexterity: Improves the control and speed of one's body.]

[Intelligence: Improves the power of magic and the processing speed of the brain.]

[Willpower: Improves the resistance against magical/mental ailments and the regeneration of mana.]

[Attributes may contain other hidden effects.]

Finally, he looked at his one spell.

[Spellbook: Arcane]
[Tier One: Arcane Bolt lvl 2/10]
[Arcane Bolt lvl 2/10: Fires a bolt of concentrated Arcane energy.]

Nothing there to explain why the increase was so significant. Understanding that held by far the most importance, lest that increase returned back to normal and he died to whatever companions this single Goblin had without being able to cause even an annoyance.

Forgetting, or rather ignoring, the spell that had become a skill, [Sleep Learning], Rainer decided to take a real look at his surroundings. A cave it could be simply called, though the carved out tunnel the Goblin came from had several wooden beams as support so maybe an abandoned mine.

Well, occupied mine I suppose. Can these goblins mine, or even speak?

Rainer looked back down at the corpse he created. Apart from the slightly darker skin created from his attacks, the Goblin lacked any real damage to its body. It seemed [Arcane Bolt] dealt internal or magical damage more than anything else.

After a moment of inspection, a surprising message appeared. Though, considering the bonus of his [Arcanist] class, not too surprising.

[Skill Gained: Appraisal lvl 1/10]

Now the Goblin displayed a small message whenever he invoked [Appraisal] on its body.

[Goblin, Male, Deceased]

Nothing I wasn't aware of...how useful.

He cringed for a moment before taking the Goblin's dagger, deciding to try to open up the head of the creature's head. If games or anything else were correct, the goblin would have some loot. He stabbed the dagger straight into the Goblin's head but seeing the blood pour out was already more than he could handle.

Removing what lunch he had, he went back to his bloody work. In the end, after finally cracking open the skull and hacking up what little food he had left, he finally found what he had been looking for...or not. There was nothing but a brain and disappointment. Though, gaining the skill [Goblin Anatomy lvl 1/10] had to have some value.

Probably…

Pausing for a moment at the still burning torch he quickly put it out on the rock floor, once more plunging himself into darkness. The element of surprise was his only ally in a place like this. At the very least, the fact that the Goblin carried a torch at all meant they couldn't see either. Besides, his [Arcanist] class might let him gain a skill for seeing the dark. Or so he thought...

There in the dark sat a man, wasting his time away, squinting his blue eyes at the darkness. He lacked any complicated thoughts beyond unbridled excitement at the situation he was in. He had just arrived and already his magic had reached a new height. He could truly consider himself an [Arcanist] and on the path to greater magics.

Rainer, an amateur arcanist and college student, sought to create a new spell far surpassing the magic of the few he inherited from his grandfather. Yet the interference of an unknown event during the casting of his spell led him to be thrown through space and time.

Where status screens were accepted as normal and class distinctions were quite clear. Goblins were not the fodder that they should be, orcs filled bedtime stories in order to scare children into behaving, and a dragon? You might as well pack up and move to another country.

He, however, enters this world with the rare and powerful class of the Arcanist. How will the recently ardent seeker of magic find greater heights, or will he land in deeper depths?

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Rainer, an amateur arcanist and college student, sought to create a new spell far surpassing the magic of the few he inherited from his grandfather. Yet the interference of an unknown event during the casting of his spell led him to be thrown through space and time.

Where status screens were accepted as normal and class distinctions were quite clear. Leveling and achieving a class beyond a simple farmer or peddler was an affair of life and death combined with years of hard training. Goblins were not the fodder that they should be, orcs filled bedtime stories in order to scare children into behaving, and a dragon? You might as well pack up and move to another country.

He, however, enters this world with the rare and powerful class of the Arcanist. How will the recently ardent seeker of magic find greater heights, or will he land in deeper depths?

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Hey guys, this is Aternus from Royalroad. People keep trying to plagiarize my novel on here, so to save myself some trouble I'll just officially post it. I read enough on this website anyways, so I might as well. I've edited the author's note on my most recent chapter to show this is really me. Also thank you, everyone, for review bombing the fake stories.

In a forest that seems to be far away from any form of civilization, there's a light shining bright which scares the beasts nearby because of its high intensity, in the middle of that light a white-haired boy with a godly face that for some reason gives off an ordinary feeling in laying in the middle of it.

After a long time, the young man started showing reaction as his eyes slowly opened and he got up and yawned.

*yawn* "Gosh, I haven't felt this good in ages! Being old is really too scary, I'll cultivate to the point where age doesn't matter anymore." Ky said with a tired expression of someone who slept for too long and now only feels like sleeping more.

"Well, I've slept for long enough at least for now." Ky immediately began stretching his body and doing some exercise after so long without it.

He did 75 push-ups, 42 sit-ups, and 800m running.

"That was a nice warm-up, this body really is a whole new level. I feel like I did absolutely nothing up until now, I think I could repeat this about 17 times without getting even a little tiny bit tired, this really is beyond crazy! When I was a normal person this training would put me crying, well I was terrible with physical activity back then so yeah. But this really is surprising, for a new body to have this much efficiency! Absolutely fascinating!" Ky just got this body not long ago but he already feels like he's had it for hundreds of years, even the difference in height doesn't seem to be affecting him at all.

"Ok, I should check my status to see my overall situation before I leave this place," Ky said completely unaffected by the fact he's in the middle of a forest in a completely unknown world, that's the effect of having lived in the Shadow World for 5 years, for him, this forest looks like a paradise compared to the forests there where an instant of distraction can cost more than you can pay for. 

Ky called out his status.

<Status>

[Name: Kin Yun
Lv:0(sub-level)
Exp:0/100
Cultivation level:None
Cultivation technique:None
Martial Arts:None
State:Normal
Attributes:All(he has affinity with all elements)
Spiritual root: Primordial root of all elements 
Body physique:Primordial Origin Physique
Bone frame/talent:12th frame (limit broken) (The max is the 10th frame)(Currently suppressed to 6th frame)
Race: Primordial Origin Energy Existence race(only member of the race alive)(limited power access, only 10% of total power)
Bloodline:Universal Origin God(purity:low grade)( bloodline derived from 'Primordial Origin Energy Existence' race)
Special trait: Godly charm
Age:14 years old(Actual age:1000 years old , total age:1014 years old)
Gender: None/Genderless(can turn into either, both  at the same time or stay as none at will)
Profession:blacksmith-lv:1(low tier), alchemist-lv:1(low tier), rune engraving-lv:1(low tier), talisman maker-lv:1(low tier), beast tamer-lv:1(low tier), puppet master-lv:1(low tier), poison master-lv:1(low tier)(currently unavailable), summoner-lv:1(low tier)

Stats:

Attack power value:150

Defense power value:150

Speed value:150

Luck value:100

Charm value:1

Lord value:0

Skills:

Regeneration-lv:1(low tier)
Evasion-lv:1(low tier)
Sword arts-lv:1(low tier)
Close combat-lv:1(low tier)
Shooting-lv:1(low tier)
Hawk vision-lv:1(low tier)
Qi breathing-lv:1(low tier)
fast swim-lv:1(low tier)
Fast run-lv:1(low tier)
Dash-lv:1(low tier)
Fast read-lv:1(low tier)
quick learning-lv:1(low tier)
Concentration-lv:1(low tier)
Concealment-lv:1(low tier)
Stealth-lv:1(low tier)
Detection-lv:1(low tier)

Profession skills:
Taming-lv:1(low tier)
Blacksmithing-lv:1(low tier)
Alchemy-lv:1(low tier)
Engraving-lv:1(low tier)
Puppet mastery-lv:1(low tier)
Talisman making-lv:1(low tier)
Poison mastery-lv:1(low tier)
Summoning-lv:1(low tier)

Special skills:
Eyes of Origin(skill evolved by bloodline and derived from Soul eyes)-lv:1(low tier)
Primordial shadow extraction of origin(skill evolved by bloodline and derived from Shadow extraction)-lv:1(low tier)

Pets:None

Summons:Queen of the Shadow World(baby state)

Inventory: Novice gift box(lv:1)x1, Unknown Katana.]

"Ok, this is much bigger than I expected... The amount of lore that comes with this is not small" Ky said looking at his status slightly stunned by a lot of the information displayed.

"First of all, Why are all my skills and professions in level 1?! I know I'm no master in any of them but I also know that level 1 is an insult to all the time I put into adapting to these skills, even if not originally mine I'm sure I deserve at least a level 2 in most of them" Ky was confused the most about this, even if he isn't the best in any of those he's at least good enough to be considered more than level one, how would you feel if you got told that skills you practiced and improved for 5 years only amount a newbie's level 1? He really would be fine with at least a level 2, as a gamer he's well aware that level 1 amounts the same as just learned and with zero experience, how come not a single of the skills he used for 5 years reached level 2?

[It's because all of the host's skills have been reset, the host will have to start from the beginning]

"You could tell me things like that will happen, you know?" Ky said not really disappointed, his problem was the fact the work he did for 5 years was being called nothing if it's not that he doesn't mind starting over, it's also kinda the point of coming to this new world so yeah.

[Host did not ask]

"Well.... That's true but you could still tell me" Ky said starting to understand the system might not be as helpful as he initially thought.

[That is but impossible, what kind of system does host take me for?]

".... You?(Did the system just get offended?!)...." Ky said while dumbstruck. "You know what? Forget it, just tell me why it says 'sub-level' next to my level?" Ky decided to not pursue the warning matter anymore and asked something else.

[Host is too weak to know]

"Are you just telling me? Or are you taking the opportunity to insult me?" Ky felt that the words of the system didn't sound as neutral as usual.

[Host is too weak to know]

"You?.... Whatever just show me all the information about my status I can know." Ky decided to not argue, no matter what he said now, his weakness is a reality. 

[Body physique:The body physique is a body type owned by an individual with talent or enough ability to cultivate, the grades starting from weakest to strongest are: Human, Earth, Heaven, Divine, Primordial, and Origin.

Primordial Origin Physique: This is an origin grade physique that can turn the heaven and the earth upside down, not only the owner of it has unmatched talent but also an unseen strength that defies the heavens. But the power displayed depends on how much of the power of the 'Primordial Origin Energy Existence' race the owner can use.

Bone frame/talent: It represents how fast one's cultivation is and how good the effects of cultivating will be, basically those with a high bone frame are known as geniuses. Bone frame goes from none to 10th frame, there are some ultra-rare exception that can reach the limit break that doesn't go beyond the 12th frame.

Primordial Origin Energy Existence: Host's level is insufficient to have information.

Universal Origin God: Primordial Origin Energy Existence, is a race with tree bloodlines and this one is the strongest. More information requires a higher level.

Godly charm: a special characteristics that increases the charm by 10.000 of value.

Regeneration-lv:1(low tier): this skill allows host to heal from minor injuries at a slow speed but still much faster than natural healing.

Evasion-lv:1(low tier): Improves the ability to dodge by 5%.

Sword arts-lv:1(low tier): Improves the output of sword proficiency by 5%. At this level, you're not even a sword trainee and don't even know how to hold a sword.

Close combat-lv:1(low tier): Improves the output of close combat proficiency by 5%. At this level you can't even lend an accurate hit in the adversary's openings.

Shooting-lv:1(low tier): Improves the output of long-range combat proficiency by 5%. At this level you can barely shoot, actually even holding the bow proves to be a challenge.

Hawk vision-lv:1(low tier): improves eye-sight in a range of 35m with perfect accuracy.

Qi breathing-lv:1(low tier): Allows host to breathe in any area as long as he has Qi for 12 hours.

fast swim-lv:1(low tier): Improves swimming speed by 5%.

Fast run-lv:1(low tier): Improves running speed by 5%.

Dash-lv:1(low tier): For 5 seconds the host can run 2.5 times faster.

Fast read-lv:1(low tier): Improves reading speed by 5%.

quick learning-lv:1(low tier): Improves learning speed by 5%.

Concentration-lv:1(low tier): the host can concentrate 5% easier.

Concealment-lv:1(low tier): Hides the host's information from any anyone or anything that is within the Qi refining stage of cultivation.

Stealth-lv:1(low tier): Hides the host's presence from any anyone or anything that is within the Qi refining of cultivation.

Detection-lv:1(low tier): Host can detect any within the Qi refining stage in a range of 10m.

Taming-lv:1(low tier): Host can tame any beast within the 1st rank, with a rate of success of 40%.

Blacksmithing-lv:1(low tier): Host can produce weapons and tools within the mind grade, with a rate of success of 50%.

Alchemy-lv:1(low tier): Host can refine pills and brew potions within the 1st grade, with a rate of success of 30%.

Engraving-lv:1(low tier): Host can engrave runes within the 1st grade, with a rate of success of 20%.

Puppet mastery-lv:1(low tier) Host can produce  and control puppets within his own cultivation range, with a rate of success of 50%.(producing puppets of a higher cultivation than host's results in a reduction of success rate and control over it)

Talisman making-lv:1(low tier): Host can produce talismans within the 1st grade, with a rate of success of 50%.

Poison mastery-lv:1(low tier): Host can produce weapons and tools within the mind grade, with a rate of success of 50%.

Summoning-lv:1(low tier) Host can link with a beast within the 3rd rank or lower, with a rate of success of 10%(for 3rd rank).

Eyes of Origin-lv:1(low tier): it can look into the information of anyone within your cultivation realm and one above. More information requires higher level.
Primordial shadow extraction of origin-lv:1(low tier): you can extract skills and etc with 100% rate of success within your layer of cultivation.(rate of success reduces when extracting from higher layers cultivation)]

"It's not as much information as I expected but one thing is for sure, wasn't it a little too expensive if all my skills would reset?" Ky looked at the information of the skills and it didn't seem too amazing so after paying the quantity of CP he paid shouldn't be a little better than this.

[If host intended to keep the skills at a high level, it would be necessary to pay a more CP and since the host didn't have enough, it was only possible to reset all skills]

"That's robbery! After all the effect I put into winning all that CP....." Ky is frustrated by how the system is acting unfairly with him or so he believes. "I don't care anymore, just tell me why my bone frame is suppressed" Ky simply decided to stop complaining and move on.

[Host is too weak to know]

"..." At this point, Ky simply nodded and didn't say more cause even if he did it probably wouldn't end well for him. "Fine open the novice box." Ky said deciding not to ask more questions for now.

[Opening the Novice gift box(lv:1).... Done. 10xhealing pills(3rd grade), Shadow World God's Origin cultivation technique, Shadow World's nine-step domination martial art, Shadow movement art martial art]

"Great! two martial arts and one cultivation technique, Shadow world's God is it? Seems pretty strong, let's put it to work, system I want to learn them all." Ky said with expectations on what these can do.

[ Shadow World God's Origin cultivation technique(12th step cultivation technique, in the human low-tier)(suppressed to 6th step), Shadow World's nine-step domination martial art(4th step martial art human low-tier), Shadow movement art martial art (1st step martial art human low-tier) all learned]

The knowledge of these three rushed into Ky's mind and integrated as if they were always there, Ky felt good receiving them but there's a small problem.

"What? Shadow movement is only a 1st martial arts?! The system cheated me!" Ky got back to complaining. Ky also noticed that his cultivation technique is suppressed but isn't going to bother asking.

Cultivation techniques and martial arts are divided into tiers that go from lowest to highest starting from human to heavenly tier, what defines how high they can get is their step, the higher their step the higher they get. A 1st step martial art can get to the human intermediate-tier and in rare cases of extreme luck the human high-tier, not forgetting each tier goes from low to peak. In common knowledge, there are 10 steps but Ky is outside of all common knowledge.

Ky re-checked his status and the cultivation technique and the martial arts slot are now filled, after seeing that, satisfied he turned it off and got ready to throw himself at this world. He seems to have missed the fact he has a summing beast but that's not a big deal, probably.

"Let's hope, things go right..... Did I just raise a flag? Well whatever" Ky said with a relaxed expression as he walked in the forest calmly, completely forgetting to cultivate or try his martial arts.

This is the story of a young man who lives a normal life until one day he dies(?) and everything changes. After a big adventure of his new life when he thinks things are over it seems only then does his true story start with his transmigration into a Cultivation world, with the Shadow World cultivation system, will Kin Yun be able to reach the top of this new world?

Five months have passed after Flander introduce the training routine to the academy. All the people in the academy start practise the training exercise that I gave to them. The training really works out when they found that they are improving when they break through to other levels of the practice. The one who really progresses so quickly after the training routine been introduced is Dugu Yan and Oscar. Dugu Yan breakthrough level 35 after been practice for five months and shock everyone in the academy. I already expected she would progress much faster if she were training with the training routine, but what shocked me is Oscar. He improves from level 25 spirit grandmaster to level 29 spirit grandmaster within these five months.

The breakthrough from level 25 to 29 within five months for food type spirit master is incredible. If anyone knows about this, they will praise him because of been genius. But to me, this shows that he really put much effort and didn't give up the training. He has a strong determination to be the best. No wonder in the novel, he can become a combat type spirit master when he auxiliary type spirit master. The progress of the two make Dai Mubai, and Ma Hongjun shocked. During these five months, both of them don't really give much effort and don't do any extra training like Oscar and Dugu  Yan.

Dai Mubai during these five months he didn't much focus on the training maybe he wants to distract his thought about Zhu Qing and his brother. That why he doesn't put much effort into practice even he saw me can fight with Zhou Wuji he doesn't bother about it. He thinks Tang San, Xiao Wu and I are gifted, so he didn't try to compete with the three of us. That idea changes when Dugu Yan and Oscar breakthrough every month and rapidly progress without stopping. He regains his competing spirit and focuses more on training two months ago. He breakthrough level 26 spirit grandmaster after two months of serious training and still progress rapidly.

As for Ma Hongjun, he just lazy and didn't put much dedication in training. That why he didn't manage to become the first-class god in the future if he still in this attitude. I don't really like to change people destiny because I have my own journey. But after knowing him in these periods, I know he is not a bad person, so I kind of pity for him. So I use every method to make him training.

Tang San during these five months he manages to breakthrough level 34 spirit elder. During these periods, he much focuses on his hidden weapon and put much effort to perfect the Tang Sect technique. Xiao Wu breakthrough level 37spirit elder after training diligently. She also tries to create a spirit skill. Also, she is the person who always disturbs my training when she encounters a problem. Finally, she created her own spirit skill that makes her so much proud. As for me, I already level 39 spirit elder, and I stop training for while to consolidate my fighting skill. This time my opponent is Flander.

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Hello, I want to tell you guy that tomorrow doesn't have any chapter because I want to take a break for one day. The reason is to think about the future chapter of this story. You guys can give me some idea such as enemy and more. Thank You for support this story.

A normal student with normal life gets the opportunity to get reincarnated in his desired world with 2 wishes. What will he do in the new world?
Douluo Dalu belongs to Tang Jia San Shao,  it doesn't belong to me. I just writing for fun.
Also, the cover image does not belong to me.

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