wasn't satisfied with this, re writing the whole series but will keep the original as an outline

My outline for the book, The Last Of The Blood Blades.

Hello there  everyone! I hope you all had a wonderful Halloween holiday!
I haven't updated a chapter in months and I deeply apologize for that. I disappeared without notice. But here I am, back and alive, fully safe, in blood and flesh.
Now I am back, but I won't be updating chapters any soon. I have decided to stop writing this book as I reached Chapter 6 I think? Well, a chapter that isn't the middle of the book. I decided that the best would be for me to re-write 'Left Unspoken' and this time, with an outline.
Now please hear me out. Months ago when I was doing it, I was just going with the flow, with what came to find. My goal was word count and updating. Not the quality, I valued quantity more. And no outline was present anywhere. But it is time I switch over and act like I say. I always say 'quality should always come over quality' and I will do what I said.
I wrote a vague outline on what is going to happen. I did change some concepts and events, but you can still find many similarities in both stories (well when the second one exists). Now that I have my outline, I can finally start!
How long will this take me? Now writing a book takes most authors about six months to a year. That said, your timeline will depend on the length and genre of your book, as well as your day-to-day writing routine. The amount of research and outlining you do beforehand can also affect how long it takes for you to write a book. That means the book will take up to a year for me to write, maybe even more. It will be a novella, which is slightly shorter than a novel leading it to take me less time. 
Let's not forget, I have school and exams and all sorts of stuff that can take my mind off writing. I have chores, a family and a life as well. I'm even still self-improving at art which is the thing I enjoy most doing, other than writing. I'm also a person that gets distracted really  easily, and when I say really easily, I mean it. So, it is pretty clear that writing isn't the only thing I have on my table.
The process is not just writing words on a screen (or a paper if you may). First comes the outline, then the drafting, then the editing, the proofreading. And that only by myself. Then come all kinds of editing made by other people like developmental editing and copyediting. Aaaand, the COVER. In these case, do judge a book by its cover! There are other stuff you got to do to get it out and there. It is some handful.
Now, when I do eventually finish this big project, there's a huge probability I will publish it on amazon because why not? It's free and it shares by book world-wide! Anyways, I am really excited for this!!! 
Notice that this change of events has a huge advantage for me; that I get to write at my own pace without having to worry about people waiting for the next chapter. Of course, there are many other advantages, but that one really gives my heart a break.
I really hope this did not upset you in any way. I will make sure to remember to keep giving you updates, both through the process and when it's published. I hope y'all stay tuned and don't forget to always place quality over quantity.

Sorra's mom was the last person to call her by her true name. When Sorra was merely six years old, her mother abandoned her. She promised to come back but never did. Sorra couldn't help but feel betrayed. She certainly didn't want anything to do with a traitor, therefore she'd changed her name.

Sorra is currently seventeen, living with her best friend May. There are problems in school, or outside with people hence her hot temper, but nothing compares with what happens when she sees a familiar car in the school parking lot...

Will Sorra's mother care enough to come back to see her only daughter, or did she forget she had one, as Sorra had assumed? Maybe she's not her only daughter after all. Read on to find out what mysteries there are, that even Sorra herself does not know about.

First of all, I apologize, originally I said to arrange a harem, but I was really afraid of being spouted, let's make up for it yourself.
Then, I'll tell you about my two-month action.
I started with the intention of writing the extras until the end of April (without adding this wave of speed, it should be about the same) and then wait for May to finish the exam to open a new book.
However, I waited until mid-March to find a problem; a building and two building is not close in time. Still, in May and September (╯‵□′) ╯︵┴─┴, mainly I was qualified to take a building this year, I did not pay attention before, subconsciously thought that a building in the second building behind a few days.
The new book will be open for a long time; I'm afraid that the review time is not enough, wait until September after the examination and then open a new book; it is really from scratch.
So, I seriously thought for a while, the solution is - super complete outline plus the draft, so that twenty days before the exam at least can still seriously surprise one.
I will open the new book on May 5; 15 days to write the outline, 20 days to save the draft.
The new book will not be available until September, so I can already imagine what my next book will be like that.
The new book plan, probably Naruto is it ( Pirates, now in a big spurt of plot time, it is not good to open a new book ), in addition to the Pirates, in fact, I initially wanted to open a book of the heavens flow. Still, when writing this extra, I suddenly found that a Naruto version of Longinus seems to be very sensational ah ( the new book and the old book do not have any relationship, but the character will be more similar take this biased bright hero flow ).
The persona is almost like this, the plot, I will try to write some novelty, like my writing is not very good, but I think the plot of the brain is still there (at least the sea pirate book seems to be very few people can guess my ideas it)
It seems that there is nothing to say, then I wish all the book lovers good health, all the best, the year 2020 can not be the best when the time comes, students who are still studying can get into the school they want, friends who are still looking for work can find the right job, in short - everything you want!
(I slipped away to make up for the fan, Naruto finished a few years ago, and now the plot has long forgotten, fifteen nights, not to mention the outline, I feel that two times the speed to make up for the fan may not be able to finish ah! Alexander)

Original Title : 海贼之黑暗大将 (Navy's Dark Admiral)
Author : 高燒三十六度 (High Fever 36 Degrees)
He is the Admiral, praised by the world as the light that cuts through the darkness, the Holy Lance Longinus.
He is the Dark Lord, feared by the world as the darkness that ends the era, the Demon Sword Apophis.
He wandered in the light and darkness and wove the battle song of blood and fire.
When he looked back, he found that he had crushed the world beneath his feet.
PS1: This story did not feature any fruit or system, the title of the book has nothing to do with Yami Yami no Mi!
PS2: The timeline is quite long, starting when Roger began the great age of sea pirates!
PS3: Non-scrappy article, highly fantastic and biased slightly off, but the characters should be intellectually ruthless basically in the line!

Original Site: https://book.qidian.com/info/1014128504

I'm still sick and my mind can't function properly to write so no chapters until I get better, it does not help that school is being an ass too.

But I could atleast fix the outline.

Let's get to the point.

This novel is starting to stress me out, I don't like doing things half baked and I certainly don't like the book to follow original plots etc etc.

But so far, by looking at my outline its kinda...

Character heavy? Like a slow burn fanfic?

Don't get me wrong, I love worldbuilding and character growths, where they will change and shed inner or outer weaknesses. Life is a journey and whenever I read other fanfics and their mc's stay the same all throughout the story, I can't help but feel unfulfilled.

The book's future seems to be so focused on characters and character development. Not much action happens except for when Yao trains and that's already pushing it.

I feel like this novel is getting super boring for the readers.

A little teaser for what Yao will do in the next volume.

He's gonna bolster his own force. That's it, run around and make connections, his goal will somewhat be more defined because damn, becoming god or the strongest titled douluo is too far from now and reaching success is too broad of a dream. 

Some peeps become more wholesome and fleshed out along the way, including the mc who will be more badass but kind. Atleast that's what I want to happen.

I like taking things slow, but sometimes I think I'm taking it too slow...

I'm even starting of thinking to rewrite the book.

And hell no I won't do that!

Everytime I try to rewrite a goddamn book of mine it gets worse.

I asked my friends about my issue and they said I care too much about the book.

And yeah, I care too much about this book even if this is just a fanfic.

I don't know dudes, I just feel lost, I feel like what I'm writing is shit. All the books I write I tend to look at them and think they're bad.

I could use you guy's help. So once again, What are your thoughts about the book?

Its strengths and flaws. My strengths and flaws as a writer.

Don't you dare hold back, go criticize me. Just don't trashtalk me for no reason as stuff like that kinda sours my mood.

I want to improve badly and I want to get better at writing. And I want to make this book a better worthwhile read.

Man... I suck at execution. Feels like I'm not doing this fanfiction enough justice.

I'll delete this chapter in four or five days then resume writing, so til then, I'll be listening to you guys.

Thank you in advance.







With one last drink his body finally gives in as the cold embrace of death greets him. Waking up within a deadly forest, the man who would turn the Douluo Continent upside down begins his journey with nothing more than a special card as a martial soul.

Pre-face
 
The Creator's Angel emerged from a re-occurring dream. For a long time, I had difficulty being able to create characters and chapters. I put the book on hold due to my lack of concentration. It has always been my dream to write a book with uniqueness and complications. My biggest problem was not being able to finish a book and at a point I lost inspiration. I found my inspiration through Felix; he has accomplished things that majority of people believe cannot be accomplished I have never met an individual like Felix. I felt inspired to chase my dreams, I let go of my fears as well as insecurities, I was able to clear my mind and create. I first wrote a shorter book (which I will not publish) just to get the feel of ending a book. To my surprise I did it, I edit the book and I am happy with the result.
 
Writing this book was a challenge. I decided on a 30-chapter outline and edited changes as I got more ideas and envisioned my book coming together. The Creator's Angel is a fiction book, I didn't create too much scenery and described all characters in detail, except for my main characters. I did not include too much detail or scenery because I enjoy books that give me the ability to create my own. The biggest challenge on this book was keeping the book to a simple meaning. There is a lot of things occurring in this book, but I feel I have kept the meaning of the book at heart the whole time I was writing. I hope this book is enjoyed and refreshing, as well as expands the imagination of my readers. The best part of life is creation.

One woman can make an impact that can change the world but it takes a group of people to make change. Love, Lust, Danger and suspense is what Ausra brings to the table. It feels like at times challenges and unhappiness follows Ausra's life path, fights, actions, confusion and Fenox. Ausra loves Fenox more than anything in the world one event one moment. Will Ausra get the love she desires or will she find a hidden surprise. Read Along as the creator observes.

Hi people, hehe i just wanna use a special way to apologize to you all for the inconveniences you suffered for the past two weeks. My secular job's taking a toll on me and i broke down for two days.  Well, I wanna first say a big thank you BERGENTRUNGR now called Godsovereignj. He made the novel go this far. You know for a long time I was very discouraged but I still kept an eye on this book's progress. All it took was a comment from him. It gave me the motivation that I lacked all this time and despite many challenges I encountered, we all stuck to this book. I'm really glad and never thought this book would go this far. So thanks to Godsovereignj and a few others infact all of you for making it happen. So I am using a fake interview with me the author Stella2138 with a few chosen ones. And hey never feel bad if i don't use your name. I've got a bad memory so don't blame this lazy girl okay? Kisses!
Now lets get on to the interview.



AN INTERVIEW WITH THE AUTHOR.
Five people are sitting on a long couch and one of them is the camera man.

Opposite them is an average face and heighted lass sitting on a throne (like literally hehe), a book in her hand called Chase and love. Her clothes are pink and her shoes red. Her hair is black and she's a black too. Yeah an african babe!
Author: I'm really glad that you're here to talk to me. You know i like the cold faced guy at the corner. Hey are you single? What's your name?"
Godsovereignj: " *cough twice* Madam, I think we gotta be professional here. You can call me Godsovereignj"
"Author: "Ok! But if you change your mind, here's my number 08045..."
Lie Siang: "Miss, we're here to ask you some questions. Can you be a bit more serious? And please sit properly"
Author: "I'm serious now. But before we start can I ask a question?"
Liesiang: "Ask away,Miss"
Author: "Eh...are you male or female? I just can't tell from your body nor voice."
Liesiang: "No comment"
Author: "Oh, you're shy eh? Come on, even if you're transgender i got no probs. I'll just take you to a mental clinic."
Liesiang: " Miss, can we start the interview?"
Author: "No problem. You can ask anything you want. For example like the size of my booty....blah blah blah"
Godsoverignj: "*cough* Madam, professionalism please!"
Author: :"Come on don't be so cold. Forget it. Let's start with the interview. Hehe I'm so excited *winks*"
Kitsun: "So Miss, you are the author of Chase and Love. What is your real name, how old were you when you started writing?"
Author: "Well, my real name is Elfrida Ihwihwu and I started writing at the latter months of age ten."
Daoist8zpynt:" Wow! mind telling us what motivated you to start your first novel and how did it feel when you completed one?"
Author:"Well, I attended private school for some time but had to go to a public school after a whole term of sitting at home. A bookstore was close by and I wanted all the novels but couldn't afford them. My classmates too wouldn't bother lending me one. I love novels so much and so I said ' if they won't give me novels, then I'll make my own and after writing my  short five in one series novel I was shocked to see so many hungry people fighting to read it and so I wrote a longer novel and kept on. It got to a stage where I didn't even focus on my studies just to write. In class I became lazy and preferred writing novels to copying notes. But despite that I fight with geniuses who read daily for the top ten positions... hahahaha. In my final year at highschool, my schoolmates always ravaged my bag to check for novels and if I haven't written anything or worse still, brought no novel to school then I'll be in big trouble. People I don't even know were even more shameless in begging for my novel and I had to be strict or else I'd have no novel on hand. I've talked too much right?"
Kitsun: " No problem at all. So the next question. How many books have you written so far, counting from age ten? How many have you completed?"
Author: " Well I really have no idea. It should be more than two hundred. And as for completed novels...not up to hundred. You know right on webnovel I have 13 reader accounts and 4 current writer account on inkstone. But my preferred account Stella2138 contains 20 unfinished novels. You can say that I've not completed any of the novels I wrote online"
Gigidarby54: "That's quite a ...feat"
Author: "Yeah."
Godsovereignj: "So what made you decide to focus on Chase and Love and could you please let the audience know the challenges you encountered in the course of writing"
Author: "Your voice sounds so nice dear. Hehe...no need to remind me, I'll be professional. But behind the scenes can we..."
Godsovereignj: "*clears throat* Madam, please be tactful. People are watching"
Author: "Oh! Sorry, I'll not do this next time but I can try other ways right?"
Godsoveregnj: "Whatever!"
Author: "Ok, back to business! This book was actually born on a whim 4 days after my Grandpa died. At first I wasn't too serious about it but 6 people added it to their library on the first day and so I focused a bit on it with the thought of stopping at anytime."
Kittycov: "Really? That would be a real torture for us fans"
Author: "Yeah, I know that! If you guys had been with me from day one of this novel you'd know that I've changed the name of this novel up to twenty times along with the synopsis. I was even discouraged by a reader who said my story was trash. I felt really hurt and deleted everything I wrote. At that time I had about 300 collections. But that same day I comforted myself and reposted everything I deleted. Then my writing began to mutate several times until now. And it's still mutating and it's for the better. Why I focused on writing this novel is because I can relate really well to the FL,Theresa Williams. I can say that I've merged with her already and I can feel her pain, sadness and happiness along with Ju Wei and Long Ren. This novel is the only book that made me happy to write. It satisfies me when I write a chapter of this book. Yeah I know my grammar's got problems, I can't describe well and some other faults that I can't say now. But please know that I'm doing my very best, giving my all so as to ease your stress after a day's work. And also I'm happy to recieve power stones and comments. It really gives me strength to write more. You don't know the power of a comment but as an author...hehe, it's the best reward. To know that real people are reading your book and appreciate you...it's really feels very good. And like every author I did face and am still facing some challenges. One is vocabulary, two is stress. I often feel stressed out especially when I'm writing highly demanding scenes and then I encounter several writer's block then I have to go on hiatus. Then since my health is unpredictable, I get sick. I feel very sick during cold weather and not better in hot season. Sometimes the sun is too hot for my skin then I get fatigued...I think I'm going outta track...forgive me"
"Liesiang: " No problems Miss Elfrida. I like your honesty"
Author: "Thank you, dear. You still haven't told me your gender yet. Don't say it. I'm professional now. And also it's hard to find time to write and I don't have my own laptop. I secretly use my boss' laptop to write and thankfully my workmates don't tell him since I hold their own secrets. If they let my secret out, I'll do the same and we'll all be punished. Hehe."
Kittycov: "That's interesting to hear. So you said you planned on buying a new laptop next year December right?"
Author: " Yeah, but I don't know if I can really do that. I've got a family and I barely save much so I might really have to try hard but for now I'll keep using boss' laptop hehe. But at that time, if you feel like helping this baby girl, then don't feel shy. *winks*"
Gigidarby54: " So what are your plans for Chase and Love, do you have a detailed outline?"
Author: " To be honest, I've stopped using outline a long time ago. I keep changing outline every few days so  I got tired and decided to write from my heart. And I plan to write this novel to the end no matter what but guys I really need your support hehe"
Daoist8zpynt: "Do you wish to contract this novel?"
Author: "No. I won't contract this book. When I'm done writing this book, if you feel like thanking me then you can do so at buy me coffee but for now let's focus on writing and entertaining ourselves."
Kitsun: " So what else would you like to say to your readers in general?"
Author: " Dear readers, I wish that  I can make you happier through my writing. I want this to be a book you'll remember for the rest of your life. I know that majority of you are actually silent readers. To tell the truth, I'm also a silent reader too but I do ask that at least once, tell me how you feel about a chapter and what you think  I should improve on through reviews. But if you feel too lazy or shy to do that then you can baptize me with power stones. Let's make our story rival those of the contracted novels alright"
Godsovereignj: " Miss, how many collections do you have now?"
Author: "Since you asked, I'll talk! Currently I have 2500 collections and I have to say I'm really grateful. I never imagined this day would come. Thanks everyone of you for making Chase and Love reach this far and I hope together We can push our story to greater heights no matter the setback we encounter. Thank you, Thank you."
The six interviewers applaud and the Author nods in delight.
Author: " From a young age, I have the gift of lucid dreaming. So I wish you a happy night with Theresa in your dreams. I will be updating soon and make sure you tell me how Theresa looked like...hehe"
Liesiang: " It's been a pleasure meeting you and I hope we meet again. Thanks for summoning us here"
Author: "Of course, I'd do anything for my fans hehe. But before you go you take these food boxes back home with you. They contain the rich Egusi soup and honeywell of Nigeria. Don't use spoon to eat it. Use your hands"
Kittycov: " Oh thanks."
Author: "Hey jesse, you still don't want my number? Or..."
Godsoverignj: "Sorry I have a babe."
Author: " Oh, then recall to invte me to your marriage. I'll bring you lot's of Egusi soup. You'll enjoy it"
Godsovereignj: "Thanks for the offer. I'll keep that in mind"
Daoist8zpynt: "We'll be leaving now"
Author: "No probs. Bye! * vanishes*"
Liesiang: "That's expected"
Kittycov: "Jesse, you've suffered"
Godsovereignj: " No, I think I was the star amongst us hehe"
Kitsun: "Goodluck with keeping a cold face. Hahaha"
Godsovereignj: "Shut up!"
Daoist8zpynt: " Author is more like Ju Wei"
Gigidarby: "No, I think she's more like Long Ren"
Liesiang: " No, she's more like Theresa. I can't envision how the story will be like but I expect Good stuff"
Kitsun: "Me too!"
Kittycov: "Me three!"
Godsovereignj: " * facing the audience* Everyone, I want you to support this book till the end. If you back out halfway, you are simply blind and stupid."
Liesiang: "Don't be harsh. *pushes Jesse to a corner* Everyone please read and support the author in anyway you can. Be shameless if you want hehe"
Kittycov: " And be sure to lucid dream about Theresa. I bet she'd make me drool"
Daoist8zpynt: "Time's out. Let's return"

With that a portal appeared and sucked them all in to return them to their various destinations.
Author appears again dressed as Kagura of Mobile Legends.
Author: " Hey I forgot to tell you something. I'm a gamer too so iif you're interested, download the app and meet me there. I'm Zena001 in th game. My favorite is called Angela, she's a supprt and Kagura is a Mage. My game master is from the philipines so let me say KAMUSTA to all Filipinos."

All i wanted was to go to my idol's concert but can someone tell me why the plane exploded halfway? Can someone tell me how i landed in another dimension. Why am i a furnace? Why are all my pets so cute? And wait, who's this guy here? Please don't come near me, i don't wanna have  dragon babies yet! dear pets why aren't you helping your master? How can you carry me to this guy's bed? Hey! Hey!

I'm not sure if people actually still read this novel.

It was a long time since I started this novel to try and start something but in the end I just felt immense disappointment for the result.

Soon school exams started to pile up like right now and I just completely dropped this book.

For those that are still reading this book, I thank you for your dedication to read broken English.

In the synopsis I did mention that this was a connected novel in a series.

So here's the good news.

I try to make any short stories connected to my main novel (this book).

In the end I wrote an entry for a Halloween Discord Competition that made me accidentally won (The link is in the author's thoughts)

For the past few months that I haven't been writing, I instead focused on creating an outline for other novels that were connected to this.

In order to do that I tried to dabble in philosophy and religion which my head just couldn't cope.

I finally gathered my resolve to finally start writing seriously again and so I started 8 Lives of Sins.

Essentially it's about a person who is the reincarnation of 7 serious sins in Christianity that now has to kill an entity of 7 Virtues.

Tasked with this, the person questions his life and at the very end I will write about a surprising character that walks into their fight.

Read if you're curious otherwise thank you for even reading this book in the first place.

The protagonist, Kaito discards his last name to embrace a new life and rid of the misfortune he has cause. 4 unfortunate deaths surround him just for living. With the whisper of a clown and the teachings of his master this could have been avoided, so why did you kept quiet?

With the death of his master he rejects his humanity with the alluring voice of the Pierrot "Receive power at the cost of mortality" "is it your humanity that refuses to accept?" "Take it". The laughter of insanity, chuckle of madness and the echo of a lunatic. 

Watch as he dons a mask to hide his emotions only to eventually shed the false veil of cruelty. Witness his acceptance of the truth.

Note: Hiatus. Mainly because there isn't any readers so see ya for a year?

After talking to Jiang Huanqing, Yun Hua returned to her room. 
The first three chapters of the novel had already been written.
Yun Hua kept editing them over and over again.
The name of the book was 'Shocking Dream of Qing Palace,' and she was pretty satisfied with this name.
Actually, many online novels did not have a main storyline, let alone a detailed outline.
However, it was undeniable that a main storyline, a detailed outline, and even a chapter outline would definitely elevate the story's logical flow and narration. This could also allow the author to write more smoothly and avoid too many writer's blocks.
The first three chapters and even the first 30,000 words had to be refined in detail. After all, the introduction was the thing that attracted the readers' attention.
A shocking introduction could allow one to feel refreshed.
In 2006, when the time-traveling theme was still very novel, time-traveling because of a landslide was even more unique.
When Mo Lan woke up, she became the young princess of the Niohuru Hala family. Even though she was a medical student, she had watched Er Yuehe's Kangxi Dynasty. After she understood who she was and that she had traveled back in time into this identity, she realized that she had become Qianlong's mother.
Mo Lan felt that she was not intelligent enough. As a modern person, she also didn't like sharing her husband with other women, so she was prepared not to compete in the concubine selection from the start. She wanted to fight for the opportunity to marry a Han man in the future. With her current Manchu identity and status, it would not be too big of a problem to marry a Han man with good character. At most, she would just not get married.
However, things were always so coincidental. Mo Lan was very curious about the ancient world and finally found a chance to pray to the deities with her mother on the third of March. In the end, she coincidentally met a severely-injured man, who was barely alive, in a bamboo forest at the back of a temple.
The man was very good-looking. Coupled with Mo Lan's nature of saving the ill and her medical skills, she took care of the man's injury. Unexpectedly, this man was exactly the future Yongzheng and the current Fourth Prince—Yin Zhen.
The story flowed too well, and Yun Hua was writing very quickly.
One good thing about a web novel was that it had the highest expectations on the storyline.
One just had to write logically and smoothly, without extravagant vocabulary. As long as one could write clearly and more diligently, one would be able to write a web novel that readers loved.
Yun Hua had written so many novels in her previous life; Thus, she had long been able to combine her literary skills and the storyline, allowing her to tell the story's ups and downs in the most intricate and smoothest way possible.
After tidying up the novel's book title, synopsis, and the first three chapters, Yun Hua started working on the later chapters' detailed outlines.
She loved writing chapter outlines. They were detailed about the core content, containing every chapter's point and conclusion. She made sure that her conclusions had cliffhangers so that it attracted the readers to carry on reading. Having cliffhangers was an extremely important part of a novel.
At the same time, she also wanted to go through the story outline and list all the twists and turns of the story, to better arrange the later plotline.
For a novel with more than a million words, all this work was complicated but necessary.
Since Yun Hua had already written the novel, she was aiming for copyrights. She wanted to turn the novel into a movie, a game, and a comic; she would not simply earn a few bucks and stop there. 
Thus, she had to settle the important scenes, which would increase her workload. Of course, she would get an even bigger return in the future.
Once she started working, more than two hours had passed. Yun Hua stretched and hesitated for a while before standing up.
There were apples and bananas in the refrigerator. Should she give some fruits to that person?
When she went up to the attic, that man was still lying down and sleeping with his eyes closed.
Yun Hua immediately remembered the time he pretended to sleep.
She bit her lips and kicked his long legs sprawled on the floor. "Hey! Stop pretending to sleep."
However, to her surprise, he did not give any form of reaction.
Looking at his face again, she realized that he looked very sick.
Yun Hua instantly started panicking.


[Strong female lead, Revenge, One True Couple]
Her best friend becomes her sister, disfigures her, breaks her legs, steals her rich fiancé, plots the death of her mother, and sends her to a psychiatric hospital where she is tortured to death.
Reborn as her thirteen year old self with a vengeance, Yun Hua is going to make all of them pay in blood!
While planning her revenge, she meets Bo Siqing, a soldier that died in his twenties in her previous life, and their fates get intertwined in a very interesting manner.

This chapter isn't story related and only aims to give you some of my own thoughts on the novel so far. Feel free to skip this. Basically final notes for the end of the volume. Will probably do these at the end of every volume.
I do enjoy reading these in other, real light novels, showing a further plan or giving a few thankful words.
And so I want to thank you for getting this far. I'm well aware that this novel is far from the best, but I could see how much my writing has grown by now. At some point I might even rewrite the first couple chapters to bring them up to quality. But not right now, since I really need to get into a better flow for writing and it would also further cripple my already wacky release rate.
Working full time and procrastinating as much as I do hinders the novel a lot. I could probably release daily, if I manage to get my mind to do it. But it tends to wander around, preferring watching youtube videos over writing.
But despite all of that, we still got here. First volume finished with around 60k words and 54 chapters. It actually turned out way better than I first expected. I'm making up a lot of stuff along the way, but I do have a general outline to the novel. Especially for now, things are easier this way. If I would get more serious I would have to create a full detailed outline for the whole thing.
This novel is like my training wheels. I want my writing to grow with the story, with the characters. 
So please, feel free to criticize my writing as much as you like. I do prefer feedback because with that, I can see where I have to improve myself on. 
Since this is released on Webnovel and most female lead stories do have some romance in them, I do think I will tackle on that genre as well in later parts of the novel. For now I want to keep it mostly focused on fantasy elements and the general story.
I'm experimenting quite a bit with the story, so plans might change and some plot points mentioned may or may not be addressed along the way. 
 
The following flaws which I'm aware of are planned to be addressed in volume 2:
-More building to side characters, story was mostly focused on Yoru/Iris until now
-Better description for characters to give them a more vivid feel. I always imagine the characters in my head when reading a book, but I don't think I myself describe them enough to be easily visualized
-more improvement in my writing
-better release schedule, at least more consistent (thinking on at least 2 chaps a week, on weekends
-more references to other novels/anime
-a more unique style of storytelling
 
 
So thank you for your attention and please continue on enjoying my writing. What else will come up in this story leading to a full out war? Who exactly is the demon Meteora and what are her planes? What happened to the members of the group? Find out in the next volume…
(God that was too cliché, wasn't it?)

In a world, where countless wars between angels and demons have been fought, humanity finally had enough and decided to free themselves of the shackles put upon them by the other races. Together with hybrids, children of demons/angels, they aim to overpower both angels and demons to bring peace for humanity.

Living in such a place, the demon hybrid girl Yoru tries to survive and just wants a comfortable life. But things aren’t so easy for an orphan who has to attend military school, which trains these hybrid children like Yoru to fight the other races.

This novel tells the story of how Yoru manages to stand on her own feet in this cruel world.

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My first novel, so don’t expect too much and enjoy.I will use this novel to get used to writing and get better at English overall.
Feel free to leave any suggestions or criticism.

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