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If you want a constructive critique or just an honest feedback on your book and writing skills, read the rules in the 1st chapter.


Note that my critiques can be pretty thorough (depending on my availability and mood of course), and they are far from overly generic and sugarcoated to the point of being unhelpful. This is not for authors who are merely fishing for compliments. As a content writer by profession, I have ample experience in non-fiction and technical writing, as well as proofreading and content editing.

Its available on:-
https://www.moonquill.com/book/72

Hello, friends!
The book is ready! At last! It was rather a difficult way. And I am happy, that the first step is done!
The date of release is 13 Sep. So, in several days you will be able to read the end of the 1st book on Amazon.
Additional thanks for those who had bought the book, was giving feedbacks and rating to the book here: "Guys! You are real friends! Thank you very much!" I hope you will find a couple of minutes and leave a short review on Amazon or Goodreads after the reading. It's very very important for me.
For the no-name author, it's rather difficult to start a book on Amazon or somewhere else. When the book is on the bottom - no one will buy it. Unfortunately, translating and money are inseparable things.
However, I am full of enthusiasm and believe, that the sales will cover the translation.
Here are the Links for those who missed:
LOST in Space. Book 1. Amazon - 3.99$: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07WHLG29M
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/dmitriyr2008

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Hey Guys,

O'Kelley here. I'd rather do this then try and direct you towards a P.atreon.

 If you like my stuff, feel free to check out my 1st Book, The Genesis Game: Volume I, a LitRPG Dungeon/Tower Climb about the tyrant Black Seraph who is reincarnated into the past as humanities best chance for survival. 

You can find it for free on Amazon Kindle Unlimited at http://tiny.cc/AmazonTGG
If you don't have Amazon Kindle Unlimited, you can get a free month by using the following link. http://tiny.cc/GetKindleUnlimitedFree

Thanks and Keep Reading
P.S. (If you do like my stuff, but don't want to mess with the rest, good reviews and ratings help so much) <3

If you WANT an edited copy of any book before they launch, I'm looking for guys willing to do Amazon Day 1 reviews. If that's you, shoot me a message at theauthorokelley@gmail.com or just sign up http://tiny.cc/NotifyMeGG.
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Volume II is currently at the editor as was expected to launch already, so I'm actually a little behind. I'm contractually obligated to finish this series before August, so I do promise you, it will be finished. You will see all the remaining chapters here. It's just in the meantime the work is stalled until I can get Volume II wrapped up. 

If you WANT an edited copy before the book launches, I'm looking for guys willing to do Amazon Day 1 reviews. If that's you, shoot me a message at theauthorokelley@gmail.com or just sign up http://tiny.cc/NotifyMeGG.

There is a place beyond the edge of the abyss that exists in all men.

Found in the infinite pause between dying and death lies a hidden world.

A score of Old Ones hold dark conference, ruled by the Twelve Princes of Hel, to discuss the fate of their newest brother and the world to join them.

For young Michael, this world is his only chance at rebirth, an opportunity given by the mysterious Mr. Light to live again.

Michael must unravel the secrets of this dread realm before he and all of humanity are devoured by the corruption of the shadow world that is...

Pandemonium.


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Please check out my other published novels at andrewokelley.com
I will give a free copy of any book on this list for a fair on honest review on Amazon.  To get ahold of me, try my discord at http://tiny.cc/OKelleysDiscord or my email
theauthorokelley@gmail.com

Apocalypse Hero 
https://geni.us/ApocalypseHero
The Genesis Game
https://geni.us/TheGenesisGameI
The Genesis Game: Volume II
https://geni.us/TheGenesisGameII
Essense Weaver
https://books2read.com/u/b5Zgxl

Hey guys, so I have some stuff to talk about with y'all. 

Don't worry, I'm still writing. In fact, I'm 85% done with Volume 3 right now. 

However, I'm sure some of you are wondering why I haven't put up any chapters here (though Patron is actively updated and each full Volume is still sold on Amazon after extensive editing (My Amazon author name is L M Kerr)). 

And that's a discussion I do need to share, so let's jump into it. 

I have yet to make any final decision on this topic. 

Over time, I've noticed something rather disheartening that's happened on the main site where I sell my finished, edited, and restructured novels. 

I've been receiving negative or critical reviews on Amazon, Goodreads, etc. for things that do not exist in the Amazon version of the book.

Instead, those reviews are referring to things present only on the WebNovel versions. 

What I post here on WebNovel is my rough draft, lightly edited. 

What I post on Amazon is heavily edited and more polished. The story plots are the same, but I go over the story several times and edit before I put it up on Amazon. 

Now, some of you may be thinking: Wiz, why does that matter? Don't you take the WebNovel versions down, anyway, once you are done?

That is correct, I don't think any of you, my WN readers, are the ones leaving unrepresentative reviews on Amazon. 

However, there is a second, bigger issue that frustrates me...

Piracy. 

My books are pirated when I post them here. 

There are dozens of piracy sites out that that strip my chapters from WebNovel and host them online. 

When I post something here, it stays up online, forever. 

***A rough draft claiming to be my full story, in all its yet to be heavily edited glory.***

This is incredibly frustrating to me. 

Incredibly. 

I am seriously considering only posting chapter updates to Patron because of issues like this, and sticking to releasing the polished, edited versions on Amazon after, instead. 

I have yet to make a final decision, but this is where I'm at right now, thinking things over. 

I'd love to hear some of your thoughts! Please, feel free to share :)

Read Volumes 1 and 2 on Amazon now!

Volume 1: bit.ly/WizBook1
Volume 2: bit.ly/WizBook2

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If you could turn back the clock and fix all the mistakes you ever made, would you? 

For Micheal Care, a swordsman that could only be considered a middling warrior in Humanity's Last Army, the answer is simple.

Yes. A million times yes. 

Humanity has fallen, killed by stronger races of beings after being warped away to a new reality, the mystical 7 Layers. 

Humanity's goal had been simple. Make it through all 7 Layers and reach Heaven. 

Humanity failed. 

Humanity died.

Micheal Care's memories have been transported back into his past self thanks to a magical Artifact he found by chance. 

He is no chosen savior. He is no divinely picked hero. 

Can he change the future? Can he catch up to the mightiest warriors of humanity and surpass them? 

Read on and find out.

The Paperback is Published Now.
For the next 4 days starting tomorrow, I have a free book promotion going on amazon I don't really know how you would get a free book through the promotion. But hey maybe try finding out if you're on Amazon, the promotion is for the ebook I know that much.
Also if you happen to the ebook or paperback please a review so that I get noticed by senpai a.k.a. Amazon algorithm. That way more people notice the book and buy it.
If you got this far your probably like this series so your reviews should leave a problem.
I ordered myself a author version of the book that only cost the manufacturing price plus shipping, so around 31 USD, still less than 50 USD so that's good I guess.
Any guys I'll probably check back now and then but this is the last Announcement/Chapter? I'll be posting for a long time.
You probably won't see another one of these until I finish learning programming and have a steady income or least somewhat regular income.
I greatly appreciate you guys, I'll still pop in now and then to look at notifications, reply to comments, and make comments on other peoples works.
Goodbye for now I know I shouldn't but I'll miss you guys.
Bye.

I have this story on Webnovel.com Scribblehub.com and Royalroad.com I have deleted my series on Tapas.io I am on P A T R E O N, besides these websites I have this on Amazon
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Ethereal.

A Primordial Storm.

A Hyper-Sentient Being A God?

No.

But his creations seem to think so?

Whole worlds sculpted from his own body.

Countless denizens living and breathing on and within his worlds.

Immortal Powerful Overseers descended from one born in the primordial Origin.

Massive Guardians Dragons that birthed all dragon-kind.All serving you, all look up to you.

Yet you say no, you are not a God.

Because I am not.

I can be hurt.

I can be killed.

I have limits.

My Power is Finite, not Infinite.

Thus I am not a god.

I used to think It was only me in the void, but I am not alone.

You've probably heard it before. ATS's webnovel continues to be on hiatus, but as of some months ago, WN/RR postings were suspended. And here's why.
-First, let's talk about how ATS first operated, before the Brand became a thing. It technically made its debut on Webnovel, then a day or two later, Royalroad. Not much for an audience, hardly any comments or reactions. But the posts continued to come. I'd amp it up to 3-5 chapters a day. 
One day I decided on a whim to split these into volumes. Do light novel format.  I did my search on word count. Saw that they were typically 20-50k words. I set mine for 60k per book.
I only published it on a whim, just to give it a home and alternate place of publishing. Also helped proved the series was mine by doing it early. This turned out to be one of the best decisions I've made.
-flash forward, ATS continued to grow, but REALLY did when it the Amazon scene. It was becoming a small brand and cut out its very tiny corner on the vast LitRPG map.
--At first, I intended to keep the business model of free optional buy going (which by the way is completely stupid for the long term). I eventually turned this into a full-time career.
I began to see more posts (not too too many and not just me) about ATS's availability on RR/WN. Free reading. This was fine with me since I intentionally put it that way. Surely everything would continue going as normal. 
Then sales dramatically dropped by 60%.  Holy shit. The KU reads were always high and KU itself being a ticking time bomb or a rug ready to be pulled from beneath my feet, I found myself in a pickle.
---1 pickle:  Amazon's bot. Multiple flaggings every time I published. It's nothing short of a miracle that Amazon hadn't punched me in the dick just for existing. But when you're making them money, they treat you okay. Until you inconvenience them haha.
---2nd pickle: People taking my work and posting them on other websites without my permission. Illegally translating it and CHARGING MONEY for the translations. This is wrong for everybody, not just me. Media, other authors, etc. I didn't even care about this at first, it's fucking normal. I got over it. But for the love of god, don't charge people. It was free.
3rd pickle: The Brand, the LLC, and me as an independent creator has grown. Since I'm in charge of everything pertaining to ATS, forcing myself to continue the same business model I did a year ago as a naïve, unknown urban fantasy writer turned light novel author, wouldn't work.
I've been talking and debating with people for a long coming, before deciding to pull the web novel plug. The ******* is there to continue posting chapters, but as you can see with the low number of Patreons, it does not factor into the reason of pulling the plug. Every drop of *******'s funds goes back into ATS.
Ultimately, RR/WN are best for strictly web novel writers with giant active followings such as Wandering Inn, Mother of Learning, etc etc. 
At the time: ATS only recently achieve its 50th rating, its rankings weren't great and really, like 5 or 6 of the 1100 followers of RR were ever active. RR converted into basic 0% reviews in which could've helped it struggle better against Amazon's algorithm.
WN wasn't much better, with very few commenters, few reviews to keep it "free," nothing. A dead web novel basically. [Although today, we look at the 3 million views and wonder, wow.]
The lack of interaction made it absolutely pointless for me to keep risking my livelihood with Amazon's bot. 
 
This message isn't an excuse. It is simply explaining what led up to the removal. 
You could say By the Order of Amazon, ATS must be removed (to the allowed 10%) or face expulsion from the KDP and its Kindle Unlimited program.
 
I appreciate your understanding. I figured lack of engagement from the audience, lack of reviews on the platform that mattered (amazon), multiple KDP bot flaggings could eventually lead to this point.
But it's better to remove than to lose my career.
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Adding more to this, 28th of July 2020, which is months (maybe almost a year later), I still get people every now and then entering the discord.
They hadn't a clue a discord existed or that the work was still going. They don't know about the manga in progress, the new manga artist replacement, the platforms, how far the series has gotten, and who's got the rings and babies.
Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/syr456/ 
Facebook group:  https://www.facebook.com/groups/ATSteamstone/    
Twitter:  https://twitter.com/Alvin_Atwater        
*******: https://www.*******.com/syr456 
ATS website:  https://animetropesystem.net/manga 
DISCORD SERVER (BEST WAY TO CONTACT ME): https://discord.gg/t2qVaAR  OR cQMPSJG
 
ATS novels (universal link): mybook.to/AnimeTropeSystem  
US link: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07JD761GH
Audiobooks: https://www.audible.com/pd/The-Anime-Trope-System-Stone-vs-Viper-Book-1-Audiobook/B07M9Z9C4M
 
I will do my best to answer all of your questions!
I would like to thank everyone that stuck with the series before it was devoured by corporate nonsense.  I truly appreciate you for understanding. 

ATS is currently about to publish volume 18.  It has 1 spinoff, The Fallen Throne, Half-blood Rising volume 1.

--- Extra tags: Satire, Adult/Mature, Monster girl(Monster girl Encyclopedia kind), Fiction/Satire/comedy (I.E. Not to be taken seriously).

By the will of unknown deities, Clyde is swiped from Earth and tossed into an anime world. He’s the declared the Stone aka main character. One day, he must kill the Viper, the antagonist. Too bad things aren’t exactly as black and white as that. The Stone is something much more…
This world and its inhabitants are real. It’s another dimension with a lot to explore.

This is the story of a young man’s evolution from college boy of Earth to godhood and beyond. The challenges stand ahead of him:  demons, monster girls, crazy yanderes, even a girl with maxed charisma. He never thought he’d ever see a magical girl…

A story of comedy, action, and going from weak to completely unstoppable. He is the system disruptor…

In a world where tropes are present, anime girls falling in love so easily, and city-wide issues intertwining with the main mission, Clyde must level up power and his mentality, RPG-style. He can no longer be that earthling. He will learn… whether he likes it or not.

Someone who breaks systems…Feared by the gods…




~A lover of character development lover! 


Warning:
 Episode 7 and beyond contains and ramps a lot up on sexual content, including scenes. You have been warned.  This is not for the faintest of hearts! There are also monster girl quest references in here too. Once again, fair warning. Think about that before entering.
You now know what you're getting into...
[Recommended for those who know of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia] 
--Heads up: this develops into a Harem (and eventually they'll end up as his wives. If that's not your thing, this is your head's up.) 
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Written and edited by me with Persona as my inspiration!
*He goes from cautious to embracing! 
*Don't just stop somewhere in volume 1 (because we know the beginning doesn't count for a judgment). Binge it! Binge it! Binge it! 
***Author note: get in now before you're left behind. I'm planning to be around for a while xD.***
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* Morning of Nov 25th 2018: 1 million views reached! 
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NOTICE AS OF FEB 2019: Web novel hiatus indefinitely due to Amazon, people translating my shit and charging money for it, posting this on other sites without my permission. Please join discord and/or Facebook page for updates. Patreon will continue to get chapters as normal.

Thank you truly for understanding! This is my livelihood and I don't want to lose it. 
Please see discord's announcements for information on the Web novel's suspension.
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Volumes 1-14+ ongoing available on Amazon. Audible too!
ATS has found an editor as of Aug 26th. Be expecting the ebook versions to be fixed even more. See discord for more info. 
Volume 15 in session...
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*Advanced chapters and special bonuses:
Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/syr456 
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My website is https://www.alvinJatwater.com
https://www.animetropesystem.net
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**Discord channel:   [If you have questions or concerns, this is the best place to reach me]
https://discord.gg/t2qVaAR

Hello readers, I gave away some freebies a few weeks back. In the stats, I noticed that people have grabbed the book from India, United States, United Kingdom, and Germany.
I hope you have started the book and enjoyed it. 

As this is the first time I have written this kind of fiction, it took a lot of time and effort for me to portray the scenes correctly. I had to dive into each character's shoes and think like them. A lot of times, this process drained my mental energy and made me almost give up on the story. Parallelly, doing a software engineer job and working on the story, made me mad, and I had many restless nights due to this. In this journey, I made mistakes but learned from it; I lost willpower but regained it; I got tired mentally but rejuvenated quickly; it's all because of you and your support, and your review goes a long way.
I am in a dire state now with less/no reviews at all in the above-specified stores. This affects book sales drastically.
I want to continue writing and give you quality stories. For this, I need your support.
If you have completed reading, please take a moment to leave a review with your respective amazon/kindle account.
If you face any problem while leaving out a review, please contact the amazon help and try to resolve it.

Please let the story reach as many people as possible.

In the clash between good and evil, mystery prefers the evil side.

Buried deep inside the Lone Island, mystery awaits serenely. But with a devastating impact, the disturbed Enigma announced its presence with a series of missing people. 

Despite being embroiled in the conflict between emotions and logic, the valorous National Detective Agency officer Rhea is determined to unearth the truth.

In this fight against time, will she with her crew prevail? Or will the inevitable happen?

Why mystery prefers the evil side? Who awakened it? And what lies ahead?—to know more, grab the book in the amazon store.

If you like fast-paced and action-packed crime thrillers, you will love The Lone Mystery.

flashback This is a fanfiction using the character from the mortal instruments which are trademarked by Cassandra Clare. I do not claim ownership of the character in the world. 
I hit the alarm clock. I gap my phone off my night still looking at twitter Instagram in the face all of them was going off blow up my three books in my wife of fortitude chronicles. Which are name after the people in my life? Wife of strength Wife of Silver Wife with power. The three books were the one that becomes a New York bestseller in was on the number three on the list. Because this was my first book series the reviews form the first two books were 2.5 start rate in the other one had a 3.5 on a good read. Which was a surprise to me then was fans and critics. The critics say of the two books they were full of cliches in tropes like it had an overly perfect female protagonist along with hot awful in an abusive childhood. An abusive in more overly talented side character along with hot in dirty sex. Published Companies like Simon and Schumpeter Harper  Collins IN other publishing all send reject letters. So I look into self- published on Amazon my first book Wife of Strength in I published it on amazon it becomes number one on Kindle. I really like self-publishes because I keep all my rights as an author. It helps with the bill that the time. My fiance name Samantha has been an editor and have been write book for to 10 years so I think I'm in good hand remember the day I come to her office.

Christian Fairchild would like none but to live a good and quiet life but there one problem. His mom and dad are Jace and Clary two of the most famous Shadownhunters and the Shadow world. They try there best to raise him in the way of the Shadowhunters world teaching him how to hunt and kill Demon about the downwards the oath they take etc. He becomes a famous author with his romance mystery fantasy it is written with his wife along with the New York Times bestselling list a number a five-time in his one-shot manga. He would like to be a good fiance to his new fiance But Destiny will not be denied in an old prophecy they have planned for Christian Fairchild can he fight or will he end up becoming what he hates. Sci-fi space adventure has sold millions in he has been on  This will be based on the shadowhunters book and the tv show all of them also this will be take 30 years after the event of the city of heavenly fire in the dark artifices. The runes with being black will be red but most will be black.

Hello, guys!



Lots of thanks for your support and no spoilers in reviews! It was very important to me. Now you can tell me all that you think about me right here!

As one of my good readers Eduardo Azevedo said :"your books are that type we love to hate, or hate to love??!"

And that's true. My readers several times promised to fire my house after reading them)

I love this series and I appreciate the emotions it gives to people. Ad I always write such books that I would be interested to read myself.

Now I start publishing the 4th book. Hope the emotions will not prevent you from continue reading the series.



The book is already available for pre-order on Amazon https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07YYMPG14/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_hsch_vapi_taft_p1_i2

"Dragon Heart" is one of the top-rated Wuxia LitRPG novels in Russia. The author has been writing the story for only one and a half years, however, it already has 1100 chapters spanning 12 books. The whole story is planned out and will have over 2000 chapters and 20 books. The version in Russian has been read over 10,000,000 times.  This story has made Klevanski the  #1 or #2 author on the 4 biggest self-publishing sites in Russia. Right now, "Dragon Heart" is being translated into English and published chapter by chapter on several American sites. 

HERE ON RR IS PUBLISHING THE THIRD BOOK OF THE SERIES. 

You can buy the 1st books on Amazon or read it for free in Kindle Unlimited.

Arc 1:

BOOK I: STONE WILL

BOOK II: IRON WILL 

BOOK III: BLOOD WILL 

Arc 2:

BOOK IV: SEA OF SAND

BOOK V: SEA OF SORROW

Arc 3:

BOOK VI: LAND OF MAGIC

BOOK VII: LAND OF DEMONS

BOOK VIII: LAND OF THE ENEMY

 

Description

He was born anew in a world where martial arts were indistinguishable from magic. He’d only received a neuronet and meaningless desires from his past life. What lies ahead? He’d dreamed of adventure and freedom, but those dreams were taken away from him. The same way his mother, father, and sister had been taken away. They took his Kingdom, they even took his destiny. But he is willing to wage a war, against the whole world if need be, to bring everything back. Even if a whole army opposes him, his sword won’t waver. Even if the Emperor sends entire legions against him, his step won’t falter. Even if demons and gods, heroes and villains alike, unite against him, he won’t bend to their will. His own will is iron itself, unstoppable. His name is Hadjar and he heeds the call of the dragon heart within him. 

This novel contains uncensored scenes of battle that may or may not include depictions of violence and gore. Read it at your own risk.

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