_07_Jaiprakashp

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2023-11-16 入りました Global
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_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
1 months ago
Commented

you update chapters slow as a snail and now waste our time describing the mother of protagonists with half of the chapter.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
1 months ago
Commented

really is the no 01 hero a kid who plays with demon while fighting can't she finish it early and done with it.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
1 months ago
Commented

really do you really had to write about denail and waste half of the chapter

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
2 months ago
Commented

upload more chapters and leave the useless talks and quickly make him meet his family and stop his sister from becoming protagonists harem.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
2 months ago
Commented

you are rushing the plot too much, it's only been one or two days after his transmigration and he is getting bombarded with everything without any rest and what happened to lilliana while he was wasting time talking to system can't she see how abnormal the situation is when he just stands there talking to system and then faints suddenly.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
2 months ago
Commented

really it should be common sense to know what a gift pack means.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
3 months ago
Commented

why don't you even describe how he goes to toilet to do his toilet work you're wasting our time by explaining his daily life like how many times he chews his food

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
4 months ago
Replied to Lonelythree

then simply post all the contents you deem as one chapter and be done with it don't make readers just waste their coins and passes they have by dividing one chapter into small chapters and creating unnecessary drama.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
5 months ago
Commented

man really are u trying to disgust the readers it's basic manners to bath and atleast be clean when you travel out.

_07_Jaiprakashp
_07_Jaiprakashp
5 months ago
Commented

you know he should have atleast basic hygiene, why doesn't he bath after impurities is released from his body, are you writing Chinese MC face slapping novel.