I will update it soon, just getting back to writing again.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Essense of Immortality
Anime & Comics · DivineMelon
I would've already rush to the scene and be done with this nonsense. Just kill the guy and go the main thing. Taking too long. Translators should at least edit scenes like this or remove them as they're useless to the story. Just based on what I've seen so far, it's not worth continuing reading.
"As long as you're willing to follow me, I can guarantee you'll live well, at least... you won't be a short-lived ghost."
Anime & Comics · Saitama_Blast
His strength should atleast be at above vice admiral, and that's only the minimum. He might be even stronger than admiral with even just 1%.
Although he hadn't fought directly, based on what he had seen from Captain Vaughan's previous battles, his strength should surpass that of the captain.
Anime & Comics · Saitama_Blast
It won't be Chinese without this facelapping, lol.
Vaughan paid no attention to Harry's almost provocative gaze and sternly asked, "Lieutenant Commander Harry, what do you mean by that?"
Anime & Comics · Saitama_Blast
I liked their interaction in this chapter but I think it was so soon that Nadia icy heart was broken in just one chapter. I would like how their interaction progress and how Nadia icy heart was melting chapter by chapter but it just instantly happen in this chapters. Anyways, it was just my opinion and the chapter was good.
ch 0 7 First Reward! Special Eyes!
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Oliver was known by many servants to be a worthless, talentless but a smart child many of the servants. Also, Oliver was able to quickly find where Nadia was training so the whole clan area must be small. Although Oliver was a child that had been kept hidden for over 5 years, Nadia should atleast have some clue about him. Also, there should be some explanation as to why Oliver was kept hidden for 5 years not the nonsense "He was trash so no one should see him to not tarnish the family" reason.
ch 0 5 Nadia Mystic! The ruthless twin
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
A very nice system. I thought that it'll be like those "Give something, get 100x of that" novels but it was new. He will get 10x benefits of the other person training once he bind himself to that person. Now, he just needed that Nadia girl and get stronger fast. Also the the setting seemed pretty good. I haven't read any exorcist type of novel yet so I'm looking forward to this.
ch 0 3 10x binding system? Obtaining 10 times the benefits
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
He can move but with limited space.
After that, Felix immediately saw his yellow domain expanding really fast. It kept going until it covered most part of the ship. Now that his range cover most part of the ship, Felix could feel the presence of many live inside the ship. It was a great feeling for him as with this much range, he could protect those girls until they reach their village.
Anime & Comics · DivineMelon
This is my work.
Steve started preparing himself by slowly putting his right foot far back, bending down his body, and looking forward with a serious expression. Seconds later, he began running. The force on his right foot made the ground flip up. His running speed was so fast that he estimated it to be faster than lightning.
Anime & Comics · DivineMelon
Liking Wang ye personality, it's neither Good or Villain, just Anti-Hero.
ch 11 Perfection-level Life Evolution Technique
Eastern · Little Piggy
This is good, one of the unique GOT fanfiction that I've read. The story was done well and realistic but the pacing was really slow. Rody was one of the protagonist that I've like despite not having any ambition. He is loyal and persistent. His battle prowess came from training consistently and not on lucky encounter. World background was decent. Writing Quality was good but sometimes there are unnecessary words in paragraphs which made me skim some while reading. 4.2/5
Game of Thrones: Orphan
Book&Literature · YellowScarf