Like most before it, I feel like this 100 fanfic has joined the ranks of being cringey as shit! From the way the MC interacts with the people around him to the way be talks to them. The author has used the common troupe of befriending Spacewalker and starting to right out flirt with Octavia the first time they talk. Some may say be wasn't flirting but the author did not put the (Octavia giggled softly) if it wasn't intended to mean he...fuck, I'm ranting. I was excited about reading this book for I thought it would be different.
Second, why TF wasn't he fighting back? If he suspected he would be floated, why didn't he fight for his life? It seems quite forced the way they drugged him, the author wanted him to be drugged just to continue with the story.
I was put off by the first drawback. Feral ghouls is fine because radiation, it dinosaurs? Like, really?
"Hello, my dog." Laying there was Ankoku, with all his limbs served, the skin sewn together by an amateur to keep him from bleeding out, his eyelid cut to keep his eyes forever open, and all his teeth removed. "I hope you haven't been waiting." Naomasa smiled, a deep blush on his face. "I missed you~."
Ghost in MHA
Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi
"Hello, my dog." Laying there was Ankoku, with all his limbs served, the skin sewn together by an amateur to keep him from bleeding out, his eyelid cut to keep his eyes forever open, and all his teeth removed. "I hope you haven't been waiting." Naomasa smiled, a deep blush on his face. "I missed you~."
Ghost in MHA
Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi
I know, just proofread and corrected the spelling mistakes I could see.
Just proofread. I'm writing this on my phone and it is cracked on one side making me use the one handed feature of the phone.
Hi guys, I'm a little rusty but I hope you enjoy this chappie. I might or might not write another later on but, see you till then. Also, thanks for sticking with me for so long.
Absolute Combat: Fanfic
Anime & Comics · Kingo_Tepes
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original Absolute Combat: Fanfic
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Awakening her metagene at the age of twelve, a transmigrated girl finds herself as the best fighter in the DC universe. A/N: That pic is not mine and if the owner would like me to remove it then I will do it as fast as possible.28 Chs 1.8k お気に入り
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Gogeta: Wish Fulfilment
Been a huge dragonball fan, Ian gets to have a wish fulfilment moment and the being he has always wanted to be was Gogeta. Now, he gets to be the fusion version, only permanent, with a few twerks5 Chs 190 お気に入り
Punctuation marks! Observe your punctuation marks please.
Naruto: Uzumaki Netero
Anime & Comics · Admiraln12