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Absolute Combat: Fanfic

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作者: Kingo_Tepes

4.18 (21 レビュー結果)

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Awakening her metagene at the age of twelve, a transmigrated girl finds herself as the best fighter in the DC universe.

A/N: That pic is not mine and if the owner would like me to remove it then I will do it as fast as possible.

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SupremeKaz

Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section? Why does this story in the Male protagonist section?

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Bruscar
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decent writing, decent but rushed story. I recommend that you take things slowly, not go to direct action. write about the quiet life of your protagonist, his family and his day to day life and every 3 or 4 chapters put up a fight, just don't force it.

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TanveerBilling2002

I love the writing style and the world that this book is set in. I have been looking for a good yuri book to read. The fact that it is DC makes it more attractive to read. With regards to the story development, it would be beneficial if there were some chapters on the MC's daily life, character development, relationship development with family, school stuff and love interest development/fluff. This would give the novel a more natural feel and be better overall as it will paint the MC as a more real character and allow the readers to enjoy relating with the MC.

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agiletick

i cant wait for more, I like how you added ninja art for her to give her more then just superhuman fighting ability. you look down her why this is for word count

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Daniel_Morris

I like the main characters personality enough to get over the slightly annoying grammatical problems, but the story fundamentally suffers from the main character starting as OP and actually get more OP as the story continues. When the character is already unbeatable why add more OP powers?

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Lucifer_2001

love it. hope you continue to write more. ¡!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!???!!!

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Dominic_Zibuda

Fix the lead section m .

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Shaska

It's fine, although the change of the MC of chapter 19 is unpleasant... .............................................................................

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lodalele

There can be slight improvement in plot and the mc character. Currently she looks indecisive in her dealing of JL. Hiding that she can surbstomp whole league doesn't make sense.

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The_EnlightenedOne

For some reason I have a feeling this doesn’t have a male protagonist

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Young_fruit_Smiley

i would love to more slice of life part of this..... her using brains, money to become combination of both batman & supe..... also a good name is required .... . furthermore anticipation for her partner ..

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I loved how you made the protagonist, I want to see the reactions of the family when they find out what she does.---------------------------

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SpEcTEr_NiM

keep up the good work author the story is good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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LeviathanEnvy

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iiuminox

Great FF even though, I haven’t even read it. But Batman still solos😹🙏😭💀💯[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Youknowme

I love it Jhgmjgfmhgfkhfdmjgxnvcxnhfsktrdhnxnvfxkhfdkhrdnhgxhfnzjhfsutesjhfshreajgfckhgxkhgzjgfxmbgckhfxkbvxjhgdutrdykgdiyrsu35quteahfsajgdsutewkhgfkjgxkhgcljhvkhvkjlbpiujñlugouyte

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Kirito_Kirigaia

usually I don't like the strong acting weak fan fictions but I'm glad I gave this one a chance I'm glad I followed my gut feeling this fan fiction is very captivating I love it. Honestly the author is using the fan fiction's potential very well I like that there are some parts to improve but so far they are being smoothed out.

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TATTERWING

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