For this chapter I liked how we get information about the Mc life, and also some information her family. (and how broke she is) Also the the description of the adventure guild is so cool.
I was reading without an account, so now I am going to comment on every chapter I already finished. For this chapter I liked the beginning its good to start by giving the readers an introduction about the Mc, and also the ending is good to make the readers excited for the next chapter.
noice good job 👍(not allowing me to Post so it probably needs to be longer but I don't really have something to say)
The Violet Warlock
Fantasy · ZeroX0666