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Shi was once an ordinary young girl living in her small village with her loving mother, life was modest but it was enjoyable.
That was until one fateful day her life changed drastically.
From the tragedy of her mother's death, she was born anew, her bloodline changed to no longer be human. She was special and she knew it.
Follow Shi as she uses her new powers and bloodline to travel across the lands of Shinseina; hunting for the people that killed her mother.
To find answers. Meet people. Gain new friends. Find love in an unlikely place. And more.
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Hey there, this story is a rather new project I'm working on. I'm a new author, with little to no experience so I would love any feedback you may have.
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Just an update since i haven't uploaded a chapter in a while— I am currently working on reworking some of the earlier chapters to make them better. Nothing major— just adding some better punctuations and so forth. As a side note for my delay— I am also begun writing a new story recently. A short story that's just meant to be a cute little romance thing. Check it out if you feel like it, or don't, it's up to you. Look forward to more chapters soon!
I’ve read up to 5 chapters and I got to say Shi is an interesting character that hooks one’s attention. My only issue are the long paragraphs that needs breaking, as well as the excessive amount of commas. My suggestion for the author is to use semicolons to divide the sentences, or an em dash. But overall, an interesting read.
i had already left a review on the other work, and this time the review would be different than the original review as i had progress even further into the story so... i first wanna say that this is nicely well done, although i am confused at some parts, and didn't quite understand the beginning of the story, the story development is good and i like the setting and the characters, and like i said in the first review this is refreshing and i am looking forward to how the story will go
Can't wait for more, so far its going great, I especially can't wait to see how the yuri tag ties into this story, I've seen too many good yuri novels be ruin with subpar romance or where the female lead becomes stupid around the love interest.
Starting with the hook, it was a great one. I love how the author does not miss even a small detail. And also, the perspective of the narrator and description are also far above the average. I would recommend reading this novel.
I left a review on the previous work so I will do so here as well, great work as always, a strong female lead, an interesting story, and best of all it's yuri.
The main character is well made, the world she inhabits in is interesting, I don't get lost when I read this story, and I can't say much of the stability of updates yet (Which is why I put in three stars just in case) but I want to say this: With enough commitment and working with your audience, this is going to be even greater. I would give it 4.7 out of 5.
Honestly it’s pretty good, no doubt in my mind I’ll read this in my free time, sure i have a fee gripes such as the world itself, but I don’t have any actual bad rating ideas or thoughts, the book kinda satisfies a random itch i had, which makes me like the book even more! Honestly 9/10!
This is really great read!! been loving it so far!! Hope you update this story soon because I cannot wait to read what happens to the MC next!!!
I hadn't expected the story to be of rebirth but only as an act of revenge. The twist made the story more interesting. It made me curious to know the past and reasons for MC's death. Wonderful novel and the flow is great. Keep going on author!!
Very good and unique concept . The plot is interesting and cant wait to read more and more .Hope autor release new chapters fast …😁
Okay honestly, you're style of writing and the way you consistently describe things puts you at the top of my list. It doesn't feel like a chore to read your novel, so I have a ton of respect for you as a writer. Great novel, definitely will be reading as far as you write.
I highly recommend reading this novel. The description is well done. And everything is amazing from sorrounding decription and grammar. [img=recommend]I like Shi. Great work author.
i'll have to say the first chapter really got me in hook soon as read the rest of the chapters, are really well written, it desribe every details, and well the characters like shi. keep on writing author. [img=recommend]
Great work author, interesting plot with well written chapters, interesting character design too, I just started reading but I can tell that it has potentials so I'm sending you my best wishes author. keep up the good work.
The writing is good here, and its easy to follow and see what's going on in the story which is crucial to making a good story, as well as providing the reader's needs.
I got captivated by just reading the first chapter well done author, I really fell in love with this book I could imagine it. The grammar was excellent and so was the characters, The plot was amazing. I highly recommend this novel. Keep it up author!!![img=faceslap]
First of all, love the title! It immediately attracts attention. After reading some of the characters, I can say that Shi is my favorite character. The story's pacing is good and there are little to no grammatical errors. This is a well-made story. To the author, Well done!
The way you describe the character, the environment, and how Shi is viewing the world around her is 10/10. However, it's too much for me. I'm getting lost in the description.
I could tell that the story is written with a lot of commitment and I really love the cover. I like Shi as a female MC, a hunter that grows on me. There are a few text blocks but I think I do like to read some exposition in webnovel. In fact, I expect them. So kudos to the author.
Shameless review here, feel free to read my novel and share your thoughts and feedback. Always looking to grow and improve as a writer. If you have any questions feel free to leave a comment!