Please get rid of the full stops at the end of every chapter they are infuriating to listen to when you listen to the audio. Please!!
この段落は削除されました。
Inside my favorite novel
Fantasy · CAESAR20
Updated down below, thanks for letting me know. Keeping it as E-Rank.
- Ice spike (E-Rank) [Allows you to create spikes of ice from the ground].
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
Fantasy · KingValos
I have realized that I a lot of the women have liked him so far, I'll try and take it down a notch, but it will be a harem novel, so naturally there will be a lot of attractive women that are into him. As far as them being cute, they are like 10-11 years old, so yeah I'm not going to call them beautiful or anything. Also, Val has come from a small town, where he did not interact with that many girls around his age, so for now, his standards are pretty low, as he gets older and interacts with different women with different appearances, his standards will change. Thanks for the input, I'll take it into consideration and try and improve.
Poppy was slightly different looking to the men of the family, she had dark red hair which only came down to her shoulders, with big brown eyes. She was not the most attractive girl Val had seen but was still quite cute.
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
Fantasy · KingValos
I don't really understand why your comment is on this paragraph, but I understand what you mean. He does not trust people but that won't stop him from getting close to them. He just won't intentionally share his secret or trust his back to them (for now). He's a smart kid so he knows that it won't be beneficial for him to go through his entire life without interacting with others, he will need others but that is a separate matter from trusting them. In future chapters, you will see that though he allows people to get close to him, that point is him caring about them. I hope this clears up your issue :)
Lizzy was even more shocked at the scene, she was unsure of what to do. She had been listening to Bindy and was somewhat aware of her true nature, but did not mind because they were friends and she had never acted that way to her before. But she was seeing it backfire firsthand, but there was no way for her to help. Val was far stronger than them and could kill Bindy at any time in his current position. He also had connections that would make it hard to have him punished if he did choose to kill Bindy right now. The sigil with a noble crest on it was a means to prove his trustworthiness, so it was not guaranteed he would be punished for his actions if he chose to slice Bindy's neck.
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
Fantasy · KingValos
Not one of the main chicks, but you never know, might still have some crazy sex
"No problem, it's nice to be able to help such a cute little boy."
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
Fantasy · KingValos
Not really, there may be special items that appear way later in the story, but generally speaking, there is no way to increase talent. Talent represents your maximum potential, but most people never reach their maximum potential in their entire life. Increasing potential won't necessarily help someone, especially someone like Val. But just because he cant increase his talent, doesn't mean he cant increase his strength, there are many ways to increase strength.
B-Rank Short Sword Talent
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
Fantasy · KingValos
I would not say either, I would not label him a hero or anti-hero. He is definitely not a hero and will act primarily for his own benefit. But he's not outright evil, he's a child, and children are selfish, as he gets older he will mature. But fundamentally, he lives in a world where you need to be selfish, therefor he will be.
Hello, Author here. So after 15 chapters, I thought I would write a review of my story so far. This is my first web novel, and I have big plans for the future of the story. The story may start a bit slow, but it is needed to introduce characters that will come in and out of the story and to set a scene for the huge events that will come later in the novel. The main character starts young but will consistently age throughout the novel. There won't be any very large time skips, there will however be time skips of a few weeks or months. The novel will focus on the development of the main character in regard to both his strength, personality, and interpersonal relationships. If you have any questions regarding the story please ask them here, I will respond ASAP. Thanks KingValos
She's 18, she is meant to be on the border between creepy and loving big sister vibes. But I wanted to emphasize the creepy vibe, to set up some events that will happen way later in the story (In like 100+ Chapters).
"No problem, it's nice to be able to help such a cute little boy."
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
Fantasy · KingValos
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original The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak What happens when a young orphan boy is abandoned by the only person he has ever cared about? What happens when a young boy who's never had anything, who has lived his life at the absolute bottom of society, discovers he has unmatched talent? In a world where strength rules, what will the young boy who is now alone, unsure of his future, do when he discovers he has the potential to rise above everyone else, has the potential to claim whatever, and whoever he wants? In the world of Garla, magic, and martial arts are commonplace. All children awaken their talents on their 10th birthday. When Val awakens he is surprised to discover he has far more talent than he could ever believe. This is the beginning of his adventure, which will be difficult, yet rewarding. That will be like nothing he could ever have expected or thought possible. Follow Val as he discovers how far he can go, how much he can accomplish, and what the future holds for him. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my first novel, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. This novel will hopefully continue for a long time. The protagonist will have relationships with women but won't necessarily commit to any woman. There will be *lemon* scenes, but as the protagonist will be a solo adventurer he won't be going around with a group of women. I have the romance and harem tags because there will be relationship development with female characters. I do not own the cover, if you do you can email me and I will remove it.40 Chs 162 お気に入り
Unfortunately I’m dropping the novel because of the random full stops at the end of every chapter that are I infuriating to listen to on audio, and the fact that it’s 10 coins for the shortest chapter of any novel I’ve read on WebNovel, and start at chapter 20. Really bad set up, very clearly trying to maximise money earned even at the expense of the enjoyment of the story.
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Fantasy · CAESAR20