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作者: KingValos

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The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
What happens when a young orphan boy is abandoned by the only person he has ever cared about?
What happens when a young boy who's never had anything, who has lived his life at the absolute bottom of society, discovers he has unmatched talent?

In a world where strength rules, what will the young boy who is now alone, unsure of his future, do when he discovers he has the potential to rise above everyone else, has the potential to claim whatever, and whoever he wants?

In the world of Garla, magic, and martial arts are commonplace. All children awaken their talents on their 10th birthday.
When Val awakens he is surprised to discover he has far more talent than he could ever believe.
This is the beginning of his adventure, which will be difficult, yet rewarding. That will be like nothing he could ever have expected or thought possible.
Follow Val as he discovers how far he can go, how much he can accomplish, and what the future holds for him.

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This is my first novel, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
This novel will hopefully continue for a long time.
The protagonist will have relationships with women but won't necessarily commit to any woman. There will be *lemon* scenes, but as the protagonist will be a solo adventurer he won't be going around with a group of women. I have the romance and harem tags because there will be relationship development with female characters.
I do not own the cover, if you do you can email me and I will remove it.

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KingValos

Hello, Author here. So after 15 chapters, I thought I would write a review of my story so far. This is my first web novel, and I have big plans for the future of the story. The story may start a bit slow, but it is needed to introduce characters that will come in and out of the story and to set a scene for the huge events that will come later in the novel. The main character starts young but will consistently age throughout the novel. There won't be any very large time skips, there will however be time skips of a few weeks or months. The novel will focus on the development of the main character in regard to both his strength, personality, and interpersonal relationships. If you have any questions regarding the story please ask them here, I will respond ASAP. Thanks KingValos

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KaratePepe

Good Novel. I thought it was going to be a revenge story at first because of the first chapter but I was nicely surprised. you should make an auxiliary chapter where you can see the Val's info as you update and or a chapter where you have all the relevant characters photos.

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