Tea_with_sugger

Tea_with_sugger

LV 4

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2022-03-15 入りました United Kingdom
バッジ 5

Moments 77
Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
24 days ago
Posted

This fanfiction leaves much to be desired. It feels disjointed, with the author jumping from one concept to another without fully developing any of them. For example, the sudden introduction of Kamar-Taj feels out of place and doesn’t fit the original premise of the story. Additionally, relationships are rushed and lack depth—especially one where intimacy occurs only due to a curse, which feels forced and disconnected from any real emotional buildup. The crossover with Marvel is also never mentioned in the description, which leave me feeling blindsided by the unexpected plot elements. So overall due to the grammer mistakes and the overall rushed story, this is a 4/10fanfiction.

Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
1 months ago
Posted

This fanfiction is a stolen work originally written by DarknessEnthroned on FanFiction.net, titled A Cadmean Victory.

Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
1 months ago
Posted

This is a stolen fanfic from fanfiction.net, the original name of the fanfic is Basilisk-born under the author name Ebenbild.

Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
1 months ago
Replied to Sunny_The_Eldritch

This is a stolen fanfic from fanfiction.net, the original name of the fanfic is Basilisk-born under the author name Ebenbild.

Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
1 months ago
Commented

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"I Did My Waiting! Twelve Years Of It!"

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Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
2 months ago
Replied to Thebumberserker

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Someone shot up a school?

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Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
2 months ago
Posted

This is the first Steven Universe fanfic I've come across in a long time. Thank you for writing it! I enjoyed the unusual setting and the darker tones of the fic. I hope you continue with it.

Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
3 months ago
Commented

“What bad luck” “I don’t speak your language”

Fear coupled with defiance flickered in the man's eyes as he stammered, "Wat een pech, klootzak, ik spreek jouw taal niet." The man spoke in a foreign tongue.

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Tea_with_sugger
Tea_with_sugger
3 months ago
Commented

“Than you” “if your lying, i will come back and do my part of the bargain” it’s Dutch in case anyone was wondering

Batman released his grip, letting the man fall back to the floor, "Dank je." he said, his tone cold and unyielding, "Als je liegt, zal ik terugkomen. Ik zal mijn deel van de afspraak nakomen." Batman raised his fists. Knocking the man out cold.

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