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Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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作者: Frowfy

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When he opened his eyes, he found himself in a desolate, abandoned, and cold world.

After exhausting all available resources, he finally discovered a way to escape, but at a tremendous cost. He had lost his ability to speak, hear, and move properly.

His unusual behavior led to several misunderstandings among the residents of Beach City. He couldn't understand why and how things had gone so wrong.

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MUST READ: TS/gender-bender/gender swap elements exist here. Please, don't criticize the story by the genre. I'm making it explicit to avoid these readers.
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This story is a slice of life, so the pace is slow. New chapters every three days.

Formalities: The cover is made with AI; I don't own Steven Universe; I'm using GPT to fix any mistakes.

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Frowfy

Author here. This is my first attempt at writing, I'm open to constructive critics. I couldn't find a good and long fanfic about S.U, so I decided to create one. This is the result of my consistent hard work. I will improve everyday. I apologize any inconsistence or grammar mistake, I hope you can enjoy this and remember about the good times of Steven Universe again.

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Binge_Reader69

finally a steven universe fic, will there be romance and if so please tell me its lapis

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chief321

5 stars because of steven universe fic pls don't drop I like it so far keep up the good work ..........................................................

3mth
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Zyanid_Warfare

Awesome fic, I love the idea and the MC is so interesting… I love the way it’s going and I’m hyped for more, absolutely no complaints… Just please don’t drop it… even if you only updated once every other week, doesn’t matter how fast or slow the updates come as long as it keeps going cuz I’ll see the end eventually as long as it doesn’t stop

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cryzsalix

I came looking for copper and found gems, joke intended. Aside from the fact that the tone of the fanfic is darker than I expected, I have nothing negative to say. The pace is slow, but that is clearly the intention and it is not to the detriment of the fanfic, on the contrary, I would say it is a strong point. The author manages to create a description of the characters' inner emotions and thoughts that really makes you feel immersed in them. It is a great read and I genuinely don't understand where the author got the legendary lost ability to combine multiple points of view into a coherent and engaging narrative.

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SomeRandomReader_

Its honestly one of the best fics i’ve read in a while and well on the way to best if it only had more chapters

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Vitor_Ribeiro

Firstly, good morning, good afternoon and good night Writer and Readers. I would like to talk about this work, as the title itself says it is a Steven Universe fanfic, I know how there are many haters of this cartoon, but I suggest giving it a chance if you just want to enjoy a different fanfic from this very interesting Rebecca Sugar universe. About the work, it starts as a common cliché of reincarnation, even more so as technically a gender bender since the gens have a feminine appearance even though they don't technically have genders, but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this work works well with the characters secondary characters and with the construction of the world, while maintaining a fun side which is the mistake that the other characters have in relation to the protagonist because they do not understand the truth about the MC's past, but this at the same time develops a connection in a sublime way. true between this MC who is a poor fellow with the other characters in the work, and thank you very much for the cuteness of some moments in the work, this heart of a Badboy thanks you PS: I was very happy to see some words in Brazilian Portuguese in the work, it was a very pleasant surprise

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renito101_yt

De las mejores historias que he visto de Steven universe, por favor continúa.

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Kyran_Ambrosius

Love it. Theres struggle and growth. And the characters don't feeel 2 dimensional , i also like that its kinda slow pace.

1mth
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Random_Entity

This is pretty good, love to see where this is headed.

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Lechuzape

well, it's very interesting........ pls more!!!!!........................................................................................................

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MapleHinataSyrup

Ok first review haven't read it yet but let me tell you that a title says a lot of things so depending on your answer to my question I might or might not read so my question is like the title is the gem gonna stay broken for a long time cause if not the title makes me think a bit that the will

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lord_3
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great story, well thought out with plenty of room for growth

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Sergio_Navarrete

So far so good. Keep it up author!

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Nyxstella_Lux

I have no problems with the fix other than that gems are always female making a male gem impossible otherwise good story

1mth
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Tea_with_sugger

This is the first Steven Universe fanfic I've come across in a long time. Thank you for writing it! I enjoyed the unusual setting and the darker tones of the fic. I hope you continue with it.

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PunchingDrywallMan

I'm enjoying the story, Author It has a lot of potential.

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wolfphantom

love it so far.. hope it keeps on going for a little while.. there are so few good Steven universe fics and this is one of the good ones...

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AstrosBR

Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom, Muito bom,

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Antonio_Herrero

I love this fanfic☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

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