Dude maybe just stick to the story to a certain point and maybe then complain ? All I’m seeing since chapter one is yall bashing the author
And seeing her walk with an average boy would of course be not bearable for them.
Fantasy · Tsukasa0
All the “giga chads” in the comments are inflating their egos on how they won’t cry in these kinda situations LMAO just stick to fapping to furry porn broskis
The boy was only 18 but had lost everyone in his life, it was expected for him to cry.
Fantasy · Tsukasa0
Nice story put somehow the plot progressions feel all over the place .
Ok what’s wrong with this guy bro? What’s with this “I hate weak women” is this some copy paste from Madara or something
The rest of them either have a weak bloodline or are too fragile for my taste.
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Mc has been on a Downward spiral for me for the past few chapters. His arrogance with the women who were raped , grumbling every few seconds and now this
"It will be fine; I will only use a little of it" .
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Well it doesn’t matter if it’s chapter 32 or 132 because the story didn’t progress at all. So even if the commenter made this review post chapter 130 , it would still be the same because the author doesn’t know how to progress the story . He’s baiting yall very good with those “I’m sad” mc trope real good
Plot development is dogshit lmao , I’m on chapter 145 and only 3 days have passed in the story world
DO NOT PAY FOR THIS NOVEL PLEASE READ THE REVIEW. Biggest fraud l've ever seen on this website and that's saying something. Had a good start on the novel but idk what happend but the author started to milk "I'm a sad mc I'm sad I'm soo sad" trope like a lot . I mean we get it, he had a bad past but stop lingering and describing that sad past for more than 100 FUCKING CHAPTERS?! The plot development is dogshit - I'm on 120 ch and it's only been 3 days in the story time. The character interactions are so fake and cringe, that I doubt wether the author had any real interactions. Best case example: the author wrote a single scene of mc and his sister having conversations for 4 chapters of nothing happening. And this author has the audacity to ask for power stones , character ranking votes etc …
The author is a real fraud bro . He requests power stones in a weird way with nothing to show for . I’m in 130 chapter rn and in story time - only 3 days passed , that’s how slow the plot development is . He’s repeating the same trope of MC’s close ones wanking off how sad the MC is every chapter .
As I said , the author is baiting most of his readers with the same “I’m hurt , I’m sad” trope. He most prolly ain’t have a good story in his mind and is Just milking the story so he could get the contract money or something. I dropped it around 130 because my brain was actually hurting . And guess what , none of this is me hating. It’s the truth
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo