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"Hah..Hah.."
In the midst of what seemed like a battlefield, a young boy with white hair knelt on the ground, struggling to catch shallow breaths. A short sword pierced his heart, his arms and legs were broken, making him unable to stop the crimson blood from coloring the ground.
"That's what you get for betrayal," a red-headed teenage boy sneered as he stood before him.
"A pathetic person like you could never be my brother," added a purple-haired girl, her voice seething with anger, as she stood alongside the redhead.
With great effort, the young boy shifted his gaze forward. He could see many familiar faces in front of him—his so-called family, his so-called friends but his gaze remained fixed on her.
"Wh..y, A.nna," he uttered with immense difficulty and sorrow in his voice, his vision blurring as he locked eyes with the blonde-haired girl, who regarded him with emotionless eyes.
"I did that so I could save you," he said, his voice gradually growing louder.
"I DID THAT SO YOU COULD LIVE!" he shouted, making everyone present flinch in fear.
"I never asked you to do this" the blonde-haired girl replied, her words crushing the very soul of the boy.
"A...nn.a,"
the young boy whispered one last time, a small tear slipping down from his eye as he breathed his final breath.
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Neil survived eight grueling years in a post-apocalyptic world only to die and be reincarnated in the body of Eden Morton, a character from a game he
used to play as a teenager, by an unknown entity for unknown reasons.
Eden's life was a pitiable one, plagued by the constant manipulation and betrayal of those around him – whether it was the princess, the famed hero, or even his very own family. Eden died without ever experiencing genuine love. Now, as Neil took over, he was determined to embark on a new journey, seeking the one thing he and Eden never had : a life worth living.
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going to the 2nd arc, which unfortunately has skipped major character building, progressions & interactions with named characters, so much so that it felt like instead of a plot hole, we have arc holes, as it felt like there should've been 1~2 arc before he went to the academy, alot of the crucial details that explains his growth and main goal has been completely skipped, so much so that why even bother adding all the parts on his journey, when he could've just be falsely accused while he is studying in the academy, but is still manage to stay there due to it being rumors and lacking evidence? wouldn't that make more sense rather than having to skip arcs just to lead to this academy arc Also, the characters the protagonist has interacted with during his adventures from the 1st arc has been discarded into obscurity, specifically the mentor, the heroine and villainess, It is a waste to not see them at all in the 2nd arc since they have the potential to be with him in the academy as his allies. Also, why isn't he disguised when he enters the academy? couldn't he have received help from a heroine to influence the academy to give him a backdoor entrance as someone else or something? why go through all this annoying drama where everyone wants to pick a fight with him :/, pretty dumb move if i say so myself if you gonna show your face in public after being accused in public for raping the princess and not get worried abt the risk of being assassinated by a 3rd party or something.And lastly another major complaint I have, is the tell but not show, because of the many timeskips, alot of the powers he earned are just randomly popped up out of nowhere, the girls he rizzed are said to be obsessed with him, but where, i cant see it, he only mentioned it in a paragraph, I guess I'll just have to his word for it 👍tl:dr: too much skip, story suffers from tell but not show, and unnecessary drama
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Doing my duty as a fellow daoist.Is there any Yuri? (hope not)Is there NTR (please no)Is there any posibility for win cest? (hope so)
In for 158 chapters and here is what I have so far - Everything seems like a forced mystery. He knows there is another reincarnator but doesn’t ask her anything about it, he doesn’t ask his mom or Sarah anything, no questions for his father, the system won’t answer any useful questions - system is basically gone after first arc not that it was much of a use before except to add to the mystery - he’s supposed to hate the princess but hey now he’s buying her some dresses and having a nice sit down at the cafe with her - the 2 year gap with no mention of time spent with the Phoenix sisters….also just let the one sister he doesn’t really like and the other sister hates just force her way into the journey without so much as a reply To me it feels like the author wants to make the MC seem like he doesn’t really care about what’s going on around him, but he keeps making sure the MC gets involved with everything around him. Keep adding intrigue but then do literally nothing to figure it out. I wanted to keep reading, but with with the way the story is crawling forward it just isn’t worth the money man.
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i need more this is very addicting ,the story so far is very good and the characters are very likeable, the only downside is that it's update are slow hope so the author did not drop this novel
I have deleted my previous review since i dont think he is a SIMP for now...I like the story and the Author delivered it quite well... Things i dont like and the reason i dont give a full 5 stars...the system still a bit annoying coz she keeps interupting the MC quite often...the pace is really slow and the MC still 13 till 55 chaps which is the latest chapter now...because he is still 13 he keeps getting a head pat (twice if i am not wrong) though he is mentally adult(Reason why i hate child MC) He should be more cunning and act like Villain(not the psycho type Villain) and the Author should pick up the pace a little bit... Other than that, this Novel is good and I truly recommend people to give it a shot and read it....
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It's a novel of mc and system and a little bit of plot. First you will feel the villian was wronged by everyone even his family, then again you will know his father was looking out for him by letting him be a disappointment and never warned him about anything. Then the hero comes, but still the novel is all about a system and mc
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I haven't read the story yet just the summary, but I was going to feel bad for eden at first until the whole "I did this for you" thing. then all I could think is that he kinda deserves it for living solely for a women like that
You know that random thing you do when you’re bored where you go and check the fridge for no reason hoping there’s something new in there even though you checked the fridge mere hours before? That’s what I do with this novel right here. It’s like crack to me and I keep coming back for more. It’s a great read. Author does a good job so far.
I wanted to give this a 4.3 or even 4.4 but after the time skip it felt like we had missed so much more than we should have from the story. I hope AN would incorporate it in between but time skips for training are fine but gaining new powers that you got from the girls you have conquered feels like we missed a lot, because if i had to choose btw a arc where we get to know about his adventure and what happen in 2 years his fights with different kind of monsters and people, than the teenager drama and bickering with kids, I would choose the 2 year one and slice of life after( just my opinion) this is just me nitpicking stuff that I found annoying. But overall the story is very interesting with time-space availability. I hope the author updates it more regularly because it has a good plot and a storyline 👏.
it has a lot of potential and it would be nucie if the author can upload the events that happened during time skip
so far it's going good iIlike the story,and I hope it keep getting better and better
Hallo author, I also like this novel 🤩 I want request you In future plz don't develop relationships between angelica and Eden Novel is good and in next plz explain Story of his mother's background
This is very good! everything is great about this book except the Update Stability... please don't drop this novel!
My review after reading till ch 150. Man i am in love with the story. The characters are lovable, the twist and turns in the plot makes me feel like the plot is freaking lasagna. Anyway please keep updating chaps regularly m in love with this story. No that's not right m borderline addicted. I wont be satisfied till i see mc getting together with all the heroines. so please dont give up on the story midway. Goodluck and Zaria is the cutest i wanna see more of her actions. And i hope there are more cuter kids in the future. Spoiler content from here: M really loving grace and sofias characters please make their arc with the mc very romantic i would love to see them happy. But i think theres just too much hate on anna. I hope u haven't planned a bad end for her plz dont do that ok. my poor heart wont be able to take it.
The novel is top notch filled with adventure and mystery. The main character has a strong mindset and not going after woman to make them his toy. There is use of common sense in this novel which I rarely find in many novels. It is also fun to read the dialogue and conversation between mc and other people. The fight scene has been depicted properly.
Nooooooooooo there was too much of a spoiler at the beginning AUTHOR!!!! In fact, you hinted that closer to the end it would happen that, due to the proximity of space and time, he would return to the girl Nila; this was even a hint at the moment of his death because someone called her at the end of the chapter! It is too obvious that it was our main character and not someone else. There was also a hint from the system that the girl was not crazy or grieving, but lived in honor of him. So I think that in the end the main character and the Nila girl will meet. But I think the main character will not live with her but will return back to the game world. Or will he be reincarnated in the game world after Neil’s death? I don’t know, but I can roughly imagine the ending, purely my reasoning. Author, if this is so, please answer, am I right? Just wondering.
Hello there! I am the author of this book, and it is my first novel, so please forgive my mistakes . If you notice any, please notify me so that I may correct them as quickly as possible.With that done, let's talk about our MC:1. He will be overpowered, but only at the same level. Anyone with a higher tier than him can defeat him. He analyzes before acting, and he will not put himself in danger if he does not know how to get out of it.2. For the first few arcs, he will behave as any other human would after living years in a post-apocalyptic world. He will be cold and calculate whose vision of good and bad is blurred out.3. If you have any queries concerning the harem, please ask them and I will respond. and I'll do my best to make the harem as reasonable and logical as possible. (You know, the one where one heroine tries to kill another in order to have the MC all to herself.)I welcome any criticism, so please express your thoughts, and I will take them into account in order to make my story worth your time.