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My friend, a good start, an interesting system, the continuation of the story stimulates curiosity, please continue writing.
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Dude, you didn't drop this, did you? I don't know or don't know of any decent fanfic about Martial Peak. I'm impatiently waiting for the new episode.
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Even though I don't comment much, I've been here since the first episode. I love reading your story. I took a break because the last arc was boring for me, but now I've come this far by reading it from the beginning :D
How many of you are still here?
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The first step is to apply the nature transformations to the leaves. Step 2 is to seal around the hand with the appropriate item (like chidori for lightning, but without further superficial self-harm). The nature transformation as the 3rd stage is to release a larger area and control its effect (for example, in the anime, Naruto splits the waterfall with the wind). I leave it to your imagination to develop the stages and implement more.
It's nice to have sections like this, my friend, it helps us understand the story better. But I wish you made the chapters a little longer, it ends in one breath. [img=recommend]
i hope more will come
SixthSense1029 I don't know in which direction you want to advance the story from now on, but if you run out of ideas, you can make parts that focus on the wishes of the girls in the harem.
Vilgax ??
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