Gertieisabeauty

Don't read it here. It's very good, but the translation is better and cheaper on Wuxiaworld. Anyway, this is one of the best novels I've ever read. Make sure to give it a good review

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The story is pretty mediocre. It's pretty much everything I expect from a webnovel novel. The story being told is alright. It's not anything mindblowing, but it's a story. What bothers me is the way it's told. The grammar is all over the place. There are some moments where the author seems to use impressive vocabulary, but it's quickly followed by an awkwardly written sentence that ruins the flow, as well as my immersion. By chapter 40, you can kind of tell that the author is just pumping out meaningless sentences to fluff up the word count This review will probably get deleted anyway, so here's some advice to the author, who I'm sure will see this. Read over your story before you publish it. Read it aloud and fix the sentence if it sounds wrong to your ears. Believe it or not, I understand why you're pumping the chapters with meaningless words. Most web novel authors do it because webnovel is a soul-crushing company that wishes to siphon out everything within your soul by forcing you to write 1.5k words a day for a measly 28.5% royalty. Fluffing up a chapter with meaningless words still drops the quality of the story, but I understand it.

This novel is just straight-up amazing. I am usually a silent reader who rarely comments, but when I see this author's novel I cannot help but feel complied to do so. This novel's start is much better than the rise of calamity's and that is expected since the author had improved a lot since then. One thing I didn't like was how slow the story was at the start, but now I see that it was worth it because now I can read this masterpiece!