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Greatest of all time. Zenith of the medium. Hallmark of media. Gold standard of storytelling. Apogee of creativity. Vertex of invention. Crest of ingenuity. Acme of imagination. Pinnacle of innovation. Epic of epics. Legend among legends. Peak fiction. This novel is currently my favorite, the start was a bit rusty but despite that I enjoyed it and continued reading because I saw a lot of potential! Now I’m glad I never dropped it. With every new chapter the story becomes more enjoyable to me. This is maybe because this novel has everything I’m searching for in a book without the plot points I hate. The foreshadowing is pretty great too and I’m still waiting for the development of a couple plot points that opened up near the start. The way Pandora’s family has been handled is pretty unique and I liked it, the character of every family member developed nicely. The side characters feel alive and aren’t 2D. The world also feels alive, everything doesn’t revolve around the MC. TL;DR Read this if you’re looking for a well written and unique reincarnation story, the MC’s personality is unique and isn’t the classic righteous MC. Pandora won’t hesitate to kill people if needed. You might like this if you’re looking for a bit of mystery too. My review is a bit biased since i’ve been looking for something like this for ages. Author please don’t drop this masterpiece!
Overall a novel that you could binge. This review might state lots of complaints but ill remind you that if I took time to write such a long review, I loved it to the point that I am willing to spend enough time typing my measly gripes. Writing quality is kinda flawed mostly due to an abysmal amount of spelling errors. I can't even calculate the number of times 'barely' became 'barley'. But there have been lots of improvements as we come to the chapters released these days. I don't see half as many errors compared to the beginning. The narration style is odd, to be honest, Beginning was third person, Then it had shifted to first-person, and then finally evolved to something sort of like first-person crammed into third person(FL point of view). But I enjoyed this and am impressed with it. I would say take a shot, read a few chapters to find whether it fits your style. Also, Author-san if you are reading this, I would like to suggest you stop pasting the last few lines of the previous chapter into the next chapter. Updates as far as I'm concerned are really good and steady.14 chapters a week is good and although the length of chapters is on the shorter side, I guess it makes up with the number of chapters released. I won't say anything more about this mainly due to me just binging 200 chapters in one day. The plot is good objectively but it's not a 'nice' story. The intro will be quite dark and disgusting, Even me myself almost dropped this novel due to the intro but I gave it a chance and I would say it didn't disappoint me in the least. It's very fictional with very very low amounts of reality. Mostly felt to me like reading a Chinese XuanHuan novel. If you dare mix reality in this novel, you will find yourselves with humungous amounts of plotholes. Also, I could say that the plot had changed from being 'extremely dark' in the beginning' to something that could be 'enjoyed by anyone' when it nears the present releases. In the end, I could oversimplify it as a journey of a person from a psycho to a god(world-shattering kind..). Now coming to Characters... There had been without a doubt lots of memorable personalities but I would say character development has lots of nice, as well as bad moments. First would be our protagonist, Her character at the beginning which was completely intolerant towards humans had become something entirely different when it comes to chapters 200+. I won't speak much more on this to avoid spoiling but I loved the entire character development. Now talking about other characters, Some of the vital support characters got dumped midway in the story and there was no side story nor anything of that sorts to remind us those people even exists now. I hope they come up in the future as side stories... Now about the world background, the Magic background was modified mid-story. also, many other kinds of world information were modified mid-story. Nothing about countries or politics nor factions were given much importance, Not barely enough information to visualize the world. It's 200+ chapters...at least try to explain more about the countries and the world she lives in... Now, that's all folks, Don't drop this novel reading the first two dark chapters, it gets really better 100 chapters+. The Author has been showing lots of growth and I would say that I'm looking forward to how this entire stuff is going to turn out. Thanks for reading this long and boring review, It makes me happy if anyone has read this review to this point! Thank you!
First of all it is a great novel with one of the best fighting scenes I have read on Webnovel 1. The writing quality is very good 2. The first volume had more of world building and introducing the characters. the pace isn't to slow and not to fast 3. The character design is my favourite on this platform you couldn't do it better in my opinion 4. the updates are almost daily with exception on holidays ore on one or two more occasion however you can expect stable updates 5. The world background is also good described and not to complicated
At first, I really liked the story, it has a slow development which allows greater setting and development of characters without exaggerating too much in the descriptions and, although the protagonist is powerful is not to the point of completely overshadowing everyone else giving a good content. However, the only thing that confused me is that the current cover doesn't relate to the story yet. In addition, due to the history of the index, I have a regular post of chapters, and I gave a note a little lower in world development because so far there hasn't been much since the mc hasn't left its "initial environment". As for the grammar, I have no idea if it's correct or not because my native language is not English and I depend on Google translator - through this tool everything is apparently readable for me.
It was pretty interesting at first and the character development was good with the mc but the pacing is so slow and the world building is just awful(as far as I have read).
i have to say this story was something i thought wasnt going to be that good but the author had reached beyond my expectations. i really love this story. i really recommend reading it. It is absolutely amazing writing skills 👏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This novel is amazing. Yes, it starts off with slightly bad grammar and a slow story, but after chapter 15 or 20, everything is fine. The story is cool, descriptive and engaging. The intense fights keep you on your toes while the egoist attitude of the mc is more than welcomed. It really is great, just had grammar at the start with few a minor few plot holes. that can be easily overlooked.
I will be able to die content if the author finishes this book if not il haunt the author till the die they die .
overall I like everything about this, the only thing I have a problem whit is that the world-building is a bit slow. also, I have spotted a lot of grammar mistakes even in later chapters, they can be ignored but they usually set me back while reading.
Its not really a rewiew ,but i ll leave 5 start for evil MC. You should add that this is not a male MC, i was so hyped after that dark prolouge, Just great. And The next moment Fate spits in my face and you made him be reborn as a girl - come on Man! Such a waste...i guess there is a "good" reason for it, but in my opinion as someone who like male MCs, it sucks. The worst thing that there is no gender Bender tag or something, cuz the prolouge is really good. Will he gain his male body back or there will be only some weird yuri stuff?
i really recommend reading this book it is such a good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
so far I've enjoyed the story. The only problem is that it can be slow at times but other than that everything else is good. My favorite part is that the story makes sense. He didn't become a genius who could use science to create magic out of no where. It was established that he was smart in his previous life. Overall I'm excited to see how the story continues to be developed.
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Overall a great, interesting read with fun characters and a surprisingly heavy story with a lot of potential and meat on its bones. Looking really good
The story had really much thought put in it. It has an amazing plot, memorable characters and great story telling. One of the few I really enjoyed. Good luck over there.
Noooo, I was holding out so long in hope there would be another update! I guess that's never gonna happen now... This book was really good, I think. I last read it quite a while ago by this point. Immaculate details, solid world and power system from what I remember, and a decent variety of characters for only being as long into its story as it was. Is it still worth reading? Honestly I would say no, unlike other dropped books I've recommended, but not because it's any worse- just because it was dropped at an awkward point and I don't think we had a complete grasp of where the story was going yet. Author, if you see this, thank you for what you have written. I enjoyed it. If you find that you want to write again, please do, but if you continue to not want to, please don't. I don't think there should be any, but if there are any questions from anyone, ask and I will try to answer them. Cya around ig
I found a Gem. But sadly this gem hasnt been uptaded in a year. So its a worst kind of gem, "Abandoned Gem".
world building is nice. I'll admit, sometimes I catch myself just waiting for something to happen, but I feel like all this buildup will lead to something good. additionally there are some flaws with grammar, but not to the point where one cannot understand the sentences. In the end i'd say this is pretty entertaining and promising. I'm not gonna be hard on the reviews since this is webnovel, not some highly acclaimed published. I should also say that I am only 30 chpt in, so I am sure that there will be improvement. overall this book does its job of entertaining me relatively well. I'd give it a read if you've got nothing else to do.
I enjoy this novel a lot to read daily, very exciting and fun to read. I am waiting for new chapters, really cant get enough tbh. Cant wait to see where Pandora ends up next. Character design, world building, tension are all 10/10. To anyone reading this review that hasnt already, you gotta try it out!!!
First off, your novel is amazing. The use of emotions and trauma create such a realistic feeling that I haven’t seen or read anywhere else, and I don’t think I will read anything else like it. I have finished reading the first volume, and though there were a pretty large amount of spelling/grammar errors, they did show up less nearing the end of the volume. I am hoping that it will get better with the spelling/grammar in future chapters. I absolutely love the characters and how they show such realistic emotions and behaviors, on top off hope each character works through their own trauma or how they don’t work through their trauma, which just furthers the realism. I do think the world building aspect of the novel does need some work, though I’m not entirely sure in what, it just feels lacking; I can’t quite put my finger on what though, sorry about that, I know tha isn’t the best objective criticism, but it’s what I got; though I’ve only read the first volume so it might get better. I do like how consistent the updates are with at least one or two chapters a day. I love the story and the characters, I look forward to reading more.