Great idea/picture you are trying to build. I love the characters and the powers they are getting, and thinking of what characters would do with their abilities is exciting. But this story loses when it comes to development, everything seems rushed. And loses a lot of the tension in characters developing an ability slowly and starting of mid and getting better as the story develops. I have a lot of hope for this fanfic and that it would be great if author decides to further expand it. So far enjoying the creativity, thanks👌
Thanks for the chapter. Great read👌🔥
A wave of laughter and gasps rippled through the spectators as Mark hit the ground. Noah paused for a moment, looking down at Mark with a cool, confident smile. The message was clear—Noah had just broken Mark's ankles, both figuratively and literally in basketball terms.
Ultimate Choice System: I Became The Richest!
Urban · Risaliyah
what happened to the gloves?
"A new guy? You got some nice tattoos there. What are you a pirate to have DEATH tattood on your hand? He said as he left Peter alone who was knocked down on the floor trying to stand back up.
Marvel: The Death Surgeon
Movies · Charizard6
Crocodile only had Haki after timeskip, but this is your story, so I understand the change😅
Crocodile immediately coated his golden hook with Armament Haki as he slammed it against Ken's spear. Causing a brief shockwave that shook the ship a bit. Ken immediately kicked away from Crocodile before summoning multiple balls of lightning and sending them at Crocodile.
The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates
Anime & Comics · Leo_DiAngelo
🤣
"If you two keep making noise the way you are. I'll be taking action on the both of you....affirmatively," I threatened coldly.
The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates
Anime & Comics · Leo_DiAngelo
lotus*?
"Take this! Omote Renge (Hidden Lotsu)!" yelled Lee as he released his hold on Dosu.
Naruto: Winds and Changes
Anime & Comics · William777
thanks for the heads up👍
To me it's a great story so far and there isn't anything I can get angry about. I like that spiderman is using his genius in creative ways and relying on others before the weight on his shoulders gets too heavy. Others may think he is too strong or always winning but I disagree sometimes he is prepared or he just trains. And I love that there is still so much story to build on. Thanks for the story and continue the great work 👍😁
Thanks for the chapter. I love the development for Harry. Just when I thought it couldn't get better you prove me wrong⭐️
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3