it is a metal that make you immortal in one of the specials episode heart of gold
man this is just copy paste from the original , the only different thing is that esdeath replaced jin , not only that but because jin didn't show up here wil make him look like a coward from the perspective of the world.
very good chapter, one of the best one piece fanfic so far
the last part is weird
i think you don't understand how strong ace is even at the start of his journey, you make him feel way weaker .
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please no more clones this time , it was the only thing that was bad for me last time
plz don't go revolutionary route it's so boring
this feel very forced , how was Obito so prepared whit a clone for the secret jutsu of the mc , the mc hit should land honestly
didn't his family treat him bad before showing signs that he has talent , why he is ok whit that now
don't worry the fight was very good , amazing chapter.