Kaito Akaden (Kaito)

As I write this comment I am on chapter 36. I'm not a native English speaker so I won't judge the quality of the writing. I will therefore only judge the chronology and the story in general as it is told. I find that the story is good overall, the MC follows a correct development whether from a psychological or physical point of view. (the MC is not basic overcheater or anything else...) Certain things must be taken into account. Namely, at no time is it possible for the MC who is only 5 years old to have a huge influence on history at the moment. Currently the previous comments support this point to lighten his lack of involvement of the MC concerning his parents or his lack of intervention during Minato's death. Guys, you have to be realistic, the MC is 5 years old, the simple fact that Minato and Kushina believe in his dreams is already a miracle. (A parent will never listen to a 5 year old child.) The fact that the MC can signal the presence of obito via sensor capabilities is also not possible even if it is true (the guys Minato and kushina are sensors just like the ANBU who ensure security. Do you think that will they believe a child of 5 year old ? At best they will say that it is a root anbu or etc...) Minato's death is precisely a good way to bring about a psychological change on the MC and I find that the author uses this very well.

The novel's idea is pretty good, but the events leading up to Minato's death, despite the MC knowing about the future, are not well executed. I don't have problems with Minato still dying despite the MC trying his best to stop that from happening (in fact, it almost felt like he gave up on saving his parents halfway through the story), but just the fact that the MC actually tried to change that event from happening only a few days before Naruto's birth, and that too by telling Minato and Kushina that he is having nightmares of them dying due to nine tails when Naruto is born, is a really poor execution. The MC felt a suspicious presence spying on them from time to time after Kushina was in the later stages of her pregnancy, and he didn't even tell Jiraiya or Hiruzen so one or both of them could attend the event to ensure everything went okay. This would have been way easier to explain because of the uzumaki heritage (Mind's Eye of the Kagura), rather than the abysmal attempts at explaining the nightmares of future events. One of the events that irked me the most was that MC saying that he completely forgot about the masked man attacking because of seeing his mother in pain during childbirth (bruh, the entire reason you even begged your parents to allow you to accompany them during Naruto's birth was so that you could do something to prevent your parents from dying, and you completely forgot about it literally 2 seconds before the event was going to happen??). The fact that the MC, who isn't even as skilled as a Genin, thought he could prevent his parent's death by hindering Obito's plans a little bit is completely absurd and makes the MC seem stupid (if anything, you will only get in Minato's way because then he will need to protect you as well). Even the interaction of the MC with Team Minato was so minimal that it felt really lacking. The MC was able to save Kushina, so that's a big plus, and he also finally seriously wants to get stronger now, so I am looking forward to how the story develops from here on out. For those who read my comment, I would recommend reading the story. Although not all the execution was good, the idea of the story itself is pretty good and makes me look forward to seeing how the fic develops. I might come back later to edit my review after more chapters are released.

I like the story and the interaction between the characters. If the series does not drop and sees +100 episodes, it will be a very good story. I recommend you give it a try. But... The author missed a plot opportunity that I thought would have been important. When Minato heard things he wasn't supposed to know in his son's nightmare, he might get scared and ask Jiraiya for help. Minato's message could have been stolen by Danzo. Danzo would block the message from being sent and could plan in case something like this actually happened that day. His plan was to make sure help to Minato and his family arrived late, and if an incident occurred, he could arrange a team to raid Minato's house and steal all his ninjutsu. If something didn't happen, he wouldn't have any loss, but if Mc's nightmare really happened, Danzo would be the winner: the 4th Hokage would die and his seat would be vacant, and only Danzo would have access to the ninjutsu that would make Minato a legend. So it would be ironic if the only person who took Mc's warning seriously was someone who was extremely selfish. Mc would think that he would not change the turning points in fate, but he would be the reason why the things he tried to change would remain the same. In the future, he may learn about Danzo's actions, initially suspecting him of his house being looted. This could make him question his sense of the village and his sense of justice. He could make choices and suffer the consequences. I apologize if there are any unclear sentences, this would be translated by google translate.

this fanfic exceeded my expectations but i wont give a five star cause the mc forgot about kumo kidnapping a huga like that was a big thing in naruto during the chunin exam arc considering that was why neji was all fate this fate that they had flashbacks of nejis dad and him sacrificing himself for his brother