nice mc build up
the story is a great one the development of the characters is plus for me the part i like is the part where the system torment the mc and the jokes are something
i like the developemrnt so far
number one tsundere
nice start up line
Yohan threw that bloodline awakening potion inside his dimensional ring; he was excited to use that thing, but before that, he needed some information about that thing, he didn't hear the term bloodline awakening before. And most likely, He didn't want to use that thing without any prior knowledge, sometimes later, he gathered his thoughts and looked towards the woman who was looking at him.
Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
well written 👌👌
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Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead