DoctorBlaze

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DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
10 months ago
Replied to ChangedReviewer

As compared to the author saying they don't know English and is google translating everything. I'm honestly shocked how readable it is, so stop complaining over something so minuscule, just drop it if you can't handle it.

'Hmm, let's see… I'm currently 7 years old, and at 11 i'll go to Hogwarts. After that there will only be trouble and disaster, and that will be the norm until the war starts, which would be in my 7th Year. In total, i have 9 years to train myself before the wizarding world goes into chaos, where 4 years will be self-taught.' I reflected while writing in my notebook.

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Se7en

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
10 months ago
Replied to InsanityX

It's possible that reincarnating doesn't allow this natural hardwiring to occur, it depends on how the reincarnation is done. If the MC reincarnated into the 7 year old kid, then his memories/personality would need to be fit inside the brain of a 7 year old, which would cause all sorts of issues. Something would have to give, so he'd likely have to experience the emotional issues/irrationality most kids go through. This doesn't mean he'd inherit the hardwired attachment to his bodies birth parents, but I don't understand that much about how it works so I can't speak much about it. What likely happened from the context is he got some memories of the kid, but his personality is the dominant, so initially he'd have no attachments to the parents. From what I understand attachments, they don't just happen spontaneously, and erasing everything of that kid by reincarnating at 7 years old would reset this progress. Additionally with the personality of an adult, it'd be harder to get attached as he would have a more independent personality. Although if its been about 4 years he'd likely get some attachment to them, but there may be an underlying issue of disassociation, feeling like you dont belong, etc. This might be part of the reason that the MC didn't say anything to his parents if taken realistically, because he'd fear their response, and would worsen his existing mental issues with assuming the mental stability, memories, and body of a child. So I agree with you, he likely is suffering from some mental issues, I mean who wouldn't in this circumstance.

I don't think they can replace my parents from my last life, but they still hold a special place in my heart. I could have kept myself cold and distant from them, but when I saw the love they had for me, and all the emotion they had at having their first child, I couldn't do something so… cruel. And I also think that because I'm actually their biological child, at least physically, I have a special connection to them that makes me really care about them... it's hard to explain.

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Se7en

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
11 months ago
Posted

The writing quality is abysmal, either English is not the author's main language, or they didn't put a lot of effort in. Many of these issues could've been adverted with basic grammar checking software or a proof reader. The story development is very hard to follow, and is held down significantly by the writing quality, if I can barely slog through a chapter then its fairly difficult to follow the overall story. The characters are very surface level, an issue with the extremely lacking dialogue, both in quantity and quality. Being a fanfic would normally help, but somehow the author fumbles the bag even with that. As for world background, it isn't that great. The novel itself is a fanfic so it has most of the work done for it, but any expansion of the world by the author, one of the main points of a fanfic, was executed poorly. Concepts are just introduced, with no real explanation, the magic system is just said to work some way with no real depth when introduced. For example: in the beginning it is alluded to that the MC uses some method to grow in magic ability, but it is hard to follow, and an explanation is stashed in a random paragraph mentioning meditation techniques or something about a couple chapters later. TL;DR This novel is mediocre, with poor writing quality, and not worth your time. The concept is interesting but executed poorly.

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
1 years ago
Commented

Wait until she hears you can just setup an LLC and straight up buy bodies from a morgue.

Now, most of that can be solved with money, though I think it will probably be easier to get the food myself, unless you can just, like, buy body parts from hospitals or morgues or something.

(COMPLETE) Jester~

(COMPLETE) Jester~

Anime & Comics · Bored_MC

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
1 years ago
Commented

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DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
1 years ago
Commented

For anyone wondering why this novel is so short, it's because I have long since abandoned it, I may come back to writing, but I just don't have the time anymore.

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
1 years ago
Commented

Perhaps the store clerk knows of his future self, so he's referring to the present from the future which would be the past relatively, thus "had" is correct.

"He had to," Aakesh expressionlessly responded while waving his hands. All the contents lying out returned to their respective shelves on their own after that.

The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
1 years ago
Commented

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Igen's eyes widened, he felt like a sudden emergence of boss music kicked up out of nowhere! 

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Sci-fi · Bobbydale_Murr

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
1 years ago
Replied to Bobbydale_Murr

I haven't read far enough to know if you got the PC, but if you are struggling to write on a phone, there are some bluetooth keyboards that you can connect to a phone, they would be far cheaper than a pc. Although at the same time you have to consider the cost you have to spend that you could put towards saving for the pc. If you don't plan on gaming much on the pc you could aim for a chromebook, those are pretty cheap and laptops are nice to have. Also I haven't commented much on this novel, it's been a while and I've just gotten to binging a couple chapters, not really interested in commenting about the math/realism of the novel anymore and will just enjoy it.

I fixed some issues in the other chapters. like Xerus is the wrong name its Xerixa. I noticed in the earlier chapters i never named the lady titan. So her name is Helen. Fixed a few other areas like descriptions and the likes. Starting from "Secret war" till now. This is a short chapter, i am working on more but im getting stumped on a few. Even with outlines of what the chapter should be.. ha..

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Sci-fi · Bobbydale_Murr

DoctorBlaze
DoctorBlaze
2 years ago
Commented

That isn't how a vaccine works, but sure maybe just some advanced medicine with the name "vaccine" slapped on it.

Does a mere vaccine want to kill the main host? My virus quickly overwhelms and consumes the vaccines in the intramuscular route.

Villain of Plague

Villain of Plague

Urban · S_Takeshi

  • Black Swarm original

    Black Swarm

    Eastern ACTION OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION VILLAIN ANTIHERO KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY XIANXIA

    -------------------------INDEFINITE HIATUS--------------------------- The cold darkness moved around the ancient being, once a universal existence, now far from its peak. Drifting through the void in hibernation it encounters a strange man with a lantern. Trapped by the lantern and cast down upon an unsuspecting planet, the being will burn the universe, regardless of who stands in its way. --------------- This novel is heavily inspired by Starcraft and xianxia novels, with aspects of fantasy and scifi. The MC is a being once spanning billions of galaxies at a universal scale, there will be: -no humanity -no morality -very little emotions

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